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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome is the word..!!! 😊
Breathtakingly bful...!!! Ahhh... m at loss of words...!! 👏
loved everything in the last four chapters... sorry for posting a comment now.. but seriously poo, ur ff is irrestible...!!!
But alas, mrw is the last day...!!! What to say... every good thing has its end so does ur amazing ff... thats the only line that can console me as well as every other reader out there...
Sad that it is ending.. But happy with a hope that you would vei soon come again with yet another magnificent story draping these loveable characters... I am gonna miss it more than i miss season2... and I seriously mean it...😭
cookie's sweet murmurs. guru n mohan's nanny fight😉, neya and guru's sweet yet salty nokjhoks, our sweet jiji and most importantly Mohan n Megha's respectable love which is blossoming with each passing day...😊
Ahh... how nicely you have maintained the simplicity and essence of these characters... just WOW...👏

ahh... u are awesome poo...👍🏼


now coming back to the chapters...
what to say... a smile adored my lips all through the reading...
sometimes I blushed too... Imagining megha and mohan's intimate scene... the kiss...😳
oh gosh.. I bet you too would have blushed while writing the update...!!!😉

and the ending has made me all the more desperate... Dear prince charming... dash...
ahhh... you have trapped me in a dilemma poo... the chapter grip was so amazing that i cant wait for tomorrow and while knowing the fact that mrw gonna b the last day of this wonderful story, i seriously dont want the day to dawn soon...😕

Anyhow, loved it poo... and waiting...!!!! 🤗

Edited by champ07 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hiyyaa Jia 🤗!!! Glad that you liked the chapter!!! And thanks a lot for your sweet and lovely words for the FF!!! 😳😃

Hiyyaa Poonam 🤗!!! Excited to know that you found them all perfect and excellent ☺️!!! Very happy to have made it right for you all!!! Thanks for the best wishes, dear! 😃

Hiyyaa Shivangi 🤗!!! Thanks dear!!! I know any ending is difficult to digest!!! Cheer up girlie 🤗! Sure will let you know if I come up with something else!!! thanks for the ask! 😃

Hiyaa Yashi 🤗!!! Having the unexpected delivered in a good way, makes me real happy!!! Thanks dear!!! 😃

Hiyaa Pravesh 🤗!!! Glad that you liked it as always!!! Hope you enjoy the finale!!! 🤗

Hiyaa Champ 🤗!!! Awesome Thanks to you!!! Thank God, you were really not at loss of words 😆😉!!! Thanks for the big comment, baby 😊! Glad to have made it irresistible!!! You missing it more than SSN 2 😲!!! That's BIG for me ☺️!!! *Poo is blushing* You are too kind to me, dear !! Yeah I blushed at MM doing the act ☺️!!! I love them more and more every day as I pen the scenes for them ❤️!!! I am excitedly happy with all those nice words written by you!!! And more happy to have made you gripped to it!!! Thanks a lot dear!!! 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hiii Lovely, Awesome, Amazing Readers!!! 🤗
As much as I enjoyed writing the story I enjoyed reading every comment that I received from you all 😃! Every one of you are a lovely and awesome ! You are wonderfully kind and generous with your comments!!! It is a delight to write for a beautiful audience like this 😊! Though many of you know from the writing that I lack the experience, I must appreciate your efforts in reading and enjoying the essence in your own way! I am glad to have shared this story with you all, as I myself enjoyed the characters and the events around them after penning them ❤️!
I am really flying high with all those niceties you have mentioned in every comment of yours 😳☺️!!! I couldn't have written something just for the sake of writing. You all made it worthy of my effort and I too have the responsibility to make sure your effort of reading is also worthy of it 😃!! I have to put my best into it even if it takes all my efforts. And so I did!!! If only I could enjoy my work then I will be satisfied enough to share it with you all to make you enjoy. Glad that we all enjoyed the efforts as a team!!! 👏👍🏼
This journey of mine here is very sweet and memorable! Thanks to you all, for making it so! I learnt many things during this experience - be it while thinking for the FF, penning down the FF and reading your adorable comments for the FF! And I will never stop learning and striving for betterment, if it means to keep the enthusiasm alive among us all!!! 🤗
If I come up with something to tell or share with you all in the form of a FF, then sure I will. Your ask means a lot to me and I would want to make my return gift mean as much to you! 😃🤗

A fantastic sentence written on every Japanese bus stop.
Only buses will stop here - Not your time;
So Keep walking towards your goal! 😃
Let us keep going on and enjoy the journey while doing it!! That way we don't have anything to lose either we reach there or not! 😃
Edited by Senpoo - 12 years ago
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Chapter Twenty Five

"Dear Prince Charming" The words flew into his ears through Megha's own voice. Mohan felt her whispering those phrases, as he read the letter. He felt the jitters inside him, as his body still lingered on her quick hug that left her warmth on him.

