Swaron FF: Love or Freedom #2 *thrd 3 link posted* - Page 52

Mind blowing update
confused swayam great
I am super excited for next update specially for jealousy part
I hope swayam get jealous for sharon
I really like jealous swayam
update soon

loved the update...😊

update was asusal awesome one tasha..
loved it alot specially coz it was swayam pov😳
am really happy swayam is acting like old swayam again n swaron are acting this way..they are reliving their childhood moment😃
collage idea was really nice..
i really don't understand why they have to kiss to shut them up,they can simply close other mouth with their hand right 😆lol hehe(just kidding)
n most cute part was how swayam include sharon in their memory in collage😃
n he also promise to get his BBF back..good swayam,go for it :)
plz update soon ok..
n thanks alot for pm :)

Edited on page 71 finally..😊

you did a great job with this update. swayam's pov was very well explained. he has wild mood swings though!!
the highlight was swayam adding sharon's pics to the collage. it shows that he has forgiven her for his dad's death. im not very happy with swayam's attitude regarding ganga and sharon, that whole bridge analogy left me feeling like swayam is a coward who is trying to sail on two boats together. hope he sorts this out soon. your note has me all excited about the future updates so plz bring them up soon.
ps. the kiss was..ahem ahem..☺️

I'm so sorry for the late comment :P

lovely update tasha...

**Author's Warning**

Yup you read it right. It's not a friendly note like my previous notes after each update. I have been noticing that I am receiving very less response. Even after my pleadings for BIG comments I am still getting one liners and when I asked for 3 PAGES of comments. I don't even get 2 pages completely.

Now it's a shame. It's either me or my readers who are at fault.

I think it's me more than it's yours. Why? Because I think I am not writing interesting enough to get your awesome response. My writing isn't good enough for you to feel the responsibility or urge to give me your precious few minutes in order to write your feedback.

I don't know what I can do to improve my writings to get your awesome responses. I know that they are many fabulous Swaron writers out there who get awesome responses and likes. I can't even think about comparing myself from them.

So here is what I decided I am going to try to improve my updates in order to receive nice responses from you. If I don't get to do that within my next 3 updates I will DISCONTINUE my One and Only Swaron FF.

I love to write a lot and thinking about discontinuing is like I am hurting my own self. But the truth is why waste time of yours and mine when I can't do something good enough.

As a reader I think it's everyone's responsibility to give the feedback to the writer this implies to me as well. So whenever I read someone's work I give my feedback but I guess not everyone thinks the same.

Without making this warning any longer I am going to end it here. I only wanted to share my view with all my readers before I take any drastic decision in future.

PS. I have my last two weeks of semester going on so I will update late as I can see not many people are interested in reading my work anyways. But I will be always grateful to those who not only like but give long comments. And I will not mention names because I am sure you guys know who I am talking about. A BIG thank you to all who write me awesome feedbacks ❤️ and for you guys I will update as soon as possible.

Love,

TaSha

Heyyy plzzz no yaar you're gonna drop the idea of discontinuing this FF angel.. This one's my favourite yaar plzzz don't don't ever discontinue it plzzz..😭.