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rimi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Rimi dear I am eorking na So ek baar main ek hi cheez kar paati hoon
But sure I will try more 😊

its okk dear..i understand.. take ur time... work come first... i can always wait for ur updates...😳

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: invisible2018

its okk dear..i understand.. take ur time... work come first... i can always wait for ur updates...😳

Thanks dear I will try on to update tomorrow😊

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rimi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Thanks dear I will try on to update tomorrow😊

okkiess will be waiting...👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!😭😭😭 😭😭😭

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: Snehajain
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!😭😭😭 😭😭😭

Ro nahi meri pyari behen

wait for tonight Update mil jaayega 😊

Ab smile karo badi wali 😃

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PART 5 A

Hearing Sameer words her parents were in a shock n did not know what to say.There was a complete silence for few minutes sameer sensed it that her parents were in shock. Aisha came to her parents after she saw them complete numb she put her hand on avinash shoulders n he hugged her tight Aisha Said "Papa main theek hoon mujhe kuch nahin hua hai aur please aap aise karenge to mujhe himmat kaun dega app meri strength hoo na aur aap ne hi kaha tha ki aap mujhe support karenge"Avinash in a shaky voice said "Par main tujhe aise khatarnaak kaam karne kaise de sakta hoon kahi tujhe kuch ho gaya to main tujhe apne jiteji khai main nahin dhakel sakta" Aisha said " Papa Desh ke liye farz nibhana khai main dhakelna nahin hota hai aur phir ye sab kisi na kisi ke bachhe hai" Avinash sighed in defeat n said " Meri choti gudiya ab itni badi ho gayi hai ki mujhe samjha rahi hai dekh lijiye sameer ji ab to ye aapki ETF officer ban gayi hai meri beti nahin rahi" Aisha smiled n said" Papa Main aapko samjha nahin rahi jo aapne mujhe sikhaya hai wahi yaad dila rahi hoon" sameer added " Uncle ye ETF Officer baad main hai aapki beti pehle hai aur aapki is choti gudiya ko kuch nahin hoga I promise" Avinash n Avantika had tears in their eyes they hugged aisha n sameer too had tears in her eyes but he controlled . After a while Sameer took leave n Aisha said "Thankyou sir aapne jo Mummy papa ko convince karne main meri madat ki warna mujhe hamesha ye dar laga rehta tha ki mummy papa ko pata chal gaya to kya hoga?" Sameer said "Waise isme mera ek swarth tha aisha as a chief main ek acchi team mate aur ek acchi dost nahin khona chahta tha so no need to thank me" Sameer left the place n all were at peace.

Asiha n annu were sleeping in their room but avantika was restless she could not sleep avinash put his hand on her shoulder n she started to cry saying "Avinash aap samjhayiye na aisha ko wo aise kaise itne khatarnaak kaam kar sakti hai . main use aisa karne nahin doongi." Avinash said " Main jaanta hoon tum pareshan ho uske faisle se par uska faisla bilkul sahi hai avantika aur phir sameer ji aur puri ETF hai wo aisha ko kuch nahin hone denge aur phir ab to wo trained hai tumhe darne ki koi zarrorat nahin hai" Avantika said " App theek keh rahe hai par main apne dil ko kaise samjhaoo main"Avinash said"Yahi samjhaoo ki ab se tumhari beti pehle desh ki hai phir tumhari tum chaho ya na chaho ye sach tumhe manna hi padega kyuki jo raah usne chuni hai uspar use hamare support aur himmat ki zarrorat hogi aur hame hamari beti ki takat bannaa hai kamzori nahin. Mujhe meri beti par garv hai" Avantika said wiping her tears "Aap theek keh rahe hai avinash mujhe bhi apni beti ke faisle par naaz hai aur aaj ke baad main aapki ye baat hamesha yaad rakhogi" Avinash smiled n said "Chalo so jaao bahut raat ho gayi hai" Avantika smiled n they reached their room n slept peacefully . Next morning when she was leaving for office avantika called aisha n said "Beta apna khayaal rakhna " hearing this Aishas eyes become teary she said"Maa please aap aisa kyu keh rahi hai I am so sorry par aapka dil dukhane ka irada nahin tha par mujhe pata tha aap aise hi react karenge isliye nahin bataya" Avantika said "Bahut badi ho gayi hai meri beti I am proud of u beta ab main garv se kehungi ki Aisha meri beti hai" She kissed her forehead n aisha hugged her back n went to office .

