{|AsYa/KaBhi SS| ~Serendipity~} (Part3-Pg33+Note-Pg47) :) - Page 14

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

YAYYY 😃 Fari starts a new story..Congrats girl...

And what a start..what a start...i am so bloody hooked already...you are such a talented writer at such a young age...i can only imagine you becoming better with time.

I love the way you started the story romantically with a fall and catch but gave it so much depth by showing the sorrow in Zoya's life, but yet her liveliness...Asad and Zoya's interactions were sweet..

So this story will be flashback mode, Zoya has a accident of some sort and Asad will relive their story while he is in the hospital...Sounds like a great read..

Looking forward to more :)

-Reya <3

THANKS SO MUCH, REYA! 😃 I loved your long comment! 😳😳 Love you! 🤗 ❤️

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

what happened to zoya ??

the prolouge and the begining were really interesting !
why is zoya in a hospital?
plz continue soon :)

You'll find out. 😉

Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy

Just read the prologue and chapter one and they are just brilliant!! You are really an awesome writer Fari! But why on earth did you send Zoya to the hospital in part one itself?? I really wonder what;s wrong with her but i just can't guess! Please update this soon!!

Thanks so much! 😳😳 You'll see as the story continues. 😉

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

OMG! I'm so sorry for the late comments Baby Pink! Just too many PMs in my Inbox! 😳

Read the prologue and Chapter 1 just now! 😃 That was BRILLIANT! I'm in love with the story and the word ~ serendipity! Really gripping and addictive! 👏

Both the encounters were wow! 👏 Zoya's talk with her parents at the graveyard was flawless!

Back to present... WHAT HAPPENED TO ZOYA? 😲 TELL ME NOW! 😡

Brilliantly written baby! ❤️

Continue soon!

Love and hugs, 🤗

Mrina

Fari :)

Originally posted by: DancingDiva.

Fari :)

When will you update your other stories? *Threatening voice*

Alright so I've decided I'll be reading this story with a different mindset and my fluff induced self is loving this. It's so CUTE. (There goes my warden-esque image) The rain kiss, I hate being a party pooper to all those who fantasize about it, but sometimes, in moments like this, it's nice to imagine. It's just SO CUTE. (Did I say that already?) And each of the encounters were just so ADORABLE (hey at least I didn't say cute again).

Originally posted by: -ShwSha-

Alright so I've decided I'll be reading this story with a different mindset and my fluff induced self is loving this. It's so CUTE. (There goes my warden-esque image) The rain kiss, I hate being a party pooper to all those who fantasize about it, but sometimes, in moments like this, it's nice to imagine. It's just SO CUTE. (Did I say that already?) And each of the encounters were just so ADORABLE (hey at least I didn't say cute again).

As a writer: I love the method :') It makes mommy Shweta proud (I adopt everyone I meet), the way you are telling their story through flashbacks instead of starting out with BAM SHE'S IN THE HOSPITAL! you're building up their affection so when we do find out what's going on, we feel the same despair Asad's feeling as we've lived through their story. Honestly, I'm so proud of you my little baby! It's beau-ti-ful.

-Shweta

YAY! I'm so happy that you liked it. 😃 Thank you sososo much! ❤️

I LOVE THIS!