Asya OS.. Dooriyan

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Asya OS: Dooriyan

I didn't get a suitable name for this os..so didn't dare to write one..i hope u guys njoy this OS..


It had just stopped raining in the beautiful valleys of Assam. N the atmosphere had just calmed down. But inside a small bunglow a woman was pacing continuously. She was worried.

Zoya: Allah Miyya, whats wrong wid Aatif?? Mujhe kaha tha 8 tak aa jayengen its almost 8:45..where are they? I hope they are fine..kahi kuch..nai nai..both are smart guys..they'll be safe..well, let them just comethey are so gonna regret this mistake of theirs..

Here,

A small boy was riding his cycle followed by his mamujaan..today he was really happy..((y??) wait, u'll soon find it out..)

Aatif: Farid, aaj toh aapke wajhe se hum marne wale hai..

Farid: achaa?

Aatif: haa phir?? Aapko kya jarurat thi iss pu

Farid: (interrupts) ghar aa gaya..

Aatif: Ya Allah!! (n prayed for his safety)

Farid: (saw him and rolled his eyes) stop it mamu..Aami's not gonna eat you..

Aatif: I know her very well..she's not gonna eat me, she's gonna kill methis is the last time u r watching n talking with ur mamu..

Farid: please ring the bell..

Aatif: no ways!!

N suddenly the door openedn Farid n Aatif saw Zoya glaring at them

Zoya: (through her eyes asked them where they were n do they know wats the tym)

Farid: aami, actually..

Zoya: get inside the house..

Farid entered while Aatif stood there looking everywhere except Zoya..

Zoya: BJ..u too..

Aatif: ssly? U r not angry?

Zoya: enter..(angrily..)

Aatif entered n zoya closed the door in anger..

Zoya: whats wrong with u?

Here,

In Bhopal, Asad was sitting inside his cabin when his secretary entered without his permission..

Asad: whats wrong with u, Sophia?

Sophia: m..m.m so..sorry sir..actually..

Asad: go on..

Sophia: sir, Mr. Khan has came here to meet you..

As soon as Asad heard Mr. Khan his eyes became moist..

Asad: Zoya..(he whispered.)

Sophia: sir?

Asad: yes?

Sophia: actually u were not receiving my calls so I had to come here..

Asad: send him inside..

Sophia: yes sir!! (n left)

As soon as Sophia left, Asad took out his wallet n opened it..there was a small photo of Zoya smiling at him as he clicked this picture of hers..

Asad: Ms. Farooqi (n closed his eyes) Zoya..happy bday..(n smiled)...i..i..i wished mein us din aapko rok pata..toh shayad aaj aap..(n he kept his wallet)

Rashid entered his cabin..

Rashid: Asad?

Asad: abu? Aap ase achanak koi kaam tha kya?

Rashid: aaj pure 5 saal ho gaye hai Zoya ko jaa kar..

Asad: (looked sad) jaanta hu..

Rashid: Asad, tum usse dhund ne ki koshish kyu nai karte..

Asad: aapko lagta hai meine koshish nai ki?

Rashid: aaj uska janamdin hai..Dilshad aur mein Dargah jaa rahe hai, Zoya k lambi umar ki duaa maangne..tum chal rahe ho?

Asad: nai..

Rashid: kab tak ase hi rahoge tum Asad..apni galti maan toh li tumne lekin usse sudharna nai chahte tum..asa ab tak chalega?

Asad: aaj 5 saal baad ase achanak aap mujhse yeh sab q keh rahe hai? Jarur aami ne bheja hoga aapko..

Rashid: Zoya mere liye kya hy Asad yeh tum kabhi nai samajh paaoge..agar woh humare zindagi mein nai aati toh shayad aaj tum mujhse baat nai karte..mujhe kabhi abu nai bulate..shireen ko kabhi accept nai karte..shireen aur Dilshad kabhi saath nai rehte..hum ek dusre ko DOST bulate the..usne meri bahot madad ki hai..Zoya mere liye beti se bhi bad kar hai..aur agar tum usse nai dhund sakte toh mein usse dhund lunga..

