TR OS: Maar Dala Allah! - Page 4

Originally posted by: Shivangi_Taarey

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Pehle toh Shreyu.. Kya dare tha.. Wah Wah wah!! Hume atyant pasand aaya.. aapka dimaag hai yah?! 🤣🤣

Vishwa di, You say that you are terrible with comedies?! Are you serious?! then why was I rolling on my bed laughing while reading this?! 🤣🤣

This was sooo hilarious!! The dramatic imaginations part were oh so hilarious!! Like really!! The Ohh Lala part and then Nil slapping Vicky and saying ekta ki nahi bhansali ki picture chal rahi hai.. 🤣🤣🤣

And the Swayam praising taani Kya baat chandramukhi kya baat.. 🤣

And then vicky yelling at Swayam.. 🤣

And then Nil's Chandramukhi main tume bachane aa raha hun.. 🤣🤣

And Swayam stopping him saying nalki hai and that Hein hein part.. Oh My gosh! My stomach hurts! 🤣

And then Neha's entry in the imagination.. 🤣 and they coming outta the imagination and Bharat saying ki yeh tujhe yahan bhi nahi chodegi kya? 🤣 and Nil calling her Chipkali.. 🤣🤣

And then the entire TaaRey part in the end was sooo cute and hawt as well.. ☺️ Really really loved it!!

And you know what the best part was.. that I could imagine everything so very well! The way you write is the just awesome!! I'm a real huge fan of yours now!! Please, Do pm me when you update your works! Please!! 😳

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Hey, why u think u can't write commedy... This was hilarious I was having a blast reading your superb OS. The boys imagination was soo damn funny lol... U did a extra ordinary job. I love it. Hope u get more dare lol

Originally posted by: anuradha5879

Nice os and boys imagination was really very funny

Originally posted by: nis_n

Lovely OS
Had fun reading it (:

Originally posted by: TaaReyD3_Neha

This Was Hilarious, Romantic and Just Perfect ... A Tinch Mix of Every Emotion ... Fantastic Job ...

Originally posted by: -upama-

The imagination part was so funny😆 You are a good writer.loved it❤️

Well this game is becoming so much interesting atleast we are getting to read so many stories from good writers.

Originally posted by: Angel-luvs-s

Okay that was hilarious dude..great job...I nearly died laughing...🤣

Originally posted by: vijichandran

awesome🤣

n gang's imagnatn ws just hillarious

Originally posted by: Mohit_monaya

this was so mindblowin! i lovedd it...

it literally had every element in it.. =)

hehe 😆

in short...jus loved it alot <3