SwaRon SS: Kuch Nahi... Bas Yunhi [COMPLETED]

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Neel

@neeliyer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

it was just awesomely beautiful .. read all the parts at once .. reading the 3rd part i knew it will be somekinda of nightmare n i was luckily correct .. my fav was the first part, especially this dialog of swayam .. "What? Iss baar breakfast ke liye bhi nahi poocha, dekh tere sansar ki halat kya ho gayi bhagwan! Ek hone-wali-patni apne pati ko dhake maar ke ghar se nikaal rahi hai!" 😆😆😆

Amazing work ..do write more n pls do pm ..

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

it was really beautiful

loved it

but sad that it ended...

a beautiful os by you

do write more

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paro1311

@paro1311

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Just walked in home after a vacation , switched on my laptop nd first thing i read is this... I was exhausted nd partly hung over now this made me wide awake.. the story was going all mellow nd nice nd then she opens the bathroom door wer the story instantly picks up pace! I kept reading nd wen i done i realized my body was all tensed! U r a fab writer!!

i loved the last 2 parts totally.. Now looking out for your next work😊

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d00dle

@d00dle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

'to be the object of desire to those beautiful brown eyes' JUST LOVEDDD this phrase!! Sent shivers down my spine...literally! Beautifully written! ❤️

As u said, the fire definitely did shatter the happy feeling but the end was just a perfect closure to the beautiful story! :')

Edited by d00dle - 12 years ago