Hrithik_Deepika SS: Dare To Believe...Part 3[Piece of Paradise]

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

*My first attempt to write a Bollywood Fanfic*
Thanks Alina for the idea 😃

If you want, you can imagine a Telly Couple like

Arjun-Arohi

Arnav-Khushi

Maan-Geet

RK-Madhu

Asad-Zoya

They're mine

Abhinav&Tanvi
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*I do not take any credit for the creations that I'll be using ji.
Credit goes to original maker.*

Character

Mr. Abhinav Singh Khanna

Mrs. Tamanna Singh Khanna

Tanvi Negi

Jaane dil mein kab se hai tu

I just wanted to forget what I had done , for the umpteenth time .
It was always so .. a story without end .. a vicious circle from which I could not get out. I had finished work at six, and then I went to the bar under the office , where I was waiting for Tamanna, my wife with our friends to make a drink .

She is the classic woman that a man would want next to him: pretty, slender , with black hair and deep eyes , a stunning body and a legacy that rivals that of the undersigned , president of one of the most profitable companies in Mumbai.

My father had left the place when he realized that he needed to retire and spend more time with my mother, to travel, to relax .. to love each other in peace. It 's so , watching them together, I decided to get married too .. the main problem was just that I did not know what love was , I had no idea ... I did not know what it was like to watch a woman in the eye and lose the beat , feel the soft legs , instinctively smile at the thought of her.

Or maybe I knew, but I had set aside in a remote corner of my brain .. and especially to my heart had stopped to suffer , yet.
When I met Tamanna, she seemed to be the right girl for me, she was attracted by my charm , probably my money and I thought I could fall in love with her. Fatal error mine and probably dictated by haste and eagerness to have a normal life ! I do not love her and she loves me. Our relation is based solely on sexual relations which among other things , lately, which are not even satisfactory .

We never had children. But she says that we have time, we have to enjoy this independence and solitude because when we get older it will be impossible .. yet .. my desire to become a father is always constant , present, pressing. I know that deciding to marry a woman like her gave a big disappointment to my family, who always taught me to love and to put in front of all the feelings , mine and those of others, before you look at the whole rest , but I was disappointed with my sister Preeti and Nikhil , her husband and my friend for a lifetime.

They have always held true love , what you see in the movies and that makes you dream .. those movies that you, as a man refuse to see because trivial , obvious and absolutely idyllic .. and yet their love story was exactly a romance .. Perfect , special , romantic .. conveyed in a loving marriage that lasts for more than eight years and has produced two amazing children , my grandchildren Esha and Ajay , whom I love with all my might . And not only that .. I have not only disappointed them .. there were many other people with my marriage had voluntarily dismissed .. my cousin Varun , who quarreled furiously with me because he claimed that Tamanna just loved my heritage and that I was interested to her as a person, as a man ..
I realized too late that everyone around me had found his/her better half. Everyone seemed to have found happiness , that I could not find myself.

I was back in the car, after arguing with Tamanna who did not want to have sex with me, because she had just put the glaze cool , which according to her was very important to the end of the meeting with the modeling agency the next day. I was tired and angry, frustrated and disappointed .. from her, but especially from myself, from my naivety and stupidity.

I was back in the car .. to go to meet HER.

Preeti is played Shraddha Kapoor
Nikhil is played by Aditya Roy Kapoor.

Continue or not?

Edited by DUGGUlicious - 11 years ago

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Dark Charm

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Posted: 11 years ago

Index:

Part 1: Above

Part 3: Piece of Heaven

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 11 years ago

thats great u shold continuied soon its different tht u start ffs with bollywood chreaters

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537048

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Posted: 11 years ago

continue i wpuld like to read it

do update soon

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ayaazukideewani

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Posted: 11 years ago

interesting story

of course continue dear

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks for liking it ji...means a lot for me

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Dark Charm

@WildestDreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

My Piece of Paradise

It did not matter how many miles I had to go, to the other side of India, the world, the city .. she made me feel good .

She was my best friend at the time of high school, and I loved her secretly , every day of those long years.

I continued to love her, deep in my heart, so that probably should instill dig for days, weeks .. months to find it. I have built a city wall that hides a fort and locked tight with chains impossible to cut .. all this because she was my best friend.

In high school we shared the same lessons , because fortunately we have come together .. and we were soon inseparable. At first I thought of being able to declare her my feelings .. but then I retired . It was so nice to have a friend who for the first time did not look at how much money I had in my wallet , how much I was willing to spend on her, how many rooms had my villa or how many cars were parked in my garage .. she was real.

She was the first person I thought if I had an important news , the first I called to confide in , the first girl I wanted to kiss passionately .

She, the sweet , naive , sensual girl who spent whole afternoons in my living room to study and eat chocolate snacks .. for five long years.

She.That girl who sent me to f*ck off so many times that I lost the counts!

She. The girl that every time I had a problem , she could make me smile and find a solution to solve what troubled me .

For this, I did not want to ruin the friendship I had with her, a silly infatuation .. it because at that time I thought it was just that. Yet .. every time I saw her, something at the height of my stomach was vibrating .. something that said " Abhinav go , yaar .. She is there for you! "

I did not know how she felt .. she always showed her sweet side , special , tender only as a friend and I have always talked about her experiences . I was the first to whom she spoke .. It did not matter that there was Preeti .. she chose to talk to me, she has always chosen me. And I choose her, until Tamanna stepped in mt life.

In high school we were always together. We had smeared the wall at the back with an obscene drawing , only to take revenge of the punishment that the headmaster had given us because we had inadvertently started a war of food in the canteen .

