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Posted: 12 years ago
wow poo amazing update loved it👏👏
aww pre climax aa bhi gaya , waiting 4 it , just dnt want it to end 😭😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hayee. 😳 This made me emotional because only 2 chps r left. 😭
This update was sweet as always Poo. 🤗 u rock deary. 😎
Eagerly waiting for the pre climax update! 😃
Edited by -Amanat- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
this episode just became one of my favs
finally they couldn't resist n kissed😳 though the reaction after the kiss was not what i expected...but i am sure u r building on to something here

n i absolutely loved the nannies and cookie scene...they would do anything for their little angel...even kiss🤣

eagerly waiting for the next part

Lots of Love
Yashi
❤️🤗❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
Poo what to say another wonderful update. As usual, you ace the romantic write up's.👍🏼👏.
Loved the guru mohan nanhi scene. Their fights and specially their make up by kissing.

And MM scene what to say its damm awesome as usual👍🏼👏.

Pre climax already😭. Any how its good to have a definite start and end without stretching it much. But please do come with a new FF fast, will be waiting for your FF😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Poo...this was a super duper part.😳❤️ Just loved all the things in it.
Megha & Mohan's intimacy, ☺️nannies fighting for attention of their angel, their Kiss 🤣

Waiting eagely for the next part...anti climax though...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hiyaa Kirthi 🤗!!! Yeah, its movie time for me with your bollywood review 🥳! Thanks to it dearie!!! Nail biting 😲?? Please darling, save the nails for the colorful nail paints 😆!!!

Heyy Purvi baby 🤗! Hope the ointment works well 😃!!! Though not sure whether you still need it!! 😆

Hiyyaa Diya 🤗!!! Very right Mothers' Day and Kiss Day go hand in hand in the way Mohan says it out for us !!! Yeah Guru's kissing has been long due!!! Ever since I have seen his pouting face when Mohan didn't wish him Holi, first, I had wanted Mohan to kiss Guru for his child tantrums 😆!!! I got the chance now 😉!!! Hope you didn't mind it!!! A peck on the cheek is ok darling 😳! Cheer up girlie!!! MM will be getting together!!! That's predictable and how they do it? Hope I have kept it interesting for you!!! *Poo fingers crossed*

Hiii Shivangi 🤗!! MM's love life is beginning now! So its not an end, dearie!!! 😃

Hiiiya Amanat 🤗!! Thanks for enjoying the chapter!!! Hope you the like the finishing as well!!! 😃

Hiya Yashi 🤗!!! Hope you weren't disappointed too much after reading their reaction post kissing!!! You make me nervous with your expectation for the buildup 🤓! Not sure whether it is upto the mark, but I have tried my best!!! If not please bear with it dearie 😊!! I will keep it as scope for my improvement in future! 😃

Hiya Pravesh 🤗!!! I know you are too kind and generous for writing such wonderful words for me 😃!!! Intense romantic is not my kind of writing, and I'm glad that you enjoyed this subtlety 🤗! Oh boy, stop asking that 😆! You make me fly high!!! I better be grounded! 😆

Hiyaa Asmita 🤗!!! Super Duper Thanks dearie!!! Glad you enjoyed them all!!! 😃

Hiyyaa Lovely readers!!! 🤗
Hope you enjoy this chapter and not find it dragging!!! I needed the delay to get my closure as per my visual!!! If not I could have ended it here, without spilling it over till Friday!!! Hope you don't find it as a filler chappie 😆! Feel free to write anything that you felt about the chapter!
Edited by Senpoo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter Twenty Four

Megha clad in her casual jeans and t-shirt, was standing near Mohan's bike, with color palette in one hand and a paint brush in the other. The scene of her encounter with Mohan in the site flashed in front of her.

She was lost thinking about him, long after he had gone from the scene. She felt that something right and perfect just happened. She lingered in those special moments. She felt her lips fluttering in explicit emotions. She touched them to savor the feeling.

"I know I could never have forgotten a feeling like that!" She said to the empty walls

Megha hadn't doubted his feelings for her even earlier. But she didn't understand him well enough in many of his reactions. Now, his soft plea in the form of his kiss, just confirmed everything about his silence. From the time he had left Alibag till they met back in Mumbai, she understood every quiet response of his. If she was ever sure about something then it was Mohan's feelings for her. He had expressed his desire for her, aesthetically and gently.

It was his silence that gave her the time that she needed. He hadn't pushed her into this decision but took her there, slow and steady, in his own composed way. And even in his distance with her, he maintained his perseverance and dedication for her. She didn't think she can repay him for his kindness and tender affection, he had been showering on her, in his own way.

"Is there any way that I can acknowledge my love for him? Not exactly in words!" She thought aloud

Neya walked in while Megha was wondering about her confusion.

"WOW! That's beautiful" Neya's eyes fell on the painting on Mohan's bike

"Haven't you seen this earlier?" Megha asked casually

"Ever since bro came back from Alibag, he had hidden this like a treasure" Neya's eyes twinkled in mocking smile "And now I know why!" She added

If Megha was blushing already, lost in her thoughts about her confess, she was now trying hard to hide her extreme reaction to this adoring news.

