Anyone think CVs are rushing through the story?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I feel that there is a lot of potential for scenes to be stretched and strengthened thereby improving the characters and enriching the scenes! Recently it feels they are rushing from one twist to another and just loosing track of the story line.
The topic about Nikhat coming home for her after marriage ceremony, Gaffur maybe following up on the Talaknama process, Asad and Ayaan decking how to go about the divorce, etc...

Some things can't be picked up later so have to be done at the right time. Some continuity about what happened to Tanveer? Any conversation between Asad and Zoya regarding her following Tanveer and knowing Imran's truth.


There are so many avenues for this story to go, they are starting and stopping so quickly that they loose out on being able to move the characters and story forward.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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agree
this time qh story have so many track.
now this RSD track.
lets see what store for us.

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