saruv ss:crazy saachiji sensible dr dhruv(ch 4:pg 7 (4/12) - Page 4

Originally posted by: vinee_vinee

DV can always councel her with or without the degree and esp when its without degree it will be DV...the very mature charming DV. ...and another compliment to you...your words were flowing...beautifully written. if they make JLZ 2 they can take up this story...retaining the age difference. intact... see we have become so fond of age difference that we dont want it to go...ha ha

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Very nice start...

Superb concept...

Continue soon...

Originally posted by: sabir_hi

nice update.. keep the storyline going, good to see they both met each other in the most unexpected way but that's how it goes, if you are destined to meet someone someday, you will despite how many barrier comes into the way.

hope next one gonna be interesting as they both will be together since childhood.

btw ur not that bad expressing the attire of people as you think, actually u did pretty good imo :)

Originally posted by: Priyamvada

Nice concept dear! I liked ur SS.. cont soon❤️

Originally posted by: preity_d

Wow the real chapter was just awesome... can visualise it. Loved the different Saachi Dhruv... Akki aww he tatooed her name... waiting for their romance 😉 \update soon. T.C. I would like to see him as a sergeant

glad ur exams went well

Originally posted by: shrutiud

m such a despo...whn it comes to saruv romance...

P.S. this update is dedicated 2 preity as an apology..i want ur feedback on tat specially preity nd tat 2 a long 1..this way I'd knw u ve 4given me..plx..

CHAPTER 3(beginning of a journey)

Dv took her 2 his cottage wich he has hired 4 2 weeks of his stay in Paris in his audi suv..thou 4 sucha short time he cud hav stayed at sme hotel,bt our king dv u knw cant adjust in sucha small place nd he likes luxury nd privacy...as u already knw dr dv z a kind of a private nd srs person so he doesn't likes fame nd lime light around wich z ttly contrast 2 saachi..

The cottage ws big wid a kitchen,2 bed rooms wid attached baths,a lobby wid tv nd central heating arrangement plus a fire place,a beautiful small lawn...he made her sit on one of the couches nd sat next 2 her on the same couch nd they started discussing abt old days nd their lives nd hw they changed and all?

Aftr sometime dhruv got up..

S:what happened dv?whr r u gng??

D:saachi ji u must b hungry,am also dying of hunger..am gonna go make smthng 4 u..

S:ok lemme help u 2

D:no saachi ji!its ok..u plx sit nd rest..u must b tired

S:come on dv..dnt b formal wid me..i ve been resting all day..u came 4m the conference..nd I like akki more than ur saachi ji..nobody other than u calls me tat nd I love it..

D:thnks saachi ji,i..i mean akki..

Nd they both burst into laughter..

The both went 2 kitchen nd dv took sme pasta,some veggies tat he had bought 4m the market,sme pasta sauce,spices nd went 2 make pasta...he started dicing the veggies..saachi ws sitting on the counter watching her dice the tomatoes so neatly nd so swiftly tat she got impressed..dv ws engrossed in his work tat he dint notice her ogling at him..as saachi ws an extrovert nd talkative lady,so she cudnt stay silent 4 long..finally she dcded 2 break the ice

S:dr dv!do u cut ur patient's 2 lyk tat?

D:cmon akki!its nt lyk tat..i dnt cut them bt cut their diseased area..

S:hmm..nice..so hw many surgeories hav u done so far?

D:well its been almost 6 months tat am here as m a new resident yet so nt much bt hav done almost upto 100 surgeories tat I ve assisted...

S:wow!tats cool...

D:thnks..

S:nd dnt u find medicine boring?

D:no akki!infact it's the most interesting profession..u get 2 knw abt human body nd u deal wid live humans nd u cure them..the feeling is divine..

s:nd did u make any girlfriend uptil nw?

dv got a lil offended wid this question tat his attention got diverted nd he cuts his finger under the knife by mistake..

d:ouch...

as saachi sees blood oozing out of his finger,she rushes 2 him,holds his finger nd immideately puts it in her mouth..

D:am ok akki..no need..

Bt saachi doesn't listens 2 him nd sucks his finger 2 relieve the pain he z gng thru..dv z touched by her gesture ttly..aftr sometime she puts it out of her mouth..

S:am so sorry dv..i kept u engrossed in my chat nd u mistakenly cut ur finger..

