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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chibi_deea

Amazing! I loved the part where Zoya says she can't live without Asad and then he comes back to life. It was very emotional.

Thanks for the pm 😊


thankyou!!! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 18th..(last part)

It had been almost a month..asad was really weak..as the bullet had been shot close to his heart..it was difficult for him to eat..he was on a liquid diet all this one month..all were taking proper care of asad leaving zoya..she was taking extra care of him..at first he was liking it..but now he felt as if he had become dependent on everyone..n this feeling was killing him inside...ASAD a self-respected, independent man was now behaving as if he couldn't do a thing widout the help frm one of his family member..all had become his new ami..while his ami was behaving as his daadi..he was fed up of it..he wanted to tell this to his family but everytime they used to say, some or the other, emotional thing to him..tht made him go quite n sit as if he was njoying this services done by his family..but he had had enough of this n had to confront atleast one member frm his family who was not an emotional fool n tht he could speak freely wid him/her..n only zoya came in his mind.(y??? because she had become more matured since he was in this hospital)..n luckily today it was zoya's turn to take breakfast (juice) for him..asad was waiting for her n finally she entered his room..

Zoya: goooddd morniiinnnggg asad!!!!

Asad: hmm..

Zoya went n sat besides him on the table..

Zoya: kya hua??

Asad: m fed up zoya..

Zoya: I understand asad..

Asad: what? (blank look)

Zoya: (rolled her eyes) I can understand ur frustration asad..its almost been more than 1 month u are in this hospital..anybody who would have been in your place would have got frustrated by now..

Asad: its not abt tht..zoya..

Zoya: phir?? Kya baat hy asad?? Boliye..

Asad: stop treating me as a child..

Zoya: asad?

Asad: I don't want to be dependent on u guys...m not a child zoya..mein ASAD AHMED KHAN hu..the grt business tycoon..mujhe pehele se aadad thi apna kaam khud karne ki..achanak mujhe goli kya lagi..mein yahan bistar pe kya let gaya..aap sab log ne mujhe humesha k liye letane k baare mein hi soch liya..khud se kuch karne hi nai deto ho..paani tak mujhe aap pilati hy..i mean like ssly?? Plzz (controlling his anger) zoya..mujhe ek apahiz (handicap) k tarah feel math karayiye..

Zoya was taken aback..

Asad: aap sab mujhse pyaar karte hy..lekin yeh wala pyaar joh aap sab mujh par bar sare ho piche 1 mahine se..usse mujhe ghutan mehsoos hoti hy..mujhe itne pyaar ki aadad nai hy..jabse mere abu mujjhe, humein chod kar chale gaye the tabhi mein mar gaya tha..woh asad mar gaya tha..jisse sabse jyada pyaar ki jarurat thi..mein usse maar dala..qki mein nai chahta tha ki ami k liye mein aur nazma boj bane..i know..boj yeh word bahot hi ajib sound karta hy..lekin us waqt mujhe yahi laga tha..aur tab yeh asad pedha hua..arrogant, rude, independent..mein jaanta hu yeh sab sunn kar aap confuse ho gayi rahengi..par plzz mujhe mere kaam khud se karne di jiye..mein kar sakta hu..

