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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

yayyy! Surprise..
Sreshtha Did u give the code??



yupp everything is done...it is installed on my mobile...but jst using net on lappie so my mobile is off...wait abhi on karti hu...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SShreShthA




yupp everything is done...it is installed on my mobile...but jst using net on lappie so my mobile is off...wait abhi on karti hu...

okay...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Guys before you read ahead, A VERY IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT!
I have written three parts by myself, but now, the further story will be written by my dear lovely
Partner Radhika (her username is PupCat) .. I am so excited to read her ideas and her thoughts for this story. SO, further on, I'll post the chaps, but they are written by her. She gave me so many ideas, that I didn't even imagine. She is going to rock the story.
I thought to handover the story to her cuz I wont be able to justify the "Modern Desire" as she would do!
SO now the writer is - PupCat .!!!
I haven't myself read the chap yet! Very excited! Plz do applaud her!
Recap:

Bharmal - I know Jodha beta! You are upset! But dont worry! I have good news for you. Sir knowingly bought the hotel because he wanted to gift it to a foreign company.
he had genuine reasons. He apologised to me. And guess what? Here is your Job assurance. He has given you the job of his secretary. From tomorrow you can come to our office.

Jodha was shocked and surprised...

Part 4 -

Jodha- Papa do u wants me to do this job? I mean you know everything between me and him. I hate him. But if you want me to do this job then I will definitely do it. My love for you is not greater than my hate for him.

Bharmal- I know beta... Now go to sleep. It's late now...

** Next morning in Jodha's Home **

Maina- Jodha bete come fast. It's your first day of office today!

Jodha- I am coming mumma...

Maina-Don't eat fast beta... Ohhh maa ambe this girl...

Bharmal- Jodha I m ready... Come fast

Jodha leaves for her office...

Bharmal and Jodha reach there... But they both are unaware of what is going to happen with them today...Bharmal works in different section...he walks away...

** Outside Jalal's Office **

Jodha enters the cabin...She is wearing a beautiful pink anarkali suite and Jalal again lost in her beauty

Jodha- Good morning Sir!

Jalal- Good morning Ms.Jodha... Looks at her from top to bottom...

U can't wear these suits... This is so unprofessional..

Jodha-Sorry! What does u mean?

Jalal- (asks a lady to bring uniform and lady comes out with a black uniform a thigh length dress)

Jodha- I am not going to wear this! Never! She shouts

Jalal- Ok then! U can't work with me!

Jodha thinks Bharmal is very excited for this job... I have to do it!

Jodha-OK! I'll wear!

Jalal asks her to change in ladies room and meet him in 30 mins...

Jalal (in mind) - Just wait and watch Ms. Jodha... How I make you pupate of mine!

Ohhh Allah save that beautiful doe-eye girl from me! Haaahhh

Jodha come to the door. May I come in sir? Jodha asks... Ohh yes come in! He answers. She thunders in.

Jalal lost his mind seeing her in such a short dress! He looks lustfully at beauty in front of him! She is so perfect ...Her curves... Ohhh gosh... She is perfect than Ruqaiya... Jodha who is really uncomfortable in that dress can feel his eyes on her! Adjusts her dress again and again.

He shows her some files and asks her to make copies of it... Handwritten copies...

Jodha looks at those files with wide eyes... Oh my god! I am alone going to complete this?

Jalal asks her to leave... He stares her from glass wall.

** Afternoon**

Jalal receives Ruqaiya's call

Ruq-Hi Darling! Where are you?

Jalal- In office! But I'll be late today! I told you I'm going to deal with Ms.Jodha

Ruq-(laughs) Oh really! Ok! I wish to see her bow down to my feet!

Jalal-Sure Jaan! As you wish!

Both laughs wickwdly...

** At Ruqaiya's house**

Ruqs- Now you will see Ms. Anarkali! What can I do! You will have to pay for my insult!

Just wait and watch! What Jalal will do with u!!!

** Jalal's Office **

Its almost 9 pm and everyone started leaving...

Jodha enters in the cabin with many arranged papers in her hand...

And suddenly she collides with Jalal and papers fall on ground!

Jalal- Are you out of your mind? Can't u see me?

Jodha-Sorry sir! I really... he cuts in between...

Jalal- Shut up! Now go and arrange this papers again! I don't want any excuse!

Do u get it?

Jodha- Its late sir! Can I do this tomorrow? My parents might be worried for me!

Jalal-Don't you dare to use your brain! (he shouts)

Mr. Bharmal told me that you will work late night! Now what happen? He lied to me?

Jodha- No! I'll do it! But you can't say anything against my papa!

Jalal-Leave!

Jodha-His name should be Jallad and not Jalal! He's a monster! How can he do this to me?

Oohh maa ambe! He is such a...

Suddenly Jodha hears some one's footsteps!

Who is he? Jalal? Or someone else?

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Posted: 12 years ago
Radhu!!!!! What an amazing idea! O I love u sooo much! 🤗 precap de deti! I'm dying to read more!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow👏👏 Amazing chap.. I loved it..fully.. Great going Radhika my jaan..keep it up..sahi kaha tahni ne..ek precap deti ko kya jaata/..lol..😊👏 Trust me, I wouldn't have written better than Radhika..😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
UnRes. 😆

AwesOme update Radhika👏
lOved it..!!
Continue sOon...
Edited by Sofia13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow amazing chapter...plz update soon...

nancy ji plz can u pm me ur another ffs..plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update Radhika!!!! Loved it...Jalal is being unnecessarily cruel and Ruku also😡I want a precap too! Do update soon🤗
Edited by baubles - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anshfever

wow amazing chapter...plz update soon...

nancy ji plz can u pm me ur another ffs..plz

Hey !! Thank you... Heres the link to my gallery...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Wooowww radhika it auwsome...terrific... Lovely...
love jalal along with torturing her carried away by her beauty...

👏 👏 👏
⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
its totally fab yaar...want more plzz
Since nw story is on ur hold plz give fast updates plzzz
keep it up 👍🏼 👍🏼

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