ArHi Thd2: Jism Se Rooh Tak...Page 50 New [ASR know Truth]]

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Khushi,La,Payal and Anjali

Arnav, Arjun,Akash and Shyam

Eight friends, eights youngsters full of live who grew up together, sharing secrets, problems, worries and ups and down of life. Everything is blissful until that night'.

11th of May and the world of each friend turns in and out, up and down.

That moment defined many lives, but mostly of Arnav and Khushi.

Dreams vanished, Hearts got shattered and relation fell apart.

A decision was taken. And Arnav disappeared from Khushi's life.

Kyun Nazrain Teri Yun Anjaan Hain,
Ankhain hain meri bhi Nam ,
Kyun Pakar Bhi Tm Ko Khoya Hai,
Hum Kyun Na Ban Paye Hum,

After 5 years, they'll meet at La and Arjun's wedding,

After years, two hearts will beat for the first time together.

14 days are enough to fill the void of 5 years of separation and bring close two people who moved on in their respective life?

It's Hurts most a bitter lie that destroys two hearts and two worlds
or a hidden truththats allows to live once again denying the joy to someone else.

Kyun Khwabon Pe Tere Saaye Hai,
Dil Kyun Hai Tanha Mera,
Kyun Khamoshi Hai Zubaan pe meri,
Ashkon se keh paun na.

Jism Se Rooh Tak
Jab Tak Hai Jaan
This is not a mere a journey of love, is a journey of memories, discovering the dept of emotion and feeling, to be able to forgive and forget, to find and love yourself, to give a second chance at people..

But mostly, Jism Se Rooh Tak-Jab Tak Hai Jaan is a promise made by two innocent hearts. A promise full of love, joy, happiness, dreams, hope and trust.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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For some minutes I was still staring at the plaque in front of me and I do not take me long before my eyes fill with tears. I looked carefully written on the stone dwelling located on it:



Subhadra Devi Dhillon


A woman, a mother,

a wife and a special grandmother.

Always remains in the hearts of us all.

We will never forget you.

We love you.




I still remember the day she flew away, the day when we had the privation of the woman who all loved immeasurably.

A lung cancer took her away at the age of eighty years, but she had never been knocked down. She had discovered her illness two years before and she had never ceased to live, to fight to win, ever, and closed her eyes to fly in the sky with a smile.


Subhadra Devi was none other than Nani of Arnav, La and Aakash.

-Hello Nani - I began smiling at the picture as tears allowed me to do.

I had always called her Nani, because for me she was so.

- I miss you know? In all these years I've missed you so much. I have become a mother. For five years now you have become great-grandmother and you know that my two angels had in the veins your blood, because you know that those two are the sons of Arnav, I'm not here for saying this thing.

Yes, your favorite nephew became father. Today I am happy to say that the unexpected happened in my life was the best thing that ever happened to me and I am happy to share it with Arnav. I love him, but you know this too and I know that I am wrong not to tell him the truth, but is not as simple as you might think. He loves me too, I know, I understand it. He made me understand clearly what he feel, but it is not easy, I will not disturb his life because I know that after telling him the truth I would lose him. He'll never forgive me. Nani, you do not know how much I want you were here to give me advice and tell me what to do. We knew both well, but maybe I know what you would say. You'd look into my eyes and put the hand to my heart telling me to follow my heart, because heart does not make us wrong ever - I said to the picture on the tombstone, the photos seemed to look and read the soul - but how do I? It is difficult, very difficult to do so. In all probability in a few days I'll leave for Mumbai, I finally realized my dream, I became a famous journalist and had Arjun would be perfect, but perfection was never in my plans, so that's okay. Remember the promise I had made to you? I kept my promise and now that you are not here more, there is another small part of you in Subhadra Raizada and I very much hope that growing this angel can somehow look like you, I hope with all my heart - then I added wiping all the tears copiously output from my eyes.

I smiled at the memory of that promise made seven years ago, I had kept that promise the day I gave birth to my little angels: call my sons Arnavneet Raizada and Subhadra Raizada also known as Nannav and Surbhi.

- Nani, I got to go now. It's late and I had better go home. I do not know when, but I promise I'll be back to see you. I love you so much - I said the photos in the plaque before kissing it and then away from there.

I left in a hurry from the cemetery and got into the car heading towards home. I do not take me long time to reach my destination and when I arrived I noticed that in the garden there were two cars.

I did not put much attention since that night was the bachelorette party of La and that since it was already eight in the evening, most likely someone has come here.


