SS : TUJH PE DIL QURBAAN Part 15 Page 77 (Completed)

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Prologue: - We all have different desires n responsibilities in our life. But we forget in our busy life that our first responsibility is towards Nation n humanity. A girl from a normal family who has family responsibilities realizes this from bottom of her heart n tries her best to fulfill her duties but what will happen if she gets a chance to serve her nation by joining a defense group that to a very unexpected one . How will people of that defense group react to her presence? Will she be able to fulfill the expectations of her team mate's n chief? What will happen when her parents will come to know of this? How will life take turns after joining this group? How will she manage between her family life n works?

Characterization: - The characters are


ACP Sameer Rathod - Chief of ETF strict but composed, sweet natured n good at heart has a dreadful past which made him lose confidence in love, affection n emotions. His duty is his life n he is orphan lost his parents at very early age. Still single age around 30 yrs.


ACP Arjun Rawte - 2ND in command of ETF married to riya, best friend of Sameer knows his sorrows age 28 yrs.


Riya Arjun rawte - Research specialist of ETF Wife of arjun n treats sameer as her brother n wants to see him happy loves her husband arjun a lot n best friend of shree ,liza n chotu age 25 yrs


Liza Dcruz - Doctor n forensic expert of ETF a bubbly girl age 24 yrs


Shreekant Sen - Technical expert of ETF n sweet natured boy age 26 yrs


Chandrakant Patil - Muscle man n Commando of ETF n sweet nature soft hearted person. Age 26 yrs


Aisha kapoor - A strong girl from a middle class family in Mumbai searching job these days n MBA graduate Sweet bubbly girl n helps everyone n has a very strong believe in patriotism n humanity. Age 25 yrs


Avinash kapoor - Father of Aisha a retired bank manager a simple n good person at heart age 65 yrs


Avantika kapoor - Mother of Aisha sweet house wife loves her family age 60 yrs


Annanya kapoor - Younger sister of aisha age 22 yrs a student completing her CA

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Posted: 11 years ago
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INDEX
CS & PROLOGUE----Page 1
PART 1 ------ Page 4
PART 2-------Page 9
PART 3-------Page 13
PART 4-------Page 19
PART 5-------Page 24
PART 6-------Page 29
PART 7-------Page 33
PART 8-------Page 38
PART 9-------Page 45
PART 10------Page 50
PART 11------Page 56
PART 12------Page 61
PART 13------Page 67
PART 14------Page 72
PART 15------Page 77
EPILOGUE---- PAGE 78

Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Note : This story is on Samsha as usual please read the characters carefully as I have changed them a Bit specifically the character of aisha n sameer . So plz if u like the concept So comment that I should continue or not I will update this SS twice a week Tuesday n Thursday. I think itna attyachaar kafi hoga 😆😆😆
Do comment guys if got the comment then only i will post the parts of story on next tuesday .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Quite different n interesting concept dr...
Looking frwrd to it...!!!
Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice , so Its on sam sha. ok thoda Ariya scenes se bhi barnna for our aariya lovers sake.cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really a very nice thought...
go on dear...
waiting for next tuesday for ur next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cool CS of Sasha!
Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome prologue n cs.. Continue soon..
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Awesome, super-duper CS & prologue...

Again story on SaSha...me so happy...🥳 🥳
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hola!!!
here i come...

tumne pukara aur hum chale aae...

awsm prologue and CS...
something diff this time...great...

hey a suggestion..:
this time in this SS...pls put all the dialogues in double inverted commas "like this" ...this will make it easy to read...

plz dnt feel hurt or mind it...its jst a suggetion...use it only if u want to...

pls continue soon

love
Aisha

Asta la Vista!!!

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