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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 1

Thursday Night 1 AM place New york

Radha was moving restlessly in her house.Suddenly bell rings.Radha starts screaming her lungs out. Jai come out rubbing his eyes cursing Radha "sone se pehle to tuje dudh peelaya tha phir kyu pareshan kar rahi hai.billi kahi ki".Jai was hit by a cushion from behind a girl said "don't call her billi" .

Jai:sorry meow

Meow(jai's wife):its ok.carefully see who at door n open.

Meow picked up radha in her arms.

Jai taught to be its his one pagal padosi.He peeped through key hole.terrified of the person on his door he ran towards his room.Meow tried to ask she got no ans.She herself went to door peeping through hole squeeling in joy she opened the door n hugged the person infront her.

Meow: why didn't u inform us before we would have come to receive u.

Person:its k.moreover ur husband doesn't like me.

Meow:forget him.he is a big phattu.

Meow called zoya her pagal padosi n friend this happy news.screaming in joy she started wakin asad started dancing on bed.Hearing this news asad n zoya hurried to meow's house.Jai came out of his room wearing proper clothes as if going out.Everyone in hall were laughing inwardly at jai's condition.poor guy was totally terrified.All sat.

Person:looking at jai"I am not here to stay.i came to invite u all" takin out invitation "I am here for some purpose I want all family member to come on this occasion.All means all including them"

All became emotional n sat quietly.

Person:I want information about there schedules.only u guys can help me.

Meow hugged that person n said thank you.

Saturday Morning NY

Geet hurriedly was purchasing in the mall.Swetha just to annoy her was giving last minute works.Some boys were eyeing Geet badly.To make her fall one of boy puts his leg forward.Our Jhalli Geet didn't see n tripped.As usual Geet never falls someone or the will catch her.How can Maan come now as he is busy with friends.Geet lifted herself n saw a girl who was askin her if she was k.They both turned towards the boys givin angry glares but those shameless boys laughingly said sorrry.Before angry sherni Geet could reply girl smilingly went to them.Suddenly punched on his face and said I am soory too.the boy fainted at spot he bleeding from mouth n nose.Mall security took the wounded n terrified boys away.Girl turned towards Geet.Her mouth opened O'.Girl smilingly went Geet.

Girl:u r looking just like a Barbie doll.don't u think u will look more cute with mouth closed.

Geet instantly closed her mouh.some voice came from behind.

Pari:u here.I was lookin for u.

Geet became very emotional seein pari her best friend after long time.Pari didn't look at geet instead she was talking to that girl.

Girl:Pari I am not a kid.Actually I was helping her.Now pari saw geet.

Pari:Hi geet(in a formal tone).Geet was hurt bcoz of this.she deserved it.

Pari:meet my sis Alia.she came to visit me here.

Geet:Hi Alia

Alia:wat just hi.u r pari's friend.I expected a hug.

Geet hugged her warmly.Geet saw pari who had tears n a smile on her face.

She parted.

Pari:wat r u doing here(hiding tears)

Geet then realized she has to hurry up.She told pari n alia this.They together left for parking area.Geet's car was blocked by other cars.Geet got tensed.

Alia:don't worry.i will drop u.Pari will bring ur car to ur house.

Pari hesitated to go to Geet's house.Alia dragged Geet towards her vehicle giving keys to pari leavin no choice to them.Geet head started to spin seein Alia's bike precisely sports bike.Old memories came rushin in.Geet hesitated.

Alia:Geet I taught u r getting late.

Geet sat on bike.

Alia:hold me Geet else u will fall.Geet held her.

Alia zoomed her bike towards Geet's house.Geet remembering her old days started to enjoy.she enjoyed the most when Alia broke 3 signals.