Asad: abu, kya aap ko sach mein lagta hai k meine Zoya ko dhundne ki koshish nai ki? Balki mein aaj bhi unhe dhund raha hu..lekin woh NY mein nai hai..Bhopal mein nai hy..Mumbai mein bhi nai hy..toh mein kya karu??

Rashid: dil se dhund ne ki koshish karo..

Asad: aap nai samjhenge..

Rashid: (sighed) Asad.. mein phirse tumse puch raha hu, Dilshad aur mein Dargah jaa rahe hai, Zoya k lambi umar ki duaa maangne..tum chal rahe ho?

Here,

Zoya: answer me!!!

Farid: aami..calm down..

Zoya: u r asking me to calm dwn?

Farid: sit!!

Zoya: bacha aap kaha gaye the?

Farid: morning walk..

Zoya: really??

Aatif: haa Zoe..

Zoya: BJ, sach sach batao kaha gaye the tum log?

Farid: 1 sec aami..

Zoya: arre, ye phirse kaha bahar jaa raha hy?

Aatif: 1 sec na Zoe..acha ek kaam karo apne aakhe band karo..

Zoya: huh?

Aatif: common!!!

Zoya closed her eyes..

Farid came back n handled zoya a basket..

Zoya (opened her eyes) aww!! Farid? Its sooo cutetoh aap dono mere liye Labrador lane gaye the? Pet shop?

Farid: happy bday aami

Zoya: aww!! Mera bachchaa..come here (n hugged him tightly) love u muuaahh..(n kissed him)

Farid: aami, love u too..where is Awa?

Zoya: she's still sleeping..

Farid: ohh..mein dekh kar aata hu..if she's up or not..

Zoya: okay..(n started playing wid the pup)

Aatif: happy bday Zoe..

Zoya: thankyou

Aatif: thankyou Zoe..

Zoya: huh? Usually ppl say ur welcum or my pleasure..n u r saying thankyou?

Aatif: (rolled his eyes) for cuming in my life..for making it meaningful..

Zoya: (stood up n kept the pup inside the basket n went n hugged Aatif) awww!! BJ, thankq toh mujhe kehna chahiye aapko..agar 5 saal pehele aap mujhe nai mile hote toh shayad mein mar jaati..

Aatif: Zoe!!! (angrily)

Zoya: m sorry!!

Aatif: phirse asa kabhi math kehna..

Zoya: I promise..

N suddenly Farid n Awa came down running..

Awa: happy bday aammiii!!

Zoya: awww!! Thankyou so much bachcha(n picked her up) mujhe aap logon ka gift bahot acha laga..

Farid: ssly?

Zoya: ssly Farid..mujhe asa gift n surprise kisi ne nai diya..

Farid: par mein toh aapko har saal kuch na kuch gift jarur karta tha..

Zoya: aur woh meine sambhaal k bhi rakhe hai..

Farid: ami?

Zoya: hmm?

Farid: did he wished u?

There was complete silence for 1 min..

Aatif: lets eat..m hungry..

Zoya: Farid, (she kneeled dwn) come here..

Farid: (looked hurted) hmm?

Zoya: he was the first one to wish me..

Aatif: Zoe?

Farid: huh? (shocked)

Zoya: hmm..as usual..frm the past 4 yrs he wished me sharply at 12 am..

Farid: sachi?

Zoya: muchi!!!

Farid: I love my abu, ami!!!

Zoya: I love him too, Farid..

Farid: lets eat!! (he n ran inside the kitchen)

Zoya: (smiled faintly n stood up)

Aatif: y did u lied to him?

Zoya: I didn't..

Aatif: huh?

Zoya: he did wished me..i know sharp at 12 am..n must be wishing me every now n then when he remembers me..coz I know he still loves me..

Aatif: Zoe, I'll never understand ur love story..ssly!!

Zoya: (laughed) lets have breakfast..

Aatif: hmm..

Here,

Asad, Dilshad, Rashid, Ayaan, Humeira n Najma prayed for Zoya's lambi umar n Asad without informing anyone left frm there..

Dilshad: ye Asad kaha chala gaya?

Najma: ami, aap bhaijaan ko jaanti hy..office hi gaye honge..

