**~~Bin Bulaye Mehman.Chapter 3~~**

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Hi guys! srry for delay but today was the most wonderful day of my lifee.😳...! I am nearing my goal and I actually saw some results today of my efforts😳...lol u will soon see that the chapters that i post depend on the mood of my personal life😆...lol neways back to the story!👏

CHAPTER 3!!!!😆

Kaajjal is in the garden planting some flowers

Kaajjal is humming Undekha Unjaana Sa from Mujhse Dosti Karoge.

K: undekha unjaana sa, pagla sa dewaana sa, jaane who kaisa hoga rehh hoo …..

B: (watching her) kitni pyari bachi hain…bhagwan kare ke usko apna who kya kehti hain…haa mr. perrrfect miljaye

B: (says out loud) Kaajjal don't forget the lotus flowers…Maha Dev Ji ke prashad meh dena hain…bhool mat jaana!!!

K: (notices Bua) Ofcourse how would I forget? Are bua, aap woh Lung Cancer ke fundraiser par a rahe hain na? You know its dedicated to Muma…don't forget! We are raising money for the disease…kaash unh saab ko joh cancer hain, theek ho jaye. (says softly) I remember when muma died,,,tarap tarap ke!

Kajjal starts crying. Bua cries too and they both cry and hug each other.

Two million worlds away (a joke) A man sitting in a bar is drinking heavily. A girl is sitting besides him. It is Dev and Candy.

C: Jaan, chalo, lets go to your flat…(naughtily)

D: kya boli tum? Mere flat peh….huh? chaaaalo lekin phir yeh beer kaun peyenga…bartender yaha aao.

Bartender comes. Dev forces down the beer down his throat.

B: How dare u!

D: Chup…mr. bartender…beer ek bohut kimti tofa hain…peelo aur jeelo!

C: (takes his shirt and makes him get in the car)

In the middle of the car trip(candy is driving, Dev is too drunk), Dev falls asleep

C: OH NO! Phir se yeh sogaya! Kyon mere saat hi hamesha ye hota hain? Jaab bhi mein Dev ko apne kareeb lao woh sojata hain…uski jaydad aur saab mera hi hoga! Sab mera! Lekin pehle usko yeh sharab ka nashe se utarna parega.

Candy takes Dev to his flat, opens the door and drags him (by the legs!) to his bed. Candy is famished and she falls asleep on the bed (Dev is sleeping on the rug below)

Sunlight seeps through the curtains. Dev wakes up slowly and acknowledges his surroundings. He sees Candy sleeping on the bed and Dev is sleeping with his shoes and jacket and everything on the floor.

D: CANDY!

C: (She wakes up) huuugh…kya huwa

D: What the hell r u doing on my bed? What am I doing on the floor?

C: Jaanu, so sorry! Tum kaal raat peh itne nashe par the ke meh tumko rook nahin payi. Tum (she acts teary) tum tum mere saath…nahin mujhe sharam arahi kehne ki…ke ke tumne mujhe rape karni ki koshish ki!

D: Kya!!! Candy, Candy, lekin mehne kuch kiya toh nahin?

C: Nahin jaanu, mehne tumko bed se zoor se dakha diya aur tum niche gire! Sorry Jaanu, lekin yehi ek tariqa tah tumhe rookne ki! Sorry! Aur phir I didn't leave to make sure u would be allright.

D: hmmm (grunts) sorry.

C: (gives a grateful smile) its very ok! (looks around and thinks Dev, ure gonna be sorry all ure life!! And gives and evil smile)

Dev gets dressed and Candy leaves as she had to get her hair done. She had asked for Dev's credit card as she had supposedly said. Dev goes to work.

At work:

D: (Calls secretary) Call in The builder director to my office please.

S: With pleasure sir

BuilderD: S-Sir you called

D: Yes, what is our report so far of the radio station I am making in Goa???

BuilderD: I am afraid sir that u r going to have to go to the building site

D: (In a deathly tone) why so

BD: Because sir because you have to get the charity people off the land first. They claim that they had their cancer treatment hospital set up there. They say that they already have signatures.

D: Don't we?

BD: Yes, but the land belonged to them first and we have to get their permission

D: Great, u guys can do one kaam right can you (angry) Get out of my face

D: (calls sec) Set up a trip for Goa tomorrow immediately

D: (thinking) Ihn charity wale log ko sidha mujhe hi karna parega. Charity my foot, is duniya meh charity jesa chiz hain he nahin…mujhe hi kuh ilaj dunha parega…yeh nikama builder kuch nahin kar payega…aab Goa neh tufan ko kudh badhawa (encouragement or invitation, for u not so much hindi people! Lol) di hain!

Hint hint…goa!!!!

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Vinishaa thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plz feel free to leave comments, and needs or things i forgot!!! ill try my best to correct it!!! 😉
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I LOVE IT!!! Please continue sooon! BTW, so glad ke tumhari mehnat ka phal tumhe dheere dheere mil raha hai... 👏 Congrats!
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Originally posted by: IndianPari

I LOVE IT!!! Please continue sooon! BTW, so glad ke tumhari mehnat ka phal tumhe dheere dheere mil raha hai... 👏 Congrats!

u really think so? Wow thanks! And yea, i noe i have finally started the journey to reach my goal...no one can stop me now...when I reach it, I will tell u all!😆 Thanks again!

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Nice great Job, i really like you fanfic, and i really pray that you get to you goal a bit more closer, Continue soon!!
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Originally posted by: Hasnain

Nice great Job, i really like you fanfic, and i really pray that you get to you goal a bit more closer, Continue soon!!

thnks...with all your blessings and wishes...my goal will come to me itslef i hope!😳

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wonderful job vinisha 👏 👏 loved every bit of your ff 😳 its getting quite interesting 😛 and yes waiting patiently for your next part 😳
and i really hope u achieve all your goals in life with great success 👏
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cont soon,and i hope you are successful in life!!

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