Guys thank u so much for the support..and as per many frnd's Req im gna cntnu this OS as FF ..pls gv me the support as like before..
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Hy guys this my 1st OS ...Im a Tamil girl, so if there is any mistake in this OS means,pls dnt mind and forgive me.
Im gonna continue with the present track... As per our show's present track is about Adham s ..i just hate it to the core, so gonna continue as like Jalal killed him for his mistake, by taking Jodha"s side.., when she asked reason for his action, he replied that "Every Man should Respect each woman and also her feelings". Jodha was overwhelmed to see the changes in him and have happy tears..started having a feelings for him, but Jalal thinks that she didn't forgot the past, his angry towards her and hurting her feelings and thought that he should keep a distance towards her, so that she may not feel bad thinking about past anymore and next track is cheapudin's .
Ok here starts my story...
After Adham's death Maham anga is fully in angry with Jalal and after came to know about this News, cheapudin plans to join his hands with Maham...
he sends a message that he wanna meet her..they had a convo, in that cheapudin plans to kidnap Jodha,when Jalal went to war at some place..Maham to agreed
Next day Jalal got ready with his army to the war, While Jodha give him Aarti and put thilak on his fore head and gives a friendly smile and wish him the luck and he puzzled with her actions towards him and left agra, when he left Jodha thinks herself "why its bothering me that you are going for a war and i feel scared that something may happen to you... Today i have a different feeling for u ..by trying to consoling u that you are having a heart, i may leave a place in my heart for you..Please be safe and come back soon".
That night cheapudin enters harem with his soliders and some of the Jalal's soliders, who left for harem safety where fighting with them,but they lost towards cheapudin's soliders, This news reaches to Ruqu and when she was about to check him where about, he enter into Jodha's room, where moti stops him, but he slaps her throw her away, Moti was fainted.
while seeing this Jodha got angry and slaps him...this made him more Mad and he slaps her hardly, so that she too fainted...Ruqqu reaches Jodha place and see the cheapudin carrying unconsious Jodha and try to stop him, but he is not in the mood to listen, and also throw her aways and went out with jodha...while leaving cheapudin orders his soliders,those who are fighting with some of Jalal's soliders to come to their place after finished fighting,Ruqqu somewhat manages to know the place name and even though, she dnt like jodha, but she wanna save her, she dnt wanna leave her at this condition.
so she send a massage to jalal about the things happened...Jalal become Mad at cheapudin for his misbehaving towards HIS JODHA..Furious Jalal ask Adhka sir to manage the war,as he wanna go to save Jodha...he agreed..and the place where Jalal went to the war was almost Near to the cheapudin's place...After entering their place, cheapudin throws the unconscious jodha on bed and started drinking like animal, while drinking he think become mad about the slap jodha gave him and Right then Jodha got conscious and try to escape from there.
After seeing that cheapudin fully turn into a animal and caught her hand and crashed it, due to that her bangles got broken and hurts her wrist badly and then he drag her towards bed and again about to slap, but he hear some noise outside the place where they are..he just went to see that Jalal furiously fighting with his solider, cheapudin was hell shocked, and when he was about to leave that place with fear, Jalal catches him and about to kill him, cheapudin used BB name and creates sympathy...Right then Jodha get away from the room and on seeing Jalal there, she completly break down and Run towards him,but she was too tired so she was about to fall, Jalal run to her and catch her..she tightly hug him with fear.
Jalal understand her situation and hug her back with care and cheapudin use this chance and try to escape, but caught by Adkha and Jalal's solider,those who reaches there after Jalal..on seeing Jodha's condition Jalal burns with angry and ask soliders to arrest him and get him to our place and he takes jodha to harem, where everyone scared and waiting for their arraival .
Right then Jalal enter with unconscious Jodha...Moti run towards Jodha and both of them take her to the room, Jalal lay her on the bed,call the doctor through a maid and ask moti to take care of jodha. Moti assures him. Ruqqu saw all this and happy that Jalal saves her...Then he went to cheapudin with extreme anger and ask him that "how dare you to misbehave with MY JODHA.. he cant control his anger and started beating him brutely,let her get conscious , Ill kill u, in front of her eyes", cheapudin got scared and says maham anga also included in it..but jalal cant believe it and asked her whether he is sayng the truth, a frustrated Maham anga burst out her anger..Jalal break down and order her not to come in front of him..and ask soliders to arrest her..Maham anaga feels hurt and accept the punishment .
