SS: kyun itni dooriyan??.

SS: kyun itni dooriyan??

INDEX

Part 1 - pg 1

Part 2 - pg 2

Part 3 - pg 5

Part 4 - pg 8

Part 5 - pg 11

Part 6 - pg 14

Part 7 - pg 18

Part 8 - pg 21

Part 9 - pg 25

Part 10 - pg 30

Part 11 - pg 32

Part 12 - pg 38

Part 13 - pg 42

Part 14 - pg 46

Part 15 - pg 50

Part 16 - pg 53

Part 17 - pg 57

Part 18 - pg 60 (last part)

The story continues from AsYa hug...i have written it of my own..i have quit qh..just reading the written updates..but yesterday I didn't even read it..n instead wrote an SS on the leads..

Asya are still hugging, when Ayaan's family comes there.

All are shocked seeing Asya together (hugging) especially badi bi..there's a sudden pang of guiltiness on Rashid's face while Shireen looks confused..

BB: Zoya!!!! (shouts)

Zoya: (is taken aback, she frees herself from Asad, who isn't ready to leave her..) Mr. Khan, mr. Khan plzz (n pushes him lil)

Asad: (looks sadly at her n then at BB) m srry..

BB: beta, (n takes away Zoya) Ayaan kaha hy?

Zoya: (still looking at Asad..)

BB: Zoya??

Zoya: (crying)

BB: sab theek toh hy na bahu?? (worriedly) Ayaan kaha hy??

Zoya: woh..(she points out at the emergency room)

BB: Yah Allah!!! Chaliye Zoya..(n takes her inside..followed by Rashid n Shireen)

Asad just keeps looking at where Zoya was standing few sec back..

Shireen: Allah!! Ayaan!! Yeh sab kse hua Zoya?? Kahi aapne aur Asad ne toh?

Zoya looks at her in shock while BB shush her..

Rashid: yeh ksi baate kar rahi ho tum Shireen?? Asad asa q karega??

Zoya: (stares at him like wat abt me? U think I have done this to ayaan?)

Shireen: toh phir Asad aur yeh bahar ase gale q mil rahe the??

BB: Rashid, bahar chalet hy..Ayaan ko taklif nai honi chahiye..Zoya aap yahi rukiye..

Zoya: (shook her head)

Shireen: nai..ami..Zoya aap bhi bahar chaliye..

Rashid: chalo..

All came outside

Shireen: (to Zoya) aap jaanti hy na k abh aap mere bete Ayaan ki biwi hy?? Toh aap Asad Ahmad Khan se gale q mil rahi thi? Aap mere bete k saath asa nai kar sakti..woh aapko itne pyaar se bahar ghumane le gaya tha..aur aapne? Q Zoya? Akhir q??

BB: yeh tum kya bakwas kar rahi ho shireen??

Asad who's still standing there hears all this..

Asad: aapko koi galat fehmi hui hy..

BB: matlab?

Asad: matlab yeh ki Ayaan Zoya ko bahar ghumane nai..Khan Mansion chodne aa raha tha..

Zoya: (looks at him in disbelief)

All are shocked

Shireen: dekha ami..meine aapse kaha tha na..ki yeh ladki mere Ayaan ko..

Asad: yeh kya bol rahi hy aap?? Agar aaj Zoya nai hoti, toh shayad Ayaan abhi bhi waha sadak par pada rehta..aur aap Zoya pe ye ilzaam laga rahe hy ki..

Zoya: stop it Mr. Khan!! (in anger)

Asad: zoya?

Zoya: stop it..

Asad: lekin Zoya..

Zoya: leave Mr. khan..

Asad: (kept looking at her)

Zoya: plzz yahan se chale jayiye..(n actually begged in frnt of him) just go away..

Asad: (widout saying a word left frm there)

Zoya was crying badly..

BB: yeh sab kya hy Zoya??

Zoya: woh..darasal..Ayaan n Mr. Khan ne mujhe aur Humera ko yeh kaha tha k agle 7 dino k andar hum sab phirse ek ho jayenge..matlab mein aur Mr. Khan n Humera aur Ayaan..lekin..(n keeps crying)

BB: lekin, tumne aur Ayaan ne Nikhanamhe par dastakat ki hy..abh aap dono pati-patni hy..aur yeh saach koi nai baddal sakta..nahi aap, nahi Asad, nahi Ayaan aur nahi Humera..yeh baat jitney jaldi tum sab log samajh sako..uthna hi acha hy tum sab lok k liye..