Ayaan: Humera begum, aap aura mi abu ghar jaeye..mein Najma ko chod kar aaata hu..chale Najma

Najma? Ji bhaijaan..Allah Hafis!!

All: Allah Hafis!!

Najma n Ayaan left..

Humera: chale ami?

Dilshad: hmm..

N D,R n H left

Here,

Asad was sitting alone at a lonesome place..where Zoya used to come n sit when she used to angry, sad, happy, confused, guiltytoday Asad was deeply sad..he wanted Zoya badly..

Asad: 5 saal Zoya..5 saal, kaha ho tum? Plzz wapis aa jao..i need u..i cant live widout u..come back..come back to me..ur Asad..i love u..n I promise u that I'll trust u..i'll never hurt u..plzz come back!! (n tears strted flowing frm his eyes) come back!!!

Here,

Zoya: (was feeding Farid n Awa turn by turn..when suddenly she felt Asad was calling her..he needed her..) Asad? Allah Miyya, I hope he's fine..Ya Allah, plzz take care of him..

Farid: ami!!

Zoya: haa?

Farid: y did u kept my name as Farid? What does it means?

Zoya: weeelllFarid means unique..aap lakho mein ek ho..is liye meine aapka naam FARID rakha..

Farid: ohhh..kul!!! aur Awa ka matlab?

Zoya: Awa matlab beautiful angel..(n lovingly looked at Awa..)

Awa: bash

Zoya: pakka?

Awa: ami!!

Zoya: Allah Miyyaokay..Farid, aap toh khaoge na?

Farid: even m full ami..

Zoya: okay!! Paani toh pe lo..

Farid: haa..(n while drinking d water few drops fell dwn frm Farid mouth..)

Awa: Bhaijaan, plzz paaani pochiye..

Farid: hmm..(n rubbed the water with his T-shirt..)

Awa: (closed her eyes in frustration) ami,

Zoya: I'll clean it up..

Farid: nautanki!! Chale? School jana hy..

Awa: aapko!! Mujhe nai..

Aatif: jagdo math..chalo mein Farid ko ready hone mein madad karta hu..(he picked Awa n Farid n rushed outside)

Zoya: Awa bilkul apne abu pe gayi hy..Allah Miyya!! Chalo paani poch deti hu..warna Ms Khan naraz ho jayegi..

Here,

Asad was inside a meeting but he was lost in Zoya..he didn't understood when the meeting got over it was when his PA Raj told him..

Asad: ohh..yeah!! (he greeted the shareholders a bye n went n sat in his cabin..)

Suddenly his secretary called him..

Asad: yes Sophia?

Sophia: sir actually tomorrow u have to leave for Assam as u have meetings wid Aatif Farooqi..over the

Asad: yeah I know..wats the tyming of my flight?

Sophia: tonight 11:30 pm..

Asad: ok..(n hanged the call) I guess this will be a little change in my life..i'll become the old Asad again..i hope so..

Here,

Aatif n Farid had left n Awa was playing with the pup..

Zoya: hmm..

Awa: he's so cute ami..

Zoya: yes, he is..umm, Awa?

Awa: yes?

Zoya: wat should we call him?

Awa: Sugarpie?

Zoya: huh?

Awa: hmm..but we'll call him Sugar..

Zoya: kul!! Done!!

Awa: hello Sugar, m Awa..Awa Khan..

Zoya: (smiled n played wid Sugar along wid Awa)

Here,

It was 8:00, Asad n Rashid left the house..

Asad: I hope we get this deal!!

Rashid: we will..

Asad: (smiled n looked out of the window)

Aft a while they reached the airport n soon their plane took off for Assam..

Here,

Zoya had made Farid n Awa sleep n went to sleep..

Next morning

7:30 Asad n Rashid reached Assam

Aatif had send his driver to escort Asad n Rashid to the 5 star hotel..so tht they could take rest n get freshened up b4 the meeting..

Asad was sleeping inside his room..while Rashid was getting ready..

Here,

Mohit: sir mr khan ko meine hotel pocha diya hai..

Aatif: okay..(n hanged)

Zoya: kiska phn tha?

Aatif: Mohit ka..

Zoya: tumhare dealers aa gaye?

Aatif: yup!!

Zoya: well all the best..

