saruv ss:crazy saachiji sensible dr dhruv(ch 4:pg 7 (4/12)

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Mrs.Beckham Sobti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

voewww
read ch2

its so good dear

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Priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

wow interesting yar! I mean will this be like Madhubala? It was one of my fav shows back then.. but I really liked this fresh concept.

N the first meet will always be special one for any love story. Great going.,. n sorry for commenting this late! Woh main busy thi na, making my own topics n reading at home.. that's why.

Update soon❤️

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tina tartari

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: .shinchan.
voewww
read ch2

its so good dear

thnks shinchan...ch 3 cmng soon..infact half written already..

hope u like tat 2

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tina tartari

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Priyamvada
wow interesting yar! I mean will this be like Madhubala? It was one of my fav shows back then.. but I really liked this fresh concept.

N the first meet will always be special one for any love story. Great going.,. n sorry for commenting this late! Woh main busy thi na, making my own topics n reading at home.. that's why.

Update soon❤️

thnks 4 liking it...i ve already started wid the story..

nope it wont b lyk madhubala..i knw v lil abt movies nd all as i watch v few...bt it wud b close 2 medical if u want,tat i knw much abt!😉

u ll find this story diff 4m others hopefully!!

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tina tartari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

chapter 3 updated

plx giv ur views...

nd ur suggestns hw 2 proceed wid the story??

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Md Sabir Ali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

nice one! dv and sachii in a single cottage! things are gonna be interesting now :) we don't know dv has a gf yet or not, so it can go either way. update must :)

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tina tartari

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: sabir_hi
nice one! dv and sachii in a single cottage! things are gonna be interesting now :) we don't know dv has a gf yet or not, so it can go either way. update must :)

thnks 4 reading nd thnks 4 cmntng...

it really z a push nd it appreciates u 2 write better...😊

well yeah i hope thngs ll turn out interestng 4 u guys wen i write it..hav planned a lot

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nancy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Awsm fantastic fab Tina... I jus loved it. U hv really good writing skills.

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tina tartari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: naneta
Awsm fantastic fab Tina... I jus loved it. U hv really good writing skills.

thnks naneta 😊

am really flattered wid ur cmnts...any suggestns 2 improve??or add on scenes??

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Priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

hey tina.. :) nice chapter 3. i luvd it.. so its saachi getting attracted to dv here, right? i like it..
so u can show some flash back of how saachi knew dr dv.. how they became friends n how their bonding strengthens while staying in cottage now..
these r my ideas.. u r free 2 ignore. cont soon dear.

cheers :)

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