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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aditipandey.adi

awesum update .. 👏

rey'z dream .. 😭
d way u descrybd taani'z luv waz superb .. ! 👍🏼

plz update soon ..
thank u 4 d pm .. 😊


aww thanks a lot dear , 😊
it really means a lot 2 me 😊
u r most welcome dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
well friends i have replied till page 21 ,and after that will reply soon , sorry friends 4 late updates n late replies but i m really busy these days 😭😭 n have loads of work , so hardly gets enough time 2 write or reply
sorry 2 make u all wait , n friends this update is especially 4 anagharaj n of course 4 all of u , d lovely wonderful people out there , who love this story a lot , and attached with it like me 😛 ...
dont go anywhere reading half update ,as rey will definitely get 2 know about taani's cancer but with some twists , IN THIS MEGA-UPDATE ONLY , DO READ TILL D END , AND THEN HIT LIKE AS WELL AS GIVE UR PRECIOUS COMMENT FROM HEART
~~~~ HUM MAR JAYENGE ~~~~
_~~~chapter -8~~~_(MEGA-UPDATE)
recap ~ in taani's room (swayam's back was facing d door ... so he couldnt see rey coming
swayam (was holding taarey diary ... with a hurt n piercing heart and crying eyes ) and looking at it on d page which has krishna ji's photo .and wishing. - please krishna ji koi jaadoo chala do , meri sabse pyaari behan taani ko theek kar do .. aur taarey ko ek kar do ... unki sachi mohabbat ko complete kar do ..krishna ji .. pls taarey ko milva do hamesha ke liye ..
chahe to meri khushiyan ,meri behan ko de do .. par usko ek nayi khoobsurat khushiyon aur pyaar bhari zindagi de do pleasse krishna ji ..please kisi tarah taani aur rey ko ek kar do ... jab unke dil ek dusre se jude hain to aapne unhe ek dusre se duur kyun rakha hua hai ,pls taarey ko ek kar do .. mat tadpao aur unhe .. mat lo ab aur unke sache pyaar ke tests .. pls meri behan ko theek kar do ,... plss koi magic kar do plss ..
while rey just heard all these standing still like a statue at d door of taani's room .. fully shocked , hurt , tears made their way through his eyes ...
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now ,
with heavy heart n tears in his eyes while stammering in between rey says - ttaannii , merii taani ko kyya hua hai swayam , aakhir aisa kya hua hai meri taani ko swayam , ?????????
(shocking swayam that someone that too rey listened his words n wishes 2 krishna ji )
swayam (in heart ) - hey krishna ji ye kya ho gaya , rey , rey ne sab sun liya , par taani maine to usse rey ko kuch bhi na batane ka promise kiya hai , ab main kya karun , kya rey ko sach bata dun , kya taani se kiya hua promise tod dun main , kya rey ye bardasht kar paayega ki uska sache pyaar ki zindagi maut se lad rahi hai , kya vo ye seh payega ki tani ko cancer hai , o god kya karun ab main , kaise kashmaksh hai rey ko sach bataun to apni behan se kiya hua promise todta hun aur apne best friend ko itna bada gham deta hun , par agar nahi batata to do sache pyaar karne wale ke milan main badha daalta hun , kya karun main ,but taani ke khatir mujhe rey se ye baat chupani he hogi , (he closes that diary and wipes out his tears deciding 2 hide d truth )
rey (tears flowing down his cheeks ) - swayam tu kuch bol kyun nahi raha , kya hua hai meri taani ko ????
he was taking steps towards swayam with heavy heart ,which was beating at d highest possible rate with fear of loosing his taani , his true love ...
(swayam back was facing rey n swayam , after wiping his tears he fastly bends n keep that taarey diary in d drawer of d nearby cupboard so that rey would not be able 2 see it )
n then he turns trying 2 pretend strong n normal but gets hurt 2 see rey crying just with knowing that taani is suffering from something , n dont know why n how taanis' pain was visible on rey's face
n swayam's condition n crying heart also not go unnoticed by rey ,
swayam (while looking here n there n try 2 say a lie , stammering in between ) - nahi rey , kuch nahi hua hamari taani ko aur nahi kabhi hoga ,
