OS: The girl he saw - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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he saw, he fell and rose again...with a grin. and pixie-like girl? you really needed a stress buster didnt you? 😃
i enjoyed reading it... 12 yr olds with not a care or caution and no teenage hormones in the mix 😆

last paper 15th ko hai?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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he stumbled and fell, how about E.coli infects that wound?

no no please don't!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hmmm….a jolly 12 year old and pixie girl…the age free of care and caution….refreshing concept.

Not so common yet a general incidence from daily life….

As I opened this page…and happened to go through a few comments first…and iwas wondering if under the heavy dose of exams….u have actually ended up making Arnav and Khushi work in some Microbio. lab or what ?

Seriously…it seems like u have opened a thread for all bio students! :D

And u made..Arnav fell down….I hope atleast Soulie didn't read it…. else she would have murdered u by now…for embarrassing him in front of all ur readers...not tht i don't wanna kill u :P I left u just keeping in mind of those 654 books :P

Good OS…! I like it :) and…warn me beforehand…if u r to end up writing about E.coli or any other bacteria…I'll be prepared with my Bacteriophages… ! :P

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww, that was sweet! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well what should i write?? i don't know...
i should have listen to u whn u said tht we r going to throw tomatoes & wht not... i read it, scroll down & said "bas itna hi???" & after tht i remember ur words & i was like 🤣 & i'm still laughing as i come to know about a fact tht i can read whatever u wrote abt Arshi... i'm so much in luv with ur story writing talent tht i can read whtever u wrote wholeheartedly...😉


By the by why don't u continue it as an SS if not thn my b if u could write some more parts, i would luv to read it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A scene written out from our life...i felt like that when i read this..often at traffic lights, we observe others if our mood is upto it..and then someone or something catches our fancy and we feel our eyes are glued to it and when signal changes, we keep on staring at it until it fades away from our view!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Nice read!!

Hmm... are you into medicine?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: distantobserver

Nice read!!


Hmm... are you into medicine?


Thanks. :)
Nope. I'm studying to get a Masters in Biotechnology.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i still remember a boy's face which i saw on a school trip.. now a husband and three children later when i am own my own i remember him and smile...loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just adorable! I saw the entire OS play out in my mind!

Now I'm left wondering, Khushi has a brother? Do Arnav and Khushi ever meet?

You planted a seed and them forgot to water it! How I hope you come back and water this beautiful seed!

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