I would like to take leave for the next two days. Please consider this leave letter for approval of my absence, boss!

"W...What?" Mohan uttered out in a loud voice as he continued

I know you must be shouting through the empty room! Just to get you relaxed. Must be an effect of Neya on me!

Mohan of course relaxed and laughed out loud at those lines. He wondered how she had managed to ease him out with her simple mischief. He slackened himself onto his chair and continued to read.

Do you remember the day we met on the small lane of Alibag? I know you do but do you know that I remember that day as clear as if it happened just now? And how it affects me every time I recall it? May be, you know! But not as much as you think so. Do you know, Mohan? How much you interested me! How much your smile excited me! How much anything that matters to you mattered to me!

Open the gift then you will know it!

Mohan opened the gift and was sweetly shocked with what he found there. It was a framed picture of him! A pencil drawing portrait of him! Megha had even used a color for the portion of his shirt; the same color that he had worn on the day of their meet in Alibag! His startled expression just as fixed as it was on him when he ruined her painting!

Mohan swallowed hard trying to compile his state of emotions. A shiver of joy unfurled his senses knowing the depth of Megha's love for him. She had beautifully expressed it. How his face had been imprinted in her mind and heart; how he had affected her from the moment they laid eyes on each other; how she had been thriving to let him know what her heart wanted.

He was dazzled with pleasure and his eyes glared from the tears of happiness. He wiped it off to resume the letter

I know you will open the letter first. Right now my thoughts are filled with you, without holding any reservations. I love to know why I feel that you see only me when you smile at me; I love to know why I feel that it is all I that matters to you at those times; I love to know what is on hold in your present, my present and our future together! I love to know why I love you by loving you for the rest of our lives!

Mohan paused his reading. He was engulfed with her emotions and his own. He took a deep breath and realized that he wasn't breathing at all, through her letter. He missed her so badly.

I know it has become too sentimental for you to handle. Let me ease it out for you. We have a business to deal with, stranger! I realized that you truly care for me and not sympathize with me was when I found out that you had paid the first payment of the house. I didn't feel offended about it, as I thought I would be. This showed that I have loosened my guards around you and not being judgmental. But that doesn't go to say that I will enjoy your services without repaying it. Here is the amount returned with interest, to even out our deal.

Mohan found another envelope which had a cheque for some amount. Also there was a detail of the amount calculation. His shoulders shook hard as he laughed at the note there. Megha had used less interest quoting his rental and food charges during his stay, as deductions.

"What a woman!" He thought aloud laughing at her humor but still holding a pride for her self-respect

Now that you have laughed enough about my trading skills, can we get back to our business, Prince Charming? I mean my Prince Charming! And now you know where to find me! We will be waiting! I am not waiting for you to come back and make us happy. But I will make ourselves happy waiting for you. But don't forget that we will be missing you till then.

When Mohan finished the letter, he thought he couldn't be in love any more than this. He felt like flying in the air and that's what he did as he sped up on his bike to Megha's house. As he neared her house, his instinct told him something else. Without even arriving at her house, he veered off course and headed towards Alibag.

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Mohan walked into Megha's house in Alibag. The first sight that invited him was the revamped image of their darling' painting. He stood in front of it, admiring its flawed beauty that revealed the beauty of life; their own life. It showed how imperfectly perfect life could be with simple things to live for.

His eyes then fell on the pretty form of the woman of his life. Megha was standing in the middle of the room facing him. She was wearing an oversized gown that did little to hide her beauty. He then remembered that it was the one she was wearing when they crossed their paths for the first time in the same place.

He felt a pride for the woman who was gentle enough to care about him and strong enough to keep herself away from him. He closed down the distance between them. All the while he didn't take his eyes off hers. He didn't hesitate to do what he wanted to.

