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Posted: 11 years ago
part 12
wats the next blow!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
parrt 13

i guessed it somewhere... pr fir baby ka kya??
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Posted: 11 years ago
if she was nt pregnant to pta kaise nai chala.. i guess kafi mahine ho gae thae to us k appearance se pta kaise nai chala maan ko! i knw jb hm kisi k sth duniya bnate hai to hm hmsha un sapnon me khoe rehte hai.. bt dats emotional nd not physical! i don't understand maan antara ko physically dkh k pehchaan kaise nai paya kkii vo pregnant hai ya nai!!!

nd pls update nxt part soon..
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Chapter 15


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The early rays of the sun filtered through the flimsy curtains, nudging at the eyes of the two most adorable figures that lay ensconced into each other. They glittered and shone along the bright lights of the sun and it was Geet first who batted her long lashes open only to find her close to her beloved, her Maan. She smiled at the thought and regarded the handsome man who held her tight to him. His nose, long and sharp, his eyes, deep hollows big probing ones were sheltered underneath his eyelids, his mouth was perfect, especially those lips, perfect m. Geet shied at her own thoughts and smiled, her cheeks turned red. She never realized that Maan could be equally awake. Geet was jarred off her thoughts with the deep baritone voice of her husband.

"I never knew I could be so amusing, girls in the past always complimented me for being charming, handsome and even hot but they never found me funny. You are one of a kind" Maan smiled at a thoroughly flushed Geet.

Caught off guard, Geet tried to disengage herself from him. But she was trapped the more she tried more she got tangled and the fact that she was dressed in a saree was helping to little rather added to her already grave predicament. She looked at Maan for help, but he had a naughty smile plastered upon his face. She beckoned him with her eyes to let her go but his smile turned seductive and soon the air was all charged up, their bodies felt as if it were on fire, brushing past each other. Maan's gaze slowly dropped to Geet's lips and it had her hyperventilating. She stared at him, probing into the depths of his chocolate brown eyes and the more she looked the more they got lost. Slowly Maan dipped his head, their lips only inches apart, their breaths falling on each other's lips and finally mingled. The kiss started as slow and sensual soon turned hot and demanding. Maan's lips probed into her mouth in a slow dance and Geet melted into his arms. Their lips moved in symphony against each other going up and down. When Maan felt her lips encircling around his, he went mad with desire, exerting more pressure he brought her more close to him. Their bodies now stuck to each other like second skin and they felt one. His hands moved all along her length while her arms went around his neck , soon playing with his thick lush hair. Together they were transported to a new world of love where they were lost into each other. Maan's lips left hers and now moved along her eyes, kissing her there, then he kissed her on her cheeks, licking her ears which made Geet moan. Soon he had moved down to her neck, kissing her there. They would have remained lost in their lalala land had the incessant knocking on the door not disturbed them. It brought them back unceremoniously crashing into reality.



The moment reality struck Geet had turned all red and Maan couldn't meet her eyes. Geet leaped off from the bed and dashed into the washroom where she closed the door with a loud thud and Maan who had shut his eyes close went ahead to open the door.

When he opened the door, it was the caretaker, standing there with his hands outstretched, he had the phone in his hand and was about to say to something but was lost. He stared at Maan as if he were some alien; his eyes went from big to bigger to biggest.

Maan was thoroughly irritated, first he was embarrassed at whatever transpired between him and geet in the morning and now this, the caretaker was gawking at him, literally. Dushyant kaka though a man of few words was the most respected , even daadima considered him to be part of the family so it was bit difficult for maan to be stern with him and anyways he adored the man since he filled his childhood with some great fairytales. Somehow maintaining a cool exterior Maan asked,

"what is it?"

The poor caretaker was still busy gawking at him and felt at a loss for words when Maan once again implored, kaka do you need something?"

This time he jumped at the question and said, "no, no, I don't want anything"

Maan saw his cheeks turning red while he said, "I would never disturbed but your daadima called, she needs to spek to you, says your phone's not working, I meant its unreachable." With that he dashed for an exit.

Maan was a bit appalled at his strange behavior. In his hurry to give Maan the receiver he had literally dropped it. Maan had never seen him behave like that before.

