Koi mera hone ko hai .KR Twoshot.

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Nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Nice story :-)
An abrupt ending but it was still sweet

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smileysmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Amazing update...
Finally they met again ...

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..krisha..

@..krisha..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

dekha ye bhi diffrent hai,,,,,,
ur writing skill is mindblowing...
this was fab...😛

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Purplevalley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Thats such a beautiful story dear
loved it

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Nikita

@--coco--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

First of all I am so sorry for such a late reply.

You are really good at writing, I am sure you read a lot 😊

Being a teenager I can understand Kria's feelings quite well.
You always feel special when a senior helps you, in a new place, you begin to admire that person.

You described Kria's emotions very well, be it her confusion, her worry, or her transformation.
Well written two shot.
And I loved all that masti of Raneet Bhaiya, really cute.