rey (caught his lie ) - acchha kuch nahi hua taani ko , to tu aise kyun bol raha tha krishna ji ko ki vo usse jaldi se jaldi thik kar dein hmmm bol na ???? pleasse swayam sach bata kya hua hai taani ko , vo kaise hai , kahan hai , thik to hai na ????? bol na swayam taani thik hai na ???????? bol swayam taani thik hai na??? kahan hai vo plss bata meri jaan nikal rahi hai soch soch ke , pure raaste main yahi sochta aaya ki tu ro kyun raha tha , aakhir aisa kya hua hai meri taani ko hmm????? 4 god sake speak something please,
swayam was not being able 2 speak anything , he was mum , dont know what 2 say n do , but fresh tears again formed in his eyes ,
rey (in a little loud voice ) - BOL SWAYAM , TAANI THIK HAI NA????????
swayam ( in a more loud voice) 😭😭😭- nahiii ... nahi nahii , TAANI THIK NAHI HAI REY , TAANI THIK NAHI HAI , KYUNKII .. USSE USSE (he was about 2 say cancer hai but somehow stops thinking about taani n her promise n again say a lie ) ... usse fever hai , ... yaa she is suffering from high fever . bas aur kuch nahi .
(and swayam hugs rey crying n crying )
rey also hug him back ,but he was a bit relief that nothing big . but dont know why his heart was still not convincing ( rey in heart ) ki kahin swayam jhooth to nahi bol raha , aur agar taani ko fever hai then why was he crying , n worried as if taani ko koi bahut badi bimaari hai , pata nahi may be he was just worrying too much 4 her , and may be swayam worries about tani a lot , and also cares 4 her so much that he was broken knowing that taani have fever , but agar aisa hai to taani kahan hai , par pata nahi dil keh raha hai ki jaise swayam mujhse kuch chupa raha hai , mujhse jhoth bol raha hai ,
rey ( but a bit relief temporarily ) - swayam tu sach keh raha hai na , ki taani ko fever hai bas , tu sach bol raha hai na ?????????????? kahin tu mujhse kuch chupa to nahi raha na
swayam (Was mum 4 a moment but says while stopping in between due 2 his sobs n also he was saying a lie again )- abb haan reyy . taani ko fever hai , vo bimaar hai , (slowly under his breathe ) bahut zyada bimaar , (now a bit loud ) - par mujhe krishna ji par pura vishwas hai ki vo taani ko thik kar denge , bilkul thik ,
hai na rey krishna ji kar denge na hamari taani ko theek ?????? hai na ????
rey (with little doubts )- haan kyun nahi karenge , bilkul theek karenge hamari taani hai he itni acchhi
then rey broke d hug
but then he looks around and shocked 2 see that it was taani's room with taayam n taarey pics
taarey photo on one side of bed and taayam's photo on other side
his eyes again filled with tears , he was surprised shocked , overwhelmed with emotions of love , pure love 4 taani and 2 see her true love 4 him , she also have all rey 's n taarey's photoes till now even when they r not together , n so a smile appear on rey's face
rey asks with happiness n tears of love in his eyes - swayam ye taani ka room hai ???
swayam (controlled himself , wipes his tears n says )- haan ye taani ka room hai
but a no. of questions strike in rey's mind and he says after coming out of d trance from their old memories n taarey universe , n from d taanis' ocean of love
rey (a little suspiciously )- taani kahan hai swayam ?????? aur kya vo abhi bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai , agar nahi to usne abhi bhi hamari yaadon ko itna sambhal kar kyun rakha hai ?????
swayam has no words now , he dont know what 2 say , and what answers he give 2 rey's questions
swayam (again says a lie ) - vo .. vo .. vo taani abhi jodhpur se bahar gayi hui hai kahin chachi ji ke saath ..
now more questions came in rey's mind
rey- kyun ?????? aur kahan gayi hai taani ???? aur tujhe kaise pata ki usse fever hai ????? aur tu aise kyun ro raha tha jaise ki taani kisi bahut badi problem main ho ???????
swayam ( tries 2 divert d topic n says looking here n there ) - arree rey ,chodh na , chachi ji hai na uske saath vo uska khayal rakh lengi aur mujhe nahi pata ki vo kahan pe hai , mujhe papa ka phone aaya aur main ye sunkar pareshan ho gaya ki taani bimaar hai , tujhe to pata hai ki main usse kisi takleef main nahi dekh sakta , aur uska phone nahi lag raha tha to maine issi tensions main tujhe yahan bula liya , par ab meri usse baat ho gayi hai , vo thik ho jayegi dont worry , tu chal neeche mere saath , kaka ne lunch bana liya hoga , chal aaja neeche , phir saath main lunch karte hain k