Mansion

Swetha was telling or say cursin geet for her carelessness. Maan n Vikram knew who was careless here.But shrugged it off thinking not to interfere in women's matter.They were all sitting in open pool area behind the mansion.They heard roaring sound of bike turned towards it.It came as big shocker for them.Geet siiting behind a guy n laughing n screaming enjoying ride.Bike stopped near pool releasing lot of black smoke making everyone cough.Maan saw Geet who was so happy seeing her this happy after a long time.Geet got down of bike laughing holding biker's hand.Maan got furious at this.After all he so possessive about Geet.He wanted to punch the guy.Taking long strided he went towards them glaring at Geet.Vikram hurriedly went behind him to stop him but what he saw made him stop at his place.As Alia removed her helmet.Vikram could not help himself but just stare at her.Violin started to play around him.(main hoo na seen similar to sushmita's entry).

Here Maan did not see Alia bcoz his eyes was on his Geet.

Maan:wat the hell do u think u r doing?

Geet came back senses with his shouting.After a long she time she was happy n here maan is not liking it.Misunderstanding him she was about to cry.when she heard

Alia(panick):omg u should go to doc immediately.Both maaneet turned towards her n he realized it's a girl n calmed instantly.

Geet:why Alia r u alright.

Alia:not me Barbie doll.look ur husband needs immediate medical attention.

Maan n all other confused n panicked at this.

Maan:but I am alright.

Geet:wat r u saying Alia.

Precap:wat happened to Maan?

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luvmg

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Thanks everyone.I am new.I will learn soon.

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

try to edit ur title every time u update dear...
My Angel part 1 page 2 13 Nov

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

possessive and jealous maan ka muh dikhayi huyi😆😆

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mehak173

@mehak173

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

nice ud
The mall part was the best
Geet on bike and maan thaught she is with some boy n got j

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luvmg

@luvmg

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Part 2

Geet:wat r u saying Alia.

Alia(serious tone):What kind of wife r u geet? look at him he is getting A-virus attack.have u not watched krishh3.omg what kind of virus r generated these days.

All panicked

Alia:look at his eyes it looks like at any moment his eyes will pop out of his socket.look his whole body is soo stiff.

It took sometime for everyone to realiaze want she meant.Maan too understand,he was angry but couldn't show it.

Stiffling her laughter

Geet:oh no Alia its not A-virus attack.its... (hard to control laughter)

Alia:oh I got it.but still Geet consult a good doc just to know its manufacturing defect or or anything else.

Maan thought:is she telling me too go to psychiatrist.

Maan(shouted):listen girl

Alia calmly:I am listening, but plz lower ur tone.

Surprizingly Maan lowered his tone.

Maan(yelled):listen girl

Alia: plz lower ur tone.

Calming himself.

Maan:listen miss. I don't like disrespecting my guests.that doesn't mean u can insult me.

Pari and doctor Preeti Dobreal(vikram's sis) who saw whole seen started to laugh.Everyone also started laughing including Geet.Alia was smiling.

Pari stopped laughing realizing where she is.

Pari:Geet ur car keys.Alia I am leaving.

Alia:How can u leave.See there that cake.Geet has taken so much of pain in arranging,atleast we should taste that.Geet didn't know what to say.They were celebrating some contract success.Vikram sensed situation.

Vikram:Yes Pari plz come.

Pari just nodded.No one dared to say no to Vikram Roy.

Alia dragged Geet n pari towards the cake made them hold the knife.

Alia(singing):Happy birthday to u, Happy birthday to dear fluffy

Pari n Geet had tears.how can they forgets fluffy's birthday.They both cut cake n fed each other in trance.Maan who tried interfere by telling real purpose of cake was shutted by Alia by putting big piece of cake in his mouth.

Yaariyaan
Oh oh ho
Na chhode yaariyan
Woh oh ho...

Doc Dobreal:who is fluffy?

Geet(smiled):My pet.my sweetheart.

Sameera:Yuck.u mean that dog.

Geet(angrily):dare u call him dog.Turning to Pari:That's how we both met n became bff.

Doc(happily):tell me the story then.

Geet:we were 6 that time.

Pari:We were in same class but we never talked.U know Geet was like a cry baby.miss touch me not.