Every morning I waited at the bus stop, I took the one before , to remain there to greet her with a smile when she came down from that four wheels. When my parents gave me permission to use the car to go to school every morning, I passed by her house, to accompany her and I did not care that she lived on the other side of the school , compared to where I lived .

It did not matter that his father was not even a simple clerk and that she was not of my same social class, indeed ...

She was very simple and had taught me to smile, to be myself . We had attended college in the same city , and we were able to maintain a strong and solid friendships in spite of different courses and different times completely opposite .

Obviously her father opposed with all his heart when we proposed to move in together [as friend] , but maybe it was better that way .. our friendship would not have last much , if not. She was in touch at that time with some Kashyap , Armaan Kashyap .. .I do not particularly like him , he always seemed to be angry with me and I could not find anything wrong against him.

To be right, I do not liked him, not at all .. probably because he told her his feeling and I was pulled back . When we graduated , fate distanced us . His father had been moved to a small town far from Mumbai .. Near Surat, in Gujarat.

She had to follow him, and the day she greeted me is still clear in my mind. She'd sent me a message asking me to join her at the Cafe next to my sister's store , it was an important talk. I smiled thinking about what other bullshit she pulled out that day and instead .. when I arrived I saw her eyes red and puffy from crying and I knew that there was nothing that was fine.

Flashback #1

- Hello Tanvi .. - My gaze was fixed on her , investigating in her eyes to know what could have happened .
- Hello Abhinav .. sit down .. - When she said that I did not like at all. The last time she had said such a thing was when she told me about the separation of her father and her mother, but then she was fifteen years old and she really seemed less upset.

- What happened? - I reached out to stroke her cheek. In my nature I have always been very affectionate , but she very cold , perhaps to guard against disappointments .. but I was good at it.
I had taught her to accept some sign of affection , especially from my part.

- My father has received a transfer .. - And these words made no effect immediately . I thought it was not so far away , I thought that she had chosen to stay here, to work where she started the internship as a child psychologist .

- Well I'll help you to stay here , in short, there is no need of your dad? We are quite capable of doing it .. and then there are my parents .. - She looked at me and her lower lip began to tremble , despite trying to smile . The eyes filled quickly with dew salt .

- I'm going with dad .. I can not leave him Abhinav , he is my father .. and he has done so much for me over the years .. - At that time a meteorite crashed on me. I was so stunned that I felt crushed to the ground.

- Tanvi .. - I rested a hand on her - Are you sure? - As a friend I had learned to accept her decisions , but I had always expressed my opinion .. and then she would have acted accordingly. She only nodded my question. - And then .. I'll help you with the move. In short, I do not like the idea .. but you will not go that far , right? - I needed that certainty . I needed to have some security to see her .. to talk .. to be able to be with her sometimes. Her eyes were closed as a tear ran down her cheek . I captured it immediately and chased him before it could leave the bad memories in my mind . I did not want to see her cry again.

-Surat ..Only three - hour drive from here .. - She smiles.

Flashback end #1

At that moment I did not really paid attention to the actual distance that there was .. but I did not care much. I had helped her to make the boxes , locking up all of her memories , affections, in the miserable cardboard boxes anonymous carrying only the words " Tanvi" to distinguish them from those of her dad . And then I offered to accompany her.

I had in my mind the way .. three long hours. I had helped to unpack her bags , the boxes .. staying with them a few days and then with the distressed look I had come home . Preeti immediately understood the situation , spent her whole evening with me, doing everything for me not to think about those few days spent in the company of Tanvi.

We contacted every day, or I call her or she calls me .. not a day passed that we didn't contact . Then there were the Christmases , birthdays .. we had done everything to see us .. until I decided to get married ..

I went to her, she already knew of Tamanna, I had known prior to my birthday and I had told her the proposal I wanted to do .

Flashback begin #2

- Abhinav .. So what brings you here ? - She smiled as the other side of the couch

And had picked up her legs to her chest and looked at me with a steaming cup of chamomile tea in her hands.

- I'm getting married Tanvi .. - I was thrilled to tell her everything. And in that moment, I saw something pass through the eyes of my best friend, who I thought was jealousy .. and instead only regret in knowing I was tied to a person forever .. and she would be set aside, because it was the right thing !
- I am happy .. Tamanna is a good girl and she also very beautiful! - Her eyes softened again and hugged me tight for a long time before wanting to know every detail of the proposal. And I only thought at that moment ..

" Tell me that you love me , tell me you love me! "

I was an idiot because I knew that she felt nothing for me , but I hoped that she could save me.

Flashback end #2

Which did not happen . I got married at the end of the year , in winter .. a ceremony very expensive .. that left me stunned and not at all satisfied .

I smiled and I showed myself happy

But I could not wait to get away from that place as soon as possible .

That day she came, she was in the front row to enjoy the wedding , next to my mother and Preeti . She rejoiced with me, for me and was the first to congratulate me after my parents and the parents of Tamanna. For me it was important to her .. and I would not have given up very easily. So the three years of marriage have passed between lies and deception .

I knew Tamanna was cheating on me with a certain Imran, who was also from very rich and of good family ..

Me on the other side, as soon as I could I climbed into the car and drove to Surat, until I get to my piece of paradise .. Tanvi Negi .

Edited by DUGGUlicious - 11 years ago

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Abhisa

@dattamaitry

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice update...

but if he loved her then why marry other,he should for once tell her...

anyway update soon...

wanted to know more...

thanx for pm...

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Russell

@russelskhushi

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Posted: 11 years ago

so what about her, is she married too?
we sometime are soo afraid of losing somethings that often we end up losling the most important thing in our life...