Zoya: whats wrong wid u asad? Sab aapse itni mohabat karte hy..aap k liye apni jaan tak de sakte hy..aap ko lagta hy ki hum sab aapke ami ban gaye hy..aur aap ko bache ki tarha treat kar rahe hy..aap ko khana, paani, kapde sab kuch hum khiltate, pilate aur pehnate hy..par kya aap ko uske piche woh fikar, pyaar, tension nazar nai aaya? Kabhi bhi nai? Asad, aapko pata hy..jab doc ne kaha k aap mar chuke hy..(she wiped her tear) toh hum sab par kya guzri thi? Mein almost pagal ho gayi thi..khala behosh ho gayi thi..ayaan, humera, nikhat, nazma..hum sab tut chuke the..jab aap coma mein the tab Allah se jhagad kar, minnate, dua karke aapko hum sab ne wapas mauth k mooh se bahar laya tha..aap humare liye kya hy yeh aap kabhi bhi nai samajh payenge..aapne nuzat se kaha k nikah kar lo..usne bina kuch kahe nikah kar liya..aapne joh bola hum sab ne woh kiya..asad, aap humare pyaar, fikar ko kabhi bhi samajh nai paye..aur nahi kabhi samajh payenge..yeh aapka juice..iss bottle mein hy..woh table par glass hy..usse achi tarha se dohiye (wash) aur phir glass mein daal kar hi yeh juice piyega..aap ko independent rehna hy na..rahiye..mein yahan rukh kar kya karu?? mein chalti hu..Allah Hafis!!

N gets up to leave..asad is abt to stop her when she turns n almost barks at asad wid full anger...

Zoya: u such an idiot asad, meine abhi tak apna gussa control kiya tha..lekin pata nai q..i feel like argghhh..aap ka gala ghot du..aap ko ssly humara pyaar, hamari fikar faltu lagi?? WE HAD ALMOST LOST U DAMMIT!!!! U know wat..forget it..mein aapse tab tak baat nai karungi jab tak aap ko apne galti ka ehsaas nai hota..

Asad: zoya mujhe laga tha ki aap mujhe samjhengi..par

Zoya kept looking at him..

Asya were looking at each other wid confusion, pain, anger..

Zoya: u take rest..i'll leave..aur ek baat..mein sabko samjha dungi k aapko bachon k tarha treat na karvaye aur aaj se aapki fikar bhi na kare..aakhir aapko independent rehne ki aadad hy..right?

Asad: zoya?

Zoya: now wat?

Asad stood up n went near her..zoya almost ran towards him..

Zoya: asad!!! Sambhal k..(n looked at him)

Humera entered..

Humera: surprise!!!!!

N she herself got surprised..asya were standing together..zoya was holding him while asad was looking sadly at her until humera interrupted..

Humera: yeh..asad aap bed se q uthe?

Zoya: qki yeh independent joh hy..

Humera: huh??

Zoya left asad n asad lost his balance n b4 he could fell, humera caught him..

Humera: wat the heck?? Asad, aap theek toh hy..hy na?

Asad: yeah..

Humera: baat kya hy??

Zoya: bet kar baat karte hy..

The gals sat dwn..asad was resting..

Humera: abh boliye..

Zoya: actually..(n told her everything) asad ko humare pyaar ki koi kadar hi nai hy..

Humera: zoya, ssly??

Asya looked at her..asad smiled while zoya gave a confused look to her..

Humera: zoya, asad sahi keh rahe hy..meine yeh baat notice ki thi..aur ayaan ko bhi batayi thi..lekin ayaan ko laga mein kuch jyada hi soch rahi hu..iss liye meine kissi se bhi yeh nai kaha..zoya, agar asad ko lag raha hy ki woh hum par dependent hote jaa rahe hy..which is wrong..humein unki help karni chahiye..unhe phirse independent banana ki..thodi mehnat lagegi..but, if he would happy by this..then y should we bother him? Lets help him..

Zoya: u're not getting it..

Humera: zoya, I know, asad aapki zindagi hy..aur aap asad ko taklif mein nai dekh sakte..par asa kab tak chalega?? Asad is, was n will always be a self-respected n independent person..think..

Zoya looked at asad n sighed..

Zoya: fyn..as u wish asad..(n left)

Asad: zoya!!!

Humera: its ok..she'll understand..just give her some tym..hmm??

Asad: hmm..(mein galat tha..zoya abhi bhi bachi hi hy..mujhe directly humera se baat karni chahiye thi..i messed up everything)

Humera: kya soch rahe hy aap?? Juice pi jiye..

Asad himself poured the juice for him n drank it..