In the office she followed her daily routine suddenly team got the info that Punjab case in which they have got the info regarding ammunition sumgling n have gun down people their other group people are planning some thing big in the village as this info was shared by sarpanch himself as he was keeping an eye n he felt suspicious from last 2 days so he informed ETF. Sameer Said "Guys Case abhi kahtam nahin hua hai hame wahah jana hoga Maine sarpanch ji se kaha tha wo kisi ko kuch na kahe kyuki ise unki jaan ko khatra ho sakta hai aur hamari identity bhi unhone kisi ko nahin batayi hai kyuki maine unse kaha tha so get ready" all noded n suddenly sameer remembers one thing n says " Shree that reminds me tumne id main kya gadbad ki thi haan tumne aisha ki nakli id main pati ki jagah mera naam kyu likhdiya hum pakde jaate to tumhari is zarasi galti ki vahajh se kitni awkward situation ho gayi thi hamari" Shree started stammering n said "Vo"Vo"Sorry sir par main kya karta ab aisha wahah aapke saath gayi thi ab main aur kisi ka naam likta to aur ajeeb lagta phir wo log aur sawaal karte to maine socha ki yahi theek rahega" Sameer got his point n said" Theek hai par agli baar koi aise harkat mat karna aur yadi karo to plz bata dena warna cheeze sambhalna mushkil ho jaayega" Sameer went back n shree sighed in relief n as soon as sameer n arjun went back to the cabin chotu said " Shree beta bach gaye tum varna rathore sir ki nakli shadi ke chakkar main tumhara asli kriyakaram ho jata" Shree said " Chotu kyu dara raha hai yaar ek to meri haalat dekh waise hi itni kharab hai par sir ne is liye daanta ki maine unhe aisha ka pati banaya ya isliye ki maine unhe nahin bataya" Aisha was watching them n said "Is liye daanta ki tumne unhe nahin bataya yadi batate to hum prepare rehte na ?"Shree said "Boli Hamare rathore sir ki aastha yani unhe tera pati banne main koi aitaaz nahin hun tu to kabhi unhe galat kahegi nahin" Aisha said "ab isme galat kya hai shree aur jab tak sir kuch galat nahin karenge to main unhe galat kyu kahuoogi" Shree with a naughty smile said "Waise tujhe to bahut maza aaya hoga tu to sir ki On Screen wife jo ban gayi hai pehle case main bhi to sir aur tum husband wife ban ke gaye the aur tum dono ko dekh kar koi bhi yakeen kar lega kitum dono husband wife ho." Aisha asked "Accha wo kaise?" Shree said "Ab dekh hamme se sir sabse jayada pyar se baat tujhse karte hai, Teri haath ki coffee na mile to tujhe miss karne lagte hai. Tu bade pyaar se unka khayal rakhti hai aur ye sab saamnewale ko convince karne ke liye kaafi hota hai" saying this he winks at her. Aisha is now furious" Shree bakwaas bandh karo bolne se pehle ek second soch to lo kis ke baare main bol rahe ho aur kya bol rahe ho" Shree could not control his laughter n said to Aisha " Are gussa kyu ho rahi hoo yaar main to neek kam kar raha hoon dekh Sir akele hai aur yadi unhe tujh jaisi biwi aur uncle aunty jaise saas sasur mil jaaye to kya bura hai?" Aisha was about to reply him but all of them herd sameer calling to leave for Punjab case.

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Edited by GOLD.A - 12 years ago

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

PART 5 B

All prepared for the punjab n left mumbai in the evening.When they reached the house of sarpanch in the village he told them the story that he saw some movements near border 2 days ago n also hear them speaking of something big in the village soon he suspected them n called them here . Sameer after analyzing for few minutes said "Team this is very serious we need to be alert hum wahi karenge jo pehle kar rahe the yaha gao ke log mujhe aur aisha ko as government official jante hai to hum sarpanch ji ke yahah rahege aur rawte riya tum log guest house main jao baaki sab ke saathwahan se baaki gao aur border pe nazar rakho" They marched n he turned to sarpanch n said " Aap ka shukriya aapne itni badi information de hame ab ye log hamse bach nahin sakte" Sarpanch said " Sahab app log sab apni jaan jokhim me daalte hai to hamara bhi farz banta hai ki hum aapki madat kare main aap dono ke liye kamre theek kara deta hoon" Smaeer said " Nahin sarpanch ji ek hi karma jaise aapne pehle tayiyaar kiya tha waise hi kariye isse kisi ko shaq nahin hoga aur aapne jo karma hame pichli baar diya tha wahi hume de dijiye usse border per nazar rakhne main aasani hogi" Aisha n sameer went to the same room n arranged their things to keep the watch. It was night n sameer was keeping a watch via his camera n aisha enters with food n askes him to eat. He thanked her n starts having food n she takes charge of the camera. After having food she asks" Sir kuch pata chala in logo ka mujhe to abhi tak koi movement nahin dikhi" Sameer said" Nahin abhi tak kuch pata nahin chala hai tumne khana kha liya?"Before she could reply wife of sarpanch enters with another plate n water saying "bibi ji aap bhi kha lo apne bhi to nahi khaya" Sameer looked at her with surprise n said "Aisha abhi 11 baje hai tumne kuch nahin khaya?" Aisha replied with a smile "Aapne bhi to nahin khaya sir aap camera main busy the aur main inke saath thoda help kara rahi thi" Sameer turning towards sarpanchs wife" Hamare wajah se aap sabko bahut takleef ho rahi hai yadi majboori na hoti to hum aapko kabhi takleef nahin dete" Sarpanchs wife said "sahib ji aap jaise sipahiyo ki seva takleef nahin hoti aur aaj to ye bibi ji ne banaya hai" that was another surprise for him. Aisha started to have food n they resumed back to their work. Aisha n sameer had their eyes on screen after a while aisha started to feel sleepy n unknowingly as she was sitting next to sameer n her head landed on his shoulder in sleep. Sameer could not help but smile at her innocence. He tried to put her silky hair locks behind her ears when suddenly she woke up n saw that she was sleeping on his shoulder. She looked at him in apologetic way n said "aapne uthaya kyu nahin pata nahin main kab se aapke khndhe pe so rahi hoon "sameer said with a smile "koi baat nahin tum bahut thak gayi thi na"

