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THE dAWN OF THE dAWN

Chapter 34 - Part 1

Author Notes: First of all my sincere apologies for the delay and for not hitting like button and not replying to feedbacks. But I swear I read each of your comments. Its just one of those crazy times I am going through at work. I should get back to normal in 2 weeks (giving my self additional time). I am overwhelmed with your responses and I am glad you are enjoying ArShi's romantic journey. I have created blog (exciting news for some and me as well, I sweated to figure it out...Uff) finally for the MATURE CONTENT and shall post the blog info soon on my profile. Please check it out and DO NOT send me PMs for the blog address.

Author Request: After reading some of your comments, I realized that many of you are jumping directly to the dialogues. I am OK if you are fine with it but I must warn you are missing some details of the story which will either leave you in confusion or anger. So please read between the lines. Oh One more thing, there are quite a few double meanings, so feel free to PM me if you need clarification.

Author Clarification on Arnav paying the bill: Some of you expressed that they didnt like Arnav paying the bill, wanting to have upper hand. No thats not the reason why he did that. If you clearly understand from the time she came to RM, he never asked her about her parents. And if you read the past chapters, she never earned or took single penny for her contribution. And also if you remember, they had conversation on her second day at her office that 2 days pay amount will be deducted from her first salary which she has not received yet. Keeping all these in mind, Arnav said no to her because he is the man and responsible husband who doesnt want his wife to user parents credit cards or money especially on HIM and THEIR DATE. Please read between the lines and the emotions that I explain in between. If not, I am always here to explain just like the way I am doing now 😆

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I promise I will never disgrace your dignity. He kissed her knuckles and opened the passenger door and sighed her to sit.

Overwhelmed with his promise, she leaned in and pecked his cheek and mumbled, I dont mind taking the wheel.

Someother day Khushi. You look very pale. Are you down with something? He asked concernedly.

She looked away shyly, No, I am fine.

I wanna do shopping with you. She replied when he asked her next plan.

Do you mind if we do that later half of the day? I wanna take you to Haji Ali.

Haji Ali? Are you serious? I never been there. She asked turning to him excitedly.

He cupped her cheek, I know you must have thought about taking me to temple today?

How do you know? A lone tear escaped her eyes. The whole thought of visiting temple lingered in her mind all night but she knew what prayers and temple means. His mom.

Itna tho jaanta hoon tere baare mein. [I know at least this much of you] He leaned in and kissed away her tear.

Last night when he confessed how painful it was for him all these years, she realized what a big blunder she was going to make, to change him. Since then, many times her heart and mind unanimously questioned her the need to change him?

Does he really need to change the way he loves me? No.

Does he really need to change the way his aggression towards money? No, not after what he lost.

Does he really need to change the way he buried his family in his soul? No that would be like snatching his family away from him.

Does he really need to change his perception towards people? No not after what people did to him.

Why didnt I think of this before?

Why did I become so selfish only wanting to see him play pranks and crack jokes.

Am I really soothing his pain or taking him away from himself? Nothing made sense to her.

She didnt understand what direction she needs to take him. Hope she gets the answer soon from the man himself. But she knew one thing, she is going to stand by him however he likes to be and leads his life. PERIOD, no arguments in her mind about that.

So do you wanna go? He asked holding her hand, jerking her off from her deep thoughts.

Like he understood her every thought, her every hesitation and her every desire, he took impromptu decision to take her.

Haji Ali. I am dying to go with YOU. I never been there.

He smiled at her excitement and steered the wheel to Haji Ali.

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The Mosque is wide in its structure and white in color, looked as it seemed like floating in the waters. The view looked serene as she stopped holding his hand at the entry of the pathway. The mosque is connected to the land through the narrow pathway which is constantly slashed with ocean waters and buzzed with thousands of pilgrims.

As Arnav took a step forward holding her hand, She pulled him back. She is scared. She is scared of the waters washing the concrete pathway. Arnav followed her gaze and noticed waters constantly dipping the path due to monsoon tides. He placed his other hand on hers and squeezed it. She looked at him with fearful eyes. Their wedding night flashed in their minds making her shiver a little bit.

