*~*Sweet Revenge - Silly Story*~*

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Here's my silly story for the week. 😳I hope it lives up to ur expectations😃... and I'm once again very sorry for not posting my usual silly story last friday. This story is the concluding part to, "The Angry Neighbor" and "Life with Glasses". Hope u like it....😊
Brijesh House -
Briju: I've had enough!!! Devika will have to pay for ruining my life like this!! But what to do....? I've got it! (Briju puts on this evil face, ready for revenge)
The next day, Devika House, the doorbell rings -
Devika: Who's here this early?
She goes to open the door, but only finds a letter. It says...
Dear D-d-d-devika,
I am one of the many ppl who's lives u ruined. I will take my revenge, and u will pay!!! You have ruined my life forever, so the same must happen to u too. I will not let you live in peace again!!! Grr....
~Anonymous
Devika: I wonder who could have sent this!!! I've ruined so many ppl's lives, who cud this be?... I better watch out. Who knows how wacky this person cud be...!
A while later, at Devika's House -
Devika: Hey wait, this isn't my medicine... this is..this is.. poison!!! It must have been put here by the mystery stalker!
Brijesh (looking through the window): Uhh! Time for plan B to go into action...
Briju House -
Brijesh: Saloni! Where are u?
Saloni: You called bhaisa?
Briju: Yeah, I needed to... uh.... borrow ur mascara...
Saloni: again?
Briju: But this time its different!!
Saloni: ya ..sure it is...
Brijesh takes her mascara and runs to his room. He adds something to it. The next day...
Devika House, the doorbell rings -
Devika: Hi!!
Brijesh: Namaste D-d-d-devika ji. I've brought a bottle of mascara for u... its a gift.
Devika: hmm, you remind me of sumone...
Brijesh: No I don't... by the way, are u going to use the mascara?
Devika: Why? shudn't I?
Brijesh: No... I just wanted to see how you look with it on... can u put it on b4 I leave?
Devika: why.. what's the rush?
Brijesh: uhh... nothing, its just that u have such beautiful eyes (in his mind: i can't believe I just said that!)
Devika: Oh thank u...
As soon as she puts on the mascara...
Devika(speaking weakly): Ow!.. my eye hurts. Now I remember who you remind me of... 'D-d-d-devika' ! It was youuu....
And then she falls down much to Briju's pleasure...
Brijesh: Ha!!! This is what u get when you mess with me!
Saloni walks in seeing this...
Saloni: Bhaisa, what did u do??! And why are u standing there laughing? come on, give me a hand..she's heavy you know.... we have to take her to the doc right away!
Briju: why Saloni... do we have to?
They both take her to the eye doc. The next day...
Brijesh House -
Devika: BRIJESH!!!
Nahar and Briju: look at her....!!!!!hahahahahaha!!!!!
And from then on, Devika walked around in those weird glasses that chased people away from her. Her life turned into a nightmare... and Brijesh got the sweetest revenge...
THE END
Now for the best part in my Silly Story... ur comments!🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago
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loved the silly storie haahaahaahahaha
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Posted: 18 years ago
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🤣 you are jst great 🤗
Edited by jiya23 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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man yaar that was very funn 🤣 this is the best silly revenge story ever keep it up yaar 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks that was a good one
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Posted: 18 years ago
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🤣 🤣 🤣
that was class! 😆
i luved it! one of ur best ones!
thanks and will defo look forwrd to reading more!
😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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good one. kruthi Loved the last part sweet revenge na d wierd glasses. She deserves it. 🤣 😆 😆 keep up the good work.
Edited by ramas - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hilarious silly story! 😆 😆 dont worry...that was BEYOND our expectations 😃 ...it was amazing!!!! haha that was so funny.......serves devika right!!!! loved the ending 😉 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: punjabi_kuri36

hilarious silly story! 😆 😆 dont worry...that was BEYOND our expectations 😃 ...it was amazing!!!! haha that was so funny.......serves devika right!!!! loved the ending 😉 👏

Thanks ashima... i'm glad i stood up to ur expectations🤗 Ya, nothing seems to be happening to Devi in the show. So I thought why don't I take action?😉😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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What can I say????

I can't stop laughing and this I made my sister read it too!!!

We all loved it and it made for last week's story!! 😉 😉

Great job and looking forward for next week's!!!

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