Aatif: thankyou..

Zoya: (smiled) ye lijiye nashta..

Aatif: umm..nai Zoe, mein office mein kar lunga..mujhe aaj office jaldi pochna hoga..

Zoya: 1 paratha toh kha hi sakte he aap..

Aatif: alright!!! He stuffed the paratha in his mouth n left..

Zoya: Allah!!!

Here,

Asad and Rashid were ready n Mohit came der to pick them up..n in an hr they reached AF construction..

Rashid: hmm..nice!!

Asad: yeah..

N they entered AFC..only to be greeted by everyone with respect..Asad for a change was impressed..

Asad: impressive!!

N they entered Aatif's cabin..

Aatif: good morning Mr Asad n Mr Rashid Khanplease..(n asked thm to sit)

The meeting went on for an hr..

Aatif: so Mr Asad Khan?

Asad: u get the deal!!

Aatif: thankyou!!

Asad: hmm..

Rashid: aap bahot hi ache boss lagte hy..

Aatif: (smiled) hmm..

Rashid: (laughed) not bad!!

Asad: it was a pleasure to meet u Mr. Farooqi..

Aatif: same here!! (n they shook hands)

N suddenly Farid n Awa entered..

Aatif: oh shit!! Farid!!

Farid: m sorry..

Rashid: aapke bache?

Aatif: aap keh sakte hy..

Asad: matlab?

Aatif: mere behen ke hai..

Asad: ohh..hello!!

Awa: hello!! (n smiled, her dimple reminded him of Zoya n her smile of himself..but how was tht possible?)

Awa: m Awa..Awa Khan..famously known as Ms. Khan by my ami..

Asad: ohh..asa q?

Awa: becoz she thinks tht m d carbo copy of my abu!!

Rashid: ohh..

Farid: hello, sir, m Farid..Awa's elder brother..

Asad: don't call me sir..u can call me Mr. Khan..

Farid n Aatif were shocked..

Farid: Mr. Khan??

Asad: hmm..

Awa: ok..

Aatif: aap dono yaha kya kar rahe hy?

Awa: ami told us tht u r going to Bhopal today?

Aatif: Zoe..(angrily) umm..

Farid: don't u try lie to us..

Aatif: yes..

Awarid: y??

Aatif: bahot important meeting hy..isliye..

Awa: (pouted )

Farid: chaliye Awa..

Aatif: Ya Allah!! (n ran behind them)

Asad: (stood there thinking abt Awa..n then when Aatif said Zoe..did he meant Zoya? Was he talking abt his Zoya? Wait..tht's not possible..did Zoya married? She moved on, n he..NO!!! stop it Asad..u r doubting on her again..may be she's not Zoya..) abu, lets go..

Rashid: hmm

N they left..

Here,

In evening..

Asad: abu, I don't want to go for a walk..aap hi chale jaiye..

Rashid: ok..(n he left)

While taking a walk he met Aatif

Rashid: arre Mr. Farooqi?

Aatif: arre mr. Khan? Aap?

Rashid: haawho room mein bethe bethe bore ho gaya tha..

Aatif: ohh..actually Mr. Rashid, mujhe bahot imp kaam hy..mein chalta hu..ek min..aap akele kaha ghumenge? Meri behen bhi yahi kahi rahegi..mein us bol deta hu..woh aapko ghuma degi..

Rashid: ok..

Aatif: where r u?

Zoya: abhi just Farid n Awa ko Ali k ghar choda hy..thode der khelenge phir mein unhe phir lene jaungi..

Aatif: woh mein kardunga..tum ek kaam karo..

Aatif: woh bas aati hogi..

Aft 5 min Zoya reached dern was shocked to see Rashid standin in frnt of her

Aatif: Zoya, this is Rashid Khan..i have to go..k? sorry..bye..(he hugged n kissed her forehead n left)

Rashid: do..do..dost?

Zoya: dost?

Rashid: (went near her n touched her cheeks lovingly) how r u?

Zoya: m 5in..aap yaha?

Rashid: haa ek meeting thi isliye aaya hu..

Zoya: akele?

Rashid: hmmm..1 min..

Zoya: kya ho gaya?