I parked the car, turned off the engine for a few seconds and I breathed the smell of Arnav
Soon after I came out of the car and closed it, then I went in the living room where voices come from.

I reached it quickly and saw my children

- Hello mom - they both said in unison kissing me.

- Hello Jaanis- I answer and saw Avi and Arnav.


I smiled to them while I still pamper my children and that was when Avi saw me taking worried expression.

I could not understand what happened, but I turned towards the direction he indicate and that was when I saw them, realizing only then to who belonged the car I had seen outside.

Amma and Baba looking at me with an expression of surprise on their face. It did not take me long to realize that they had heard the call of the babies "mom. "

It was time to reveal to them that they have become grandparents.

Edited by DUGGUlicious - 11 years ago
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I came into the living room since few minutes and a deathly silence fell. The only thing that moved in that room was the eyes of Amma and Baba who watched me and the kids.

It has been a lot that I did not see them and they seemed strangely different.
I did not know really what to say, but somehow I needed to get started.

I put down the children who until then were in my arms and went to meet both hugging them.

- I missed you a lot - I said sincerely to both.

It was more than a year since I visited neither.

- For this you have taken care to visit us - Amma said.

- Baba what happened to your moustache? I remember you were so fond of it - I said to dad trying to divert the discussion.

- Lovely is responsible of it - Baba said.

Lovely was his new wife. He had met her after a few months when he moved and between two had been born the love.

Lovely had lost her husband a few years earlier because of a heart attack and what was left were two children and so much pain. Baba had helped her and after two years they had decided to get marry.

- And how did she do? - I asked curiously.

I had known Lovely during my very brief visit I made to my father and I liked her a lot, but above all she really loved my father and his sons were very nice to me.

- Let's say that Mom can be very persuasive when she wants - said a voice behind me.

I turned and saw Taanu, the eldest child of Lovely.

Taanu was a beautiful girl.
I smiled and ran to hug. I got to know her and I liked her a lot. Shortly after Lovely joined us in the room with Abhay and a few minutes later Bade Papa came in the room with Prakash, mom's new husband.

- Maybe it's better if we sit. There is something I have to tell you - I said to Amma and Baba - And you should, too, for that matter, by now, you are part of the family - Then added, turning to Taanu, Abhay and Prakash and Lovely.
They did as I asked and sat on the couch. Bade Papa left the room, while Arnav, Avi and the kids were still there.

- Children let's go to feed the fish - said Arnav inviting children to come out.

They followed Arnav in the other room while I looked at him and after him smile mimics a "thank you".
He smiled then walked to the kitchen.

- Well, there's something I haven't told you all these years - I began watching mainly Amma and Baba who were sitting nearby on the couch.

I saw Avi next to me put his hand on my shoulder and I smiled, happy that he was there. Then I looked and saw that his eyes darting between me and Taanu, and she did not do anything apart watching him.

The thing does not surprise me that much. Avi and Taanu were already known in the past. They had attended a course in computer engineering together when he and I still didn't know each other. They had become close friends, then they had back to their separate lives, but remained on good terms and sometimes they call each other, obviously only as friends. .

- Khushi jumps the fundamental news, I think that is clear to everyone as soon as we have seen the children. What your mother and I ask ourselves is why you have carefully avoided telling us this "detail"? - Baba told me without mince words.

He was angry, he really was and he had every reason to be.

I looked in both eyes and then began to tell the story from the beginning, trying to explain all the reasons that had led me to withhold the news.

- If you had told us, we'd never talked with the Raizada about it if that was what you wanted - Amma told me.

- But I had to force you to lie. You are still in good relations with them, you often come to visit them and often they come to you. I would have forced you to lie. And let's face it, Amma you will also be good at lying, but you Baba, you just do not it, especially with La. You'd spilled all over in a blink of an eye - I tried to explain.

- Probably, but I became a grandfather five years ago and I had no idea of it- Baba lamented, and Amma gave him a dirty look as inviting him to not be too hard.

- I know, I'm wrong, I made a big mistake, but there's one thing you have taught me since I was a child. You told me that children are the most precious thing for a parent, who would do anything to protect them, that everything would be justified if the end of it... all was to protect them and I did. I protected my children, I protected them from the life they would have if I had maintained relations with Chandigarh. They did not need Khushi from Chandigarh, but a new Khushi, a mother who only think of their own good and smile and not a mother who had to hide to cry every time she saw something that could make her go back in time . This city has too many memories, memories that I keep jealously to myself, but today I'm mature enough to come here and deal with things, I can not say the same thing a few years ago. I could not stay in this city and have relationships with people I had known, even with the Raizada, even though they are my family and God only knows how much I love them. All I knew I was giving the best to my children, even if it meant lying to them and to you, but I had to do it and I do not regret it because I know that I gave them everything I could, everything. I do not pretend you understand me, nor forgive me, I just want you put yourself in the shoes of my children to understand what they really deserved.
- I concluded hoping that those words were enough to make them understand my reasons.