Zoya: (didn't said a word n kept looking at BB)

1 months later...

zoya: rabart...utho!! kitni der tak sote ho tum??

Ayaan: sone dijiye na Zoya..

Zoya: no rabart..chaliye uthiye n get ready..aaj Nuzat ko ladke wale dekhne aa rahe hy...

Ayaan: toh? Nuzat ko dekhne aa rahe hy..mujhe nai..aaap jayiye Zoya..mujhe irritate math kijiye..

Zoya: (wid an O shaped mouth kept looking at him)

Ayaan: abh ase gol gappe jsa muh baan kijiye..warna makhi ghus jayegi..(n laughed)

Zoya: Allah Miya, Whats wrong wid u Ayaan?? Fine..go to hell..

She was abt to leave when Ayaan pulls her close to him..

Zoya: (is taken aback) Ayaan??

Ayaan: (leaves her) m srry..

Zoya: (looks awkward) its..its ok..um.get ready..

N leaves...

After, 20 mins..

Ayaan comes dwn n sees Humera getting ready in Nuzats room..

Ayaan: (knock n goes inside)

Humera: (doesn't looks at him..)

Ayaan: humera?

Humera: hm?

Ayaan: toh, kya socha hy aapne? Pichle 1 mahine se mein aapko samjha raha hu..

Humera: aaj bahot hi acha din hy..Ayaan..aaj nai..(n is abt to leave the room when Ayaan stops her)

Ayaan: nai..nai..dekhiye Humera, kabhi na kabhi toh aapko mo..

Humera: stop it Ayaan!!! Chodiye mujhe!! Aap ye hak kho chuke hy..aur ek baat..yeh meri life hy..aur iske saath kya karna hy..yeh bhi meri responsibility hy..aapki nai..so, get lost!!!

Ayaan: (looks at her guiltily) Humera, aap..

Humera: ayaan leave!!!! (shouts)

Ayaan: ok-ok..fyn..i'll leave..par aap us baat ko..

Humera: (gives him a deadly glare) out..

N Ayaan leaves, leaving a badly crying Humera alone..

Razia sees this..

Razia: bas 2 mahine beta..phir yeh Zoya naam ki aafat is ghar se humesha humesha k lye chali jayegi..

After few hrs..

Ayaan: zoya!! Ladke wale aa gaye..ami ko inform kariye..go..

Ayaan: welcomes the boy's family..n while welcoming comes face to face to his bhaijaan..his sadu bhaijaan was back..but this tym sadu wid him too..

Ayaan: salaam alaikum!! (aft almost a min of staring or u can say glaring section)

Asad: hmm..(n looks away)

Ayaan: salaam alaikum!

Dilshad: alaikum salaam! (n sadly smiles)

Ayaan: arre, aayiye na..

Boy's father: (aftr entering) who darasal Mr. Khan mere bete k boss hy..toh hum ne unhe bhi yaha bulaya..woh pehele mana kar rahe the..phir jse hi Nuzat ne inse baat ki..woh maan gaye..

Asad looks away to avoid the situation while Ayaan keeps looking at him..

Zoya: ayaan..ami aapko bula rahi h..(n sees Asad n Dilshad )

Ayaan looks at Zoya n tells her everything is fyn..n leaves..

Zoya looks at Asad n suddenly tears form in her eyes..

N humera brings Nuzat dwn wid Nikhat..

Nuzat: bajji..mein theek toh lag rahi hu na??

Humera: ekdum Katrina lag rahi hy aap..(n smiles)

Nikhat: haan nuzat..humera ekdum sahi keh rahi hy..

As all settle dwn..there comes the unwanted guest wid Nazma n Imraan..yeah yeah yeah they r Haseena bi, Chand n Farhaan..

HB: arre? Ladke wale aa bhi gaye?

All look at her n give a faint smile..

Najma n Imraan enter n greet Asad n Dilshad..while Farhaan looks seriously at Nikhat..

Nazma then goes n stands beside Humera n nikhat..

Humera: bahot khubsurat dikh rahi hy aap..Masha Allah kisi ki nazar na lage..