Rashid: Bas 1 min..promise me tum kahi nahi jaogi..

Zoya: I promise..

Rashid went a few steps ahead n called Asad..

But he was not picking up the call..so he decided to take zoya to their hotel..n aft acting as if he was feeling giddy he took her to his hotel..

Zoya: dost aap ka room no?

Rashid: 401

Zoya took him der n opened the door..

Asad: abu, ye tym hy aane ka? Kaha the aap?

Rashid: andar jao Zoya..

Zoya: (stood der still looking at the man standing in front of her..)

Rashid pushed her in closed the door n left..

Asad: (had tears in his eyes) Zo..Zoya?

Zoya had a blank expression on her face she finally closed her eyes n turned to leave..

Asad: Zoya,?

Zoya: yes Mr. Khan? (angrily)

Asad went near her n they were standing too close to each other..

Asad: zoya? Zoya..aap.kaha thi kaha aap?

Zoya: Mr. Khan dur reh kar baat ki jiye..(n pushed him)

Asad: (pulled her close to him n their lips were inches apart frm each other) shh!!!

Zoya knew tht if anyone of them spoke, their lips would touch..so she stayed still..

Asad rested his forehead on hers

Asad: aap mujhe chod kar q chali gayi Zoya??

Zoya: aap hi k liye..

Hearing this Asad left her n stared at her..

Asad: matlab?

Zoya: Asad, 5 saal pehele joh hua tha, uske baad..

Asad: Mr. Gafur n his wife r behind the bars..

Zoya: n ur best friend Tan..

Asad: don't even take her name Zoya..i hate her..she tried to separate us..she tried to kill u..

Zoya: she's no more..

Asad: wat??

Zoya: 5 saal pehele, jab meine aapko prove kiya tha k Tanveer hi billo rani hai tab..

Flashback

5 years ago..

6 mahine baad mujhe pata chala tha k m suffering frm brain tumor..n ussi silsiley mein nava jeevan hospital for women and children gayi thi..wapan par check up k baad pata chala k m absolutely alright..mein ghar jaa hi rahi thi k meine Tanveer ko labour room leke jaate huye dekha...n meine waha k doc se puchtaj ki tab mujhe pata chala k Tanveer pregnant thi..jab doc bahar aaye toh unhone mujhe bataya k Tanveer bahot critical hai n usk pass jyada tym nai hy..mein usse milne andar gayi..

zoya: tanveer??

Tanveer: zoya, aap?

Zoya: tum pregnant thi?

Tanveer: ji..

Zoya: kiska bacha hy yeh?

Tanveer: Zoya, humare pass jyada samaye nai hai..waada ki jiye k aap mere beta ko paal pos kar bada karengi..plzz..Khuda k liye..

Zoya: yeh kiska bacha hy?

Tanveer: pata nai..

Zoya: mr.

Tanveer: nai, Asad ka nai hai..usne toh kabhi mujhe chuha tak nai..toh?

Zoya: agar yeh bacha tumhara aur mr. khan ka hota toh bhi mein ise adop karti..so don't worry, I'll take good care of him..

Tanveer: shukriya Zoya..aur ek vaada ki jiye plzz..

Zoya: bolo..

Tanveer: aap humare bete ko kabhi bhi ye baat nai batayengi k mein inki ami thi..inhe humesha yahi lagna chahiye k aap hi inki ami hy..wada ki jiye?

Zoya: lekin, Tanveer?

Tanveer: plz Zoya!!

Zoya: ok..i promise..

Tanveer smiled n closed her eyes forever..

Flashback ends..

Mein mr. khan tanveer k bache ko apne bachse bhi jyada pyaar karti hu..

Asad: toh aapne mujhe q nai batayi ye baat?

Zoya: aur ek baat hy

Asad: kya?

Zoya: Asad, aapko yaad hy..mehendi k raat humare bich..

Asad: (smiled) woh mein kse bhul sakta hu, Zoya? Aap Ussi raat meri ho chuki hai..

Zoya: humari 1 beti hy..4 saal ki..

