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Just caught up with this story. Amazing story, every emotion so nuanced & complicated, you reflect life so truly, its sad. Most of the time, the emotions are so realistic, its like living it oneself. The decisions Khushi makes are based on such down to earth factors, its believable.
This concept of moving on has been so poignantly portrayed, I feel it is your forte, however heartbreaking its result.
Every story is different from each other, thats another of your USPs. Initially, the grammar was a tad chaotic, but this story has it more ordered, therefore easier to absorb without those hiccups, in fact increased pleasure. Looking forward to the way it develops.
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