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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Lovely Update !!!

Thanks radhika u liked it

DId u read the first part ?

Keep commenting love u 😊

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SATRISHI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

I read three parts nice ,SAm ko past Aisa ladka ab thak ladkiyon se kiasa bachsakha Hmmm sochnewali bath hai.

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: SATRISHI
I read three parts nice ,SAm ko past Aisa ladka ab thak ladkiyon se kiasa bachsakha Hmmm sochnewali bath hai.

HMM yahi to baat hai dear 😆😆😆

Thanks u liked it stay tuned n keep commenting

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fly.high

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

awsm update dear$

so finally now aisha is part of ETF...liked the scene betn aisha and riya...

waiting to knw wat happnd vid sameer dat changed his belief in love...

continue soon

love
Aisha

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth
awsm update dear$

so finally now aisha is part of ETF...liked the scene betn aisha and riya...

waiting to knw wat happnd vid sameer dat changed his belief in love...

continue soon

love
Aisha

Sure that is a surprise dear

Good u liked the update

Thanks n stay tuned 😊

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abhya/akanksha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

unresed my comment on pg-11

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: rinku95
Lovely

Thanks Rinku Keep commenting 😊

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Aks13
Both parts r super fantastic dr...!!

Hats off to u...!!!

OMG that Sultan put a chip in Aisha's bag n that's thy all were behind her...!!! Phew... ETF reached there at the right moment n saved her...!!!

Wow Sam seemed vry impressed with Aisha n that's why he instantly offered her job in ETF...!!!!!

She was so puzzled but her father's encouraging words helped her to take her decision...!! That's great... Loved their thinking process...!!

Loved Samjun's convo...!!!

Intro of Aisha with all the members was super cool...!!

Awww Aisha got a bit surprised whn she knw that Ariya r married...!!

Oye hoye she showed so much interest in Rathod...!!!! Loved how Riya teased her for this...!!!!

Wow she's really a quick learner...Sam looks vry much impressed with her skils...!!!!!

Awww she's such a nice person...gifted something toeverybody n even donated some amout in orphanage whn she got her frst salary...!!! That was a lovely gesture...!!!

Precap looks damn interesting...!!

Thanx 4 pm dr...

Continue soon...

Thanks dear u liked it aks

Well I would say not interest but curious

I think this is initial phase n they will come closer gradually

Thanks keep commenting 😊

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 12 years ago

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PART 3 A

Next morning in sameers cabin he was in thoughts n smiling when arjun came inside his cabin. He saw sameer in lost state n put his hand on his shoulders n said "Kya soch raha hai sam?" he said "kuch nahin Aisha ke bare main soch raha tha" arjun asked "accha aisa kya hua ki to uske baare soochne laga?" n winks at him sameer annoyingly says "Tu apni bakwaas bandh kar main ye soch raha tha ki aaj kal ke matlabi zamane main aise bhi log hote hai? Apni pehli salary se wo hum sab ke liye gifts laayi kal jab main use chodne gaya tha to usne apni salary ka kuch hissa uske ghar ke paas jo St. peters orphanage hai waha de diya .Kal main uske pariwaar se bhi mila bahut acche aur seedhe log hai.Tum shayad sahi keh rahe the kahi main us maasoom ladki ki zindagi se khel to nahin raha?" Arjun smiled n said " Sam itna mat soch usne is kaam ke liye khud haan ki hai wo yeh kar na chahti hai tabhi usne ETF join kiya hai" Sameer just nodded n his phone buzzed it was a new case in the hospital where they suspected the smuggling human organs. Sameer called every one n started explaining the case "Guys life wire hospital jo dadar main hai usme kuch gabad pata chali hai wahah ke kuch mareezo ke organs ki gayab hone ki khabar mili hai with medical proof aur aisa ek nahin 5 cases hue hai 3 mareezo ki maut hui hai aur 2 ki condition serious hai hame wahah undercover jana hoga lIza aur shree tum unke security cameras hack karoge aur lash ki autopsy karke mujhe report doge. Rawte riya tum dono Doctors ban ke jaao aur unse poochtaach karne ki koshish karna .chotu tum ward boy ban ke hospital ki chaan been karna . Main mareez ban ke jaaouga aur aisha tum meri wife ban ke saath rahogi aur observe kaogi." All were ready with everything in half n hour n zoomed out of office.

