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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 1 B
Aisha went back to her house n tried to forget all this mess that happened in front of her eyes at the bank for her this was enough that she was safe n sound . Here after aisha left the bank Arjun was coordinating with all the team members to get the things under control after what happened and sameer was on the call with commissioner he was updating him about the present situation that they are chasing Sultan n where he was. Suddenly chotu informed sameer that sultan is shot dead by Arjun. Sameer on the call Said "Sir sultaan mara gaya hai"ji sir -sure -JAI HIND sir" Sameer reached the spot n started to ask questions to arjun that what happened? Arjun told the whole story sameer said "Oh God wo ladki kahan hai ab" arjun replied "wo ghar jaa chuki hai rathod wo already thoda dar gayi thi isliye maine use rooka nahin" Sameer nodded n said " theek hai waise abhi bhi musibat kam nahin hui hai wo log jinse sultan deal karne wala tha aur maal dene wala tha wo to ab aur bhi active o jaayege inhe pakdna bahut zaroori hai warna khatra aur bhi bad jaayega " Arjun said " u r right rathod chotu apne informers se pata karo inke bare main main aur rathod headquater jaa rahe hai ye case abhi khatam nahi hua hai kyuki abhi un logo ki detail nahin mili hai jinse yeh deal karne wala tha."
Sameer and arjun were back from the head quarter n asked the reports from all. Shree said "Sir maine sultan ke phone records check kiye isme usne ek hi number pe baar baar baat ki hai no track kiya to pata chala ki ye uske dahine haath aslam ka hai wo hi ye deal kara raha tha aur inka poora gang wahi sambhaal raha tha. Ye Aslam ke milne bank bhi aaya tha par wo mil nahin paya tha kyuki use shaq ho gaya tha ki piloce aas paas hai maine aslam ke phone ki location trace ki thi wo us waqt bank ke paas hi tha " Sameer said to chotu " tumhe koi lead mili chotu " Chotu said "abhi nahin sir maine bola hai unke gang ke log jaise hi harkat main aayege wo mujhe bata dega" Sameer said "yaani ab us ladki ki jaan khatre main hai jisne hamari madat ki thi sultan to mar chukka hai par ab uski gang is ladki ko nahin chodegi . Chotu is ladki ki detail nikalo aur mujhe batao." Chotu collected data and reached office n gave the data to sameer saying "sir is ladki ka naam Aisha Kapoor hai jis bank ke bahar ye hadsa hua usi bank ke manager the iske papa bahut seedhe saade middle class family hai aaj bhi apne papa ke accout main cheque hi jama karane aayi thi ye iske address aur contact details hai ye MBA graduate hai aur abhi job dhoond rahi hai ." Sameer said " Good Job chotu ise call lagao aur inform kar do ki alert rahe security ke liye main commissioner sir ko phone kar deta hoon." Arjun said " nahin rathod wo already itna kuch dekh ke dar gayi hogi fir ye sab " Sameer said " u r right but hamare paas koi choice nahin hai " Arjun said " Riya use phone lagao aur bolo ki tum Goodrick tea company se bol rahi ho aur usko interview ke liye kal 11baje yaha aana hai" Smaeer said " kya ?" arjun again said ye bhi kehna ki hamare MD Mr Sameer rathod unse khas taur pe milna chahte hai" sameer glared at him n riya giggled and did the call n gave her the address .
Next morning Aisha reached at the given address it was to trap for aslam n other gang members as they knew they will follow aisha n try to attack her as she helped the police in catching their boss. As she entered the office she asked for sameer . ETF has called her in the office of arjuns friend n sameer went to the MDs Cabin n office was informed on prior notice not to disclose any thing as she was in danger. Sameer sat in the cabin n aisha entered in the cabin she wished sameer with a polite smile saying "Good morning Sir" Sameer wished her back too saying "Good Morning Miss Kapoor please have a seat" Sameer just had a formal chit chat with aisha for 5 minutes n said "Thanks Miss Kapoor it was pleasure meeting u u may leave we will inform u if u r selected for this Job" she said "Thanks Sir" n marched out of the office Everyone was alert n started following her. As aisha reached near the local train station she saw few men following her with guns she got terrified n started running to escape but her bad luck that aslam stopped her n took her at gun point. ETF was already alert n before aslam could shoot her sameer shot directly into his head from behind n he died on the spot n rest were arrested. Hearing Gunshot she clenched her eyes in fear so she was not aware who shot the bullet her eyes flew open when sameer patted her shoulder n asked" Miss Kapoor r u alright" She open her eyes n saw the man few minutes back who was taking her Interview is now holding a gun n shot aslam Aisha was clueless about what happened. She opened her eyes in surprise n said "Mr. Sameer rathod Aap yahah "

So kaisa tha mast ya bore Comment zarror karna n no silent reading Samjhe ya samjhaao 😆😆

P recap - Sameer Asks Aisha to join ETF What will be her Answer
Edited by abrol.gold - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Yippieee me first...🥳

Wht an awesome start dr...!!!!

Loved Aisha's way of tinking...!!!

Wow Shree was mesmerised by Aisha's beauty..!!!

Awww Sam scolded Shree n Chotu...!!

OMG Sultan made her hostage... But she bravly deal with him n free herself frm his hold...!!!

Yayyy Arjun shot him dead n close his chapter...!!!

Wow thy tricked her n also killed Aslam befr he harm her...!!

Precap looks interesting...but i hv a doubt... hw cam an MBA graduate join ETF...!!!!

Curious to read further...!!!!!

Thanks 4 pm dr...

Continue soon...

Edited by Aks13 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great start...sameer and arjun both saved ayesha...😊
now sameer wants ayesha in ETF... 😉 as pas rahenge...
i guess ayesha will agree...but how will sameer convince her to join will have to wait to read..
continue soon...
thanks for the pm goldie...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
awesome start yar.. Loved it.. Thanks for pm..
Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: invisible2018

great start...sameer and arjun both saved ayesha...😊
now sameer wants ayesha in ETF... 😉 as pas rahenge...
i guess ayesha will agree...but how will sameer convince her to join will have to wait to read..
continue soon...
thanks for the pm goldie...


Ur welcome rimi thanks u liked it
Keep commenting 😊
Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: unishaz

awesome start yar.. Loved it.. Thanks for pm..


Thanks stay tuned n keep commenting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
love it
thanks for pm
continue soon
Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: zubiya92

Awesome update
love it
thanks for pm
continue soon

Thanks zubi hope u like the coming parts 😊
Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Aks13

Yippieee me first...🥳

Wht an awesome start dr...!!!!

Loved Aisha's way of tinking...!!!

Wow Shree was mesmerised by Aisha's beauty..!!!

Awww Sam scolded Shree n Chotu...!!

OMG Sultan made her hostage... But she bravly deal with him n free herself frm his hold...!!!

Yayyy Arjun shot him dead n close his chapter...!!!

Wow thy tricked her n also killed Aslam befr he harm her...!!

Precap looks interesting...but i hv a doubt... hw cam an MBA graduate join ETF...!!!!

Curious to read further...!!!!!

Thanks 4 pm dr...

Continue soon...


Well tanks u liked it Aks
If u want to know let me tell u she is going to join as undercover
n she will be trained first that u will come to know in coming parts
Keep commenting love u n stay tuned 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: abrol.gold


Well tanks u liked it Aks
If u want to know let me tell u she is going to join as undercover
n she will be trained first that u will come to know in coming parts
Keep commenting love u n stay tuned 😊

Oh wow that's great swthrt...Looking frwrd to it... n also waiting for Aisha's reaction...
Will surely do it dr...🤗

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