Humera: good..abh aap aaram ki jiye..mein zoya ko samjhati hu..waise abhi khala ka turn hy..(giggled)

Asad closed his eyes..

Humera: asad, plzz khala se kuch math kahi ye ga..mein aaj raat sab se baat karungi..

Asad: fyn..

Saying so humera waited for dilshad to come..n in few sec she left..

Here,

In KV..

Zoya was in her room crying..when humera knocked n entered inside..

Zoya: leave me alone...

Humera: asad loves u a lot...

Zoya turned n saw humera..n sat on her bed..

Humera went n sat besides her..

Humera: zoya, kal asad discharged hone wale hy..plzz ase gussa math ki jiye..kabhi na kabhi..asad yeh bolne wale the..aur unhone woh gussa aaj nikala..sirf aap k saamne..pata hy q?? qki woh aapse be intehaan mohabat karte hy..aur unhe apna problem aap k saath share karna tha..zoya, mein yeh nai keh rahi..k aap unhe samajhti nai hy..par..jab woh keh rahe hy ki he isn't liking this extra caring nature of ours then we should change it..mein yeh nai keh rahi..k unki care karna chod dete hy..par limit mein care karenge toh woh bhi khush aur hum sab bhi khush..right? sochiyega iss baare mein..(n left frm der)

Zoya: (sighed) Y?? y? y? y? Y? Y??????? y is it always me?? Q humesha mein hi asad ko samajh nai pati hu?? Q humesha unke baton ka galat matlab nikalti hu? Aaj hospital mein bhi meine kitna tamasha kiya..asad ko kitna hurt kiya...mein kya karu?? Mujhe apni galti sudharni hogi..yes!!!

Here,

Dilshad was just sitting on the bed caressing n staring at asad lovingly..

Asad: (woke up n saw his ami staring at him..) ami?

Dilshad: tumhe hum sab bachon k tarha treat karte hy..asa lagta hy na??

Asad is taken aback..

Dilshad: mein tumhari ami hu asad, sab samajh ti hu..m really sorry..tumhe bachon k tarha treat karne..tumhe hum sab par dependent banana k liye..m sorry..but I promise..kal tumhe discharge mil raha hy..toh jse hi tum ghar aaoge..tumhe koi pareshan nai karega..u'll never feel tht tum abhi abhi hospital se laute ho..tht's my promise to u..abh bas aaj ka ek din..kal sawere hote hi..back to pavilion..tum ofc jaana chate ho..jaa sakte ho..ghar rehna chahte ho..reh sakte ho..as u wish!!!

Asad: (had tears in his eyes) ami!! M sorry!! (n hugged her tightly)

Dilshad: its ok..(she hugged him back)

It was night tym..11:00..

All were sleeping as asad had asked them to stay at home..as tomorrow he would be coming back, leaving zoya..

Zoya: kal asad ghar aane wale hy..woh aate hi mein unse maafi mangungi..n saare differences sort out kar dungi..

Morning tym..

All got ready n were abt to leave..leaving zoya..she was not ready to face asad in front of everyone..all reached the hospital..asad was already ready..as soon as his family reached..he left the hospital..but was sad..zoya was still angry on him..wat had he done? He could n would never understand her..he closed his eyes n in few secs they reached KV..dilshad rang the bell n their worker opened the door..asad was again disspointed..he had thought zoya would open the door..as soon as he entered inside he excused himself n went inside his room..as he entered..he heard someone locking the door he turned n saw zoya looking dwn in guilt..

Asad: zo..

Zoya: shhh..

Zoya went close to him n hushed him romantically..

Zoya: bethiye..

Asad sat on his bed follwed by zoya..

Asad: aap mujhe hospital lene q nai aayi? Abhi bhi gussa hy?

Zoya: no asad..mujhe aap par gussa hone ka koi haqq hi nai hy..qki galti humesha meri hi hoti hy..its always my fault..asad, cant u forgive me for the last tym??