When they reached hospital n started their work. After couple of hour's chotu came to sameer n aisha In the general ward n gave the update that there are 2 surgeons in hospital one is Dr Abhay deshmukh n other is Dr. Sachin Vyas n both do not have good reputation. He also added that he checked the record room n details of all the patients mentioned by sameer n all the 5 patients are treated by Dr. Sachin Vyas. He told chotu to keep n eye on him n abhay both n informed riya n arjun to n get more information . Sameer asked aisha to go to the record room n surf things so that they can get more clues out of that. Aisha quietly rushed to the record room n started to find the case file of all the five patients .she went to the record room n all were connected via microphones n she started the scanning after few minutes she got the files of the patient's mentioned by Sameer. She when saw the files she was shocked to know that medicines prescribed to these patients were same also dean of the hospital was present in the operation when surgery took place. She said to sameer on mike "Sir jin 5 patients ke details aapne di thi unki medicines same thi jab ki unko bimari alag thi aur dean inke opration ke waqt maujood tha to phir yadi organs nikaley gaye to use pata kaise nahi chala hoga ?" But her voice got chocked in between when when she saw dean in front of her eyes with an injection of poison. He said " tum apne aap ko bahut smart samajhti ho ab tumhare marne ki khabar bhi is hospital se bahar nahin jaayegi" Sameer rushed to the record room n before dean could inject poison sameer shot his arm n arrested him n Sachin vyas . .Aisha stood numb for few minutes she came back to her senses when sameer put his hand on her shoulder asking "tum theek ho aisha?" she just nodded in response n sameer with a smile said "Good Job Aisha tumne apna pehla case successfully solve kar liya" she felt happy after hearing appreciation from her chief n smiled in response but sameer said again "Aage se be attentive". All went back to office n started their paperwork n after sometime sameer called the day off n all went back to their houses.

At her home she was in a happy mood that she solved the case n got appreciation too. Suddenly her mother entered n broke her trance her mother said "kya soch rahi ho beta?" She replied "kuch nahin maa bas kuch sooch rahi thi aapko pata hai aaj mera pehla task tha office main aur wo successfully complete hua?"Her mom smiled n said " I am proud of u beta accha tumare office waloko kabhi ghar to bulao hum to kisi ko jaante nahin sivaye tumhare MD ke waise bahut acche hai tumhare boss unka pariwaar yahi hai ya bahar hai?" Aisha replied "Maa unke pariwaar main koi nahin hai mother father mar chuke hai aur shaadi abhi hui nahin aur koi rishteydaar bhi nahin hai bas abhi sirf unka kaam hi unki life ban chukka hai. Is liye kaam ko lekar thode strict hai par nature bahut accha hai unka " Avantika said " Haan wo to hai par ab tak unhe shaadi kar leni chahiye thi aur unke jaise acche ladke ko koi mana thodi karega ?" Aisha said " Maa aapko pata hai mujhe bhi yahi laga tha ki sir ki shadi ho chuki hogi par unki life main koi haadsa hua hai meri ek colleague ne bataya tha is wajah se unka rishto par se yakeen uth gaya hai shayad wo isse abhi tak bahar nahin nikle ab kya hua pooribaat mujhe pata nahin aur wo phir mare boss hi hai unki personal life main kya hua mujhe unse aur kisi se poochna theek nahin laga " Avantika said "Koi baat nahin tum bas apne kaam par dhyan do mujhe ye jaan ke accha laga ki tumhare boss or tumhare saath ke colleagues itne acche hai aur haan chalo khana thanda ho raha hai main bulane hi aayi thi."

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 12 years ago

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PART 3B

Next morning when she came to office they had a case of Drug suppliers n they had got the information of a Rave party in Night club HELL So All got ready for the action n prepared for the rave party but Aisha was in a fix what to say to her parents. She got an Idea she took leave bit early n made n excuse to her parents that there is an important client meeting as well as party so she will be late. Her mother made her dressed in beautiful anarkali suit of light blue colour n she went to office thinking "ab rave party main kya main suit pehen ke jaaogi"She reached office on time n all were looking to her with shocked eyes she got embarresed n said " I am sorry par main ghar pe ye to nahin keh sakti thin a ki main rave party main jaa rahi hoon" Sameer said to aisha " Aisha tumhe riya help kar degi not to worry riya help her " Shree in low voice to chotu "yaar rave party main Suit ye hamare sir ki aastha hi kar sakti hai" Sameer heard shree muttering some thing n said " Kuch kaha tumne?" Shree gulping his saliva said "Nothing sir". After few minutes she came wearing a short skirt n a skin tight top of black color revealing her slender figure n showing all her curves n a little loud make up riya too was ready in a skin tight jeans n open top an all were ready for the party. Sameer was looking at aisha with wide eyes open n was lost in the beauty front of his eyes. Arjun smiled n shook him to get him out of trance saying"Sam kya hua?" that brought him back to senses n he replied"Kuch nahin chalo" They all went to rave party n mingle with the crowd Arjun , Riya, Shree & aysha scanned the dance floor n chotu n sameer the bar area as soon the drug dealer enters the party ETf arrests them n case is solved it was late as they reached office aisha changed into the suit again n sameer dropped her home in the way to her home he said " I am pleasantly surprised aisha ki tum aise bhi lag sakti ho" Aisha looked at him with an embarrassed face. She could not say anything n sameer sensed it n said "I mean tumhe kabhi aise nahin dekha na" she just passed him a weak smile n he added "waise kehte hai khoobsorti saadgi main hoti hai aur tumhari saadgi aur maasomiyat hi tumhari asli khoobsoorti hai isliye chaahe kuch bhi pehno ise kabhi mat khona" Aisha was in a shock mode after what sameer said n to her good luck her house has arrived she just bid bye to him n rushed to her house n trying to calm her heartbeats.

