frnds pls suggest me a tittle for this story

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Zeba702

@Zeba702

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Posted: 11 years ago

PROLOGUE

A man was standing in front of the potrait of his wife...and asking for forgivness.

I am really sorry...

main ek acha and responsible father nai ban ska...tum mujhe jo jimmedari sonp k gyin thi mai use nahi nibha pya..

i failed.

M hmari phool si bachhi ko un darindo se nai bacha pya...

un ki wjh se aj hmari phool si bachhi jis se is ghar m raunak rehti thi...wo aj hmse b door bhagti hai...

hme pehchanti tak nai hai...

hmse darti hai...use lgta hai ham b use unlogon ki tarah nuksaan pahuchaenge...

M n ... abi hospital ja rae hain...us se milne...

dekhte hain doctors kya kehte hain...

Tum bhagwan se bolna na ki bhagwan koi farishta bhej dein hmari bachhi k liye...jis se wo theek ho jae..aur pehle jaisi ho jae..phir pehle jaisi khil uthe..aur is ghar ko bhi pehle jaise chehkade

Care hospital

Ward no 105

Girl : nahi mere pass mat aao dekho nahi mere pass mat aao

Doc : dekho hum kuch nahi karenge

Girl : nahi tum bhi uske jaise ho chodo mujhe jane do chodo

Girl started throwing things whatever came in her hand towards doctor

Doctor singles the nurse and ward boy There hold the girl

Girl : nahi nahi nahiii

And doctor inject her

Doctor comes out of the room

Man : doctor kaisi hai meri beti

Doctor : woh roz out of control ho rahi hai aab hum kuch nahi kar sagte

Man : doctor please aise mat boliye koi toh rasta hoga

Doctor : aab usse sirf ek hi doctor bacha sagta hai

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome prologue but whose that girl in hospital?

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prachi sinha

@geetsmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome prolouge zebu waiting for next

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

Ek aduri aas
hws is it

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Hira

@sweetgirls1

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

u started ittt...????
naazzuuu????
me saddd

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sparklingeyes11

@sparklingeyes11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice prologue... and congrats on the new story..

Is the girl Geet???

You can keep the name: "Her savior"

Edited by sparklingeyes11 - 11 years ago

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesme
i think the girl is geet..
Nd maan is the doctor...her angel😳

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daredevilisback

@daredevilisback

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ek hi doctor bacha sakta..
naam hai Maan singh khurana😉

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farru786

@farru786

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Posted: 11 years ago

Niceprologue
I think its geet in the hospital
Maan babu is the doctor 😉
Title can be something like love- the healing in respect wid geets present condition or sumthing like tat as I hav no ideas of titles sorry