new ASHLOK OS:AUTUMN FALLS..SPRING COMES...AND THE LOVE BLOOMS..

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this is a different attempt from my side,less words and more images
iam trying to portray emotions and words through silent images.
so here is my new os for you...

autumn falls..spring comes..and the love blooms...


Part of you die each year when the leaves fall from the trees and their branches were bare against the wind and the cold, wintery light. But you knew at the end of sad misty fall of autumn,there comes spring...spreading its vivid colours ...bright and beautiful...


from lamenting heart of autumn,rises the sweet music of spring...of new hopes and dreams...

All that begins meets an end,
Every end onsets a new beginning,
From the heart of autumn
Rises the cooing of spring...
Flowers burst into bloom
In a wild array
Of vivid colors

That span the whole spectrum.
Spring is upon us,
Back from a long nap,
welcoming us with its
rainbow hands spun with dreams

From the heart of autumn
Rises the cooing of spring...
amidst the dark misty clouds...
breaks the new sunrise...


everything is clear in their life after a long battle between hate,revenge and love

finally love won and brought them here...and gifted them a beautiful morning amidst the bloomimg springs...honeymoon after a year of their marriage!

the enchantment of spring inundated his senses with new life,with new hopes and new beginnings.The freshly minted sunshine mingled with the scented breeze threw out the tinges of despair from their life.he is once again ensnared in the web of love spun by her...his astha...where he wanted to remain forever...

he woke up and saw her curled to a ball to other side of bed

he pulled her to his arms..how perfect is his life with her presence...

he dont know how he managed to hate her...how he managed to survive without her...how did he hurt her knowing that he is stabing his own heart...

he wonder after all he has done...how can she forgive him...love him?

yes she is astha shlok agnihotri...whose heart is bigger than the sun..whose love is immortal like god...and whose care for him is a mystery..a mystery he never wants to solve...

she was his...only shlok's astha

he possessively tightened his hold on her for which she snuggled closer to his warm chest...making his heart warmer for having this wonderful woman in his life.

he rested his head on her neck tickling her with his stubble

'shlok let me sleep some more time'she said

shlok (kissing her cheeks):astha we came here not to sleep all the time

astha lazily opened her eyes

shlok:good morning my sweetheat

she smiled making his heart flutter-'good morning shlok'

he pulled her closer and he whispered to her ears nuzzling her hair making her shiver...

'let me love you astha'


she blushed hard and tried to move way..out of shy

she got up ...but shlok was not in a mood to leave her

he got up and moved closer to her


closer and closer...now she could feel his breath


and he whispered softly'no way of escape mrs shlok agnihotri'

he picked her up and moved to the bed...


they became lost in each other's embrace...

like a magic she felt him getting near...like a strong pull arising from the deep of his heart towards her...completely lost as if they are under a spell...so divine and beautiful...

Today is the beginning of a dream.
A day where two souls are woven together.
its the union of two souls forever
entangled as one
its a union of two hearts forever
that share the same heart beat
forever...ever and ever...

the fountains mingle with the river,
And the rivers with the ocean;
The winds of heaven mix forever,
With a sweet emotion;
Noting in the world is single...

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shlok:get ready fast ...we are going to a nearby park...not for a party

astha:coming shlok

she finally came out and sat by the bed combing her hair

shlok stared at her admiringly

shlok:astha...how do you manage to be so beautiful

astha blushed

shlok slowly took the dupatta and covered her head


shlok:you are dead gorgeous astha

astha(in slow whisper):enough shlok...

she slowly took her hands in his and kissed her hands...


shlok:now lets go...

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they reached the park



they sat on that solitary bench

astha:its so beautiful here shlok

shlok:if you are with me...

astha:no

shlok rolled his eyes

astha:when we are together

shlok:so whats the difference?

astha:nothing...

shlok:pagal!

they sat there for a long time enjoying each other's presence


shlok moved closer to her ...

the morning sun shone brighter...a cool breeze carried the morning mist

along its way...

this morning is not only a Sun Rise...
But a beautiful gift of Nature...
for the lovers...
That defeats Darkness...
And spreads Light..

he leaned and kissed her lips

shlok:astha you are the most beautiful delight that happened in my life

they shared a warm hug...a symbol of their eternal bond...so divine and blissful

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life is beautiful

sometimes rain,sometimes sunshine

accept whatever comes your way

there may be thorns in the way

but there will be also flowers

dont be afraid of darkness

a cloudless dawn awaits you

after a misty autumn fall

a majestic spring awaits you

with a smiling face and singing lips

go on moving on your chosen path

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TRUE LOVE STORY NEVER ENDS...




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avi_ashi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yaar it was amazing.. Loved each n evrry line.. Shlok, astha such a cute couple.. I wonder wen ll this acyually happen in the show.. Awsum os.. I hv bcum fan of ur writings.. Plz keep writing more on ashlok😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: avi_ashi

yaar it was amazing.. Loved each n evrry line.. Shlok, astha such a cute couple.. I wonder wen ll this acyually happen in the show.. Awsum os.. I hv bcum fan of ur writings.. Plz keep writing more on ashlok😳

THANKS A LOT DEAR 😊 😳
next os on next weekend dear
thank you so much dear
readers like you makes me keep on writing...❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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😳😳😆

Originally posted by: LECHU123

THANKS A LOT DEAR 😊 Embarrassed
next os on next weekend dear
thank you so much dear
readers like you makes me keep on writing...❤️

my pleasure dear.. U deserves all the appreciation.. Me too wanted to write an OS on our Ashlok but m not that innovative..😆
waiting for ur next os eagrly
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The OS Autumn Falls...spring comes...and the love blooms... on Shlok and Ashta is Simply Awesome 👏 👏

The Pictures are beautiful.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SaiS

The OS Autumn Falls...spring comes...and the love blooms... on Shlok and Ashta is Simply Awesome 👏 👏

The Pictures are beautiful.



thanks a lot dear...
my readers are my inspiration to write more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sooo beautifully written. Superb👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: srilanka123

Sooo beautifully written. Superb👍🏼

thank you so much...😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Your poems and pics with script made me dreaming..
Yes so,lively and captured pics...with imaginatory pics...

For sec or two imagined ashlok in that world of theirs with your poetry..

Creating imagination in the readers mind is a creative which occurs with special thoughts and scripting..

Words written reflects ones a true nature..
I can see u r a nature person.

Nature person have talent of writings and poetry.

Good going..keep going..praises going.

WTG..awsome is a lil word..the best is best suitable.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prasai

Your poems and pics with script made me dreaming..

Yes so,lively and captured pics...with imaginatory pics...

For sec or two imagined ashlok in that world of theirs with your poetry..

Creating imagination in the readers mind is a creative which occurs with special thoughts and scripting..

Words written reflects ones a true nature..
I can see u r a nature person.

Nature person have talent of writings and poetry.

Good going..keep going..praises going.

WTG..awsome is a lil word..the best is best suitable.

i dont know how to express my happiness
your comments always touch my heart
if there is a word above thanks to express my feelings,i would have
used it much before
you are right...iam a nature lover
nature has the ability to heal every pain of ours that humans cannot cure

thanks a hundred times for such a beautiful comment

and today am extra happy you know why-one more day off college due to strike
yippee...
so one more day of fun in IF

will catch up with your posts soon...

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