jodha aur jalaal ki anokhi katha(my first f...updated pg 14 (plz read)

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ashvikanlonely

@ashvikanlonely

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Posted: 12 years ago

characters:jodha,jalal,javeeda

jalal is in the dinning room ... and he says.. hum chaate hain ki aaj jodha begum humein khana parose.. jodha givs a khaffa wala expression...jodha says:kya hum kisi ki madat le sakte hain.. itni saare cheezein hum akele nahi paros sakte..

jalal :theeke jodha begum.. aap jaise theek samjhe (with a smirk)

jodha calls up for javeda begum (they both are gud friends)

javeda: haae allah aaj iss nacheez ko kaise yaad kia jodha begum ne..

jodha: javedda hum chahte hain ki aap khana shahensha ko parosne mein hhumaari madat karein...

javeeda:allah issi cheez ka to humein ntezaar thaa..

jodha :kyaa (angrily)

javeeda:humara matlab tha ki iss se khushi ki baat kya ho sakti hain ki hum shaensha ke kaam aayee...

jodha and javedaa start serving..

jalal:jodha begum sabse pehle humaari sharbat mein thodi cheeni milaa dejiyyee..

jodha takes sugar and starts putting in jalals glass...she feels the warmth and starts staring at him

bg:man ye saheeb ji (saibo)...

javeeda:haaye aalah jodha begum kitni shakar daldi aapne.. jodha comes out of the stare and is shocked..

jodha: wo hum galti se..wo humaara dhaan nahi gaya..gustaki maaf ho shahenshah.

jalal: lagta hain humeinn meethaa pilake maar dena chahti hain aap...

javeedaa :koi baat nahi shaenshah hum dusra sharbat laa dete hain...

she is about to go.. she slips and falls.. jalal catches her..

jalal:zara sambhal ke javeda begum (smiling at jodha)

JODHA IS FURIOUS...

GUYS I JUST IMAGINED THIS AND WANTED TO SHARE WITH YOU ALL... WHEN JAVEDA MET JALAL JODHAA...

CHAPAALS AND TOMATOES WELCUMM😆

Edited by khushbuahmed12 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice.😊 Awesome. Pls update soon

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SShreShthA

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Posted: 12 years ago

😆😆😆

NICE START... u r making jodha jealous of javeda... really sounds funny...

imagine bhi karte h toh🤣🤣

do CONTINUE...

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ashvikanlonely

@ashvikanlonely

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _Paridhi_
Nice.😊

thnxx dear means a loot to mee ... m very nervouss..

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ashvikanlonely

@ashvikanlonely

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SShreShthA
😆😆😆
NICE START... u r making jodha jealous of javeda... really sounds funny...
imagine bhi karte h toh🤣🤣
do CONTINUE...

dearr thnxx a loot m not a gud writer... will try to continuee...

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SShreShthA

@SShreShthA

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: khushbuahmed12
dearr thnxx a loot m not a gud writer... will try to continuee...

HEY DEAR UR WRITING PART IS VERY NICE... MUJHE TOH JAVEDA KA SOCH KAR HASI AA RHI H... JAISE HUM USSE DEKHTE H THATS SOUNDS FUNNY...

YOU HV REALLY DONE A VERY NICE START... I LIKE READING IT... DIALOGUES R ALSO NICE...

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ashvikanlonely

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Asapom
awesome start
update soon

ty dear 😊m not gud at writing long stuff😆but will try doing it cant promisee... and ty so much fvor appericiation meanz a loot to mee!

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ashvikanlonely

@ashvikanlonely

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SShreShthA

HEY DEAR UR WRITING PART IS VERY NICE... MUJHE TOH JAVEDA KA SOCH KAR HASI AA RHI H... JAISE HUM USSE DEKHTE H THATS SOUNDS FUNNY...

YOU HV REALLY DONE A VERY NICE START... I LIKE READING IT... DIALOGUES R ALSO NICE...

awww sooo sweet off youuu... will try to continuee dearr ...