Asad: aapne maafi toh maangi hi nai? (teasing tone)

Zoya: (felled dwn on his knees) m srry asad..

Asad: zo..zoya..stop it..plzz don't..

Zoya: no, asad..u're right..m really sorry..humesha galti meri hoti hy..kal bhi galti meri thi..i behaved childlishly..

Asad: its ok..aap ko maafi mangne ki koi jarurat nai hy..

Zoya: asad, plzz say..u've forgiven me..

Asad: zoya, mein aap par gussa tha hi nai..toh maafi kis baat ki?

Zoya: asad, plzz..

Asad: fyn..i forgive u..abh uthiye..

Zoya straight away hugged him..asad smiled..finally..zoya was wid him..in his arms..he hugged her back n nuzzled her neck..indicating her tht he missed her been so close to him..zoya smiled as she understood his signal..she tighten the hug..both smiled..

After sometime, both asya were sitting on asad's bed in each others arm..quietly..they were happy as they were finally together..asad pulled her close to him..zoya rested her head on his shoulder..

Zoya: asad?

Asad: hmm??

Zoya: lets get married..

Asad: (smiled) sure..

Zoya: I mean hum bhi court marriage karte hy..

Asad: q?

Zoya: qki jabhi hum nikah karne gaye hy..koi na koi problem jarur hoti aayi hy..lekin iss baar mein asa kuch nai chahti jisse aap mujhse ya mein aapse durr jau..plzz asad..

Asad: alright..

Zoya: thankyou..(n kissed his cheek)

Asad smiled n lied on zoya's leg..zoya smiled n caressed his hairs lovingly..

Aftn tym..4:00..

Asad was sitting out wid everyone..

Asad: ami, mein aur zoya, nikah karna chahte hy..lekin court marriage..

Dilshad: chalega..

All were happy..all teased zoya n asad..while only zoya blushed..asad had a serious look on his face..

Asad: ami, mujhe ek kaam yaad aa gaya hy..mein thodi der k liye bahar jau?

All were shocked..no one wanted asad to leave..but as dilshad had made everyone understand all said yes..asad smiled hugged him ami n whispered a thanks in her ears n left..

Ayaan: pata nai bhaijaan kaha gaye honge?

All looked at each other..

Here, asad had reached the police station were shireen was kept..

Asad took permission frm the inspector n went to meet shireen..

Asad cleared his throat..

Shireen: asad?? (n cried) aap zinda hy??

Asad: jii..

Shireen: asad, meri baat ka yakin ki jiye..goli meine nai chalayi..

Asad: jaanta hu..

Shireen: jii??

Asad: jab goli chali thi tab trigger mere haatho mein tha..aur gun aap k taraf pointed thi..toh aap mujhe goli kse maar sakti hy?

Shireen: (was shocked) toh phir aapko goli kisne maari?

Asad: yeh toh aap hi bata sakti hy..

Shireen: matlab?

Asad: aap khud se mere ghar ami ko dhamkane nai aayengi..jarur aapko kisine dhamkaya hoga..

Shireen: nai..asi koi baat nai hy..

Asad: aap mere ghar kse aayi??

Shireen: auto se..

Asad: (rolled his eyes) mere kehne ka matlab tha..aap..forget it..yeh batayiye aapke paas woh gun kse aayi?? Sab kuch detail mein batayiye..

Shireen: woh darasal meine bhabhi k room se li thi..

Asad: razia siddqui?

Shireen: jii..darasal kya hua tha pata hy..uss din jab ayaan aur humera SM chod kar chale gaye the toh mein bahot gussa thi..tab bhabhi ne mujhe..(n tells him everything)

Asad: toh iska matlab mera shak sahi nikla mujh par goli aapne nai..razia gafur siddqui ne chal vayi hy..

Shireen: kya?? Bhabhi?? Nai-nai..asa nai ho sakta..

Asad: asa hi hy..

