Originally posted by: rajnid68
This is absolutely amazing..
Very well penned..Do you think you can continue your flow if thoughts..
ya i can...will try to if i get good response & comments frm u ppl...😊
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Originally posted by: rajnid68
This is absolutely amazing..
Very well penned..Do you think you can continue your flow if thoughts..
I am thinking to continue this story of mine. It will be based on the current track. The story is completely the way I'm imagining it. Things happened in past are same as QUBOOL HAI. But I'll do add some new flashbacks which were not part of Qubool Hai. Hope to see good response from you all. 😉
It will be an FF & I am naming it as "ZINDAGI KI YAHI REET HAI..." 😊
I always loved this song a lot. And after ASAD sang this song in Qubool Hai, I fell in love with it more...hayyeee...Karan...
Anyways, coming out of my Karan's day dreaming...Hope to see your comments & views...😆
I am almost done with the second part. A proof reading once and I will post the second part of the story in some time.
Thanks for your appreciation & love...
Love Always,
Angel ❤️
ASAD'S ROOM:
Dilshad was so broken from inside & all she could say was, "Zoya, aaj mujhse ek vaada karo ki tum kabhi bhi mere Asad ko akele nahi chodogi. Humesha uska saath dogi aur use khush rakhogi. Tum log chahe kitna bhi lado, tum humesha uske saath rahogi. Mere Asad..."
Her voice was breaking with each word & then Zoya said stopping her, "Phoophi, mai aapse vaada karti hu ki mai aapke ASAD ko humesha khush rakhungi. Unka saath kabhi nahi chodungi. Marte dum tak nahi."
With this both had tears in their eyes and they hugged each other to find comfort. They stayed for sometime in each other's embrace to find strength, to face things coming up.
Asad was crying in the garden.
Song in Background :
Rishte bharose chaahat yakeen, unnn sab ka daaman ab chaak hai...
Samajhe the haathon mein hai jameen, muthhi jo kholi bus khaak hai...
Scene shifting to Zoya-Dilshad Hug:
Dil mein yeh shor hai kyun, imaan kamjor hai kyun...
Naazuk yeh dor hai kyun...
Scene ending at Asad & Dilshad's tear-stricken face:
Kesariya Balam...
SIDDIQUE MANSION:
On the other hand in SM, Shireen talks to Ayaan and tell him about Rashid's decision to bring Dilshad back in his life. Hearing this Ayaan was shell-shocked. Shireen breaks-down in front of him. Ayaan unable to see his mother's pain go & hug her tightly.
"Ayaan, mujhe yaha se le chalo. Ab mai yaha aur nahi reh sakti. Ayaan...Ayaann..."
"Ammi... Shant ho jayiye. Mai abbu se baat karunga. Wo aisa faisla kaise le sakte hai. Ammi please... Please aap rona band kijiye..."
"Nahi Ayaan. Wo apna faisla nahi badlenge. Aur mujhe unka faisla manjoor hai. Wo kabhi Dilshad ko bhool hi nahi paye aur mai unki dusri biwi hu. Mere jaane ka waqt aa gaya hai unki zindagi se. Aur mai is ghar me ab nahi reh sakti. Bus aap mujhe yaha se le chaliye, Ayaan...Ayaan please beta... Mujhe yaha se le chaliye.."
Ayaan was in distraught state seeing his ammi crying so badly. Patting her head he said, "Thik hai ammi. Jaisa aap chahegi waisa hi hoga. Hum kal subah hi yaha se chale jayenge. In sab se bahot door. Aap apna samaan pack kar lijiye. Mai jakar Nuzhat se baat karta hoon."
Ayaan and Shireen stayed for sometime in each other's embrace to find strength & to face the things which were about to knock on their door.
Humeira who overheard the whole conversation was heart-broken and ran away from there to her room.
Song in background while Humeira was running:
Ishq... Ishq... Ishq... Ishq...
Ishq hota nahi sabhi ke liye...
Scene shifts to Ayaan & Shireen:
Ishq hota nahi sabhi ke liye...
Ye bana hai... Ye bana hai...
Ye bana hai... Ye bana hai...
Kisi kisi ke liye...
Humeira enters her room and runs to the washroom...
Awooo...
Ishq hota nahi sabhi ke liye...
Ishq hota nahi sabhi ke liye...
She locked the washroom & sat under the shower taking her legs to her chest and cried.
Humeira remembering her moments with Ayaan:
Pyaar ke afsane, yaar tu kya jane...
