||SS and TR OS|| : i'll never let a tear escape your eye

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Posted: 12 years ago
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so guys its my first taarey write up ..swaron toh m hamesha lekte hoon .😳..okie so .do hit like and comment and add me to your buddy list if you want pms for my updates .

A beautiful yellow ball in the bluish sky emerge rays of which reached a sleeping angel's eyes as the curtains where opened unknowingly by swayam to wake his sister up, "wake up Taani " he said and

froze seeing an angel sleeping beside her . while Sharon sleepily said " raat bar sone nahe diya tumhare thoughts ne muje abh tum khud aah gaye muje utane keliye" .

while swayam was in a loss of words . taani while half sleep said " haan , bhai muje koi sagai nahe karne ..muje sona hai Sharon bhabhi ke saath baath karna hai " .

swayam mumbled " bhabhi ?"

. Taani " bhai agar aap ense shaadhi nahe karoge toh mai karloonge " .

Rey who was at the door ready to wake his angel up said " Sharon mere best friend ko toh mujse cheen leya ey kafi nahe tha ki , mere honewali bheeve ko bhi cheen rahe ho

" swayam unintentionally said " Sharon please Taani ko uta do aur khud ut jawo , koi tumhare kaamwali kaki nahe hai kit um ese behave karo " .

rey " aare baabh re " .

swayam just realised what he said

, to which Sharon replied " tum kaka ho ya kaki , khud soch lo "

which made Rey busrt into laughter and lie beside Sharon and snap her " ey ..hahaa ey kya keh rahe hoo Sharon " .

Taani pushed rey which made him fall down . taani said " ey girls ka karma hai aap dusre kamre mai jawo . ham aa rahe hai".

rey " deko tum aur mai ham hai na Taani ? tum aur Sharon nahe "

swayam was suppressing his laughter which by that dialogue exploded which they earn a pillow on theor face each .

swayam " Sharon ...please".

Rey " aabhe kuch zadha ho raha hai swayam ...Taani ne bhe wohe kiya toh tu Sharon se ese kyo baat kar raha hai "

. Sharon gets up and hugs Rey " true friend ho tum mere ".

Taani " haan bhai kuch zhada ho raha hai " .

swayam " agar tum sab esse comfortable ho toh muje koi problem nahe hai , mai toh sirf uta raha tha " .

rey " dek swayam muje pata hai kki usne tumhe hurt kiya hai aur tumhe pura right hai uspar chilaa ne ka par ...tumhe pata hai na ki " .

swayam " mere words usse affect karte hai mai janta hoon " .

all three were waitin for sharon's reply when they found that she had dozed off in rey's arms .. all three giggled .

rey said " baachi hai bilkul...esse kaise naraz ho sakta hai koi "

. taani " haan sote hua bohuth cute lagte hai bhabhi " .

swayam's face flushes .

rey " par jabh utegi "

. swayam " tabh siren "

. sharon's head was on rey's shoulder . she murmured something to which rey couldn't control his laughter and she slipped from his hands and was in the care of swayam who held her firmly as if it's a last embrace

. Swayam" kya kar raha hai rey agar gir jaate toh ! "

Sharon again mumbled " mere lorry ..swayam lorry "

swayam suppressed his chuckle.

Rey said " abh bol !" . swaayam remembered the time when Sharon had chicken pox and he was so in love with that childish Sharon . and he fell in love with her for the umpteenth time again .

Taani " kya bol diya bha ( noticed swayam's embarrassed face ) i mean Sharon ne ? mere bhabhi ne kyaaa bola bolo bolo bhai "

rey ' en done jho bhi kaya hai kal raat ko , thanks to that ...muje ey sabh new change dekne ko mila " .

swayam notices a syrup bottle and says " oh shit , ey pelaya Sharon ko taani tumne ?"

. Taani " no bhai ...maine bhi piya who ham dono ne ice cream kaya tha kal ...toh hamara laga I mean laga karabh ho gaye tha ..." .