Shireen: bhabhi aapke aur mere saath asa q karengi??

Asad: woh aap jaan kar kya karengi?

Shireen: matlab?

Asad: yeh sab chodiye..abh aapko mera ek kaam karna hoga..

Shireen: kya?

Asad tells her something n makes her take vow tht this plan will only be betwn him n her..n shireen agrees..asad then bails her..n ask her to go to SM n strt the plan frm tomorrow onwards..asad leaves her outside SM n leaves..

Its almost 7:56 till asad returns home..

Dilshad: kaam hua?

Asad: jii..ami mein sone jaa raha hu..thodi thakaan mehsoos ho rahi hy..khane k waqt utha di jiyega..

Dilshad: khana ready hy..chahiye toh khana kha kar so jao..

Asad: ok..(he had his dinner alone n slept..)

After almost an hour..all came out for dinner only to know tht asad had his dnr n was sleeping..

All had their dinner quietly n went inside their rooms..

Zoya: finally kal asad aur mein ek hone wale hy..(n blushed)

Nxt morning..zoya had already woken up..n got ready..she was wearing a red n light green colured anarkali tht dilshad had gifted her b4 shireen had shot asad..zoya was looking really pretty in it..imagine zoya in the dress wid any kind of makeup n hair style u guys want..(aft the part is over i've posted the anarkali's pic)

She went out n saw all were already ready..leaving asad..he was reading today's paper..

Zoya: Allah Miya wats wrng wid u asad?? Aaj humara nikah hy..aur aap iss tarha betkar ppr padh rahe hy??

Asad: court 10:00 baje pochna hy zoya..aur abhi toh sirf 9:20 ho rahe hy..

Zoya: asad, m ready..aap jayiye jaakar ready ho jayiye..

Asad: (finally looked at her n was amazed..zoya was looking beautiful) aap bahot khubsurat dikh rahi hy zoya..

Zoya: (blushed) aap jayiye..ready ho kar aayiye..

Asad: fyn..(he went inside his room n came back in 5 mins..wearing his usual clothes..imagine asad in his ofc attire..)

Zoya: huh??? Aap yeh pehen kar aane wale hy??

Asad: ofcourse..

Dilshad: koi baat nai..ase hi chalte hy..

Asad left followed by everyone..

All reached at court..first asad signed the pprs followed by zoya n finally asya got married..all were clapping..ayaan, humera, nikhat, nazam, imran, farhan, nuzat n iqbal hooted..while asya blushed..

All were abt to leave when asad got a call frm the police n soo he took everyone wid him at police station..all were confused n were shocked when they saw razia behind the bars..n shireen standing besides asad's family..

Zoya: yeh kya ho raha hy??

Asad: asli mujrim ko finally pakad liya..

Dilshad: matlab?

Asad: goli shireen khan ne nai..razia siddqui ne chalvayi thi..

All are shocked..

Ayaan: bhaijaan, yeh kse ho sakta hy??

Asad: aap ne mera kaam kiya? (to shireen)

Shireen: jii..

Asad: thankyou..

Shireen: thankyou toh mujhe kehna chahiye..aap ko..agar aaj aap nai hote toh shayad mein kabhi yaha se bahar nai nikal paati..aap sach mein bahot ache insaan hy asad, mujhe mere har galtiyon k liye maaf kar di jiye..meine humesha aapko galat samjha..qki bhabhi ne humesha mujhe aapke baare mein galat hi bataya tha..Allah k liye mujhe maaf ki jiye..

Asad: its ok..abh aap free hy..

He went close to razia..

Asad: aur aap, razia siddqui..abh aap bach nai sakti..koi kaanun aapko bacha nai payega..mein khud aap k khilaf court mein jaaunga..aur aapko kadi se kadi sajaa dilvaunga..yeh mera vada hy aapse..(smirks)

Now all had reached KV..even shireen..