Ishq to karte hai deewane...
Hooo...
Shireen remembering her moments with Rashid:
Pyaar ke afsane, yaar tu kya jane...
Ishq to karte hai deewane...
Ohhh...
Hai jaroori... hai jaroori... Hai jaroori... hai jaroori...
Zindagi ke liye...
Scene splits into two: Ayaan & Humeira
Hooo...
Ishq hota nahi sabhi ke liye...
Ishq hota nahi sabhi ke liye...
Ishq... Ishq... Ishq... Ishq...
Humeira cried like never before and then she started yelling at no one in particular.
"Ayaan... Ayaan... Aap aisa kaise kar sakte ho. Aapne thodi der pehle mujhse vaada kiya tha ki ab hum kabhi alag nahi honge. Aur ab aap ye ghar chodkar jane ki baat kar rahe ho? Mai phoophi ka dard samajti hu. Par aapne ek baar bhi humare baare mai nahi socha. Ek baar mujhse baat karne ka bhi nahi socha. Kyu Ayaan? Kyun???"
She again collapsed.
At the very same moment, Ayaan who was going to Nuzhat stopped mid-way hearing a loud voice from Humeira's room. He opened the door to find no-one. He suddenly realized she was in the washroom. He ran and went near the washroom. As soon as he was about to push the door, he heard her.
She was sobbing & muttering, "Ayaan... Please mujhse phirse door mat jaiye. Mai mar jaungi aapke bagair. Please Ayaan... Ayaan... Ayaan..." and with this her voice trailed off.
Tears formed in Ayaan's eyes. He was about to open the door when he found it locked. He called, "Humeira... Darwaja kholo..."
But she didn't budge and suddenly Ayaan felt something's wrong because he could not hear her sobbing anymore.
He ran towards the door of her room & locked it. Then he came back to the washroom door & started shouting, "Humeira...Humeira...Please darwaja kholo."
Still not receiving any response, he felt a fear gripping his heart. He can't loose his Humeira again. He started pushing the door frantically. And the door opened with a thud. What he sawafter that left him shell-shocked.
KHAN VILLA GARDEN:
Asad was sitting in the garden on bench. Dilshad came to him with a Black Coffee. She offered him the coffee and he saw towards her. He took the coffee and she sat next to him. Asad was still staring at the sky. Dilshad was looking at Asad and observing him.
"Asad... Log humesha kehte hai ki har raat ki subah hoti hai. Aur raat ke saath saara andhera khatam ho jata hai. Subah naya ujala lati hai. Par pata hai beta, bahot kum log hote hai jo is raat me roshni dhund lete hai. Ye jo taare hai naa, kaali raat me roshni lekar aate hai. Dikhte bhale hi bahot chote hai par kafi hote hai is raat ko haseen banana ke liye. Aur yahi taare jo raat me roshni karte hai subah ki roshni me gum ho jate hai. Par beta wo raat me phir se aa hi jate hai. Chahe subah kitni bhi roshni lekar aaye, unhe sukun raat me hi milta hai."
She smiled seeing the sky & continued, "Mai jaanti hu tumhe bahot takleef ho rahi hai. Samajti hu mai. Insaan humeha apni khushi apne apno me dhundta hai. Kabhi apne pyaar me to kabhi apne parivaar me. Wo kisi ki parwah nahi karta jab baat apne apno ki ho. Aur mai tumhe bahot achchi tarah jaanti hu. Tum jis se pyaar karte ho uske liye kuch bhi kar sakte ho. Beta kabhi kabhi hume ye taare ban na padta hai. Kyunki hum jinse pyaar karte hai unke saath andhere me bhi reh sakte hai. Unke liye koi bhi takleef sehen kar sakte hai. Aur apno ki khushi me jo khushi milti hai wo kisi jannat se kum nahi hoti. Hai naa, Asad.??"
He understood what his ammi was trying to say. He kept his coffee mug aside and lay in her lap. She caressed him and was patting his headsoftly. He felt warmth in his ammi's lap & felt like he'll soon be free of this pain. Dilshad looked above & sent a prayer for Asad.
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Precap : What happened to Humeira..?? Will Ayaan & Shireen leave SM..?? Will Asad be able to accept Dilshad's decision.??
A/N : So friends, how was it.?? Do like and leave your comments. Criticism is also welcomed if u find something wrong in my writing. Also think about the precap and let me know your predictions on the coming track...
Originally posted by: rabababid786
Thnx for pm BT u gave a wrong link
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