He rubbed her palm and spoke assuringly, Trust me Khushi!

She nodded Positive without any hesitation.

He slipped his arm around her waist and said, I will never let anything or anyone harm you. Main hoo na?

She nodded and nervously followed his steps. After around 5 steps, waters splashed onto their feet and Khushi jumped up as if bitten by a roach. Arnav tried to control his laughter but couldnt help himself much.

Relax Khushi. Didnt you play splash when you were young?

He asked holding her protectively and securely.I did, but that was sprinkler water and this is ocean water.

She said highly concentrating on the waters on both sides of the path. If you are scared, lets go back. I dont wanna put you through this.

hat is she doing? It was he who decided to come without her forcing him. She has been waiting for that moment and she is just ruining it. Gathering much needed courage, she said nervously looking at waters, Arnav I really wanna go. I will be calm, I promise.

He smirked as he got brilliant idea to protect her. He loosely wrapped his arm around her waist so that he could freely unwound it if necessary. As the waters splashed to her left, he came around her to the left covering her from the splash. Same way, when the water came towards her right, he came around her to the right covering her from the splash. For few mins Khushi didnt understand what he is doing and she gave this lost child look totally amusing Arnav. But he continued his duty amazed that she is the only person in the entire universe who can make him do crazy stuff like these and that too in public.

As they reached the main gate of dargah, Arnav stopped Khushi from entering. Khushi, men and women go separately from here. Women go through the left side and men go this side.

Khushi inched up to see if thats what everyone doing. Arnav already knew this before and he initially planned to come only to this point hoping that they would pray from here and leave. But now after seeing Khushi's enthusiam, he felt helpless as he didnt want her to leave especially when he is about to do something very important for her and him.

Arnav, why dont we do something. She spoke peeking her head up at the crowd on the other side of the gate. Tired of tip-toeing, she turned to look at him who looked distressed, why dont we pray from here and return. I dont feel good about going alone without you.

She put up puppy face hoping that he would accept it. Instantly a huge smile flashed on his lips and said, You just know me so well Khushi.

She looked at him confused.

Shall we pray? He reminded her.

She was shocked hearing the word pray from his mouth and slowly sunk in as he smiled at her O expression. He is changing. She let out a happy smile and closed her eyes. He turned her to face the gate and waited for her to close the eyes.

She looked absolutely adorable chanting something. She looked as though praying for every single person in the world wishing endless list of things from her God. Her expressions turned from smile to seriousness to naughtiness and back to smile in matter of few secs. At the end, tears escaped her eyes. He wasnt sure exactly why, but he guessed it must have something to do with his huge step to pray.

She concluded her prayer and opened her eyes to find him looking at her. She turned to face him as his eyes held hers for quite long. She sensed something is going to happen looking at the intensity of his gaze. And then it did happen, something that she never anticipated and something did he ever thought he would do for a woman.

He lowered his head surrendering himself to her, infront of thousands of people, her god, and that every single visible, invisble speck in the universe.

She gasped and took a step back unable to understand what is happening. Tears rolled out her eyes and words stuck in her throat as she felt huge lump in her throat taking in his gesture. A simple gesture yet spoke many unsaid words, must be extremely difficult for him to do for any other being.

She quickly took a step forward and lift his head, Arnav what are you doing? You are scaring me, dont you ever do anything like this. She panicked and looked extremely disturbed.

His eyes blood red as emotions stirred him up. If Khushi clearly understood, he is holding his tears, battling himself.

He took her hands in his and cleared his throat to say something. Khushi, I stopped believing in God when he took my parents away. I dont believe in this God, in fact that word is total meaningless to me and will always be. But Khushi, I believe you and only you. And for me, YOU are that supreme power, I havent seen anyone putting so much effort for me.

She gripped his hand, trying to control her sobs. She felt overwhelmed with his words.

He continued, squeezing her hands, I am not saying this for what we feel for each other. I thought alot about us last night. Ever since you came, I smiled with all my heart and I cried with all my heart which I failed in last 8 years, who was just a stone and nothing else. I felt I now have every reason to cherish my life and that reason is YOU. That God couldnt make me do this in 8 years but you did. I promise I will come to any temple you want, I will attend any prayer you want me to, but remember he can never take your spot.

