'Ajeeb' Poetry

Hey guys!! Lol, I know I'm supposed to be studying but I had to watch the video at least... and I did. I have stuff to say, but time is precious so will leave any analysis etc. until Friday. Until then, I again penned some lines...

"Ajeeb"

Taqdeeron ke rang bhi kitne ajeeb hote hai,

Samundar ki lehron ki tarah anjaan modhe laate hai.

Aise dohraye par soch tham jaaye,

Waqt ka safar bhi kahin pal main tehrjaaye.

Nazar dhoondhti hai woh kinaara,

Aur kahin se achanak milta hai koi sahara.

Uski ek chuyan se jaage hai kuch ehsaas,

Jeevan se udh jaati hai har pyaas.

Haath mein uske miltah hai ye haath,

Ajeeb si kashish khilaata hai ye saath.

Dhalte hua suraj ke neeche chalte,

Dekhte hain hum ek naye jeevan ko ujalte.

Alaam hai ye kaisa ajeeb,

Saanse se bhi zyada, manzil hai kareeb.

You can fit them into whatever context!

Cheers,

dc

wow dc nice shayari 👏

shiv gauri ippi aur anupam ki kismat.


by the bye eagerly waiting for update of ur ff khamoshiyon 😳

Wah wah.. Can I get an Encore? 👏

Itni si gudiya and itne badi badi thoughts!! Whoa!! My favorite line:

Alaam hai ye kaisa ajeeb,
Saanse se bhi zyada, manzil hai kareeb.

Simply superb!!
xoxo, Sana Di~

Its beautiful Neetz!!! Simple and beautiful....

My fav lines:

Aise dohraye par soch tham jaaye,

Waqt ka safar bhi kahin pal main tehrjaaye.

Lovely!!!

Keep 'em coming!

-Sareeta

beautiful! awesome!...touching! huni.. keep em comin but study first.....

mwaahh xx

great words, that was heartwarming, On Gauri's part but this shiv babu ko iss kaa ehsaas hona hai abhi, shaayad. 👏