Nazma: tq!! Aap bhi bahot sundar lag rahi hy..

BB: agar aap bura na mane toh Nuzat aur Iqbal ko akele..

Iqbal's mom: arre..jarur jarur...Iqbal..Nuzat..jayiye..

Till then rashid n shireen talks wid Iqbals parents..n in 15 mins Iqbal n nuzat comes back..

Humera askes nuzat wid her eyes n Nuzat nods her head positively..Humera is sad yet happy..

Gafur: toh kya khayal hy aaap dono ka?

Iqbal: mujhe Nuzat pasand hy..

All r happy..

Nuzat: hume bhi Iqbal pasand hy...

Humera hug Nuzat..

Humera: congrats nuzat..

Zoya keeps looking at them..how pure was their relation..today it should be her hugging Nuzat...but destiny wasn't wid her..n frm the corner of his eyes Asad looks at Zoya..

Gafur: Toh hum rishta pakka samjhe?

Iqbal's parents: jii!!

All hug each other and aft a while Iqbal's family leave..

Asad: ami, abh hume bhi chalna chahiye..

Dilshad: hmm..chalo..

N they r abt to leave when Shireen stops them..

Shireen: asad!!!

Asad stops but doesn't looks back..

Dilshad turns to face the family..

Haseena smirks at Chand..

Shireen: shukriya Asad!!

Asad: ho gaya? Chale ami?

Shireen: jii..

Haseena: arre? Ase kse??

Asad looks at her..

Haseena: woh darasal kuch dino se mere zehen mein yeh baat chal rahi thi..woohh...

Shireen: kya baa thy HB?

All gives her an irritating look..epsecially Asad..

Asad: (loud n clear) aap kehna kya chahti hy?? Saaf-saaf kahiye..

Hassena: (looked scared) ku..ku..kuch nai..

Asad: (glares at her) aapne ase hi mere 5 min waste kiye?

Haseena: nai..nai..

Dilshad: asad?

Asad: ami aap..

Dilshad: kya baat hy HB?? Sab theek toh hy na??

Haseena looks at Chand..Chand nods in agreement..

Haseena: woh darasal mein soch rahi thi..k q na hum..

Dilshad: kya??

Haseena: woh.. darasal mein soch rahi thi..k..k..woh q na hum..

Dilshad: kya, HB?

Haseena: q na.. asad aur humera ka nikah karva de?

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PART 2

Haseena: q na.. asad aur humera ka nikah karva de??

All were hell shocked..

Humera kept looking at HB in utter disguist n slowly her gaze went on Asad..who had the same reaction on his face..

Nazma is abt to speak something but Nikhats stops her n Imran too shooks his head in a NO..she keeps looking at Imran n all in anger.

Asad: kya bakwas kar rahi hy aap??

HB: toh ismein taklif kya hai?? Tumhara nikah nai hua aur nahi Humera ka..abh zindagi bhar ase toh nai reh sakte na tum dono?? Q Razia? Mein sahi keh rahi hu..hy na?? (smirks)

Razia: Haseena, pagal ho gayi ho kya? Tumhara dimaag toh kharab nai hua hy na?? meri beti aur yeh..Asad?? tum.

Dilshad: ek min!! (in shock) kya matlab hy aapka Razia bi?? Yeh Asad matlab?? Aapki himmat kse huyi mere bete k bare mein asa kehene ki..mera beta dusron ki tarha dhoke baaz nai hy..

Asad: ami..

Dilshad: joh wada karke us wade se mukar jaye..

Asad: ami plzz..

Dilshad: joh pyaar ka dilasa de kar piche hatt jaye..

Zoya is hurt..n ayaan looks at Asad in anger n guilty..

Asad: bas ami!!! (he shouts)

Dilshad: asad?

Asad: m srry ami..(he hits his temple in anger)

chaliye yahan se..

Asad in anger left frm there..followed by Dilshad..while Humera runs inside her room..

HB: arre meine kuch galat kaha hy kya??

Ayaan: ji!! Aap ase soch bhi kse sakte hy..bhaijaan aur Humera??

Zoya: exactly..Mr. Khan n Humera..its not right..

Razia: q?? kya not right..haan?? Asad ek bahot hi honar ladka hy..aur woh mere beti khush rakhega..q ji??