She brought his hands to her lips and she cried. His words stunned her and paralyzed her senses failing to react. In a swift moment, without saying a word, she held his hand and ran away towards their car as fast as she could, without stopping even when he tried to. Arnav just followed her in shock unable to understand what she is doing. She opened the rear door of the car and jumped in pulling him behind her.She threw the keys and her clutch on the car mat. She cupped his face roughly and claimed his lips before he called out her name. She cried through the kiss, causing her body to teeter against his. He could feel her shaken frame with the way she sealed his lips clumsily. He pulled her closer and rubbed her back to calm her down. She kissed him fiercely punishing him for loving her to such extent. She roughly nibbled him all in haste and he obliged to her need of the moment, silently groaned in pain and squeezed her hips in attempt to bear the pain.

Realizing what she was doing, how she was hurting him, she pulled herself away, resting her forehead against his, she sobbed and mumbled, Why do you love me so much Arnav? Dont love me so much, Please dont love me so much.

She pleaded onto his lips. She is overwhelmed, she never knew this kind of love existed. Heck she never knew what love is until he came.

Shhh... look at me. Khushi look at me please. He cupped her face as she looked at him with her teary eyes.

Every word I said came straight from here. He squeezed her palm against his heart. And every single word is true and will remain true forever.

She lowered her eyes and nodded in dismay. She got the first glimpse of who Arnav Singh Raizada truly is. Last night, she heard his love for her but today she is witnessing his mad love. Never in a moment, she dreamt she would hear such huge words about her especially in a world of men who mostly consider women as door mats.

She mentally thanked her father for choosing Arnav for her. Though earlier, she accepted her father's sacrifice from his friendship point of view, today she accepted that its all worth it to attain Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada's love. She can die thousands deaths to live one day in his pure love. Its just a second day of their beautiful relation and she fell in love with her man all over again. She looked at his anxious pair of eyes which are staring at her worriedly silently pleading her to calm down.

She bunched his sweater at his chest and pulled him closer. She pecked his lips soothing the pain she caused moments ago, her gaze fixed at his flushed lips. She nestled in his arms as he wrapped her arms around his neck and scooped her up onto his lap. He felt her lips on his jawbone, moving all the way up to his cheeks, eyes and settling on his forehead. He loved the way her fingers crawled from the base of his throat, to his hair, tangling her fingers.

Arnav. She murmured for his attention.

His eyes flickered open and blinked at hers slowly.

Caressing his chiseled features, she whispered with all her trembling emotions, I just fell in love with you all over again.

He smiled, You are so unpredictable. He leaned forward to place a soft kiss on her lips.

Uh uh, not as much as you are. She mumbled from under her chin.

Well, then? He started putting butterfly kisses on her lips, moving down to her neck.

Then? Her voice succumbed in haze forgetting what the discussion is all about.

She could feel his lips spreading into smile over her neck, when he replied, Then brace yourself Mrs. Raizada, our lovemaking life is going to be very intriguing.

His words drawn her out of her sensual haze and she looked shockingly and flustered at him. I will give you all night to drool over me. Lets just get to the unfinished business for now.

He kissed her full on her mouth, plunging deep inside her, taking her along to whole new blissful world in a split second.

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Deepthi

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THE dAWN OF THE dAWN

Chapter 34 - Part 2

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Khushi and Arnav walked the streets of Mumbai, holding hands together like new lovers in town. There is so much love in the air that the couple didnt realize the time and how long they walked. Khushi was amazed to see inexpensive clothes and accessories especially handbags that carried the most luxurious brand names. She never knew imitation of such brands can be found on platform shops. She is so shocked and intrigued with the newly found revelation that she kept stopping at almost every shop, and keenly examined to find the difference between her expensive Jimmy Choo clutch and an imitation one. She found nothing. Arnav couldnt help but chuckle at her big O mouth every single time. Arnav had to literally drag her out of shops when she insisted she would by bunch of handbags.