rey got sad that taani is not there n he cant meet her , he was yearning 4 her one sight , 2 see his lady love ,and somehow convinced with swayam's fake explanations but somewhere his heart was still paining dont know why ,
rey (Says a little hesitatingly ) - ab swayam , kya main thodi der yahan taani ke room main reh sakta hun please. ( his face was reflecting his heart's love n emotions ,that he so want 2 stay in taani's room 4 sometime 2 feel her , her sweet aroma , even if she is not there and so swayam had 2 agree)
swayam - ok , but pls jaldi aajayiyo neeche (and he goes from there but forgot his phone n that taarey diary there in taani's room . as he also couldnt control himself more ,all those lies was hurting him a lot )

(now rey is in taani's room moving towards a big photo of taarey on d wall left side of d bed and there were 2 more small photoes of taarey beside that n there were taayam's , and taani's photo on d other wall thats right side of d bed and there was big photo of taani's parents above d bed and there were collages of rey , swayam , taarey , taayam ,n gang on d wall opposite 2 bed as i told u earlier )

the left side wall that had taarey pics was somewhat like this
he walks towards d taarey photos while reminiscing taarey memories with tears of pain of separation n immense love 4 taani only 4 taani
(pls open d following song link in other tab before reading further)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1o8GPUGE1hE

(rey was hurt , shocked that there was a time when they both loved each other madly , infact now also they love each other so much , but there is piercing difference between that time n now , that is that once they were together , happy with each other , but now they r separated , in pain ,deep pain as
once they were each other's life , other half but now they r more like strangers , though they r still connected by the strongest bond of their love , their hearts now also beat only 4 each other but still in pain as they r separated , their souls r crying without each other , they pretend 2 be ok but actually they r not , they r INCOMPLETE WITHOUT EACH OTHER , they both r yearning 4 each other , they r craving 4 each other's love )
(song lyrics)
Heran Hai Hum Huwe Kyun Tum Ghaero Se.
Kaise Hai Gham Bolo Na Tum Honthoo Se.(2)

(no one is wrong , its just that d time is wrong , which has separated them , even when they both love each other madly , truly , heartily )

Na Tum Hoo Bewafa.
Na Mein Bhi Hun.
Phir Bhi Hai Hum Juda.
Mein Kya Kahoo.

rey (says while stammering in between ,n talking 2 tani's photo as if he is talking 2 taani , and taani is listening , actually she is listening by heart , n her heart is also crying with rey's tears ) - TAANI ... TTAANNNII , AB YE JUDAAI SAHI NAHI JAATI , KYUN HUI TUM , MERI JAAN MUJHSE JUDAA IS TARAH ?????? kyunn waqt ne , meri kismat ne tumko mujhse duur kar diya , kyun ?????? , SACH MANO TAANI , BIKHAR GAYA HUN MAIN , TOOT GAYA HUN MAIN , TUMHARE BINA ,(and starts sobbing ) 😭😭
(rey was touching taani's face in that photo , while crying , he is so badly hurt because of their separation , he has cursed himself n his destiny 4 loosing after winning his true love , they both r alone without each other even when they r surrounded by so many people , but their beloved is missing in so many people , because of that their heart is crying in pain of separation , their heart keeps searching each other , they both keep trying 2 feel each other just with each other memories n photoes , but still d things which hurts n break them is that they couldnot feel each other , they couldnot be together , their life has become more like a burden without each other , every day , every night every single second , is incomplete without their beloved )

Na Jane Waqt Ki Marzi Hai Kya.
Kyun Hai Meli Ye Dooriyan...

O Meri Jannn.
O Meri Jannaaa.
O Meri Jannn.
O Meri Jannn Hann Aaa.

Tera Bin Jo Din Aaya.
Kaate Na Wo Katt Paya.
Kami Teri Ghal Se Jati Hai.
Tera Bin Jo Sham Aayi.
Bharhi Dil Ki Tanhai.
Meri Aankhen Bharh Si Jati Hai.

Kuch Tum Mujh Se Kafa.
