FF Turnaround NOTE on PG150.. - Page 55

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Walking by the sea, eating the local food and enjoying the presence of the one you love was all that mattered for the two. Asad was finally showing her a part of India he had always talked to her about, and even though Zoya had come here before, with Ayaan and Huemira, being shown around by the person that made her fall in love with India was an experience Zoya had been starving for. She wanted the night to go on, never to end, taking the two into the never ending land of lost dreams and new beginnings.

Asad looked at peace and even though he had somehow managed to hide his face under his cap his smile was all that mattered. He was enjoying seeing Zoya be the beautiful, vivacious girl he had fallen in love with. Her child like enthusiasm was what gave him peace, her laughter made him smile, made him feel content, a feeling every human runs towards but seldom attain. Looking at him tonight no one would know the demons he fought with, the pain he had endured.Asad and Zoya to everyones eyes were just two young souls, dancing on the tune of love,how they were apart, and the history of their separation was invisible to the world.Only they knew the pain of parting from your soul, from your one true soulmate.But tonight the night was all about meeting and rejoicing,laughing and loving, untainted by the stain the fading twilight would mark.

Zoya had just munched on a plate of pan puris,already making her way to the next stall, when Asad told her to stop.

Asad- Zoya didn't you have enough already?? I mean its not the healthiest of foods, you need to be ca...

Zoya-Asad stop being a grandfather..and come enjoy this food with me...yaad hai na ki college time pe u used to make me so jealous by talking about all the varieties of food in India??.Infact you told me you used to have street food all the time in Bhopal along with Najma,so ab kya ho gaya?? Don't tell me that you have suddenly become all LIKE.. OMG I am a superstar and I have an image to look after, and street food yuck..its so iunhealthy..I am on a diet...meri skin ko kuch ho gaya to?? OMG mere six packs ka kya hoga agar mein ek vada paav kha lunga to..YIEKS..Carbs..soch ke hi gym jaana padega OMG...Zoya was going all out mimicking an actors clich's to the T..rolling her eyes, making grand getures and laughing as she spoke.

Asad couldn't help but laugh at Zoya's antics, infact her act was starting to gather up an audience, and Asad had to get her to stop or else it wouldnt be long before people started recognizing him,the end to which he was not ready to deal with. So he started walking, pulling a hyper Zoya along.

Asad- Zoya stop it ok..people are starting to stare..

Zoya-So don't you think I should get used to it..since I am to be an actress now?? She fluttered her eyes in a flirtacious manner, making Asad sigh in exasperating..

Asad-Enough with the act already..wat will it take for you to stop..

Zoya-ooo Ab hui na baat..well ok then if you want me to stop then you have to eat what I eat, do what I do...I want you to loosen up and have some fun for a change..Allah miyaan kya batau..u n ur Akdu Ahmed Khan avatar is sooo..annoying..I like my old Asad better..the one I Lov.. She stoped abrubtly..Realisng what she was about to say.. her eyes quick at gaging Asad's reaction.

Asad stoped the moment those words flew out of her mouth, his heart skipping a beat. It had been so long since he had heard those words from her; it pained his heart as it felt so good. He just stood there and met her eyes not knowing what to say.

But Zoya knew, she saw it in his eyes, the fliker of emotions, the pain the unsurety, the question.She grabbed his hands and nudged him to walk, Asad complying. Zoya made her way towards the sea and stopped right when the waves touched their feet. Turning around she took both his hands in hers and looked into his eyes, and let her heart take over.

Zoya-Asad..

Asad- Zoya let it be..its all good..

Zoya-No Asad let me speak..let me..

Asad just looked at her, his pain prominent in his eyes.

Zoya- Asad...I know you don't want me to..so I wont bring forward our past..I know you want us to start afresh so I will, but before anything else I want to...she lifted her hand and caressed his face,Asad leaning in on instinct.

Zoya-Asad meri zindagi mein ek saans aise nahi jisme mein tumhara naam na ho, there hasn't been a moment in time when you have not ruled my being. In all that we've been through I have never once ..

Asad- Zoya... he said with an anguish that tore through her heart...she was breaking inside reliving the worst day of her life, when she wronged the person she loved more than anything else in her life. Her eyes teared up as she looked into his eyes and said what she had said every passing moment in the past 4.5 years.

Zoya-Asad I LOVE YOU..and only you and have always loved you ..Thorugh it all... Her tears escaped her resolve falling at their own will.

Asad- Zoya... his voice inquisitive

Zoya just moved in closer, taking his face in her hands she tiptoed herself and sealed his lips with hers in a kiss. She kissed him with all the love, with utmost gentleness wanting to reciprocate the love she felt for him.

