TR OS: Maar Dala Allah! - Page 5

Originally posted by: hima_taarey

i truely loved it...😳

bt agar i thot aur zyaada hone waala hai...☺️

i kno m shameless... 😆

nd wow yaar... yeh tumhaara 1st attempt tha?👏

i was rofling!!!🤣

ossom!!!

keep writing!!!

I would have continued but I had to make it age appropriate 😆
and thank you for reading and commenting! 😃

Originally posted by: -Fam_TaaReY-

loved it 😊😊

Thanks

Originally posted by: miss_neha

Omg that was sooo awesomeee!!!!! I was laughing like a crazy person throughout!!!! ROFL!!!!!!!!

Btw ill try to complete ur dare by tonight or tomorrow

Thank you so much neha! 😳

Originally posted by: sweet_angel09

nice os...😳

Thanks

Originally posted by: raddhi

wow awsm concept

yaar i luv it awsm tr couple

n gang imagination was funny

hehehhe awsm do PM me nxt time

Thank you so much!
Will do that... but I didn't send out any pm's for this one 😊

Originally posted by: ShReya_TaaRey

That's all I can do right now. I mean seriously di. This was amazing. Not just the way you wrote.. I am shocked. No, I'd rather say surprised. I am surprised to see how you put the whole idea into an imagination by the boys. I so wanted to see how you are gonna put it and all and I a so so so so so so so happy that I gave YOU this dare. Wow! You just won my heart again! 😳

Okay now. Let me start from the top. 😛

You have given me more than I had expected.. Seriously, di. It was A.M.A.Z.I.N.G!

I completely loved the way you wrote Taani's frustration and complaints. I was confused in the beginning but then got really excited to know how everything will take place.

Then we got to see Taani in the club and having a drink. Alcohol - one target completed. 😆

And then you described Rey and I was drooling over him. 😳

And then came the boys' talks. I actually jumped when Bharat said, "Devdas." 😆 And then after Nil's dialogue I came to know everything clearly. 😃

"Paro'oh Paro'tum mujhe chodke toh nahi jawogi na Paro?"

We see a man dressed in an elegant kurta pyjama with a shawl draped on his shoulders and a rose in his hand proposing to a girl. That was our Rey'whoops'Devdas.

"Nahi mere pyaare Das'kabhi nahi!" She blushed dramatically and hid herself in his chest.

"NAAAHHHIII!!!!!!"

I was 🤣 !

And the Vicky.. Oh! i mean Vicky babu. 🤣 That was hilarious. Seriously! And alcohol again.. 😆 And when Taani gulped down alcohol from that bottle and threw the bottle away i was like.. 😲 . Woah! And then Ooh La La! 🤣 🤣 🤣 That was epic! Oh seriously! Hahaha!

"Abe ghadhe!" Nilesh slapped Vicky, "Yeh teri Ekta Kapoor ki serial nahi chal rahi'yeh Bhansali ki picture chal rahi hai'song change kar!"

"Are kar raha hu na'Taani itni hot lag rahi thi aise tawaif jaisi ke mujhe kuch soojh nahi raha tha."

This made me ROFL like mad again.. 🤣

And then the actual song started.. Wow! I literally jumped up and started walking around reading it. (I was reading it in my mobile in the morning. 😆 )

Taani heavily puts her hand on her head while singing the above like the world's burden was on her. She takes a knife and puts it near her chest.

"Aree! Yeh kya kal rali (kar rahi) hai! Mal (Mar) jayegi!" Amar exclaimed as she saw Taani take the knife and holding it near her chest.

"Nahi Chandramukhi! Mein aa raha hoon tujhe bacha ne!" Nilesh jumped from the mat and dashed towards Taani'aka his Chandramukhi but was stopped by Swayam.

"Are ruk! Woh nakli hai!"

"Hein?"

"Hein."

Again.. 🤣 🤣 That "Hein-Hein" was just too much! 🤣

"Chandramukhiji'apna bohot hi beautiful ho ji!" He said while Taani let out a big sigh, "Aap bhi bohot hi cute ho Nil babu!"

Rofl! Chandramukhiji aap bahut hi cute ho ji. And Nil babu. 🤣 🤣 It actually sounds nice. 🤣

"NAHI! Mere babu ko koi nahi leja sakta!"

Suddenly Neha appeared in front of them. "Babu sirf mera hai!"

Out of imagination:

"Abe yaar'yeh tujhe yahan bhi nahi chodegi kya!?" Bharat exclaimed annoyed.

"Kya yaar'accha khasa mein Taani ko dekh raha tha aur teri chipkali aagayi." Nilesh looked disappointed.

Neha! 🤣 🤣 🤣

"Chandramukhi mein toh bas thoda time pass kar raha tha'roz roz ek hi cheez se tang aagaya hoon. Thodi toh variety chahiye na life mein, like Ranbir says ke kabhi kabhi hakka noodles aur keema pau bhi try karna chahiye," he winks at her while saying this.

"Mein appko koi gali ka dhabba lagti hoon? Keema pau aur hakka noodles khana hai toh wahan jaiye'mere paas aane ki koi zaroorat nahi!" She pushed him away and grabbed a drunk by the collar and dragged him to a room.

Rofl! Hakka noodles? Keem pav? 🤣 🤣 🤣 And Taani's reply. 🤣 🤣 Oh gosh! My stomach's paining. 🤣

"Joh bhi ho! Parvati'Paro'Pari'whatever!"

This too was hilarious, di. As if she knew what the guys were imagining and she mentioned Paro too. 😆

And then came the TaaRey actual part.. ☺️ Couldn't have been better.

Wow di! i am so glad that I challenged you. You were actually the right choice.. 😆 Will challenge you again if possible. Seriously.. Hats off! Amazing execution and amazingly written. And you already know how much I love your writing.. 😳 This was epic!

And this "🤗" is all I can do for you!
I can't thank you enough for this lamba chodha comment...I think it's the longest I have gotten and truth to be told you usually do leave me the best comments 😳
I really appreciate all the compliments...I honestly thought that the dare was challenging but for some reason from the time you gave that dare I had been having these random scenes playing in mind with Rey dressed up as Salim and Taani as Anarkali...also the boys being weird so I thought why not do something like that but with Devdas and Chandramukhi😆
From then on, there was no stopping and that's why I was faster than the Flash😉😛
So thank you so much for giving me this challenge so I could attempt something new and I am just esthetic with the fact that you enjoyed it and loved it 🤗

^^Vishwa di- Thanks for the best comment wala compliment.

You actually had imagined Rey as Salim and Taani as Anarkali? 🤣 My! even I can imagine that now. Rey having that bada sa mustache. 🤣 Rofl!

And I already knew you have some relation with The Flash. 😆

d3 gang boys have damn funny imagination. rey devdas and taani chandramukhi. lol!!! and the dance was superb but the best part was the dialougs in imagination and the last kiss was so romantic

This is such a funny os.

The imagination 🤣

Nil going to save Chandramukhi, and Swayam stopping him, the hein -hein part.

Then Oh la la part 🤣

Entry of babu's kagu 🤣

In short everything was hilarious.

The last part was the best ending.