Kuch Mein Bhi Hun..
Hai Kya Is Ki Wajah.
Mein Kya Kahoo.

Na Jane Waqt Ki Marzi Hai Kya.
Kyun Hai Meli Ye Dooriyan...

O Meri Jannn.
O Meri Jann Han Han
O Meri Jannn Ooo Wuho Ohh...
O Meri Jannn Hannaaa Ahnn Ahan..

rey while crying - TAANI I LOVE U , ONLY U , tumhi ko mere dil ne sache dil se chaha tha , aur hamesha chahta rahega , sache pyaar ka sahi matlab tumhe jaana to samjh aaya , mujhe pyaar karke , tumse pyaar karna tumne sikhaya , tumhe maine pyaar kiya hai , sacha pyaar , bepanaah beintehaan pyaar , aur hamesha karta rahonga ,

Tujhe Dil Se Tha Chahah.
Tuuhe To Na Mil Paya.
Khushi Mujh Ko Chahal Se Jati Hai.
Mera Tu Tha Sermaya.
Tujhe Paake Na Paya.
Yaahi Batein Chupbh Se Jati Hai.

Tanha Teri Tarha.
Han Mein Bhi Hun.
Donu Hai Gham Zada.
Mein Kya Kahoo.

Na Jane Waqt Ki Marzi Hai Kya.
Kyun Hai Meli Ye Dooriyan...

O Meri Jannn.
O Meri Jannnaaa.
O Meri Jannn
O Meri Jannnaaa Han Aahhaa Aaa.

REY - 2 TAANI 'S PHOTO
TUM JAANTI HO , MERI JAAN KI
MERA PYAAR KA NAAM TAANI HAI ,
MERE ISHQ KA NAAM TAANI HAI ,
MERI MOHABBAT KA NAAM TAANI HAI
MERI ZINDAGI AUR USKO JEENE KI VAJAH BHI TAANI HAI ...
TAANI KA NAAM MERE DIL PE LIKHA HAI ,
TAANI KE NAAM SE HE MERA DIL DHADAKTA HAI ,
TAANI KA NAAM LEKAR HE MERI SAANSE CHALTI HAI
AUR VO TUM HO , SIRF TUM
TAANI I LOVE U , I REALLY DO
PLS COME BACK 2 ME , AND MAKE MY LIFE ALIVE PLEASSEEE
I CANT LIVE WITHOUT U , MY LIFE IS INCOMPLETE WITHOUT U , REY IS ALONE WITHOUT TAANI
and he sat on his knees while crying n sobbing in front of taarey 's photoes


ON D OTHER SIDE IN AMERICA ,
TAANI WAS ALSO CRYING DONT KNOW WHY , BUT SHE WAS MISSING REY SO MUCH , HER HEART WAS FEELING THAT REY IS CRYING, HER LOVE IS CRYING , TAANI TAKES REY'S PHOTO N KEEPS IT CLOSE 2 HER HEART AS IF TRYING 2 LOVE HIM BY HUGGING HIS PHOTO N KISS IT
TAANI (takes rey's photo in front n talk her heart out )- REY PLS AAP HAMESHA KHUSH RAHIYEGA CHAHE MAIN RAHOON YA NAA RAHOON ... (but unaware 2 her some tears fell on rey's photo n trails down from her eyes 2 cheeks on that photo , but taani cleans his photo and again kiss it n then keep it close 2 her heart)

on d other side dont know why but rey felt some relief ... he look at taani's photo and dont know why he feel as if taani is wiping his tears n asking him 2 not cry but smile by her hand actions and so a very little smile appears on his face seeing his cute beautiful lady love's photo but somewhere deep inside his heart , he was still crying missing taani a lot )
after sometime he gathers strength n get up , he thought that swayam must be waiting 4 him and he should go so he was about 2 go ... while turning n seeing taani's photo n taarey photos again

tring tring ,
someone's phone rang , but who's , it was surely not of rey's phone ringtone , he comes in looks around that from where d phone is ringing
.. there on d bed , he found it ,
he go n see that its swayam 's phone , but a smile come on rey 's face , his eyes lighten up seeing taani"s name flashing on d phone , (ya taani was calling swayam 2 confirm that swayam has not told anything 2 rey , and also 2 know how is rey , he is ok na ,as she was missing rey a lot , so he called swayam 2 know whether he is ok or not )
rey immediately picks up d phone but he was quiet , as he know that if he speak then taani might cut d phone , and no words were coming 2 his mouth , he was overwhelmed 2 see taani's and badly wanted 2 listen her magical n soothing voice
taani (thinking that it's swayam on d other side )- bhai , aapne rey ko meri cancer ki bimaari ke baarein main to nahi bataya na ??? vo aaye the kya jodhpur ???? kaise hai rey ab ??????? kya ... abb bhi vo mujhe yaad karte hai bhaiii ?????? aur aap abhi tak ro to nahi re naa meri pyaare cutu sweetu bhai ????????
rey was in utter shock listening d word CANCER from taani's mouth , he felt as if someone just snatch away d left little happiness (of taani's well being where ever she is) , from rey ... he felt his world , his heart , his soul breaking completely and d phone fell from his hands...while taani was speaking n confused getting no response - bhai .. bhaiii .. u there na ... what happen , ??????? why r u not speaking something??????

