jodha aur jalaal ki anokhi katha(my first f...updated pg 14 (plz read)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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characters:jodha,jalal,javeeda
jalal is in the dinning room ... and he says.. hum chaate hain ki aaj jodha begum humein khana parose.. jodha givs a khaffa wala expression...jodha says:kya hum kisi ki madat le sakte hain.. itni saare cheezein hum akele nahi paros sakte..
jalal :theeke jodha begum.. aap jaise theek samjhe (with a smirk)
jodha calls up for javeda begum (they both are gud friends)
javeda: haae allah aaj iss nacheez ko kaise yaad kia jodha begum ne..
jodha: javedda hum chahte hain ki aap khana shahensha ko parosne mein hhumaari madat karein...
javeeda:allah issi cheez ka to humein ntezaar thaa..
jodha :kyaa (angrily)
javeeda:humara matlab tha ki iss se khushi ki baat kya ho sakti hain ki hum shaensha ke kaam aayee...
jodha and javedaa start serving..
jalal:jodha begum sabse pehle humaari sharbat mein thodi cheeni milaa dejiyyee..
jodha takes sugar and starts putting in jalals glass...she feels the warmth and starts staring at him
bg:man ye saheeb ji (saibo)...
javeeda:haaye aalah jodha begum kitni shakar daldi aapne.. jodha comes out of the stare and is shocked..
jodha: wo hum galti se..wo humaara dhaan nahi gaya..gustaki maaf ho shahenshah.
jalal: lagta hain humeinn meethaa pilake maar dena chahti hain aap...
javeedaa :koi baat nahi shaenshah hum dusra sharbat laa dete hain...
she is about to go.. she slips and falls.. jalal catches her..
jalal:zara sambhal ke javeda begum (smiling at jodha)
JODHA IS FURIOUS...
GUYS I JUST IMAGINED THIS AND WANTED TO SHARE WITH YOU ALL... WHEN JAVEDA MET JALAL JODHAA...
CHAPAALS AND TOMATOES WELCUMM😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice.😊 Awesome. Pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😆😆😆
NICE START... u r making jodha jealous of javeda... really sounds funny...
imagine bhi karte h toh🤣🤣
do CONTINUE...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thnxx dear means a loot to mee ... m very nervouss..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SShreShthA

😆😆😆

NICE START... u r making jodha jealous of javeda... really sounds funny...
imagine bhi karte h toh🤣🤣
do CONTINUE...

dearr thnxx a loot m not a gud writer... will try to continuee...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: khushbuahmed12

dearr thnxx a loot m not a gud writer... will try to continuee...



HEY DEAR UR WRITING PART IS VERY NICE... MUJHE TOH JAVEDA KA SOCH KAR HASI AA RHI H... JAISE HUM USSE DEKHTE H THATS SOUNDS FUNNY...

YOU HV REALLY DONE A VERY NICE START... I LIKE READING IT... DIALOGUES R ALSO NICE...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asapom

awesome start

update soon

ty dear 😊m not gud at writing long stuff😆but will try doing it cant promisee... and ty so much fvor appericiation meanz a loot to mee!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SShreShthA



HEY DEAR UR WRITING PART IS VERY NICE... MUJHE TOH JAVEDA KA SOCH KAR HASI AA RHI H... JAISE HUM USSE DEKHTE H THATS SOUNDS FUNNY...

YOU HV REALLY DONE A VERY NICE START... I LIKE READING IT... DIALOGUES R ALSO NICE...

awww sooo sweet off youuu... will try to continuee dearr ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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No chappals and tomatoes for you my darling... Only hugs and congrats from me!!👏👏👏
Keep it up and please pm me🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az3003

No chappals and tomatoes for you my darling... Only hugs and congrats from me!!👏👏👏

Keep it up and please pm me🤗

awww u peoplee aree the sweetesttt ... i will surelyy pm u dearr... i was quite nervous..but feeligg nycc noww🤗

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