When Maan said hello, from the other end of the phone daadima's voice exploded, "what do you think you are? Maan I never thought you could be so irresponsible, look at you , no phone, no information"

"but daadima I told you we'll be at the farmhouse, yesterday evening with your consent we set off for here then why are you getting so hyper?"Maan replied coolly.

"ya you said you'll be off but I had expected to see you both at breakfast and I was never told that you intended to stay over a few more days, when I offered for honeymoon package you vehemently denied now you are busy honeymooning and that too at the farmhouse. I thought you had taste, how could you Maan? At least you could have told me I would have made all the arrangements, tickets and all. You could have taken Geet to a better place after all she too has dreams. Its her first marriage" daadi ma kept rambling

Maan who was still recovering from all that transpired between him and Geet held his hand and sat trying to make his daadi ma see reason but she was nowhere near stopping. hence Naan interjected,

"please will you let me speak" he said grinding his teeth, "and i wanted to clear certain things with her, as you know the circumstances we were married into were not totally normal, moreover with all the ceremonies and relatives and off course your kitty friends gathering to see the new bride, it had made her nervous and shaky and i just wanted to make her feel better and hence the date" he stressed on the word date, "now do you understand my point" maan finished

'yes i do" Maan's daadi replied, "but i guess i have made my call and i would like to see the both of here at khurana mansion right away" with the click of the phone the conversation had ended, and Maan knew that something was up with his daadi, she seemed to be in one of her infamous, lets make Maan miserable sort of mood. but now the task at hand for him was not to worry about daadi, whatever ammunition she was ready to volley him with he would dodge it, he knew and the smug smile made its way to his face instantaneously, but Geet, his immediate worry was Geet, about what happened between them. he looked at the bathroom door which remained shut tight and closed his eyes in mortification, "what excuse am i going to give her, what would she think of me? may be she would think that i tried to take undue advantage of her, hell no!" Maan thought.


in the bathroom on the other hand, Geet blushed furiously looking herself in the mirror, her saree was in disarray, her hair disheveled and her lips trembling, she looked at the mirror and her eyes flew to the red mark on her throat, 'the mark of love, mark of possession, of Maan' she thought and turned a beetroot red. she touched her lips that were swollen due to the kiss that they had shared a few minutes back and a slow smile touched her lips. but then she heard Maan shouting, she thought probably he was angry on her for running away but when she peeked from the bathroom without getting noticed she realized that he was having one of his infamous arguments with daadima, she couldn't stop smiling, seeing an exasperated Maan, holding his head with one hand while he had the phone to his ears. "such a tall broad, powerful stern man looked so helpless" she thought and before Maan could notice she shut the door closed. she felt happy, content for the change in their relation, she felt complete.




Khush hu..

Karan na pucho..

Bs khush hu..

Mujhko na roko..

Aaj main khush hu..

Kaha usne kuch jo khush hu..

Ummeed na thi yun hoga..

Nazar na lgana meri khushi ko..

Ek arse bd muskurai hu..

Ji bhar k aaj khilkhilai hu..

Roko na mujhe aaj main khush hu..

Nazar na lgana kyoki main khush hu..

Karan na pucho..

Bs main khush hu...



another beautiful creation by my sweet friend, souls sis appy




Maan knew that he would have to apologize to Geet, hence he stood up and with all the courage she could muster knocked at the bathroom door. the knock startled Geet, and the next moment she heard Maan mumbling an apology,


"look Geet, am sorry" he said, he searched for the right words, "see i never have done as stupid as i did, i mean i always seek permission, hell no! what am i saying?!! what i meant was i am not the kind of guy you think me to be, am not somebody to take advantage, i believe in waiting for the right time and right momet. i juknow hat happened a few minutes back was awkward and embarrassing but i dont regret it Geet. i dont! and i can't since the feelings that i have fo you cannot be simple friendship, and in these few days i have come to know of it as something special something that's above friendship and i want to bask in this feeling, be happy and make you happy with me. i dont know how to explain it to you and don't know whether you would understand but somehow feel content happy with you around. when you are around i feel blessed, my life looks blissful, heavenly. i don't know yet whether it's love, but i would love to love you so i want you to come out and give our relation a deserved chance" Maan finished

Geet's heart thudded, her breathing accelerated and her eyes misty, she felt so happy to know that her Maan had feelings for her. all the years she had burned in hell for loving him. she had cursed herself several times for having such feelings for her own sister's husband, but today as the fog of misunderstanding lifted an d she came to know about his feelings she felt so good, on top of the world.


the click of the door made Maan look up, he had been standing at the window staring into empty space. when his loving speech had no effect upon his beloved he felt disappointed and even thought of ways to free Geet of the unwanted relation. he knew their marriage had not been normal, the circumstances were bleak and though he had feelings for Geet it was not necessary for her to have the same for him.