~~~end of this mega update ~~~
precap - quite emotional , rey shocked 2 know about taani's cancer ,
...rey will be reading taarey's diary ...
...
..reyam in america ...

ok friends ,first of all sorry if i disappointed anyone or make u cry but pls smile now , please big smiley 😊😊 4 me
and pls do like n comment from heart if u all wish or liked this update 😳
and sorry friends from now on u all will be getting very late updates due 2 my health n studies and also my exams r coming and i m not at all prepared ... pls pray 4 me ... that i score well in my final exams ...
i really need ur wishes ... n i hope u will understand n keep supporting me , please ... i may be inactive 4 sometime , today also i came as i got d super duper awesome news of taanis comeback ... (finger's crossed)
i really wish that vrinda di comeback as taani in d3 and give life 2 d3 again ...
really love my twinkling taarey 😳
TAAREY ROCKS !!!😊😊
TAKE CARE N PLEASE KEEP SMILING ALWAYS 😊😊😊
Edited by chinudolly - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
all the best on your finals
update was awesome
emotional, but atleast rey knows now about Taani's cancer
precap is amazing reyam in America
great atleast Taani will be able to fight now
please update soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update, this time also i cried. worth it. i really like this story
very much, i read it again and again.

next part is going to be more emotional and romantic as taarey will
meet hope so and rey will read the diary.

Take care of your health, study well and if u get free time, update.


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Posted: 11 years ago
AWSUM UPDATE...
u have written emotional part very beautifully...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update moni...

rey ka dard...uski feelings...u write it very well...

reyam scene was so emotional...

and rey watching taarey pics...hope esa d3 me bhi ho ...

rey ko pata chal gaya ...god...rey ka kya haal hoga??

update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mindblowing mega epi..egarly waiting 4 nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear u r such a brilliant writer pm me when u update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsome and emotional update... 😊

waiting for nxt part update soon,... ...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
so so so nice rey came 2 no abt taani's cancer.nd next rey gng 2 read taani's dairy waiting for tat update soon

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