"So, what is the plan?" Neya asked

"About what?" Megha was confused

"I heard you talking to yourself" Neya whispered in her ears as if the empty walls of the garage were listening to them

Megha's blush increased adding to her beauty. But she was thankful to her new friend who was making her mood light. The pressure in her was fading slowly. For the next few minutes, they made their silly girlie talks. Neya confessed her innocent mischief from her teenage days. Megha wondered whether Neya had grown out of her sweet adolescence but didn't tell her.

As Megha enjoyed their chit-chat, an idea formed in her mind for her avowing the truth. She thanked Neya for her wonderful company and inducing the thought she was looking for. Neya was confused but accepted her compliment proudly.

"I know I bring magic at times" Neya said with pride

"That's for sure!" Megha gave an endearing hug to her chirpy friend

***

Mohan was restless, the whole night after coming back from Megha's house. He hadn't met her after their kiss and that made him crazy. Even if it was to throw her temper tantrums, he desperately wanted to feel her presence near him. He imagined an angry or annoyed Megha fighting with him for his behavior.

No I love you, No flower bouquet, No dinner date! You straight away jumped into a kiss?' He envisaged a picture of Megha throwing her frenzy of rage at him. He grinned at his own thought.

With continuous thoughts revolving around her, he wanted to call her. But he stopped doing that when his eyes fell on her picture in his phone contacts. He remembered clicking that picture of hers when she was involved in her work at his site. Every time he watched the picture, his heart skipped a beat and wanted to see her face in real. He suppressed his urge to call her; either for fear of going mad hearing her voice or for the concern of not getting a response.

Mohan's mind wavered into the special moment of his intimacy with Megha. He hadn't waited to see her reaction to his action. He couldn't let him stay there any more than he wanted. The moment his lips touched hers, he had lost his control and was amused by the feeling it triggered. With her silent acknowledgement she had made him feel like her Prince Charming. He became nervous in that moment and didn't know what else he would have done, if he had continued to linger on those moments.

While he waited for the morning sun to grace his wide opened eyes, it was like an eon. He dressed to impress and found it strange for his own. He smiled at his own image on the mirror. As he rushed through his breakfast time, Jiji watched him intensely.

"Are you ok?" She asked

He was confused by her question because his aunt had always seemed to understand his moods. "I think so" He said without giving much thought

"I don't think so" She said

There she got me, he thought. But he simply smiled at her.

"Whatever it is, it is going to be fine for my sweet Monu" She responded with her own sweet smile

"Darling, what will I do without you?" He hugged her affectionately

"You can't do anything without me as well, bro!" Neya intruded their peaceful moment

"Thank you, Sweety! You are my magician!" Mohan petted her softly moving his hands on her head

"Do you want to see this?" Neya showed her phone to him

"When did you click this?" He was surprised to see her holding the picture of the painting from his bike

"That's your smart sister!" Neya lifted her shirt color in pride "But you are not as smart as me" She shrugged her shoulders in mocking annoyance

"What to do? Mom must have saved all the smartness for you" Mohan chuckled

Suddenly he was relaxed and did not want to rush things. Neya proved to be a stress-buster to him

"And she saved all the arrogance for you! I don't blame Megha for hiding from you" She laughed

"Is that what you described about me, in your reference letter?" He choked on the juice he was drinking

"You must be smart to have kept yourself neat in front of her. So, when does she get to see the real you, bro?" She smirked in triumph

"She is brave! She can handle me" Mohan smiled in response

"She better. And she is talented too! Isn't the painting awesome? I had asked Megha to do something like that on my scooty too" Neya told

"Oh!" Mohan again was lost in the thoughts of Megha

"By the way, did you ask for some changes? She was working late last night" She informed casually

"What changes?" Mohan jumped out on his chair and grabbed her phone to check the picture

The painting on his bike now had the cage door opened up and another bird waiting outside. Mohan grinned. His happiness didn't find its bounds.

"You are an angel!" He pecked his lovely sister on her cheek and rushed out.

Mohan stared at the bright colored painting on his bike, which was smiling at him. He traced his fingers smoothly over it that expressed happiness in its every single color. He adored the changes Megha has done to it. He wanted to ride straight to see Megha but decided to meet her alone after work. He took an exciting ride on his bike to his office.

***

From the moment Mohan landed in his office, he was bound with endless meetings and reviews of the latest deliverables. He couldn't spare a moment of solitude which he needed badly before seeing Megha. He was in a meeting with his business share holders, when Megha entered his office. When she walked she heard him being tough on them. His arrogance in his work was very evident to her, just as she had imagined he would be in his business world.

When finally Megha was able to see him in private, it seemed like ages since they talked to each other. Though he was in a different mood his work brought into him, the moment his eyes met hers, he sensed a shift in his state of mind. They stood smiling into each other's eyes, sharing a moment that sent their thoughts in similar directions. They immediately missed the feeling of being intimate and the belonging together. He wanted to say something and she wanted to say something.