After some times, its late night now,he went to Jodha room to check her condition...as she was in deep sleep due to medicine and Moti just went out for some other work...on noticing the finger print on her checks and wounds on her hand...he had tears in his eyes..Jodha started to scream in the sleep "leave me sheriffudin... leave me" Jalal sits besides her and started caring her hairs and talking to her that "You are safe jodha...nothing is happened to you...im with you and will be with you forever"
Jodha again went to sleep and Jalal place her face at his bare chest and said "im really sorry jodha...i can able to save you from him, but i dont knw how to save u from this restless night..im really sorry" he hugged her and have tears in his eyes..Moti came after little work and unknowingly saw them together and left the room with smile.
Jalal didn't sleep at full night..he was thinking that "why i have this much pain..i know whatever happens to her is wrong,so that i got angry on the person who did this wrong ..even though why its killing me inside, while im seeing u in pain?? WHY?? I thinking you succeed in your mission of making me to agree that i hv a heart...yes im now telling u, i have a heart and it is now beating for your safe and your health"
Its morning now .. Moti is in Jodha room..and ask about her health and gave breakfast...Moti shared the scene she saw at last night...Jodha shocked and happy too, bcz she too lightly remember that Jalal hugged her and cried for her,even though she unconscious, she felt his care that time ..Moti saw her smile and teases her.. just then Jalal came,moti leave from ther...he ask about her health but didn't see her face, due to guilty..she noticed it and she replied as she is ok , but little bit tired. He ask her to come out and he killed cheapudin in front of her..she was scared to see this, but she saw a caring Jalal in front of her. Later evening he came to room, and now also he didn't see her face and ask whether she is feeling better..she pretend to be anger in front of him and plays with him, she says im fine...and he was about leave...she stops him and ask "why he killed cheapudin??" And he replied "it is the right punishment".
Jodha said "ok,then why did u cried for me???" He get shocked, turns opposite to her and replied, "who said that i cried for u?? I didn't".she got annoyed that " he is having feeling for her, then why he is not admitting it". she asked in anger "so u didn't care for me?? Didn't hv any feeling for me??? Jalal said No with teary eyes.
She got hurt and burst out that "i know this will be your reply..im an idiot, even though i know this, i started having a feeling for u...i started to think u are belong to me and im to u". Jalal shocked with happy ..she continued "but u crashed all into small pieces with a single NO"...then she again shouted "if u doesn't have any feelings for me,then y did u cried last night???? Y did u cares for me???" Jalal nums...she got mad and shouted that "even if u have feelings, you wont say it...because as like you said, you are heart-less person, who never think about others feelings" it hurts him that he hear those words from her and get angry like mad and shouted that "yes i cares for u, because i have feeling for you...yes i cried last night because i love u like mad...i love you... i love you jodha ...i love you" for a small time silence was maintained there...Both of them have tears in their eyes..Jalal continued "you are the one who started hating me , but also u are the one who started caring for me...you are the one who said i have heart and now u are the same one who is sayng im heart less" jodha cried badly and feels hurts as she hurted him badly with her words.. he said "what can i do??? I cant able to understand whether you like me or not, then how can i say it???? Im not having the courage to face the reject...especially from you...im very scared that you may accept me or not...but i cant take this pain any more Jodha".
he again said his love to her "I love you jodha, i love you madly.." he cried badly and turns towards her...she shattered and feels bad while seeing him crying for her..without a single,she run towards him and hug him tightly with full passion and love..he amazed with her hug and see her ..she burst out that "who said i hate u and ill reject u??? Dnt even dare to think like that.. I too love sehensha...i too love u a lot" he was fully shocked and also feels like flying in ths sky...he hugs her back with same passion and love..here starts their beautiful love story.
p.s: guys hope u all will like it...according towards your response, im gonna write an another OS. Yet im not decided..but will decide after seeing your response dearies...
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