Originally posted by: crazydream
Beautiful update
Loved the concept. A bit is of Jab we met but wen u wrote it , it came out very well n different.
Maan mourning for Loss of his loved one going as away.
Geet running like mad. Liked her story. How she landed in this situation.
Grateful to see a human but scared also little bit.
Its not entirely jab we met but some parts. N I like this Geet. It came out very well. Its interesting.
Waiting for next part.
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