Later in the night both of them saw moment near the border area as sameer saw them sending radio signals he asked shree to track it n he gave the report to sameer . They came to know that they have planted the bomb in the village n soon there will be a blast .ETF Started to locate the bomb after checking thoroughly for 20 minutes they got the bomb but there was only 20 minutes left to blast so they started to check shree checked it carefully n said " Sir ye defuse nahin kar sakte hai ye naye tarike se banaya gaya hai" Every body became tense after hearing that . Sameer said "chotu Tum backup force ko inform karo aur gao khali karwaao shree tum bomb ko deactivate karne ki koshish karte raho rawte riya main aur aisha ja ke inke thikano ko dekte hai." They started moving towards the hide out which they have tracked n they attacked on the hide out heavy firing started n finally after sometime everything settled n the terrorist were killed but bomb was still there to defuse to save the village they need to act fast. They came back they came to know that only two minutes left for the blast n shree could not defuse the bomb .

When they have no way left aisha without wasting time holded the bomb n ran towards the pond near by to make the damage minimal before any one could react. All were stunned by this act of aisha n started running behind. Just two seconds before the blast aisha threw the bomb pack inside the pond but the blast was so hard that she got injured badly n as sameer was few inches behind her too got injured by the impact of bomb. But aisha was more injured as compared to sameer as bomb was near to her n was in the air when it exploded. As rest of the team heard the explosion they ran towards the pond side sameer n aisha were unconscious laying on the ground team picked them up and take them to the nearest place where they can get proper treatment. In the nearest hospital both were admitted. After half n hour sameer opened his eyes arjun n riya were near him n the first question he asked was " Aisha kahan hai kaise hai?" Arjun replied "wo critical condition main hai next room main doctor's ilaaj kar rahe hai par kehte hai ki jab tak use hosh nahin aata tab tak kuch nahin keh sakte wo kisi dava ko abhi tak repond nahin kar rahi hai yadi 24 hours ke ander use hosh nahin aaya to use bacha pana shayad mushkil ho" Smaeer was stunned for a while n stood numb there. Arjun was calling him but it was all vain. Arjun shook him to make him come back to senses he said " Sam Hosh main aao kya ho gaya hai tumhe tum aise kamzoor nahin pad sakte aur kuch nahin hoga aisha ko " This made him come back to senses n he finally voiced out " Mujhe aisha se milna hai arjun."

So Kaisa tha mast ya bore plz do comment as they are very precious to me n excuse for typing mistakes n no silent reading Samjhe ya samjhaoo 😆

P recap - Aisha in critical condition what will happen stay tuned

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ishita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#158

me 1st!!

UNRES..

PEHLE TO ...THHHAANNNKKK UUU SSSOOO MMMUUCCCHHH 4 D UPDATE!!!😃😃😃

now back 2 my comment..

Thank god Aisha's parents are convinced..

Ya..unka pareshan hona jayez hai..after all Beti hai unki..!!

but finally maan gaye wo log😳

Shree..haha...acha teasing session tha!!

Bechari..

but sahi bhi to kaha usne..pyar se usse baat karte hai...gift bhi dete hai..coffee bhi miss karte hai!!

"kahi..kuch to chhut raha hai😉

oh teri..Case khatam nai hua??!!

aww..aisha sam ke shoulder pe so gayi??...so cute😳😳

haaayyee!! the last part...mereko heart attack a gaya!!!

Aisha injured!!!😭

injured chodo..critical???...

Gold ji..kal thursday hai..plz update!!!

aur usey thik bhi kar do!!😭😭

update pllzzz ...jaallddii..

Edited by IshitaRocks015 - 12 years ago

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unisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#159

awesome update..
Sameer somehow convinced aisha's parents..
Aisha's mom was still reluctant but her father conviced her mom..

shree teases aisha..
The team got another lead in the case of village..
They all started their work..
Some sasha moment..
Aisha inorder to save village endangers her life..
She is in critical condition..
Sameer also got injured..
Sameer got numbed hearing about aisha's condition..
Awesome..
Loved it..
Thanks for pm..

Edited by unishaz - 12 years ago