.rey laughing for the 10th time " aree kya hua swayam uss syrup mai kya hai ?".

swayam " ey syrup mai alcoholic elements hai ...and sleepning element hai almost like synodil medicine . I hope ki Sharon ko kuch na hoo "

rey " taani ko bhi kuch na ho "

. taani " muje rey se pyaar ho gay hai , pyaar pyaar pyaar "

.Rey "haye swayam mujse control nahe hoo raha " .

swayam " accha teek hai mai girl gang ko call karta hoon wo en dono ko samal lenge" . then they come and set taani and Sharon right .

At the hall . swayam is becoming impatient by every passing second

. swayam ( in his mind ) " mai tumse kabhi bhi pyaar karna stop nahe kar sakta sharon . kyo ??"

. rey holds his hand and says " dek mai bhi bohuth impatient hoon yaar "

swayam cuts him" mai kyo .." . his words die when he notices sharon desending from the stairs wearing a white sari , swayam went to his old swayam mode , old swayam which he thought but the realiy is that swayam was just concealed under the pain he ha d gone through , yet his heart went to poetic form "

her eyes as beautiful as petals of rose . her lip so smooth that any prince can't control his desires her hair just like silk her ..swayam get out of me "

. then he notices rey and smirks and says " mu toh band kar chachu !" rey feel so embarrassed that he would want to dig a pit in the floor and get in and cover himself.

Rey " pehle tho ruk jaa " swayam stops his steps whih were involuntarily leading towards his lady love .

swayam " kyo ? tue kuch bolna hai ?"

rey " zada smart mat ban samja ! abh chal muje mere kursi par bita " .

swayam " haan haan chalo chalo " . both rey and taani sit on their chairs ,

rey " tum bohuth beautiful dek rahe hon taani "

taani " ap bhi handsome ek rahe hoon " .

rey " mai promise karta hoon ki hamesha no matter what tumhari iss smile ko kabhi kone nahe donga " .

taani feels out of the world and replys " mai kush kismet hoon apko paa kar "

. rey takes her smile and kisses the same and says " I love you taani "

taani " I love you too " .

while gang says " ohoho " and does the chemistry thing .

sharon goes to swayam and aks him" mai kaise dek rahe hoon?"

swayam involuntarily replies " khoobsurat ( realises what he just said ) I mean .." Sharon goes off shaded pink before he could complete his statement

. Sharon " aaj jho bhi hoon swayam mai tumhe mana ke rahoongi ey akri chance hai mere paas "

. swayam and sharon are both face the god's statue but don't notice each other sprence .

swayam " muje aone aap ko control karne ki power dena "

Sharon " muje swayam ko apne control zone se bahar lane ka power dena " .

while taarey notice them from far away and say

" een dono ko mila dena bagwaan " rey " mai manta hoon ki Sharon ne galti ki hai par " .

taani " unka saath rehena hee universal rule hai " .

rey " maana padega bohuth jaan gaye ho muje " . taani " aap mere jaan ho rey " . rey is touched .

Swayam was lighting a lamp . when hot oil falls to his skin . swayam squeals in pain . Sharon runs to him with a first aid in her hand in the speed of light. Sharon gets hyper and says " kya jaaroorath thi tumhe ey sab karne ki ! deko abhi ho gaya nah ! "and applies ointment to his hand and says with eyes full of tears " dardh ho raha hai ?"

swayam is touched by her concern . his inner voice says " mere etna care karna , mere har rudness ko ignore karke mujpar pyaar shower karna . tum mujse pyaar .." . he shakes his head to come to reality and says " mujpar oil gera hai bomb nahe ! and etna drama karna band karo "

and gets up from the sitting position leaving a devastated Sharon with ointment still in her hand .

Sharon " etna nafrat kabh hogaya mujse swayam ?" .

swayam with a lump in his throat " kya ?'' .