Gafur: mujhe yeh rishta manjur nai hy..(n leaves followed by Razia)

Zoyaan are happy..

HB: chalo Chand..(looks at Zoyaan) waise bhi, Razia ko yeh rishta qubool hy..woh kse bhi karke Siddique sab ko samjha degi..phir Nuzat aur uski baji Humera ka nikah ek hi din hoga..Yah, Allah!! (happily shook her head..n all the family left..)

Zoya: allah!! (n there's a different feeling inside her..same happens wid Ayaan..)

Zoyaan inside their room..

Zoya: Ayaan?

Ayaan: hmm?? (lost in his own world)

Zoya: tum Mr. Khan se baat karke..

Ayaan: (stares at her) aap pagal ho gayi hy??

Zoya: ayaan..dekho, tum jaante ho ki Mr. Khan n Humera..woh dono ek saath..khush..khush nai reh payenge..

Ayaan: jaanta hu..lekin kya aap bhul gayi, 1 mahine pehele kya hua tha??

Zoya: (looks away) ayaan, plzz..

Ayaan: aap, bhul sakti hy..lekin mein nai..us din meine apne bhaijaan ko kho diya tha..sirf aapke liye..

Zoya: excuse me? Mere liye?? Ayaan, tum shayad bhul rahe ho, ki meine apna..(n she stopped)

Ayaan: kya?? Apna kya Zoya?? Pyaar?? Pyaar khoya tha?? Meine kaha tha us din mujhe choose karne??..

Zoya: what the..meine tumhe choose nai kiya hy..us waqt haalat hi ase

Ayaan: forget it Zoya..(n is abt to leave..)

Zoya: wait..stop I said..Ayaan, kya tumhe sach mein lagta hy, humara is tarha Mr. khan se request karna galat tha??

Ayaan: pata nai Zoya, kuch samajh nai aa raha..

Zoya keeps looking at him in disbelief while he leaves the room..

Here,

Asad: unki himmat kse huyi ami?? HB pagal ho gayi hy..mein aur Humera?? (he angrily punches the wall..)

Dilshad: asad!! Yeh kya kiya tumne?? Dekho, kitna khoon bhe raha hy..tum bhi na..aao, yahan betho..mein davayi lekar aati hu..

Asad: abh dard nai hota ami..(crying)

Dilshad: asad!! (n hugs him)

Asad: yeh dard kuch bhi nai hy..uss dard k saamne..

Dilshad: bhul jayiye un yadon ko..bhul jayiye ki aapne kabhi zoya se mohabat ki thi..

Asad: kya aap Rashid Ahmad Khan ko bhula payi ami??

Dilshad: asad, woh mere shauhar the..

Asad: ami, Zoya meri zindagi hy..aaj unke liye hi mein ayaan aur zoya k zindagi se humesha humesha k liye dur chala gaya hu..

Dilshad looks at asad sadly n asad hugs her..

Here,

Humera locks herself inside her room..n cries her heartout..

Humera: q Ayaan?? Akhir q?? q kiya aapne mere saath asa?? Kya yahi tha aapka pyaar?? Qqq???? (shouts)

Nuzat hears her voice..n rushes towards her baji's room..

Nuzat: baaji???

Humera hears her but still doesn't reply..

Nuzat: baaji, aap theek toh hy na??

Humera: nuzat, aap chali jayiye yaha se..

Nuzat: baaji, darwaza kholiye..warna mein abhi jaake mumani ko bula kar laungi..aap sun rahi hy na??

Humera: plzz nuzat..

Nuzat: baji? Plzz darwaza kholiye..aap meri baat nai maneg gi??

Humera gets up n opens the door..

Nuzat gets inside n locks the door..they both sit on the bed..

Nuzat: kya baat hy baaji?? Aap HB k bareh mein soch rahi hy..hy na??

Humera: (crying) wo asa soch bhi kse sakti hy?? Asad bhaijaan aur mein?? Nuzat, mein sirf ayaan se mohabat karti hu..

Nuzat: baaji, mein jaanti hu..lekin aapko ayaan bhaijaan ko bhul na hoga..

Humera: wohi toh koshish kar rahi hu mein..lekin mujhse nai ho raha nuzat..