She was almost disapponited when Asad didn't respond, but rather than giving up, she deepened her kiss, her hands gently stroking his hair, her body ever so lightly brushing with his. Finally as if waking up from a long sleep, Asad gave in, his lips responding, his hands pulling Zoya in.They kissed to heal themselves, embracing each other.

- Oye...yeh public place hai..yahan yeh sab nahi chalega...oye...

Asad and Zoya were brought back to now, by a nagging voice,

- Are Rehne do na constable saab..kabse maze le rahe hai..hum jaiso ka time pass ho raha hai...yahan to muft ki movie dekne mil rahi hai...a group of thugs laughed..

Asad not wanting any attention started to walk away..

Asad- Sorry constable we'll leave from here..

Constable-Oye aur tum log bhi seedhe raho warna abhi leta hu tumhare..chalo niklo yaha se...

Thugs..- Arre jaa rahe hai..aur tum log suno..paas mein hi ek hotel hai..mast hai..lovers logo ka meeting point..sahi rahegi jagah..aise chikne maal...

*Thump* came the sound as Asad's punch knocked that thug down.

Zoya was shocked at Asad's reaction..

Zoya-Asad...W.. Wh.. What... the..

Constable- Abe oye..idhar aa...he grabbed Asad by the collar..Saale ek to awaragardi karta hai aur ab maar pit bhi tujhe to thane hi le jaana padega..aaj kal ke launde..saale..

Zoya- Constable ji..please samjah ne ki koshish karo..

Constable- Tum chup raho warna tumhe bhi saath le chalunga..acche ghar ki lagti ho..so jao ghar jao..With that he dragged Asad by the collar, his cap falling off by the movement..

Zoya- Please ji meri baat to suniye..

Asad-Zoya just stop..

Constable-Oye tu chup ka.. He looked at Asad and he stopped..A..arree Mr Asad Ahmed Khan..aa..aap...I I am so sorry..mmmujhse maaloom nnahi ththaa ki aaap hai...

Asad-Its ok constable agar aap ko mujhe police station le jaana hai to le jaaiye..but maine jo kiya who galat nahi tha..u should have stopped them...agar mera bas chalta to..

Zoya-Asad stop please..

Constable- Arre nahi nahi sir..woh kya hai naa..aap who madam ke saath..I mean woh pehle aap wahan kkkiss kar rahe the aur phir yahan aapne..bas aap to jaante hai naa aaj kal ke bacche...meint to bas apni duty...he felt embaressed for pulling a superstar by his collar..

Asad- Ji aap to apni duty kar rahe the and agar aapko lagta hai ki maine kuch galat kiya to pleas I am ready to come with you, but aapko inke khilaaf kuch to action leni hogi...inhi logo ki wajah se girls are not safe anymore..

Constable-Ji sir nahi U don't need to come..I will call you if needed and mein inko dekhta hu, aap please madam ji ko leke yahan se jaaiye..log jamaa ho rahe hai.

Asad nodded and walked to his car, Zoya following him.

He leaned on the car,trying to cool himself down, the words they used for Zoya was killing him inside and he was having a hard time containing his anger..

Zoya's touch on his shoulder brought him back. He looked at her,and very gently she hugged him.His anger melted away as her smell took over, easing him and calming his nerver.

Zoya- Asad lets go,

Asad nodded and broke the hug.They both took their seats and made their way home.

Silence sat between them, enjoying her time. Neither spoke, Asad trapped in the tornado that were his emotions, not knowing what was going on. His anger was fluctuating within making him restless and impatient. While on the other hand Zoya felt anxious,a strong emotion was nagging her,making her scared.She looked at Asad but he had receeded to his shell. Reaching by her home she held his hand, trying to get his attention. He looked at her and gave her a half smile, breaking her desire for a hug. She gently kissed his cheek and stepped out.

Zoya-Asad goodnight.

Asad- Bye Zoya..

She stood there as his car drove past,his goodbye somehow bothering her.

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Ayaan was losing his cool as he made his way back home. Humeira had very gently turned him down and decided to say goodbye. Even when he called her she seemed distant and infact a little disappointed when he told her about talking to badi ammi regarding Asad bhaijaan and Zoya tonight.He didn't care at this point as he felt he deserved to know about his bhaijaan, all he wanted was to be involved in his life;his bhaijaan meant the world to him and not knowing something about him pricked him.

He parked his bike and made his way in, noticing Asad's car in the driveway.

Ayaan-Lagta hai bhaijaan aa gaye hai, but koi nai, ammi so to aaj baat karke hi rahunga.