Asad: (looked at her in shock)

Zoya: (thought Asad will get angry n scold her but to her surprise he strted cryinghe cried like a child..Zoya couldn't watch her Asad crying n hugged him..) m sorry Asad..meine aapko inform karne ki koshish bhi kit hi lekin meri himmat hi nai hui..mein darr gayi thi..

Asad: (still huggung her) how's she? Like me or like u?

Zoya: like u..complete u..i call her Ms. Khan..

Asad: (broke the hug) ms. Khan?

Zoya: yes..

Asad: Awa? Awa Khan?

Zoya: u met her already?

Asad: she's our daughter?

Zoya: hmm..(n strted to cry)

Asad: I love you Zoya..

Zoya: I love you too Asad..

Asad pulled Zoya near him n kissed her

Asad: u don't know Zoya, meine ye 5 saal kse kaate hy, yeh aap nai jaanti..

Zoya: Allah Miyya, whats wrong with you Mr. khan?

Asad just smiled n took her in a bonecrushing hug..

Zoya: aapke bager toh mein bhi bilkul tut gayi thi..

Asad:belated happy bday..

Zoya: toh aapko yaad tha?

Asad: mein kabhi apne life k most imp logon k bday's nai bhulta..

Zoya: ohh..toh 17th October n 9th October ye din bhi register kar di jiye apne dimaag mein..

Asad: q?

Zoya: 9th oct ko Awa ka bday rehta hy n 17th oct ko Farid ka..

Asad: ohhh..toh meri angel oct month ki hy..apne abu ki tarha..

Zoya: hmm..abu 11th oct toh beti 9th oct..

Asad: zoya?

Zoya: 1 min Asad,

Asad: kya?

Zoya: aap Awa aur Farid ko kab n kaha mile?

Asad: Aatif k office aaj sawere..

Zoya: ohh..BJ k office..

Asad: BJ??

Zoya: hmm..bhaijaan..

Asad: (rolled her eyes) Zoya, Plzz wapis aa jao..i need u..i cant live widout u..come back..come back to me..ur Asad..i love u..n I promise u that I'll trust u..i'll never hurt u..plzz come back!! (n tears strted flowing frm his eyes) come back!!!

Zoya: (broke the hug) I cant..

Asad: zoya?

Zoya: abh assam hi meri duniya hy Asad..i cant returned to Bhopal..

Asad: toh mein ammi ayaan aur humera ko yahi bula leta hu..

Zoya: no!! asad I want u too move on..




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Asad: yeh ksi baat kar rahi hy aap Zoya? Asli baat kya hy?

Zoya: kya aap Farid ko accept karenge?

Asad: Allah!!! Bas itni si baat?? Farid ek bahot hi acha ladka hy..ofcourse I have accepted him..

Zoya: thankyou Asad..

Asad: (smiled) mujhe Awa se milna hy..

Zoya: 1 shart par..

Aasd: shart?

Zoya: hmm..

Asad: ksi shart?

Zoya: u have to accept Sugar too..

Asad: now whose this Sugar?

Zoya: our pet dog..

Asad: dog?

Zoya: hmm..(n shook her head like a small kid)

Asad: ok!!

Zoya: sach??

Asad: yes zoya!!

Zoya: u r the best Asad!!! I love u!!

Asad: love u 2..abh chale?

Zoya: hmm..

N as ASYA reached to open the door..

Aatif, Farid n Awa (screamed together) surprise!!!!!!!!

Zoya: awww!!!

Asad: Awa? Farid?

Farid, Awa: abu!! (n hugged him)

Asad: (had tears in his eyes) I love u both..

Farid: we love u too..we have waited for u for more than 4 yrs…plzz now don't leave us..

Asad: never!! U bth, Sugar n Zoya all r cuming wid me to Bhopal..

Awa: n wat abt mamu?

Asad looked at aatif…

Aatif: I'll stay here only..coz my business is here..but I promise to come n meet u guys in every 1 week for a weekend..

Farid: but!!

Zoya: BJ!!

Aatif: I'll be fine..

Zoya: (hugged him) BJ??

Aatif: yes Zoe?

Zoya: u did this right?

Aatif: wat?

Zoya: u called Asad..right?

Aatif: yes..

Flashback..

2 week before..

zoya: BJ??

Aatif: hmm??

Zoya: u know wats aft 2 nxt weeks?