In her room she was thinking what happened just now. She was blushing hard that how sameer complimented her for her looks n beauty n why she was so affected by his compliments? What made her go weak was it truth n affection in his eyes n voice or perhaps no other person has complimented her looks in such a beautiful way. She tried to sleep keeping all her thoughts aside. In the morning she came to know that it was lizas birthday as no case has arrived till now she asked sameer "Sir liza ka birthday hai kal late ho gaya tha kya main abhi jaa ke gift le sakti hoon I will be back within 30 minutes" sameer said "Sure" but after a pause added "Aisha ruko main bhi chalta hoon mujhe bhi kuch lena tha liza ke liye" Sameer n aisha went to near by mall. Aisha knew that she loved accessories so she thought of gifting her something which she liked. She selected a gift n so sameer. Suddenly her gaze fell on a beautiful bracelet she asked the cost n shopkeeper told her 550 rs mam n she droped the idea of buying bracelet as she was short of money. After buying gift for liza she only had 200 rs left right now. Sameer sensed it n as soon she said "nahin rehne dijiye" sameer said "kyu accha to hai "She said in a mellowed tone"Par-"before she could speak further he holded her wrist took the bracelet n made her wear. Aisha was shocked at the sudden act n before she came out of shock sameer payed the bill n dragged her out of the shop. She said"Par sir main aapse aise kuch bhi nahin le sakti" Sameer said"Oh come on Aisha maine tumhari layi hui gift except ki thi na to tum mujhse kyu kuch nahin le sakti" Smaeer n Aisha reached Office n all of them celebrated Lizas Birthday. After celebration was over Shree,liza chotu riya n aisha were chatting n sameer n Arjun were in there respective cabins Suddenly Riyas gaze fell on bracelet she said "Aisha ye bahut pyara hai kahah se liya" She got embarrassed n in low voice said "sameer sir ne gift kiya" All were looking at her with wide eyes open n jaws drop down in surprise. Shree to chotu"Yaar mujhe pinch kar main sapna to nahin dekh raha" Chotu pinched him hard n shree yelled"Abe bheem ab haath bhi ukade ga kya par ye to nainsafi hai aisha hum bhi to team members hai hame to aaj tak daant ke ailava kuch nahin mila sir se" Riya yelled "bakwaas band karo tum dono aisha sacchi bhai ne gift kiya tumhe "She nodded in positive n riya was amused.

Few days breezed away they got a case of illegal smuggling in a boder area village in Punjab. Aisha informed her parents that she is going on a business tour. ETF reached Punjab in Disguise Sameer n aisha were as government officials Mr.Raghav shastri n Manisha Pandey. Arjun n riya were as tourist n shree liza n choutu were supporting them. Sameer n Aisha reached the sarpanch of the village n told them that they are government officials n are here for voter list counting n need a place for some days to stay. They made them stay in their own house n when they looked at their ID cards Sarpanch asked them"Are shastri ki biwi pandey kaise?" they looked at each other in surprised way as shree by mistake mentioned name of Husband as Raghav shastri in aisha s card Sameer covered up by saying "Wo kya hai na hamari abhi abhi shadi hui a is liye na isko aadat hai aur na he iske card pe naam change hua hai" They showed them the guest room n they entered the room .Aisha looked at sameer in helpless way"Sir Ab kya karenge ?" Smaeer was fuming in anger"Is shree ko to main dekh loonga" Aisha was also furious n said" Usko to aap baad main dekh leenge abhi ye dekhiye hum ek room main kaise rahege?"

SO kaisa tha mast ya bore do comment yaar please main silent reading se tang hoo n excuse for typing mistakes

P recap : Aisha s Family comes to know about her joining in ETF

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