Mohan's arm slid around Megha's waist and his lips touched her ears. His warm breath shivered her sending fluttering inside her. She turned her face away to escape it from the origin, which brought her lips in contact with his. His soft kiss was giving and demanding the pleasure. The stormy rushes of sensation made her gasp, and for wanting of balance, she rested her hands on his chest. Feeling his grip tightening around her waist, she clung tighter to him. He shoved his other hand into the hair at her nape, holding her closer to him, making their body feel just like one. Both were leaning into each other falling victim to one another.

When they finally managed to lift their heads, they were flushed with emotions. He rested his forehead on hers, lingering to those sweet sensation running through him. She licked her lips cherishing the moment for her own.

"So..." She started in a husky voice "No I love you, no flowers, and no gifts. Straight into a kiss?" She asked teasingly

He remembered his own thought of her asking the same words and chuckled. He kissed her cheeks.

"I think we have long crossed those formalities!" He whispered into her ears making her blush all over again

She hugged him bracing her hands around his waist, resting her head on his chest

"I will never let you go again" She said amidst her sweet smile

He hugged her closer feeling her tender warmth "I don't want to go. I never did. I love you so much, Megha. I didn't expect to see this day in my life. I wake up almost every day with a dream like this"

She lifted her face to look at his yearning eyes and spoke to them. "I promise you that I am real. Now on I will make sure that all your dreams come true"

Mohan looked doubtfully at her determined say and asked with a teasing tone "Are you certain, this is what you want? If you meant all those things that you said, then this is the last chance you will ever have to get rid of me!"

Megha pretended to give it a thought and replied as if she was helpless "Then I suppose we are stuck with each other forever!"

They both laughed. He pulled her closer to him, possessively.

"I am all ready for it, Ma'm!"

"You better think about it! I know you don't like what people do after getting drunk. I am sure you haven't liked mine and even may have disliked me at that moment" She said in a mocking serious tone

"I have never seen anyone being so sweet when being drunk!" He gave his sexy smile "And I really wouldn't mind getting you drunk again, if you want to be" He winked and kissed her again as if to compensate for her asking, when she was drunk

"Are you hungry?" Megha asked when they broke the kiss

"For you? Yes" Mohan didn't know what he was doing to her with his sexy flirt

"For food!" She said trying hard to ignore his impact on her

"Are you cooking?"

"May be!"

Just then Mohan felt someone pulling his pants. He turned down to look at the sweet offering awaiting him. Nanhi was smiling at him with her little soft hand extended towards him. She was holding a couple of cookies in it.

"Cooo-kooo"

If Mohan was mesmerized by the impact so far, he didn't know what he was going through now. He touched his chest taking in the serene scene into his heart. He carried the little joy of bundle into his arms and kissed her soft chubby cheeks.

"You sure are my lucky Cookie!"

Megha joined their kiss, making the scene complete. With one hand around Megha and the other holding Nanhi, he didn't know whether he had any space inside him for any more happiness.

Mohan-Megha love journey begins... 😃
You will never be happy if you continue to search for what happiness consists of. Happiness is not for others to see but for one to be! Don't wait around for other people to make you happy. Any happiness you get you've got to make it for yourself.
Edited by Senpoo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Perfect ending👏⭐️
Loved megha's letter to mohan and thier conversation⭐️

it was a very beautiful F.F... will surely miss it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww... Every chapter is written so well... And d last chapter is just awesome... Mohan's reaction to Megha's letter are written so well... I could actually imagine his expressions... N Megha's letter was just too gud... Loved the whole story..going to miss these mohan megha guru jijibua n lul nanhi so much...
Edited by tanvi10476 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
What else can we ask for an ending than to continue the next chapters of their life.
Loved the complete episode.
I am always in loss of words to write about your stories.
Hope you dont mind it.
Could really visualize the family frame with all three of them.
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Posted: 12 years ago
after reading the confession latter...'' RUN-- MOHAN-- RUN''😃
Mirchi madam mere sweet monu ko running champion banake hi chodegi...😆
I can imagine mohan 's excitement when he was riding his super bike ...
finally our super hero reached megha 's house.....
Mohan megha ..awww 😉...n ...kiss...😳
awww sweet cookie...with his parents ... a perfect family pic...😊
MOHAN MEGHA 'S LOVE JOURNY BEGIENS...❤️... N A BEAUTIFUL... INCREDIBLE MEORABLE FF... FINISHED...😭
poo... happy things sirf kuchh dino ke liye hi kyo hoti hai... ? 😕
this will be last time jab tum hamare cmmnts ka reply karogi...😔 (I wish u will give reply.. )
You are really a wonder full writer ...no doubts...👏
all the best for ur future .👍🏼..
hope to see u seen in IF with new FF ... infect want to see u soon... 😃 bt till then keep enjoying ur ... deserving..Break 🤗
I will miss u ... sacchhi...n the interesting n unforgettable character NEY(H)A... 😉
Edited by KKK143 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

⭐️🤗 Poo...

