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parinika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Short nd sweet plz continue,write a big chapter plzzz

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ashvikanlonely

@ashvikanlonely

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

chapter 3 : soorry guys was busy with school for delay...😛

in the morning...

jalaal:hum aaj aamer ki seher karne jaayyengee umaari jodha begum ke saath😊

jodha comes out in a beatiful green dress ( only for jalaal)and blushes a bit to hear this...

and then javeeda ki entryyy...

javeeda:hai allah shenshah,jodha.. humein bhi aamer ki seher karna hain.. hum is khubsurat jagah ko dekhna chahte hain...

jodha gets a bit annoyed...

jalal:ha zaroor javeeda begum...

javveda:jodhaa...

jalal cuts her in betwween and says:jodha begum ke yaahan to mehmaanon ko kabhi manaa nahi karte...haina jodha begumm...chaliyeee chalte hain... waise bhi humaare nikah ke samay hum aamer dekhh hi nahi paayyee theinn...

all three of them go to a beautifull forestt...beautiful trees...

javeeda:wallah.. kya jagah hainn...kitni khubsurat..yein to humaare aagra ko bhi maath dede...

jalal:haa javeeda begum yahaan ki jaggaayen bhi khubsurat hain aur log bhi...(looking at jodha)

they both havee a eyelock...saibo in background..

they are interrupted by javeedas shout...

javeeda:hayyeee allah kyaa khubsurat khargosh hain..

jodha:lagta hain isse paani aur khaane ki zaroorat hain..

jodha (to jalaal):aap iska shikaar karne ki toh nahi soch rahein naa...?

jallall:brings water and gives it to the rabit

jodha:yeh khargosh bhi aapko dhanyawaad keh raha hogaa..(says with a pride)

jalal:yeh khargosh javeeda begum ko shukriya keh raha hogaa

jodha:kyun?

jalal:yeh paani woh hi laayii hainn...

javeeda (to jodha):haa woh humein pyaas bahut lagti hainn naaa par iss khargosh ki pyaas bhujakar humein bahut achaa lagaa..

jalal:haa waise hum bhi iski pyaari shakal dekhar hi iska shikaar nahi karnaa chatee...

jodha (both happyy and angryyy))...😆

will update more soon guysss...plzz like and commenttt!!

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Nancy

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

👏👏👏👏👏 Wowoowow... Awesome..

Loved it !!!😊😊😊

Good Job!!!👏👏

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unisha

@unishaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

superb.. Jalal purposely bringing javeda along with them.. Jodha getting jealous.. Thanks for pm..

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pooja urf pari

@parish99

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Hey!
its awesome dear❤️👍🏼
please do continue soon
& please do pm me, if possible😳

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

You have got amazing writing talent Khushbu Darling!!!👏👏

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parinika

@parinika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Superb update but wanted big updates plzzz

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ashvikanlonely

@ashvikanlonely

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: PrincessNany
👏 Wowoowow... Awesome..
Loved it !!!😊😊😊

Good Job!!!👏👏

thanks a loot dear it's all because of u and azra...😛

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ashvikanlonely

@ashvikanlonely

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: unishaz
superb.. Jalal purposely bringing javeda along with them.. Jodha getting jealous.. Thanks for pm..

most welcum dear..so sweet😊

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ashvikanlonely

@ashvikanlonely

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: pari_pooja
Hey!
its awesome dear❤️👍🏼
please do continue soon
& please do pm me, if possible😳

awww thanks dear...surely will pm youu😛

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