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Hey dat was a nice piece of writing...
Going thru d cmnts i figured out dat a few opined dis dsnt mk sense...
I hv a suggestion...
It wud mk sense if it had smthng more to it..
(Which is me indirectly tellinfg u to continue the story 😉 )

Hey plz continue na...i wud love to read wat jpnd aftr dat...
While going thru d story i rmmbrd d opening scene of kabi alvida na kehna in wch Rani speaks her heart out to srk...

Meghan's final bye seemed to look similar to dat of srk & rani in dat scene...

Plz continue

@Laveleena & @Nupur- Thanks a ton :D

Originally posted by: maanvir

Hey dat was a nice piece of writing...
Going thru d cmnts i figured out dat a few opined dis dsnt mk sense...
I hv a suggestion...
It wud mk sense if it had smthng more to it..
(Which is me indirectly tellinfg u to continue the story 😉 )

Hey plz continue na...i wud love to read wat jpnd aftr dat...
While going thru d story i rmmbrd d opening scene of kabi alvida na kehna in wch Rani speaks her heart out to srk...

Meghan's final bye seemed to look similar to dat of srk & rani in dat scene...

Plz continue

Thanks :D Hahaha its away from reality so it doesn't make sense for people but as I said I believe in ' Karmic Connections' kind off things so wrote this. I would love to but I visualised story till here even while ending I thought for writing some more but I couldn't. I'll try if I would be able to come up something I'll definitely post :) Thanks for suggestion and I didn't know about this resemblance coz I hv seen that movie just once years back so don't rem now... Lol

Nice os!!
Really loved it!! Megha's feelings and dreams i could very well understand!!
Itne cute stranger ko koi ignore bhi kese kare!!
Really nice story and the background setting was just awesome!!

Originally posted by: Moner_Radio

ashlesha :


the OS was really nice, but although i agree that opening up oneself to strangers occasionally can be very relieving but still i cant think of getting intimate with him like this ! that's one thing i really couldnt connect ..hope you get what i mean. do write some more OS on MM..would love to read them ! 😊

Thanks for liking :) I know, I said it was unreal or maybe rarest of rare coz I believe that one person is miserable with no hopes left, he tends to flow in direction from where a l'll warmth and understanding he sees coming and this was not really intimacy but a girl losing out the pain and frustration which was bottled up inside her from long and that night she could not held it further and Mohan just consoled coz he was getting disturbed seeing her so defeated, you can call infatuation from Mohan's side which he tried to hide in his retorts and remarks... lol, I should have made it more clear, I suppose :). And I do get what you mean, while writing this OS I knew there would be two sections and I completely respect your views :). I'll definitely try, hopefully something will strike soon. Thanks for commenting :)

Originally posted by: angeala95

Nice os!!
Really loved it!! Megha's feelings and dreams i could very well understand!!
Itne cute stranger ko koi ignore bhi kese kare!!
Really nice story and the background setting was just awesome!!

Hahaha indeed who can resist Mohan Bhatnagar. Thanks for liking :)