Aatif: (rolled his eyes) ur bday..

Zoya: wat r u giving me?

Aatif: wat do u want?

Zoya: asad..

Aatif: u sure?

Zoya: haa?

Aatif: ok!!

Zoya: huh??

Aatif: g2g..byeee…

Zoya: BJ!!!

Flashback ends…

Zoya: toh isse kya? I mean..

Aatif: rukiye..pura toh suniye..

Zoya: kk..go on..

Aatif: uske baad meine Asad ki puri information nikali google pe..n I got it k Asad hi who Mr. Khan hai joh mere AFC k saath deal karna chahte hy..n meine inhe haa kaha..phir jaan mujkar inhe Assam bulaya n mr. Rashid se janmuj kar takraya taaake mein aap dono ko mila saku n then Awa n Farid ko sab bataya..they got excited n then bang on..we r here..

Asad: aatif, tq, tq..agar aaj aap nai hote toh..shayad mein Zoya se kabhi bhi nai mil pata..

Aatif: arre bas-bas..Zoe, ye lo..

Zoya: wats this? Tickets?

Aatif: hmm..Farid, Awa n tumhari..have a happy life ahead..

Zoya: strted to cry..looking at her Farid n Awa too strted to cry n all hugged aatif..

Asad n Rashid just kept looking at them..

2 days later..

zoya: allah miyya, jaldi kariye Asad..

asad: ji!!

Aatif: all ready?

All: yeah!!

Aatif drove them off to airport n bided bye to all n left saying he couldn't see Zoya, Farid n Awa leaving..

Nxt day

Asya n all reached Bhopal..n as per asad's instruction no one went to receive him n Najma was at Khan Mansion as Asad had asked her to come..

Dilshad: yeh Asad ne hum sab ko ghar hi rehne k liye q kaha hoga?

N suddenly the door bell rang..

Najma: mein dekhti hu..(she went n opened the door n was shocked to see Zoya..n she screamed..all came running outside n were =ly shocked..)

Ayaan: mona daling?

Zoya: yes raberrt..(n smiled) (she rushed inside n hugged Dilshad followed by Najma n then Humera..)

Dilshad: zoya?

Zoya: phuphi..

Dilshad: tum..

Zoya: phuphi..(she turned towards Awa n Farid) come!!

Ur grandchildrens..

Dilshad: ya Allah!!

Najma: awww!! Hello!! Mein Najma Sheikh!! Apki bua..

Awa: hii..mein Awa aur ye mere bhaijaan Farid hy..

Humera: aur hum aapke chachi kam masi hy..

Zoya: (smiled)

Ayaan: aur mein aapka chachu!!

Awa n Farid were enjoying themselves..

Ayaan took them too their rooms n strted playing wid them..

N in the meantime, Asya told everyone what had happened? How they met? Etc..

Dilshad: toh 2 din baad mein chahti hu k aap dono ka nikaah ho..

Asya smiled..n Asad hugged Zoya in front of everyone..n Zoya hugged him back…

2 days later..

Asya were finally became 1..they got married..n they lived happily ever after..

THE END

PS: 1) I don't know the exact tyming tht needs one to reach assam frm Bhopal…so I just assumed it to be of 8 hrs..

2) I dnt love Shireen so nothing abt her in this os..n even badi bi..

I know this is a bit tooo long OS but I was feeling bored sitting fukat..so thought of writing something on Asya..n most of must be thinking that the story is being rushed to end n would have being better as an FF..but I don't have tym to write an ff as my colg is abt to strt..so I wrote an OS..

plzz forgive me for the spelling mistakes n some grammatical mistakes done by me..i hope u guys like my OS..n if u guys liked it then plzz hit the like button n do comment..good toh good, bad toh bad, worst toh worst..but do comment..i hope u guys njoyed..

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thankyou!! 😊
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It ws completely amezing man
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It was just great !!! 😃
Do write more OS's like this
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yaar..u r amazng...i lovd it..
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Simple elegant and yet awesome
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I love it!! It was so cuteee...

You can name is "Dooriyaan" - just a suggestion!!

Write more!! =)
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Yeh toh kamaal ki cheez hai yaar
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