The finale...⭐️🥳
leave letter ???🤣Poo... sixer in opening 😆😆
finally the gift 😛😛framed picture 😉Poo ..my guess was k k close 😆😆😆
aww ..painting of Monu of thr fist meeting can imagine even the color of Monu ka shirt yet again Poo..ur magic worked here also.👍🏼
Poo..u have imprinted MM in each others heart n mind.. purely n also in readers mind👏
👏👏👏👏love it Poo...MM ka love for each other, thr pain ,smile for each other everything expressed in beautiful manner😳
🤣 Megha wht a Mirchi women !!! humesha hesab barabar karti hai (Poo ..loved the light MM ka fun moments here😆both MM r good traders with gd trading skills 😳😳
Monu in bike .. Ta ra ra re re ra ra,,,tere ishq mein tere ishq mein hum dil se gaye hum jaan se gaye hum dil se gaye jaan se gaye ek tere liye ☺️
aww...imperfectly perfect life of MM😳
aww..Poo...am getting each n every glimpse of MM ka first meeting in Alibagh[ n Poo let me tell u am getting same impact that i get of thinking of MM ka first meeting in khajrana mandir 😳😳😳that's the impact of ur writing Poo...n through the journey u have kept ths impact👏👏👏 n each n evry scene ]
Uff..MM moments ☺️☺️Poo..evn am flushed with emotions 😳😳😳
😆😆no formalities b/w MM😉Poo..u made our MM moments dream come true😳
Pyaar hi to sahara hai...pyaar hi hai jo saath hai dur b ,alag b phir b humesha saath ...alag alag b ek...do insaan ek jaan humare MM☺️☺️
Ta ra ra re re ra ra...tere ishq mein tere ishq mein
aww...MM ka nok jhok wala talk[Poo..am remembering Meghan talk after thr marriage in terrace in jhula 😳hw Megha tease Monu saying i nvr liked u bt i fell for u😆😆😆]
Monu ka killer sexy wala smile☺️Poo..u nvr forget to add this ☺️☺️nor i can evr dare to ignore this☺️
😛Nanhi Cookie ...with Cookies 😆😆😆finally actual coo-koo ka darshan hogaya 😆😆😆
aww..perfect...happy Bhatnagr frame ⭐️MM n nanhi pari...
chronicles :
Poo... ur FF overall ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ n i literally mean it.👏👏👏👏
Picture of ur FF : the last scene Happy Bhatanagar frame⭐️
Funny scene in FF :Guru n Monu n with spray of Neya n Guru scene⭐️
awwish scene :all the sexy smile given by Monu aka prince charming ,all the cute pouting ,expression by Monu.n off course cookie n Manny Monu ka moments 😃⭐️
Sizzling scene : MM ka moment after Megha questioned did u kiss me 😳⭐️
Romantic scene : all MM moments 😳
bejafry scene :none🥳
fashionable person :Megha 😃 for her simple settled dress style.
sad scene : none🥳
Message to Poo: Poo ur FF was lovely, awesome ,amazing 👏👏👏The warmth of ur writing vl b always with us Poo,u did give happiness through ur beautiful writings. It was such a delight n literally i did get happiness whn ever i read ur FF's n u were part of my happiness
Poo...🤗🤗thank u so much for taking us to beautiful journey .a dreamland ...through ur beautiful FF yet again 😳😳😳😳
Edited by raokrithika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jia03

Perfect ending👏⭐️

Loved megha's letter to mohan and thier conversation⭐️

it was a very beautiful F.F... will surely miss it😊

Hiii Jia!!! 🤗
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting on every chapter on this FF 😃!!! It really means a lot to me and kept my enthusiasm hooked 😳!!! I am glad to have made you enjoy the read!!! Cheers, girl!!! 🤗

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