Sharon " im sorry swayam . par tum mujse ese ...mai kitne din se tumse maafi mang rahe hoon ...chalo toh mujse dur ho jawo par mere pyaar ko jut mat kaho "

swayam isn't able to find words so he goes to taarey with a tear strained face

. taani " bhai aap teek hooo" swayam doesn't reply .

"swayam "rey says for the fifth time . and shakes him ... tears flow through swayams eyes . he says " tum dono ki engagement hai ...aabh chalo rings exchange karte hai ..bohuth kam hai muje bhi " rey gives him a hug . and calms him .

taani " bhai aap kitna bhi dany karo Sharon aapse pyaar karte hai bohuth pyaar aph dono saath rehene keliye hee bane ho " ..

.swayam " darta hoon taani " .

Sharon enters the scene and says " dar ...mere pyaar se ?"

. rey tries to twist the topic and says " aare nahe mere maa tumhare siren se "

Sharon laughs out of her tears and they start chasin each other .

taani " aree Sharon aap mere hone wale paate ko ese ese kutte ki tarah baga rahe hoo" they all laugh for that one , they exchange rings .

the crowd hoots and says ram sita ki jhodi hai eye dono

. Gang dances for Taarey at the end Sharon collapses as can no more handle swayam's ignorance and hugs swayam . ( emagine medical room hug ) sharon " pata hai swayam mai tumhe deserve nhe karte par mai tumse bohuth zada pyaar karte hoon , I love you and tumhare eye y ignorance iit-it kills me . "

swayam breaks the hug " sab dek rahe hai Sharon " .

Sharon places her head in swayams chest where his heart is chanting her name constantly . swaron are crying . Sharon "im sorry swayam . please muje last time maff kardo please , mai tumhare bina saas nahe le pate , im sorry , im sorry "

gang says with tears in their eyes " haan yaar maf kar de "

. Sharon continue " please swayam ey last chance mereliye , hamere liye . I promise mai tumhare anko se kabhi bhi anso nahe aane doongi ...I'll never let a tear escape your eye, hamesha tumhari saath dongi . tum chalo toh ham trail rela..."

swayam melts " I love you Sharon . mai kitna bhi chahoon tumhe dur nahe reh sakta ...kya karoon bohuth pyaar karta hoon tumse " .

Sharon " haan . mai bhi " Sharon beams with happiness .

swayam places his lips on her forehead . sharon's heart does summersaults " I love you Sharon and I always will .

Sharon kisses his cheeks (Swayam feels complete ) " I'll love till he end of my life, may be even then "

...swayam places his hand on her lips " ssh ...muje tum chaho tho bhi nahe chod sakte ... Promise me ki tum mujse dur nahe jawogi kabh bhi "

Sharon " promise " .

taarey hoots .and the crowd claps . and gives blessings to the two new couples . taarey " best gift diya hai hame hamere engagement mai "

swayam grins while Sharon turns red

.rey " finally my swayam is back "

swayam " haan I'm back to my love ...rey thu taani ko happy rakega na ?"

rey " hamesha " I'll never let a tear escape her eye..."

Swayam " ey toh ...'' ( looks at Sharon ) .

sharon " mere confession line thi !"

rey " who ...who ..tumhare copyright hai kya ?" .

Sharon " who maine mere swayam ko bola tha ."

swayam blushes ! rey " tu lall hone ke bajaye muje bacha na !"

Sharon chases rey all over the hall .

taani " aare Sharon..." Sharon and rey stop

s . rey " thank you taani... " .

..taani " kuch nahe continue" ..

rey " Taaani ! "

taani " bhai !"

swayam " Sharon Ruko "

and catches hold of her waist . they Sharon a eyelock . taani is about to fall while rey catches her and time freezes for Taarey and Swaron ❤️.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing OS...!!!
I loved both the couples here...!!!
Thanx for this OS...!!!😊😊
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that was great and brilliant os... loved it
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Lovely os!! Thanks for the gift!

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