Geet walked in slow steps towards Maan till she reached him.

"listen Geet its not necessary for you to feel the same..." Maan was cut off mid way when Geet stood on her toes to reach him and pecked him on his cheeks.


such a bold gesture from a girl who blushed at a drop of hat left Maan dumfounded and stunned

"Maan i too want to give our relation a chance, i know its awkward and the way we got married, it was all decided in haste but trust me i too feel the same about this relation , as if there is an unknown bond that is between us, we don't need any conversation to know each other's feelings only we can do that through eyes and even when we are not around each other our hearts are somewhere linked and we get to know if one of is sad or in need of help. our happiness reflects in the smile of one another and i too feel happy content being in this relation with you. you bring in a sense of security in my life. so your feelings echo mine and i too want to test them. but i only have one condition"

maan looked at Geet quizzically, her words , explanations touched his heart and he wanted to crush her to him, "what condition Geet" he asked with a smile


"i want us to go slow" she replied in a meek voice averting from meeting Maan's eyes

Maan instantly knew what she had been referring at and smiled but somewhere the naughty mischievous Maan wanted to exploit the given chance, he began, "slow, I don't understand Geet what you are getting at? Slow regarding what?" and he started taking steps towards Geet while his hands deftly unbuttoned his shirt.



Geet became conscious of the situation and the moment she saw Maan unbuttoning she stepped back for each step he took towards her, "what are you doing Maan?' her voice trembled as she saw Maan coming towards her.

"Undressing, why?"Maan replied nonchalantly


"Why? What? No!" Geet shrieked while her hand flew to her mouth and she dashed for the washroom but this time Maan caught her, and brought her close to him. She closed her eyes while Maan couldn't help admiring the innocent seductress, "open your eyes Geet, am not gonna do anything, if you want it slow, slow it will but at your rate am sure I'll not be able to control for long" he said



As Geet fluttered her eyes open and looked at Maan in confusion, he began again, "what? You don't understand?" when Geet nodded in negative, Maan bent down leveling his mouth near her ears and whispered, "if you kiss me on my cheeks every time to make your point known like you did a few minutes back I don't promise I would go slow" Geet blushed a beetroot red, once again she had been caught off guard by Maan, "am sure you wouldn't mind if I was not that slow given your own pace" Maan chimed teasing her more and before he could embarrass her more Geet pushed him and ran to the bathroom.



"Geet, daadima is waiting for us at the mansion so don't take too long we have to be there soon, am leaving the room, so you can get your stuff and get ready" Maan shouted and when he was just about to leave, Geet peaked from the bathroom and said, "you'll go out like that? With the lipstick mark all over your lips and cheeks?" and with that closed the door.



Maan stood stock still and now it dawned on him why the old caretaker had gawked at him in such a strange way.

Precap: maneet maneet maneet

Thanks a to dearies for loving my story and giving it love and likes, I loved reading the comments and I hope you all will enjoy chapter 15. Do let me know how it is, I'll waiting for your response. Lack of time and tight schedule keeps me from updating regularly so please forgive me for the delay. A big squishing hug to all my readers and a very happy, prosperous, noise free and safe diwali to all of you. Love you all.



Edited by doublecross - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update my sweetie...
Pri...dear i will giv the comments thru pm today..but trust it worth for the wait...
Maaneet giving a chance to their beautiful relationship called marriage...
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Fantastic update. Maan and Geet are slowly changing the way they interact with each other with Maan realising just how much having Geet around him means. I liekd that she asked him to take things slow and he was willing to comply with her wish. Fab job as always and looking forward to what is in store next
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow...awesome. .
I wonder how will they take thier relation "slowly" ?😆
Poor caretaker at shock..laga laga shock laga...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice and naughty update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
oops... poor kaka had to see this... nice update though...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update

so finally they both shared a bit of more intimacy and are ready to give a chance to thier relation

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