Yeh ishq mere Allah kitna tadpata han chp6 pg # 58 - Page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha.behroz

<font color="#33cc99" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="5">Dear Mishi amazing concept very nice</font>

<font color="#33cc99" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="5">Loved it promo what a precap I m waiting for eagerly</font>
<font color="#33cc99" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="5">You write very nice dear</font>
<font color="#33cc99" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="5">Loved it core yar update soon</font>
<font color="#33cc99" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="5">Manveer talk was very nice very cute lovely</font>
<font color="#33cc99" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="5">Manyata and shraddha bonding was lovely</font>
<font color="#33cc99" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="5">I think manveer met in room</font>
<font color="#33cc99" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="5">As u how in precap</font>
<font color="#33cc99" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="5">Bdw amazing dear</font>
<font color="#33cc99" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="5">Take care and take rest</font>
<font color="#33cc99" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="5">Love you bye</font>
<font color="#33cc99" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="5">Update fast please please</font>
<font color="#33cc99" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="5">I m waiting eagerly</font>

Thank you very much appi...thanks for the wonderful comment 😛
I will update very oon don't worry😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: preya_radev

really loved both parts too gd especially manveer meeting and the precap is good the way manyata was describing her prince charming please update soon and thanks for the pm

Thank you so much😊...dear I'll update soon😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zona_malik

Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Update Soon :)

Thank you dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
When are you gonna update deary?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ok waiting till I m wake up
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter Three

Samar and uday haulted on hall and after talking they sat on sofa and start talking...
"uday beta you face any problem for come here"he ask uday"

"no uncle no problem I m totally fine" he replied him with smile"
"after some days we start work beta"
"uncle why after someways we do our work today infact now" he asked and then order him like his habit

"no because my friend not here who help me and tell me everything he went today morning because her wife is not well"
he make him understand
He nodded and give him satisfy smile
He think under his mind
"how can I live there how"


After some time uday settled on his room and Manyata,shraddha went to Samar room as his order
Both haulted on door and after five minutes Samar Samar said come in they All sat on his room sofa
Shraddha ask"dad why you call us"
"yeah dad why you call us" Manyata also ask him
Manyata also call him dad in this story
Samar tell them
"my both Princess I need your help"

Both girls ask together
"what kind of help dad"
"you know today my guest come and he is my business partner son"
Both said "yes"together and smile"
"Samar tell them he has urgent meeting and in urgently he want to go India for 10 days it part of uday and Samar project he narrates all the story to them"
"Both listening their dad carefully and finally shraddha ask "dad in this case how can we help you" Manyata waited for his reply"
"He said" please ap dono uday khayal rakhna you know he was very sensitive and angry also you both care him and sab kuch unhe apne hathon se dena Mai koi galty nai chataa"

Manyata held Samar hand and said very nicely to him and make him sure to no worry
She said " don't worry dad we will manage please don't give stressed and go"
Now Samar give relief breath because he trust Manyata more thn his own daughter and he think under his mind
Both girlies are went to their respective rooms nd said their dad good bye have a nice journey...

Samar pov

"Manyata you are not my daughter but me and shraddha we can't live without you I think it's better to keep secret you are not my daughter."

In uday too he was in washroom and having cool shower and both shraddha Manyata going for shopping but sudden Manyata saw servant went towards uday rooms he remind his dad words " he was very angry and sensitive

She quickly said to shraddha but she bit off careless she said quickly forgot it and she start drag manyata hand but quickly Manyata pull her hand back and said to her

"please today you can go I have no mood"She try to make her understand
But shraddha is shraddha she was angry"you refuse me for this guy ok fine bye"
Manyata can say any word after she went Manyata Thinks i will make her smiley later now she went towards uday room and saw servant stood up with his lunch she said to give me servant give her his lunch nd went...

She enter his room and put off lunch tray on the table he come out of the washroom he wear only towel in his lower Area or his all body is naked uday smile to see such a beautiful girl he doubted I will saw her somewhere he faces her back now finally he spoke

"who are you miss"? He saw her only

Manyata pov

She think "I can listen this voice in somewhere" she turned to see him

In other side


In mall shraddha sat on the canteen and eating ice-cream she missed Manyata a lot her phone start ringing she saw caller id she was damn happy

"Helo darling how are you my luv?" boy asked her

"don't talk to me after 4 days you calling me"she smile she was not angry but pretend because saw his caller I'd her all anger was vanished

"ahh my baby I m sorry I m really very sorry"he smile

"Mr.yuvraj Rakhesh pratab Singh from vinaygarh I hate you don't talk to me" she still pretend

(they met in one party and fallen love Manyata know them only)

He said " ok fine give mobile to my sister in law now only she will make you understand" he know very well only Manyata control her very nicely

She said "I m angry on her also because she is not comming with me for shopping" she said make iiritate face

Now helpless Rakhesh said "ok tell what do you want" he know she wants something from him

She smile and said "I want you"

"He said "it's not possible how can I come in your house or nowadays I m so busy please understand please" he was feeling very helpless he don't know what to do

She said angrily "ok fine then go away don't call me"
She throw her mobile on canteen and went from there


In other side

Uday Manyata ... Manyata turned and both shocked to see eachother both said together "tum" (you)


Precap--manveer French kiss along bit romance
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Girlies still I have fever now next update after two days I m not fine sorry🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
omg omg uday towel room ka tempreature bad gaya hoga bechari manyta ... now iwa ant really next update frnch kiss oh i m wating for this 😳😳... n shrdha bechari ... akele jana pada ... bechara rakesh ... kya karega ab ... !!! 😳😳😳 i m really happiee ... maine first comment kiya ye ye ye !!!
Edited by -Kritika- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
haye haye... manyata aur uday ek kamre mein band hain aur koi nahi ghar pein... kya hoga bhagwan hi jaane... but still i can't wait...
Thanks for the PM and a really nicely written chapter...
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update yr.
loved it to core!
hehe manyata to take care of Uday
that's nice
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
manyata and uday locked in room
precap toh kuch jayad he romantic lag rha hai😉
jalde se update kar
thanks for the pm

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