D:no akki!its completely ok..i m fine..

S:no dv!u need bandage

D:it's a small cut nd it ll heal on its own..

S:no dv..tell me whr z ur 1^st aid box??

D:its in my bag in the cupboard of my bedroom..

So saachi goes 2 fetch it...(dv has already shown saachi around so she knows whr his bedroom is)

She bandages his finger nd dices the remaining veggies despite dv's protest..then dv made the pasta nd saachi set up the table nd they sat in the candle light 4 the dinner,the idea of candles obvio given nd executed by none other than saachi...

Dv tried holding the fork 2 eat the pasta bt due 2 his injured finger,it fell down..he again tried picking it up bt failed...saachi ws observing it..so she dragged her chair close 2 dv

S:stop dv..lemme feed u..ur finger is injured..u wont b able 2 eat wid ur own hnds..

D:no akki,I ll manage it..u eat ur own..

S:no dv u cant manage it..u r injured nd I can feed u 1 bite 4m ur plate then I can hav my 1 bite 4m my own plate..tat way we cn eat 2gether..

At 1^st dv ws a bit reluctant as he has a habit of doing everything bt himself bt later he gave in nd saachi fed him wid her own hands..

Aftr tat saachi wanted 2 watch sme tv bt dv wanted 2 sleep as it ws his morning duty the next day..so he retired 2 bed nd saachi sat in the tv lounge 2 watch tv bt aftr sometime she got bored sitting alone watching tv so she went 2 her bedroom 2 hav some rest..bt she cudnt sleep so she came 2 talk 2 dv..she ws abt 2 knock the door bt before tat she checked nd the door wsnt locked..so she opened the door nd went inside..she saw dv sleeping peacefully on the bed..his glasses were placed on the bedside table..he ws looking more heavenly nd innocent while sleeping..his childlike face ws forcing saachi 2 kiss him...she pecked sweetly on his cheeks widout waking him up..he turned in his sleep nd his hand came on top of her hand..she ws struck nw..she cudnt move or he ll wake up nd she dint want 2 disturb him..

So she rested her head nd back on the back post of the bed nd laid next 2 him(just imagine the saruv scene wend v ws sick nd saachi came 2 look aftr him)dv's hand ws on top of hers nd she placed her other hand on his hand nd gently caressed it..she ws facing him drinking his purity nd innocence wid wich he ws sleep peacefully..

Dv woke up early in the morning 2 c saachi lying beside him facing him wid her one hand under his hand nd the other on his body..he ws taken aback...he cudnt register the happenings..he left her in the tv lounge then hw come she z lying wid him?he wsnt drunk last night,infact dv never drinks,then hw it happened??

Unaware of hw saachi came thr,he slowly got up adjusting her so she may nt wake up nd get embarrassed wid the cozyness they were sharing...so he got up,had a bath,got ready,made granola wid orange juice,ate it,left saachi's share nd left 4 his duty leaving a note of gud morning..hav a nyc day..eat well nd take care..c u at night by the bedside(of his room of course whr saachi ws sleeping)

Wen saachi woke up,she checked tat dv wsnt thr..he had left..she read the note nd smiled nd then had the breakfast dv made 4 her..she ws all alone on her own the whole day wid nothng 2 do in this roomy cottage so she 1^st dcded 2 hire a car nd go get her luggage 4m the hotel...the last night she slept in dv's night shirt as she had no night dress 2 wear...

She went 2 her hotel room,packed her luggage nd checked out 4m thr..she came bck nd put her luggage in the closet of her bedroom in dv's cottage...then she thot of gvng a surprise 2 dv..she made dinner 4 him..his fav soup,pasta,shrimp sauce nd prawn curry wid Chinese noodles nd pomegranut juice nd halwa as dessert ;) (yay the signature saachi special halwa..i knw aftr so much Chinese halwa z odd bt still u knw...lolx...dv cn eat anything anytym..)

PRECAP:

more nd more saruv romance

so tats all guys 4 nw..wanted 2 write more bt shortage of tym as my exam time z nearing..sorry 😭

ll update as soon as i ve tym...vinee need a long nd exclusive cmnt 4m u...nd also a few romance tips 2 b added here...nd ur view abt its progress...

nd 4m all ov u 2...

happy reading nd pray 4 me...

love

tina

CHAPTER 4

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