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Posted: 11 years ago
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ofcourse not yaar!!! rey uday chopra wala nerd nahi hai. if you have seen miley jab hum tum in that mayank!!! quite like him. studious!! topper sort of

Originally posted by: sashaz_sis

Nice concept👍🏼


Piggy Chops ki jagah Taani ko imagine toh kar diya..😳

But nightmare mila as Uday Chopra as Rey ka image saamne aaya...

Hoping Rey isn't that geeky🤓

Continue soon please...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome concept
loved it dear...
u must continue and pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks a lot yaar but don't worry rey is not that geek. He is a topper but quite good loking more like mayank of mjht.😊

Originally posted by: geeth_amar

great start dea..!
Bt cant accept rey as dat geek... 🤢

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thnks a lot yaar!
it means a lot.
will surely pm you and trying to update asap😃

Originally posted by: SuMaN_TR

whohoa me 1st ... 😃😃😃
Well v gud start dear ... !!!!
Realy love it
u also get 10 on 10 4 yr story 👏👏 !!
thanx 4 pm n update soon
pm karna 😉😉 mat bulna !!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
thnks a lot for such a sweet comment
surely gonna pm you.

Originally posted by: mehreen_taarey

Its ok 1st nahi toh atleast 2nd..
Wow 1st chapter was awsum
Just lyk 10 on 10 😆
Nd pm ke liye thanx
Agge bhi karte rehna pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thnk you so much😊

Originally posted by: .CuteKittyCat.

awesome concept...loved it...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thnks jhanvi. I hope you'll like it further too.
will try to update asap

Originally posted by: Jhanvi_TaaRey

Loved it dear!

awesome concept..
Rey geek 🤓
and Taani the diva😃
interesting!!😉😊
update soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepkriti

thnk you so much😊

😃

Edited by .CuteKittyCat. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ok guys! I am here with second part. it has less taarey but its necessary for the flow of story. please padne ke baad like button pe kripadrishti karna😆 aur mann mein jo bhi aaye even gaalis!! comment kar dena. mujhe bura laga bhi to tumhara kya jaata hai😆
here's prt 2:

Setting up my bff date..in library?!!!

She looked at the crowd. They were all cheering their name. Taani..Taani was all she could hear. She loved it. But she had something which she loved more. Her Music. Yes she owns it. Her beautiful voice. Her born talent which shows itself everyday once she stepped on the stage and take her guitar. That guitar seems more like a childhood friend who knows her more than she knew herself.

She looked at the crowd again. All the people were looking at her. Cheering her. And there she caught a pair of eyes that didn't seem to have any plan to blink or take rest. They were continously on her as if wants to know what's inside her. She looked at the person who owned them. A smile automatically crept on her face. SHE KNEW HIM. But before she could react her best friend Vicky came crushing her into a tight bff wala hug. She responded back with same intensity. But when she looked back, he was not there. HE WAS GONE.

----at canteen---

"Yaar that was awesome!!!" Simmi exclaimed.

"Ofcourse after all you were on keyboard" Neil never left a single opportunity to flirt with her one and only 'mushy bag' . Simmi blushed but soon came out of effect as our one and only sharon interrupted.

"Hello!! Dude we were also there. Zara nazare idhar bhi ghumao majnu ke nana"

"offcourse yaar! Vacations ke baad humne pehli baar college mein perform kiya. It was so special. I was missing all this so much" Vicky said with a smile.

"Oh!! You were missing performing. I thought you were missing your kagu more." taani said entering the scene with her diva attitude.

"Taani!!!" Vicky glared at her.

"No way!!!" Neil shouted on top of his voice. "Don't tell me! Hell two moths vacations and she is still on your mind. Dude! How can you even think about that double battery single power."

Vicky was about to shout on him but before he could give his sweet comments, he was again interrupted by taani.

"Seriously Nil!!! Where is your Mr. cool attitude. Holidays mein kisiko charity di thi kya. And don't you dare to give these saas bahu type expressions in front of me. You know how much I hate all these over the top melodramas. And life vicky ki hai. So decide bhi use hi karne dete hai. You have your own chick. So stay happy." Taani gave him a attitude look and he sat back.

"And you mr. lover boy. Vicky, don't you dare to go in that devdas mode. k?!! Make sure you tell her as early as possible. And obvio she'll say yes. After all it's the hottie in town Mr. Vicky proposing her." She said with a wink.

"But taani you know na vo to kabhi class aur library ke alava kahi nahi dikhti" Vicky said all tensed up.

"Phir to problem ho jaegi." Nil said in between. All looked at him with a questioning look.

"Are yaar socho inn dono ki dates hogi classes mein aur romance hoga library mein. Which means in dono ki love story to history mein likhi jayegi jise bhi baad mein yahi dono library mein bethke padenge."

Nil laughed on his so called joke but stopped in middle as he saw angry glares of everyone.

"Bad Joke Wrong time. I got it" He sealed his lips.

"Ok guys!! If we are done with all this bullshit, coming to the real topic, mein kya karoon." Vicky asked with a pleading look.

"I have a plan" Taani said with a grin.

"Wow!!ladki patao that too with taani shekhawat plan. No chance of failing."Sharon said all excited.

"Ofcourse babes after all its taani shekhawat. Now here you go. Listen..."

------outside library-----

"Taani are you sure?" Vicky said with not so sure look.

"You serious! You are asking me if I am sure about my plan. That's my plan. 100% success guaranteed! " Taani reassured him

"But its too hard to do this."

"You love her or not?"

"But.."

"Love her or not??"

"Yes" Vicky said finaaly giving up.

"So just do what I say." Taani caught his hand and entered into library. All eyes were on them. The hotest babe and hunkiest guy of the college jo kabhi bhool ke bhi library ka raasta nahi bhulte aaj library mein hain. It was the news to be worth put on the notice board. The librarian adjusted her specs to believe what she just saw.

"Hello!! Everyone. Aap sab yaha mujhe nahi un books ko dekhne aate hai. So better be concentrating on that." taani said with a glare. Everybody get back to their work. They instantle entered and started finding vicky's so called soulmate in this pool of books. Where else to look for if its neha. Yes the girl is neha. The top student of the college. And they found her reading a big fatty book all by herself .

"Great!! we found her. There's noone. Go and do what I told you."

"Mujhe bahot darr lag raha hai yaar"

"agar zyada darega to ram gopal verma ki movie mein bhej dungi. Stop irritating me and Go right now. Its an order."

He did what she said. Taani hid behind a shelf to see Viha.

"Umm... Hi neha." Vicky said trying to grab her attention. She peeped out of her book to find the one and only Vikramjeet standing in front of her. But unlike other girls she was quite uninfluenced by his looks. She just passed a smile and started reading again.

"Oh c'mon just say something."Taani said all frustated

"What are you reading?" Vicky tried starting a conversation.

"Its prof. robert mathew theories on atomic physics."

"Really?!!! Looks interesting." Vicky said making weird face towards the book.

"I can't believe this. He is talking about atomic physics on his first date. Ugh!!" taani was so hell irritated. She was about to leave but then she sensed something. A gaze. She knew it well. The same gaze she felt in the morning. She turned around hoping to find the same person and..


Edited by deepkriti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
res
will read it soon
unres

and..😡
Teri toh mein😡

SHE KNEW HIM😕

She knows Rey??
aur uski gaze bhi pehcha leti hai

Not bad..

But yeh chakkar mein thoda doubt aa raha hai...😕

Update soon...

Edited by sashaz_sis - 11 years ago

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