Amma said nothing, she stood up, came towards me and hugged me.

- I am not judge you Titaliya, I could not do it because I too am a mother and I am proud of you because from what I've seen, you brought up two beautiful children. I lost five years of their lives, but that does not mean I have to lose any more - she said smiling at me - There's only one thing that I ask myself - She said.

- What? - I asked curiously, but happy as she had understood me and she do not hold a grudge.

- Do you think is it good for be to a grandmother at such a young age? - she asked giggling.

I looked at her and laughed closely followed by all others, Baba seemed to smile, but I knew him well to understand that he would not be as easy as with Amma.

Amma was always mom and I adored her for that.
When we stopped laughing, my eyes rested on Baba who looked at me with eyes slightly disappointed.

- Who is the father? - he asked me looking into my eyes.

- No. Nannav and Surbhi are just my children - I told him aware of lying, but it was neither the time nor the place to tell the rest of the truth.

- Nannav and Surbhi Gupta - he pronounced looking at me - In fact it sounds good - he said trying to throw a joke.

No Dad, Nannav and Surbhi Raizada sounds good, not Nannav and Surbhi Gupta I wanted to tell him, but I did not.

I smiled at him and he just looked into my eyes.

- Me and your Amma could help you, but you were always instinctive, and above all responsible, perhaps more than me and all and if you have taken this decision you have had your reasons. Every parent is acting in a certain way based on what he/she deem right for their children and therefore can not be judged - he told me smiling .

- Thank you for understanding me baba -I just told, but I could not help but I look at Baba.

He unlike Amma was still wearing an expression of disappointment and hurt more than any angry expression he might wear, but I would have anything to forgive myself.

Then I looked at the others and their smile I could easily perceive that they were on my side.
In the end we were all members of one family.

We stayed in the living room for a short time, then La appeared in the living room.

- Khushi is nine o'clock and you're still dressed like that? - La asked me almost shouting.

She looked into my eyes and I was shivering. If she was so excited for a bachelorette party, I did not want to imagine what I would expect on the wedding day.

- Sorry La, you're right, but I had to clarify things with my parents. Now I'm going to get ready - I answered, smiling.

She glared at me, then turned to Baba and gave him one of her best smiles before walking away in a hurry heading towards a destination unknown.

I apologized to all of them and then I got into the room to get ready.

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Edited by DUGGUlicious - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Khushi's parent got divorced. They both married again.

Baba is married with Lovely whose kids are Taanu-Abhay.

Amma is married with Prakash. No kids from this side ji.


And make a choice

As you know, this is ArHi Version of one of my Arjuhi's FF.
Now, I want your opinion about the ending of this FF.

I hope you want an happy ending...because it is the planning ji😆
But leave upon you the choice..

1 choice Chota Rastha:

ArHi will get the same version of Arjuhi's FF.
A twist happens and Kids get thier complete family.

Something like 15 chap. to conclude the FF


2 choiceLong Drive

Grab tissue paper and get ready for more emotional attachyar ji.
TRUST me ji

I don't know how many chapt. I'll need to end the FF then.



3rd choice Mixie Choice


Ermm...Will to FF the Arjuhi's version means happy ending and
then starting 2nd Season with Long Drive's choice option ji



Leave your choice number ji...

I'll update tomorrow
on the new thread

Thanks once again ji

Love
Parm


Edited by DUGGUlicious - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited everything ji :D
Don't forget to hit like button and comment as well ji


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Posted: 11 years ago
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I read ur ff in one go seriously I was sooo shocked that how can I miss such an amazing ff...but am happy that I found this and read it in one go and really loved it specially the kids hayeee they are sooo cute...
I will go with ur second choice ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Waiting for ur update dear...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for the new thread
nice update
loved it
waiting for arnav to realise the truth
they deserve a happy life
thnxx for the pm dr😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: hira_arnie

I read ur ff in one go seriously I was sooo shocked that how can I miss such an amazing ff...but am happy that I found this and read it in one go and really loved it specially the kids hayeee they are sooo cute...
I will go with ur second choice ;)




Heylo ji new reader,

welcome on board in this mad venture ji

Thanks for liking the FF. Means a lot for me ji😳

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