Tum ho to.. taarey ff *link of thread 2 posted*

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its my first ever try on taarey. infact my first ever try on any fictional couple. this idea just pops in my mind out of nowhere. so yeah tolerate it if you can. well since its my first grand opening to banti hai bossπŸ˜†
 







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10 on 10.


Its early morning. A girl is sleeping on her king size bed when suddenly Sun tried to tease her. She groan and turned to other side but looks like her luck isn't with her as her alarm started ringing. *play the link of video below*

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R-IOGoZE2Qs

 

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Chocolate boxes, men on horses

Valentine's day, party is on Saturday

 

Her day starts with a bang. She gets up with a jerk switches off the alarm and looks herself in the mirror and thought to herself "10 on 10"

 

Chocolate boxes, men on horses

Valentine's day, party is on Saturday

Teenage popstars, filmy filmstars

Gulaab ke phool, people think these are cool

 

She quickly grabbed her clothes and went to her washroom to get ready for another day. She took a hot shower while dancing at the same time to enjoy the water splashes on her body

 

Ye sab to hai 4 on 10

Achhe lagte hai now and then

Mere jaisa koi kahan 10 on 10

Kaise main kisi ko de doon 10 on 10

Mere jaisa koi kahan 10 on 10

Kaise main kisi ko de doon 10 on 10

Mere jaisa koi kahan ten on ten

 

She came out of shower and look at herself in mirror and give her a flying kiss. "So freakin hot" she said with a wink. She get ready and came out of her room looking dead drop sexy and drove straight to her college.

 

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Meri zid bhi, aadatein bhi, meri baatein attitude bhi, 10 on 10, 10 on 10

Main jo bhi hoon, jaisi bhi hoon, jo chahti hoon woh karti hoon, 10 on 10, 10 on 10

Chalo tum bhi ho 6 on 10

Acche lagte ho now and then

Mere jaisa koi kahan 10 on 10

Kaise main kisi ko de doon 10 on 10

Mere jaisa koi kahan 10 on 10

Kaise main kisi ko de doon 10 on 10

Mere jaisa koi kahan 10 on 10

 

She grabbed her friends in between. And they started enjoying their way to college. She looked at the boy beside her his bff and called him 6 on 10 with a wink  and then to manaofy him tell him achhe lagte ho now and then. While enjoying the beautiful morning they reaches their college where everyone was waiting for this girl to lighten up this morning with her voice. The whole crowd was shouting just one thing...

 

Taani..Taani..Taani.. (*imagine taani in place of alisha*) yes guys that's taani!!! Duh!

 

Galti se jo muskra doon ik hassi mein sab bhula doon

10 on 10, 10 on 10

Kadamon pe bhi gir jaayega phir bhi mujhe na paayega

10 on 10, 10 on 10

Even if I break your heart, even if you fall apart

She sang those lines especially for those boys who dream of getting her as she is the unreachable star.

 

Tere jaisa koi kahan 10 on 10

Kaise tu kisi ko de de 10 on 10

Tere jaisa koi kahan 10 on 10

Kaise tu kisi ko de de 10 on 10

Tere jaisa koi kahan 10 on 10 .. woo .. 1 2 3 4 ..

10 on 10, 10 on 10, 10 on 10 woo ..

 

Here in the crowd a pair of eyes are continuously staring at taani with pure love. They could see the pure hearted cute taani behind that sexy one which is quite invisible for everyone. He smiles as he saw her singing with such masti after all who doesn't know taani loves singing more than her own life. And he loves to see her smile but the truth is that taani shekhawat is 10 on 10 but reyaansh singhania , the college topper is not. (yes this is our rey) he admitted it to himself looking again to his angel of love.

"Tumahre jaisa koi aur kaha ho sakta hai taani" rey said with a smirk

 

 

 

Edited by deepkriti - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
whohoa me 1st ... πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Well v gud start dear ... !!!!
Realy love it 
u also get 10 on 10 4 yr story πŸ‘πŸ‘ !!
thanx 4 pm n update soon
pm karna πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ mat bulna !!!!
Edited by SuMaN_TR - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its ok 1st nahi toh atleast 2nd..
Wow 1st chapter was awsum
Just lyk 10 on 10 πŸ˜†
Nd pm ke liye thanx
Agge bhi karte rehna pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice conceptπŸ‘πŸΌ

Piggy Chops ki jagah Taani ko imagine toh kar diya..😳

But nightmare mila as Uday Chopra as Rey ka image saamne aaya...

Hoping Rey isn't that geekyπŸ€“

Continue soon please...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it dear!
awesome concept..
Rey geek πŸ€“
and Taani the divaπŸ˜ƒ
interesting!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š
update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
bechara reyπŸ˜‰
wow i loved this taaniπŸ˜›
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
great start dea..!
Bt cant accept rey as dat geek... 🀒 Edited by geeth_amar - 10 years ago