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It's a nice, cool beautiful morning in the city of Mumbai.. everyone busy in doing their work..
We see a young,handsome,dashing guy in the bb court.. playing alone alongside the soft drizzling …making perfect goals.. .. A imp day in his life.. new interns are coming to sanjeevani today.. a hazy picture of a girl comes infront of his eyes.. jogging on the track infront… his expression changes to an angry one and he throws a the ball at her… but there was no one…
This is our Dr. riddhaan… Dr. riddhaan kapoor.. a senior doctor at sanjeevani… seems that happinass is drained from his life..
Suddenly he hears a voice from behind…
Voice: hey! it seems u need to take lessons in bb from me..
A guy was standing wid a group of children ,having a cutest,dimpled evil smile..
Voice: right kids??
He is our Dr armaan mallik..a new intern at sanjeevani.. cool,charming,his blue eyes cud take anyone wid them..
Riddhaan:(looks at him with calmness, smiles at him devilishly and turns around n makes a perfect basket) oh yeah!! Really??
Armaan: impressed dude!! U seem lyk a tough competitor!! Not bad..
Riddhaan: Huh.. wateva..
(armaan takes the ball and makes a basket.. rid is impressed.. but ignores and turns to go.)
Armaan: hey!! Wanna play a match!! Bet u'll lose it..
(rid is irritated and his alarm goes on)
Rid: I HATE overconfidence !! for nw gotta go !! maybe some other time..
Ar: dude!! Darr to ni gae naa.. haha
Rid: wateva… (in his mind).. an overconfident idiot..huh

Riddhaan goes back to his house.. to his dad's room… his dad Dr. Rajeev kapoor.. the dean of sanjeevani..
Rid: gud mrng dad..(smiles a little)
Raj:gud mrng beta..!! ready for a new start??
Rid: ofcourse dad!! (sees he is already ready) so u're going so early..??
Raj: yeah!! Arrangements karni hai naa.. nae interns k lie.. dr. shashank must be waiting for me.. keerti n shubhankar ko b jaldi bulaya hai..
Rid: ok dad!!
Raj: bye.. u reach on time… (rid nods)
Rajeev had noticed the change in his son from the last 1 yr.. he nvr knew wat happened.. his son's life took a 360 degree turn.. he always tried to show he ws normal but he wasn't.. and raj knew it.. rid never told his problems to raj.. maybe he loved him a lot.. dats y.. from a very vivacious person he turned lifeless.. short-temperd..
But raj was happy becoz rid had bet of friendzz.. whom he trusted a lot.. and he knew they wud always support him..

Riddhan in his room... dials a number..
Rid: Dr. arjun chopra.. get up ur getting late for duty..
Arj: (in his bed.. thinking: baj gai meri alarm clock) idiot !! atleast.. subah subah to pyar se baat kia kr.. naa gud mrng.. naa hi.. naa hello… seedha blah blah blah.. huh
Rid: kyun raat ko fone pe jo meethi meethi batein arrow karti h.. vo kafi nai h..
Arj: oye riddhaan kitni baar kaha h.. don't call her arrow.. she doesn't likes it..
Rid: (imitates him) she doesn't like it.. huh.. get up now.. aur bhi kaam hai mere paas..
Arj: haan to jaa na .. get lost..
(cuts the call)
It was riddhaan's daily routine of being an alarm clock to his best friends arjun and atul..
Now.. he dials atuls number.. he does not pick it up(as usual)
He dials.. aother number..
A girl peacefully sleeping on her bed.. shez disturbed by his call… another girl doing her pooja..hears the ring..she is very sweet n innocent looking.. looks at her elder sisters phone.. a smile comes on her face.. she is riddhima.. today is her first day for internship..
Ridi: diii… uthooo.. dekho kiska phone hai.. blushes.. di dr ridhaan ka fone hai..
Her sister anjali is also a senior doc at sanjeevani..
Anj: kya hai?? Huh.. do phone.. she takes d fone.. hel…
Rid: anjyyy.. had hoti h naa tum fone uthati ho naa tumhara atul.. muje samajte kya ho tum log.. khud hi uthana atul ko … huh.. bye(cuts the call)
Anj:hel..hell.. idiot.. huh
Ridi: don't call him idiot(shows a fake frown)
(Actually ridhima has a crush on riddhaan.. only a crush nothing more.. anjy knows abt it and always teases her coz she knows dat her ridzy is not serious abt him..)
Anj: oh!! So swt.. riddhaan and riddhima.. wow.. BHAI BEHEN jaise naam hai dono k..
(and a pillow lands on anjy)
Ridi: Di ur so mean..ahhh..
Anj: aww!! My swtheart.. acha dad gae hospital??
Ridi: kab ke di…
Anj: oh god!! Aaj muje jaldii pohochna tha.. omg ..ab.. aisa kr tu atul ko call kr de , main ready hoti hu..
Ridi: ok di!!
(she calls atul.. and tells him to reach early))

Armaan enters his house.. his twin sister nikita is slill sleeping.. he goes to the bathroom and brings a bucket full of water and…(everyone knows..hehe)
Nik: armaaan… I will kill u..
Arm: naa balike..subah subah.. achi achi batein kerte h..
Nik: oh yeah!! Idiot..
Arm:chal get up..were getting late.. aaj first day hai.. late ho gae to galat impression padega..
Nik:hmm.. just half n hour..
Arm: multiplied by 4.. hehe..
Nik: u..u..huh.. get lost..

All get ready to reach their destination … sanjeevani..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it, Beautiful start sweetie... 😳
Continue soon... 😊
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nice dear. do update soon.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry guys
actually this is not my story
i copied it from some blog
i never knew this was not allowed
i had taken permission from writer now
but i think that blog doesnt exist anymore
Sorry guys

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