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Posted: 11 years ago





Thank you to each and every one who liked and commented. I am sorry this time i couldn't give reply to your comments, My apologies for that.

Here is the next part. hope u'll like this one too

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After lunch Dadi headed to her Room to have her noon nap, Geet and Anu went to the room to get ready for the shopping...

They got ready and Geet took all the necessary things for garv and they headed to the Mall. As Veer said that He'll come directly to the Mall...

Anu, Geet and Garv Reached the Mall and sent away the driver as Veer is going to be with them. Anu called Veer to know whether he reached the Mall or not. Someone patted on her shoulder. Anu turned around and found Veer standing there


Veer... Main aagaya hoon anu.

Anu... Bhai aap aagaye...chaliye andar chalete hain...

Veer... Arre ruko anu koi aur bhi aaya hai...

Anu ...Who else is coming...

Veer...Woh Dekh tere peeche...


Anu turned to see who is it. Maan and Rohan are een coming towards them.


Anu and Geet are surprised. Anu was happy meeting her cousin after long time.


She turned to Maan and asked Bhai aap aur shoping...and...hogaya mera shoping she murmured. She turned to Rohan and Said Hello.


Anu... Geet chale...


Geet Said OK and All went inside the Mall. Maan, Veer and Rohan followed them.


First they went to buy for Garv. Veer took Garv from Geet and Went to another side to see toys for him. Rohan and Maan are with Anu and Geet. Both were seeing Dresses for Garv. Geet does not agree with anu's choice and Anu doesn't agree with geet's choice. Maan ad Rohan fed with them and moved out of the shop. Maan called veer and told him to come to the coffee shop after they finished and inform Geet and Anu also.


Maan and Rohan moved out of coffee shop when Geet anu and Veer did not show up after some time.


Maan called veer.


Maan - Veer tum log kaha ho.


Veer - bahi pooch mat, main pagal hojaonga indono ke beech mein. Aap yaha aajao. Hum wohi shop mein hai.


Maan - Alright.


Maan and Rohan went to the shop and seen Veer standing there irritated. Maan asked anu whether thei shopping is completed or not.


Anu - No.


Maan - Ab tak tum logon ne kya kiya. Kuch kharida bhi ya nahi. Veer showed them the bag. Bag was full. Maan and Rohan looked shocked.


Rohan - Yeh bag bhargaya hai aur tum logon ko abhi bhi mann nahi bhara.


Anu Gave Rohan alook and turned to other side.


Rohan murmured . Gussa toh saathve aasmaan par hai.


Maan chalo hum chalete hain...inhe aur shoping karna hai.


Geet said in betweet. Jjiju Garv ko mujhe dijiye uska feed ka time hogaya hai.main Usse Doodh piladeti hoon.


Veer nodded gave Garv to Geet. Geet took the bag from Anu and looked around to see whether there is place to sit.


Maan looked at Geet and Said...Yaha nahi Geet. Caf pe chalet hain.Tum log bhi aajao .We'll have some refreshments. All nodded and started to move. Veer said He'll come after paying the bill. Maan nodded and left from there leaving Veer behind.


Maan and Geet were moving ahead. Maan took the bag from geet. Anu and rohan are behind. As they reached a corner Rohan pulled anu and closed her mouth.


Maan and geet reached coffee shop. Geet turned back and couldn't find anu. She asked Maan. Maan just smiled and lead her inside the coffee shop.


They found a corner seat and settled. Geet gave Garv his feed. Maan ordered cold coffee for both. The coffee arrived and they both started to have it slowly. Maan looked at Geet. She is looking at Garv and talking to him in baby language. Maan slowly got up and sat beside looking at Garv.


Geet startled and looked around to see if Anu, Rohan or veer are there. No one came.


Geet - Maan yeh aap kya karr rahe hain. Anu aati hi hogi. Aap jaakar waha bait jayiye.


Maan held her hand and said Geet Anu ahi nahi aayegi. Rohan usse aane nahi dega and winked at her. Waise bhi Darwaza hamare saamne hain, hum unhe dekh sakte hain lekin who hume nahi, jab who log aayenge toh main waha bait jaonga. Tabhi tak mujhe yaha baitne do tumhare paas. Geet slowly relaxed. He held by her shoulder and started playing with Garv.


Geet - Maan aapne Dadi se kya kaha. Woh itni jaldi kaise maan gayi.


Maan - Dadi abhi ke liye chup hain. Iska matlab unke dimaag mein kuch aur chal raha hai.


Yeh jaane ke liye wait karna hoga. Tumne muhe kyun nahi kaha ki tum KM aanewali ho.


Geet - Main aapko surprise dena chahhi thi. Lekin ulta aapne hi mujhe surprise dediya And pouted.


Maan - Tum Subah bohut pyaari lag rahi thi with ur red cheeks.


Geet stared at him. Aapko Mazak sooj raha hain. Jayiye main aapse baat nahi karungi.


Geet turned her face to other side.


Arre Geet gussa matho plz. Bohut mushkil se yeh waqt mila hai. Tumhe pata hai maine apni ek imp meeting cancel karke aaya hoon. Veer se hi jhoot bola ki Client ne cancel kardi. Plz Ab tum naraz mat ho. Sara waqt tumne manane mein hi chala jayega.


Geet turned to him and said Mujhe Bohut darr lagraha hain maan.Plz jaldi kuch kijiye.


Maan - Darr kis baat ka hai geet main hoon tumhare saath. Main jasmeet aunty se baat karunga, dadi se pehle and smiled assuring her that nothing can go wrong when he is with her.


He was disturbed with Veer's call. He said that he is with anu and rohan asked them to come to XYZ shop. Maan agreed and told geet he same. They left after paying the bill.


Geet suddenly stoped at a shop. There was a beautiful suit in the glass enclosers of the famous designer wear boutique. Maan sensed that Geet is not coming and turned to find geet staring at a dress. He smiled and said Lets Go and he took her in and asked the sales girl to show him the suit in the display. Sales girl went away from there. Geet and Maan are looking some more things. Suddenly an elderly lady came there and said to Geet. Main tum logon ko coffee shop se dekh rahi hoon, tum dono Made for each other lag rahe ho. She blessed geet and Maan and went away from there. Geet looked at Maan and blushed.


Maan - Dekho yeh aunty ko bhi lag raha hai ki hum dono Made for each other hain. Bas jinhe lagna chaiye unhe nahi laga.


Geet smiled at him, shook her head at his drama and took garv from him. Sales girl came with the dress. Maan asked to pack it and moved out of there after paying the bills.


Unknown to the there is a person standing there watching everything happened.


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Finally done. Give ur comments on this one too.


Ignore the Type errors Please.


Edited by -indu- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing di wah kya twist hai 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
😳 😳😳awww maaneet are in love..yeeepieee..love yaar..pls cont soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWESOME REALLY SUPER TWIST VERY NICE
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww ,,,,,maan nd geet to pehle se hi pyar mein hei made 4 eachothr dadii ko kyon nehiii dikha,,,,😛dono ko shayad veer ne dekha hei,,,,😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update
Maaneet love each other
This is the best part
Someone see them together
Hope jasmeet or veer
Cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update

so Maan and Geet are in love already 😃😃
starting me to yahi laga tha but the way they behaved in front of the family I was little confused as how they were in not love being known to each other for such a long time😕😕
lovely maaneet moments


but now one more suspence
Whoais watching Them
Can I guess-Is it Veer?


This is for you

For the pm and giving a lovely update

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow maan and geet already love each other😳 nice twist👏
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oh!!!!!!! toh maaneet are already in love😳
great!!!!!!
awesome update
loved it!!!!!!!

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