"Megha"

"Mohan"

Their lips curved in a smile when they addressed each other at the same time.

"Am I bothering you?" She asked

"You bother me very much" He meant differently

"I will not take much of your time"

"Oh really?" He mocked a questioning look at her

Mohan walked towards her and they stood within arm's reach. She looked gorgeous in her simple jeans and bright colored tops. He longed to take her hand in his but controlled his cravings. He waited for her to say something and when she didn't he filled the gap.

"I saw the change you have done to the painting on my bike. It's beautiful" He said wanting to talk to her something

"My work needs happy clients" She said with a smile

"That I am" He smiled back and asked "Do you want anything?"

"Yes, you" She said without thinking

He was taken by sweet surprise. He wanted to be anywhere but there in his office cabin. He shared his beautiful grin with her and asked "I meant, anything to drink. Tea or Coffee?"

"Oh... t..that?" She stuttered. "I have something to say" She said firming her voice. When she finally readied herself after a pause, she added "But before I could finish what I have to say, I may be lost in my own words. So I wrote something for you instead"

She handed an envelope to him. When he took it from her, their hands touched, passing a shiver inside them. He gave a confused look at her and then the letter. He started to open the envelope.

"P..Please don't" She interrupted "Please don't open it in front of me. Open it after I am gone"

Mohan never once cut into her talking or thinking. He just observed her saying through words or through her eyes or through her entire body. He decided to wait before he said anything at all to stop her.

"For whatever you decide, remember that these past few days meant a lot to me. Thanks. And this is for you" She pushed a gift, wrapped in a red ribbon into his hands.

With that said and done, she gave a quick hug to him, turned and walked away. Mohan didn't even find the time to hug her back. If he had had it, he wouldn't have let her go. Before he realized she was gone.

"Megha" He called to the empty room where he stood alone, frozen

He opened the letter and saw that it started like

"Dear Prince Charming..."

Edited by Senpoo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
poo so sorry.. couldnt reply yestrday..ws feelng very sad nd deprssed...
so, finally gt tym 2 complimnt u on both d chaptrs... i lyk it... KISS nd LETTER... bt one thng dat i dnt lyk in ur chaptr 23 z d wrd PRE_CLIMAX"... dis z my frst story on d forum... i dnt wnt it 2 end so early.. bt i guess i hv 2 accept it too...
plz go on wid more stories...
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Posted: 12 years ago
well done poo...👏.
Mohan -Neya ..n megha -Neya scenes are tooo good ...😃
megha gave Letter to mohan ... n gift n hug...wowww ......
I can imagine mohan 's surprising expression..after hug... 😳
mohan is such a prince charming......missing him again after this lovely FF...😭
waiting for LAST epi...😊...😔..
all the very very veryyy best for LAST epi...👍🏼.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poo...🤗 dhak dhak...❤️ the pre climax is here...
aww...MM ka Yaadon mein kitni dafa...wala moments😳 I love it whn MM thnk abt each other akele mein 😳
indeed journey of MM frm Alibagh to Mumbai was sum thng evn v shall cherish Poo...
Mohan ko Megha ka har ek cheez anmol treasure hai Neya behena 😎
Megha n chirpy Neya ka bond must say thr is magic in thr moments
😆😆😆Mohan ka imagination...thnking abt Mirchi ka reaction 😳😳😳can imagine Monu ka million dollar wala expression ☺️[beautifully written Poo👏👏👏]
Monu toh full on Tere is ishq mein tere ishq mein. hum tujpe mitte ha tujpe mare. Hum Tujpe mit gaye hai mar gaye. Na bole tum na maine kuch ... aww...Poo I can just n just imagine Monu in ths situation n the way he is emoting his feelings I can c it rite in front of me nw☺️
aww...Monu dressing up [ remembering the yellow shirt scene he dress up in front of mirror n holds a flower bouquet]☺️
Pari maa...jiji always a chill pill to our Monu.😃
Neya is real stress buster she made the scenario cool 😃
😆😆😆 Megha is brave n talented...getting Monu to dance floor n itne handsome ladke ko pasaliya😉
wow...finally cage is free open 😛 for love birds...aaj phir jeene ki tamanna hai...
tere ishq mein..tere ishq mein playing in BG I can hear Poo😃 MM aamne saamne..derena derena...😳
MM ka unspoken love ...thy say just through thr eyes😳
loved themomnets b/w MM n hug by Megha as if it was the final hug she wanted to give 😉n Mohan nvr wanted to hug back n let say bye ...[Poo...yet again beautifully written👏👏👏]
Megha ka gift ??
Poo is it gonna be beautiful complete Portrait of Megha ka dream.. a dream which she is daring to leave in reality ...Megha , her Prince charming n thr nanhi Cookie !!
or vl it b incomplete portrait which Mohan vl complete, fill colors n turn into reality.!!! 😕
Poo...👏👏👏
am waiting ..u have kept the suspense nw...wow...loved it am waiitng😃😃😃
Edited by raokrithika - 12 years ago

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