SwaRon SS: Kuch Nahi... Bas Yunhi [COMPLETED]

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Kuch Nahi... Bas Yunhi
It was another lazy Sunday, I turned to see his peaceful face sleeping next to mine. Carefully without waking him up, I detangled myself from his arms, I couldn't resist the urge to lean in and gift a morning kiss to his soft innocent lips.
"What are you waiting for?" he asked as if he'd been inside my head all this time.
"Wha-what? What are you talking about?" I denied his implication.
"Wahi joh tum sochrahi thi," He responded lifting his sleepy head off of the bed.
"I wasn't thinking about anything." I retorted picking up his pants from the ground chucking them at him. "Yeh loh aur chalte bano! Good bye and good riddance!" I grew annoyed.
What does he think of himself, Ph. D ki hai kya mujhpe?
"What? Iss baar breakfast ke liye bhi nahi poocha, dekh tere sansar ki halat kya ho gayi bhagwan! Ek hone-wali-patni apne pati ko dhake maar ke ghar se nikaal rahi hai!" He dramatized the situation as usual and I tried not laugh.
"Hone-wale pati," I corrected. "Fiance," I repeated. "Anyways! What are you still doing here? Out out out!" I ordered although we both knew I wasn't serious.
"Fine..." I pretended to listen as he took the pants from my hands.
"What?" I asked when I saw him intently staring at me.
"Well, you gave me my pants, but seems to be that someone has my shirt on." He whispered, his voice closer and closer with every word and my feet trailing to the wall.
I saw what he was talking about. Shit. But I have to admit, this teal blue dress shirt looks really nice on me I mentally noted before he broke my chain of thoughts with a morning kiss. A soft morning kiss, nothing too intense, just pure bliss.
Sigh... With him, every day felt like heaven.
"By the way," he whispered in my ear as we broke apart from the kiss, "'my shirts look much better on you," he finished leaving for the kitchen, and of course with no shirt.
Time for a shower, then off to make breakfast.
I peeked out the door to see him hunting for food in the cabinets.
"I have some cereal on top of the refrigerator," I pointed out observing how much destruction he could bring to my kitchen in a span of 30 seconds. "Tumhe koi kaam dhang se nahi aata," I scolded picking up the random edibles from the floor that were thrown out of my cabinets in the quest for food, his kind of food, or should I say junk food. "Koi chips ya biscuts nahi milne wale, you wait here and feast on these whole grain cornflakes or wait till I get back from the shower,"
He raised an eyebrow at me challenging my courage.
"Acha, so you're setting me up with this gross health food?" He asked.
God I hated this! As assertive as I wanted to be, I melted into a pile of mush when he raised his eyebrow at me like that. God damn him for having so much sex appeal in the most awkward poses.
"Yes or else wait for me do come back from the shower," I repeated trying to maintain an assertive tone turning for the bathroom.
"I have a better idea," he stated, as he slid his arms around my waist from behind. Resting his hand in the cup of my neck, "...how about I join you in the shower? That way I don't get bored here waiting for you nor do I have to feed off of your cornflakes." He suggested rushing us towards the bathroom.
"Someone has gotten very needy now a days," I pushed him off, teasing. Two can play at that game. "No, you go wait outside, I'll be right out," I repeated a bit softer this time with a quick peck to convince him.
He sighed, "I hate how you always win," he pouted as he accepted defeat.
"Good boy, now vamoose." I turned back for the bathroom. I'm not your dog love, I think... I heard him mumble to which I could only laugh. Oh him...
[1] "Suno," he called out.'
"Kya?" I turned around to be left in awe at his admiring eyes. I felt like the luckiest girl in the world to be the object of desire to those beautiful brown eyes.
"Kuch nahi, bas yunhi." He smiled heading for the kitchen.
My heart literally filled with butterflies and rainbows. I ran for him and shocked him with a kiss that hopefully told him that I need him just as much as he does, putting all the energy I could possibly gather this early in the morning towards it.
"Good morning," I whispered.
"I love you," he replied.
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[1] Reference to a motif from the movie Aashiqui 2, I just loved the quote so much I decided to incorporate it but the full credit of the said quotes go to the scriptwriters of the amazing film.
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My first D3 work. Super excited if you haven't already noticed lol!

I have watched this show on and off for a while but currently I'm just in love with SwaRon all over again and love the job Shantanu and Vrushika are doing.

This OS was just an OS depicting simple, realistic, love with a mix of Sunday morning langours as opposed the dramatic "Main tumhare liye chand le aunga-type" dramas.

Hope you liked it!

-Shweta <3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovley os! It was sweet and well written! 😳
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AAMAZING OS...Loved the sweet love...U made me smile 😊
Loved the fact that it was not cheesy😳
This OS was just an OS depicting simple, realistic, love with a mix of Sunday morning langours as opposed the dramatic "Main tumhare liye chand le aunga-type" dramas.
U definitely achieved ur goal of a sweet ,romantic yet realistic OS😳
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Great Os.:D

"Kuch nahi..Bas yunhi.."
I love it..:)
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nice os...new here...but a
huge swaron fan.....
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Nice work.. innocent love nd tats so swaron like.. no over the top mushiness.. quite realistic.. im sure i would behave tat way if i had a swayam in my life 😳
loved the edit! 😊
Edited by paro1311 - 12 years ago
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R E S E R V E D.
U N R E S.
I am editing after a long time.. I wouldn't have even cared to edit it had this been on some other couple. I can't resist reading something amazing on SwaRon.
God I hated this! As assertive as I wanted to be, I melted into a pile of mush when he raised his eyebrow at me like that. God damn him for having so much sex appeal in the most awkward poses.
The first part, from Sharon's point of view was very well described. ^ This actually made me grin like an idiot.😆 Sunday hangovers was definitely a nice plot.
Two people going to get married, Sharon pushing him, Swayam not willing to go.. and getting naughty lol.. beautifully presented. You have a great command over language and the usage of subtle humor at apt places adds to the charms.
I am shocked as to why this OS has only 30 likes. 😲
I liked how you ended part one. Simple yet there was something really cool about it.
Edited by tanha29 - 12 years ago
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kuch nahi...bas yuhin...

Rohan 😊
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wow amazing os
well written
great job
the title really suits it...
great work
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i am making all sorts of cuddly noises, it was that cute...

loved it .

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