MY ANGEL part 2 page 3 nov 22

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Posted: 11 years ago
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MY ANGEL-Na chahu kisika sahara bas chahu tera saath.just be with me my angel


Maine dekha tha ek sapna ek

ashiyaana banaugi apna


I am Mrs.Geet Maan singh
khurana.For outer world these words are meant to be true.I have a loving happy
family. Maan loves me a lot.My son Armaan is mama's boy. Dadimaa is head of the
family n very understanding.Annie a lovely sister in law.


But still it's incomplete.


Log kehtey
hai ladki ghar uska sasural hota hai.Why so?I still have a broken family in
some part of world. I hope one day I can add them into my family photo.


I tried a lot to get them together, but wasn't successful .I
wish an angel would come one day and join all the pieces together. One mistake
of one person has costed us(me) a lot.I wish an angel would come one day,we
hand in hand would put all pieces together.I am not the one who believes in
miracle but I wish for an angel.


in some other part of the world


I don't like my angel to be away from me. But she has a life too.I know she
stronger than me she can do anything. That's why a call her angel. She never
helps me but she always there for me. My name is Sameer Handa. All my life I
have seen woman doing sacrifices for family. I respect woman a lot but can't
they be simple human beings rather than doing sacrifices become goddess.People
should learn something from my angel.She is a simple human being, a warm
person. She lives does what she finds right. We are not related by blood but she
tells me "rishtey jodne se nahi nibhane bantey hai".


Confused I know.Geet wants angel n sameer has an angel.IN evening update i will give u hint of angel.Plz review my writing




Character sketch-see below

part 1

part 2




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Posted: 11 years ago
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welcome to our writers world
congrats for ur story
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welcome and congrats...
thanks for posting the link in the thread and keep posting the link in the Daily Updates Thread...
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congrats dear for ur new story

nice start
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Thanks eveyone.this is first ff.I am writing cs today.Plz read.I have tried a dif. approach.I have read somewhere without critcism its not worth living.Please do criticise.


Character sketch

Geet pov

GM. Today is
friendships day. No not which comes once a year. But this comes every
fortnight. Maan and his best friends meet up and have fun.I hate them.All r
from big business family.I am the host today.


Swetha singhania n her bitchy sister pooja(bebo) n
sameera,andrea.I can handle swetha n bebo but sameera n andrea -I hate them.


Meenakshi- poor
submissive wife.ufff.



Vikram Roy-my husband's best friend. He richer n more
powerful than Maan. He genuinely tries to give brotherly love to me. But still
I hate him. Bebo is a model n on-off gf of vikram. Andrea was one of ex's.



Rohit Arora-big flirt n meenakshi's husband.father of 2
kids.



Akshay singhania- swetha's
husband.They have 3 children.



Sameera is a fashion designer.



Andrea is PR in K & R.(Khurana & Roy).



All are having fun except me. Maan knows what I am feeling
now. He is a good husband never forced me for anything.I am his wife n I have
to maintain dignity of being Mrs.Geet Maan singh khurana. Else that bitchy gang
will never let me live in peace.Sadly I am no more geet.


Where r u my angel plz come.



Sameer's pov



GE. hetic day.Angel
is out of country for some work.she did not tell me what work.All work in on me
now.I am co-MD of Globle-x empire.After taking over Handa group n merged it
with angel's company.I am too tired to think anything.My family will be
waiting.I don't like it.As I enter the house,all my tiredness is gone.A guy is
turning my house upside down,but still I am smiling.


Bcoz its my 3-yr old son Samrat Handa.oops call him sam.Else
ur life will be hell.


Chasing him are his 3 grand parents.Sam gets too cranky if
his maa' is not there.



Meet my father Siddhartha Handa, once he was shrewd n
ruthless business tycoon.That was impact of my mother's death n his hypocrite
father n brother.5 yrs back he married Mridula raichand n his life changed.She
is my step mom but no less than mother to me.she loves me n sam a lot. When
angel is here she always fights with her.When she is not here she just goes
into depression.Sam is only person who keeps her spirit up.


Thud!!


Another victim of sam's prank my mil Dolly.Call her babes
sweetheart anything but not aunty. She a big drama queen.She shifted with us
after my marriage with her only daughter.


Blank someone closed my eyes from behind. Whoelse can it be
except her.My


Sweet little sister Aditi Khanna(choti).she I my darling
sis(step sis) behind her were her husband Lakshya khanna n in his arms his
daughter Princess saloni.She is 6 but very matured just like my angel.she loves
sam a lot.They live with us.They just came from one of there vacations.Lakshya
is a very caring husband.My choti is safe n happy with him.He is hell scared of
my angel.choti is a s/w engineer.Lakshya is our business partner.I am proud of
him.He is 4rth son of yashvardhan & nandini khanna my father's
best friend.They love choti a lot but Lakshya feels he was neglected son.He has
this cold war with his family.Princess(saloni) is only daughter born after 4
generations in their family.


Red alert...


Gosh sometimes she gets so
hyper.Meet my better half n soul of my life.My wife famous and successful actress
Shreya rathod.Every one calls her RB(reason later).She owns a production
house.She left her acting carrier after marriage. I never told her to quit
acting. It was her decision she never told me reason neither i asked.


Here I am, sitting with my family
having a happy dinner n chatting.



But I know every one missing one
person. Where r u my angel we all r
missing u...





Thanks people for pressing like button and comments.if i get around 25 likes n comments i will think this story is worth to be told.n will post part 1.i have always believed god doesn't do any miracles.but he definitely gives opputunity to find your path n suceed.if in right shown path also
u couldn't suceed god will send angel with msg to move in the same path.angel will hold ur hand n together will move towards sucess
Edited by luvmg - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks alot please be showering views.plz read cs also.
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interesting cs
eager to know who is angel
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: valli22

interesting cs

eager to know who is angel


Thanks u r first to comment.i want to introduce a new character.has anyone watched tu tu main main
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice cs
But who is angel ????
Omg geet dont like maan's friends is it that she misses her friends ??
And where is armaan ???


Ud soon
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CS
nice...

part 1
nice...
cont soon dear...

PS - check ur page dear...try to make the page look better...

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