He stepped in finding his ammi watching some show on the Tv..

Dilshaad- Aa gaye Ayaan?? Kaisa raha dinner?? Did Humeira like your surprise??

Ayaan- Ammi darasal we had a fight.

Dilshad- Ya allah kya hua?? Phir se nok jhok??

Ayaan- Actually ammi, it was because of Asad bhaijaan..

Dilshad-O woh kaise..Asad ne kya kiya??

Ayaan- Actually ammi I wanted to talk to you about Asad bhaijaan...

Dilshad didn't know where this was going but she nodded in approval.

Dilshad-Haan kaho..

Ayaan- Ammi Humeira and me had a fight because of bhaijaan and Zoya.

Hearing Zoya's name took Dilshad by surprise.

Dilshad-Kya kehna chaahte ho Ayaan??

Ayaan-Ammi I know ki bhaijaan aur Zoya ke beech kuch to hai, and infact I am sure they know each other from before.

Dilshad-Ayaan please what are you talking about, I am asking you about Humeira and tum Asad ki baat kiye jaa rahe ho..Dilshad tried to divert the conversation not wanting to take this any further.

Ayaan- Ammi please I know you know about bhaijaan and Zoya, and please naa mat kehna, Humeira has seen their piture together. Please ammi tell me'

Dilshad- Ayaan please leave this, I cant lie to you and I cannot tell you anything about it, so please jaane do,Asad abhi ghar par hai and I don't want to...she nodded her head in disapproval.

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Asad had just come home a few minutes ago, disturbed by the motley of events.He was a mess,he didn't know what to feel, love?, pain?? Anger?? Remorse?? He just wanted to get over with this day and forget all about it. He wanted to wake up to his tomorrow and start anew, hopefully hold Zoya's hands again and rebuild their dreams again. He just wanted to forget his past, no longer wanting to be a slave of that dark time. He just wanted to be happy, but tonight he just wanted to sleep. He made his way to the closet to get his kurta pajama,and just as he opened the door the godforsaken paper he had left behind fell on the floor.Asad bent down and picked up the paper and slowly turned it around, his past about to pull him in again. At first he looked at it with curiosity, but with a wink of an eye his curiosity turned into gut wrenching pain. His eyes teared up as he recalled the day he laid eyes on this paper,its content shattering his core.He went back to the time that followed when he ran all over the place yelling her name, calling out for her, trying to get hold of her but nothing came his way. His questions were never answered and he was left all alone to deal with it all, this paper mocking him, reminding him what a fool he had made of himself. He crumpled the paper in his fist as rage took over and the new Asad transformed back to his old self, the self that was born 4.5 years ago, beacause of Zoya.

Ayaans voice brought Asad back from his dark place, Ayaan's mention of Zoya made him walk out of his room, the paper still in his fist.

Ayaan- Ammi aap sab mujhse yeh baat kyun chipa rahe hai, why are you not telling me the truth...mein bas mere bhaijaan ke baare mein jaan na chaatha hu...please tell mee Asad bhaijaan aur Zoya ka koi rishta tha ya hai..I wanna know it all

Dilshad was beyond distressed, she had promised Asad never to tell anyone of his past, yet she didn't want this secret to tear the brothers apart. She knew Ayaan and how much he love his brother but not knowing Asad's past will hurt him a lot..

Dilshad- Ayaan mere bte samajh ne ki koshish karo mein chaah kar bhi tumhe kuch nahi bata sakti..please mera yakeen karoo..

Ayaan- Nahi ammi aaj to aapko bataana hi hoga...I want to know, I want to know it all..

What do you want to know Ayaan??? Roared Asad...jo bhi poochna hai aaj mujhse poocho..

Ayaan and Dilshad were shocked. They had never seen Asad so angry before, his eyes were bloodshot, his jaw clenched and his hands were fists with a paper dying in one.

Dilshad made her way to Asad trying to pacify him

Dilshad- Asad..please calm down...Ayaan was just...

Asad-Ammi aap please side ho jaaye..mere bhai ne meri zindagi ke baare mein jaan naa hai to aaj who jaanega...aapne vaada kiya tha ki aap mere kal ke zikar kisi se nahi karengi..magar aaj baat aa hi jaane do bahar...

Pooch Ayaan kya jaan na chaathe ho..yahi ki kya mein Zoya ko pehle se jaanta hu??

Ayaan was too shoked to respond, his brothers fury was beyond his reach.

Asad- Haan jaanta hu...bahot achhi tarah se jaanta hu...aur...

Ayaan gulped at his brothers declaration...his doubts now cleared..but still...

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