Geet wacked pari.

Geet:It was lunch time when heard some crying sound from nearby plants.Lunch time was about to end so I was hurrying.

Pari:hurrying! my foot.u got scared.I was watching u.With lots of guts she turned to see what it was.she went little inside the nursery.I got worried when she did not return.Bell rang,so went behind her to see her.She was trying to hold a small puppy it had wounds may be someone has thrown stone at it.

Geet:not someone I am sure it was some boys work.

Pari:Geet started crying,I hurriedly took her to school doc.he said he cant treat dogs.Geet who crying shouted "don't call him dog.he is my fluffy."(awww...).giving up doc attented fluffy told us to check to veterinary doc once.

Geet:in all this v forgot to go back to class.Pari gave fluffy to janitor(/aaya).

Pari:Geet was all the while lookin at puppy n askin me will me be fluffy ok? Ahh...my head was spinning with her non stop ranting.uske baad mujhe jiska darr tha wahin hua.

Dobreal:yaisa kya hua?

Geet:teacher punished both of us for..no.1.late for class.

Pari:no.2:spoiling clothes.

Geet:no.3.What was no.3 pari?

Pari:I too don't remember.who cares thing was we were made stand outside class where we chatted a lot.

Geet:how can u forget HW 5 times more than others HW.uff..that Tanya mam.

Pari:Geet but hum to bach gaye.Ricky bhai ne bachaliya na hume.he came has saviour.

With mention of Ricky both came back to real world.

Hearing friendship story everyone was in dif world.Ricky's name brought strange akwardness in the air.

Geet n Pari who were holding hands during their story telling slowly left their hands.

Alvida yaara alvida
Ho rahe tumse hum judaa
Le chale saare gham tere
Khush rahe yaara tu sadaa

Tumse bhi zyada hongi
Ab yaadein pyaariyan
Hum dono ki hain apni apni lachariyaan
Ab hanste hanste tumpe le khushiyaan vaariyaan

Marz bhi hain deti
Chain bhi hain deti
Dard bhi hain deti
Jaan bhi hain leti
Yaariyaan Woh o..
Na chhode yaariyaan
Woh oh oh...

Ab jeene ko jaane ko, na koi raasta
Tanhaaiyon se hoga, ab dil ka vaasta
Hum khud hi khud ko, ab to kar denge laapata

Maan le tu aise
Hain zara bhole se
Jaante hain waise
Hai nibhaani kaise
Yaariyan
woh oh ho
Naa chhode yaariyaan

Pari:Alia I think we should leave now.Anyways we needed to do packing na.

Alia(sighed):ya right.Geet it was nice meeting u.hope ki hum dobara mile.

Geet(wiping her tears):where r u guys going?i mean packing n all.

Pari: ha wo..

Alia(cuts pari):actually Pari n her hubby r going out of town for official work.and I cant leave alone so I will shift to some hotel.

Pari(screamed):Hotel.but u said u will go to ur friends house.moreover u don't like hotels n they r not safe.

Alia(sadly):I know.in my friends house some family problem is going on.don't worry I will manage.i will look for some decent hotel in my budget.i am just staying for week only na.chillax.

Pari(screamed):budget?

Vikram:Pari's guest is also our guest.moreover u r from India.How can we let (gorgeous) girl alone who is from our country.Geet plz arrange Alia guestroom.Plz Alia I insist u know they na "athithi devo bhava".

With this shocking speak my Mr.Vikram Roy, Maan started his mind work.

1.Vikram who never dated a single Indian girl in his entire life is behaving like a puppy.

2.he never even felt to look at Pari bcoz she was not from affluent family was inviting Pari's guest.

3.he knows hindi very well.To maintain his image never talked in hindi.

If this was not enough Vikram told Geet to prepare the best room of there mansion which is in his wing.Maan looked around to see everyone had same que n expression that he had.Alia was standing there with same attitude n smile which she had when entered.

Precap:will Alia agree?

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