Asad took something frm shireen it was a chip kind off thing..n handed it to iqbal..iqbal carefully did his work n a video strtd playing on the laptop..

Shireen: bhabhi, mujhe yakin hi nai ho raha..aap ne asad ko maarne ki koshish ki??

Razia: shireen, kse baat kar rahi ho?? Bhala mein q asad ko marne ki koshish karungi??

Shireen: aap hi ne kaha tha k banduk mein goliya nai hy..phir end waqt par goli chali kse?

Razia: mujhe nai pata shireen..

Shireen: ase kse nai pata?

Razia: nai pata matlab nai pata..

Shireen: goli aapne chalayi thi na bhabhi??

Razia: (looked at her n rolled her eyes) nai shireen...

Shireen: haan!!! Aap hi ne chalayi thi..

Razia: (was angry) tumhare paas sabud kya hy?

Shireen: sabud? Hy..

Razia looked shocked..

Shireen: jab goli chali thi..toh trigger asad k haatoh mein tha..aur target par mein thi..toh goli asad ko kse lag sakti hy bhabhi??

Razia: (was silent for a moment n then strtd laughing loudly) arre wah!! Shireen, tumhare paas bhi dimaag hy??? mujhe toh pata hi nai tha..haan, goli meine chal vayi thi..meine hi professional shooter ko hire kiya tha..aur ussi ne asad ko mara..par sach bolu shireen, target toh tum aur dilshad the..par woh bevakuf asad bich mein aa gaya..aur goli usse lagi..

Shireen: aapne asa q kiya bhabhi?

Razia: qki mein badla lena chahti thi..asad aur uske parivar se..asad k karaan humare parivar ki kitni bezati huyi..humera ne apna nikah asad se toda aur ghar chod kar chali gayi..aur toh aur police mein hamare khilaf f.i.r. darj karvai..abh humera toh itni hoshiyar nai hy ki khud se apne hi ami-abu k khilaf police thane jaaye..toh kon le gaya hoga usse?? Asad..., meine aur inhone bahot bezati sahi hy..par pata nai inhe kya ho gaya?? Asad k khilaf jaane se inkaar kar diya..kehne lage k humera waha jyada khush rahegi..kya khaak khush thi woh..?? mujhe asad se badla lena tha..aur iss ghar mein bakra kon hy?? umm..matlab bevakuf..tum..

Shireen: bhabhi?

Razia: hmm..tum ek no ki bevakuf ho..tum apna khud ka dimaag toh kabhi istamaal nai karti..joh mein bolu wahi karti ho..toh mein tumhe apne jaal mein fasaiya aur tum phas bhi gayi..aur phir bas..mera kaam hoga..par woh kambakat asad zinda bach gaya..ek min..tum wapas kse aayi??

Shireen: (cried) chii!!! Kitne gandhi aurat hy aap..aapko toh sharam bhi nai aayi mujhe sab batane mein..pata nai aur kya-kya kiya rahega aapne..abh mein aapko giraftar karvaungi..

Razia: acha??

Razia went close towards shireen n pulled her hairs..

Shireen: aahh!!!! Bhabhi..yeh aap kya kar rahi hy..chodiye humein..humein dard ho raha hy..

Razia: ase kse??? Acha ek baat par mein tumhe chod dungi..

Shireen: kya??

Razia: tum jail se bahar kse aayi??

Shireen: asad ne chudvaya..

Razia: kya?? Asad ne?? (n pulled her hairs more tightly)

Shireen: aahhh!!!!! Chodiye!!!!

Razia: theek hy..(n pushed her)

Shireen fell dwn n hurts her wrist..

Shireen goes to call the police..when razia strts laughing again..

Shireen: aap has q rahi hy??

Razia: mein is liye has rahi hu..qki tumhare paas koi sabud nai hy shireen..police ko bulvakar kya kahogi unhe??

Shireen: yahi k goli meine nai..aapne chalayi thi...

Razia: par sabud kya hy ki goli meine hi chalayi??

