Swaron OS: A Chance to Love

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nidhi

@nidhi1998

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

sweet os

journey of love has started😃

it was a beautiful piece

felt happy from inside after reading it

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@-TanHaVruShan-

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

😲 yeh os tha. . Itna chotu sa. .
Padna start kiya Aur end ho gaya😔
Par jitna bhi tha na really mast tha yaar. .
Simple n cute os. .
Very well penned. .
Aacha laga pad ke. .
Do write more sans. .

Ps: is mein Aur parts hai Kya??

Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Hey Sanskriti superb work dear...when i read your first os i was sure this girl surely has vision and now this os confirmed that you surely can visualise things you are writing thats why you explain everything so well...

I am very amused after reading this. its so nice to read and i guess every love story would some what same beginning...so very impressed with this one...

Thank you again for sharing this os with me...

Pratik...