Nuzat: baaji, asad bhaijaan se aapka nikah nai hoga..lekin kisi aur se toh nikah karna hoga na aapko?? Kab tak ase hi rahengi aap??

Humera: kab tak matlab?? Nuzat hum sirf 22 saal k hy..buddhe nai huye hy ki sab ko mere nikah ki padi hy..

Nuzat: aap mujhe galat samajh rahi hy baaji..

Humera: nuzat, tu jaa..mujhe sone hy..kal baat karte hy..

Nuzat: jii!!! (n leaves)

Humera: yeh sab kya ho raha hy? (lays dwn n tries to sleep)

Here,

Razia: aap samajh nai rahe hy..

Gafur: tum pagal ho gayi ho razia??? Humari beti aur who ladka..kabhi bhi nai..

Razia: aap samajh q nai rahe hy..asad se acha ladka hume nai milega..asad aamir hy..humare beti ko kush rakhega..

Gafur: bilkul nai razia..aur abh is baat pe koi behes nai hogi..(n leaves)

Razia: nikah toh jarur hoga..aur who bhi asad aur humera ka..(smirks) qki agar in dono ka nikah hua toh ayaan aur zoya kush nai reh payenge..aur inka rishta tut jayega..par, meri beti khush rahegi...Asad usse khush rakhega, usse rakhna padega..zoya, tumne meri beti ki zindagi barbaad ki hy na..abh mein tumhari zindagi barbaad karungi..

Here,

Ayaan is sitting in the backyard n is thinking abt humera..

Ayaan: yeh sab kya ho raha hy?? Bhaijaan aur humera?? 9he touches his forehead) aur upar se meine Zoya se bhi rudely baat ki..unse maafi maangni hogi..

BB sees him sitting alone n goes near him..

BB: ayaan?

Ayaan: daadi, aap?

BB: aap itne pareshaan q hy??

Ayaan: daadi, HB pagal ho gayi hy..woh asa soch bhi kse sakti hy?? Humera aur bhaijaan ka nikah?? Impossible..bhaijaan kabhi nai maanenge..aur nahi humera..

BB: lekin ismein taklif kya hy?? Nikah q na ho?? Asad ek honhar ladka hy..humera ek samajhdar aur padi-likhi, nek ladki hy..

Ayaan: (stands up) nai, daadi..asa nai hoga..mein asa hone hi nai dunga..bhaijaan aur humera kabhi ek nai ho payenge..(n leaves)

BB: ayaan!! Ayaan!! (n looks shocked)

Here,

Nazma: ami, aap ase kse keh sakti hy??

HB: meine kya kaha bhai??

Nazma: aapne..(nikhat tries to stop her..) nikhat chodiye mujhe..mein aapke tarha chup nai bet sakti..jab mein jaanti hu mere bhaijaan k saath already bahot galat ho chukka hy..mein unse bahot pyaar karti hu..aur abh unke saath aur galat hote huye nai dekhungi mein..

Nikhat looks at her sadly..

Nazma: ami?? Boliye..aap asa kse kar sakti hy..

HB: mujhe joh laga meine who kaha..aur ismein kuch bhi galat nai hy.. Asad ek honhar ladka hy..humera ek samajhdar aur padi-likhi, nek ladki hy..toh..??

Nazma: toh isliye aapne socha ki qna in dono ka nikah karva de??

Imraan: nazma, aap..

Nazma: imraan plzz..aaj nai..agar aap nai bol sakte toh mujhe bolna hoga..

Imraan n all others are shocked..

Nazma: yeh nikah nai hoga..

HB: jarur hoga..

Nazma: mere bhaijaan kabhi bhi is rishte k liye haa nai bolenge..

Chand: aur agar haa kaha toh??

Nazma: jii??

Chand: asad maan gaye toh?? Toh aap kya karenge??

HB: (looks at her evilly) toh nazma woh karegi joh mein kahungi..

Nazma is shocked..

HB: chalo chand, chalte hy..(Chand n HB leaves)

Nazma: mujhe bhaijaan se milna hy..

Imraan: chaliye nazma..(n they leave)

Nikhat: yah allah!! Sab theek kar dena..

I know this part was damn boring..n the next 2 parts will also be like this..but the nxt parts will be shocking..i hope u guys liked it..plzz do comment n hit the like button..

Love,

Pradnya..

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