Police: sabud toh aaphi ne diya hy mrs. Siddqui..yeh qubool kar k ki asad ko goli aaphi k kisi insaan ne maari thi..

Razia looks behind n is shocked to see SM is almost full of police..

Shireen: yeh sab asad ka plan tha aapko fasane ka..aur aap fas gayi..kya bhabhi?? Inspector saab, le jayiye inhe...(n the police inspector took her away..)

The video ended..

All are shocked..ayaan went n hugged his mother..

Ayaan: m srry ami..mujhe maaf kar di jiye..mujhe aap par barosa karna chahiye the..par..

Humera: mujhe abhi bhi yakin nai ho raha ami asa kuch kar sakti hy??

Asad: its ok..abh sab theek hy..meine ek decision liya hy..

Dilshad: kya?

Asad: ayaan, humera aap dono phirse SM chale jayiye..abh aapko koi taklif nai hogi..aapke ami-abu ko aapki jarurat hy..

All are quite..

Asad: ayaan?

Ayaan went n hugged his bro..

Ayaan: tq bhaijaan..tq for everything..

Asad: its ok..

N finally..ayra went at SM wid shireen forever..

5 years later..

Asad made sure razia got severe punishment n she got life imprisonment..gafur had forgiven ayra, asra, zoyaan n asya..n was forgiven by humera n all..gafur made ayra n asya get married in their traditional way again..asad after almost 4 years accepted rashid n shireen..no wonder he loved dilshaad more..n shireen didn't felt bad abt it..coz she knew asad would be there when she'll neeed him..shireen was now not even jealous of rashidn dilshad's relation..Finally the khans, siddquis, qureshis n sheikhs all the families were happy..y??? arre, all the elders had became grandparents..

Asya were blessed wid twins..a girl (5) n a boy (5)..while ayra had a cute son (4 n a half year old)..nazma n imran had a girl (3) who was carbon copy of nazma..nikhat n farhaan had a son (2)..while nuzat had given birth to a boy (1) last year...

N so, all stayed happily every after..

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THE END

So finally my first SS on Asya came to an end..i hope u guys liked my SS n last part..hope u guys njoy reading it..n m srry..i don't think I would be able to write this SS again on asra..this SS has ended here..so no asra SS would be written..so guys plzz hit the like button n do comment...I want each n everyone of u to comment atleast now..when my SS is over..no doubt I'll be back wid new ASYA FF, SS, OS or TS..but plzz do comment n hit the like button..

MY OTHER WORKS..DO READ IF INTERESTED..😃


Asya OS: Dooriyan

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3622082/asya-os-dooriyan

Yuvreen OS: Made For Each Other

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/suvreen-guggal-topper-of-the-year/3150936/made-for-each-other

Yuvreen SS: friends?

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/suvreen-guggal-topper-of-the-year/3100680/yuvreen-ss-friends

Kisha OS: Friends? Nah..

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/the-buddy-project-season-2-now-in-college/3254719/kisha-os-friends-nah

TBP OS: Jungle mein Mangal

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/the-buddy-project-season-2-now-in-college/3271909/os-jungle-mein-mangal

Kisha OS: Jiye kyun?

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/the-buddy-project-season-2-now-in-college/3248335/kisha-os-jiye-kyun

Love,

Pradnya..

Edited by cskdhonirocks - 11 years ago
sasir thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it. will miss it alottt.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice and apt ending, loved it. Will be waiting eagerly for your future work on asya. Thanks again for such a lovely story
nilusoni thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow its awesome loved it
plzzz give any ss or ff on asya after marriage i really love your writing plzzz come up with something new soon
thanx for pm
do pm me for your next work
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely ss
but sad that it ended
but very well written
gr8 work👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow lovely story
u made me cry in chap 17😭
lovely

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Posted: 11 years ago
i loved it mostly first chapters
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Posted: 11 years ago
just read it
awesome loved it

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