What surprised Arnav was the lack of her knowledge in street life. At one point, especially when she was shocked to believe that the items sold on the platform shops are imitation products, Arnav worried wondering if its her ignorance or if there is something else that he missed about her life. Needless to say, Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada already started hatching plan to secure her life in case anything happens to him.

At the very end of the strip, Khushi's eyes fell on pup tent exhibiting antique accessories. Her eyes particularly stared at a husband who is helping his wife putting the jewellery on. Her heart itched to do the same with Arnav. She immediately tugged his hand and pointed him to take her to the shop. It is a very small tent which can not accommodate more than 3-4 people. She looked around the pieces while he too joined her peeking above her shoulders. Her wicked brain lit up and picked a pair ankle bracelets that has dangling leaves made in brass.

She sat on a wicker chair and asked him to undo the ankle bracelet hook. She asked him to put it on her when he tried to hand it to her. He sat on his toes and hesitated for a moment to touch her feet not because of any male chauvinistic attitude but embarrassed of getting caught of his weakness towards her feet.

He placed her feet on his knee and clasped the anklets without touching her skin as he was sure, a rough kiss of his hand on her feet would make him go weak on his knees. But his melting heart fell into its own trap hypnotizing him to touch her.

As he raised his fingers to touch her, Khushi stood pulling her feet away teasing him, making him desperate. He gave her an annoyed look, sighed her to let him.

She wriggled her thumb teasing him, gesturing him No Way. Before she could take one more step away, he twisted her arm and pulled her to collide his chest. He gave her a deathly stare, followed by greedy look and then sly smile before he kissed her lips not caring for the people around. She resisted but he was too enticing to fight for long.

Dont deny me, especially when you desire for it as much as I do. And this rule applies to everything. E.V.E.R.Y.T.H.I.N.G Mrs. RAIZADA. She tried very hard to control her blush filling her skin up as she got the message behind EVERYTHING.

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This is my favorite bar. How do you know all this? Arnav asked as they entered one of the best rooftop bars in Mumbai, Aer rooftop lounge in Four Seasons.

Oh is it? I took wild guess

Both entered through the glass doors to rooftop. It was her first time to this place and she was stunned by its beauty. The whole open area is lit with purple puddle lamps, and she could see panaromic view of the city.

No wonder its your favorite. She whispered unable to voice out in haze.

First time?

She nodded Yes.

The moment they stepped in, smooth romantic jazz music played. Arnav looked around and found noone except a bar tender, saxophone player, and chef.

He looked questioningly at her to which she shrugged her shoulders and whispered, Just US!

Couldnt be more perfect! He smiled and kissed her temple. He had been to this place many times but today the whole place looked surreal. No fancy decorations. Just plain by itself turned breathtaking, may be because of her, he thought.

Soon they were greeted by the Chef and were asked to seat anywhere they prefer. Arnav led her way to the most secluded table away from the other 3 persons. She couldnt help but giggle at his teenage antics.

He asked What? before he pulled the chair for her.

I think I have to keep reminding your age these days. She said settling down on her chair.

He leaned down from behind her and whispered, Always young at her heart, my love! He turned to his seat opposite to her, not before giving a smooch on her cheek.

When Arnav saw Bartender walking towards them to take order, he asked if she cares for drinks.

OUR drink? She asked excitedly not registering that bartender is standing next to them.

Arnav nodded curving up his lips into smirk while she waited patiently to know the drink name.

Dirty Martini and S*x on the beach please. And go easy on bitter for SOB.

Khushi looked at Arnav wide-eyed and whispered barely audible to herself.

You can speak louder Khushi. They cant hear us.

Which one is OUR drink? What do you think?

You said it was inappropriate to say that day, so I guess the second one.

Which one? Dirty Martini? He asked purposely driving her to the edge.

No the other one.

Hmm What else did I order? I dont remember.

Wahi, she said the drink name in lower voice that she couldnt hear herself.

I cant hear you Khushi. He said thoroughly enjoying the game she is playing along innocently.

I said S*x on the beach? This time she spoke loud startling Arnav.

And he is not leaving the golden opportunity to tease her. What? did you just say, you want s*x on the beach?

She sat up straight, all embarrassed and flustered. She gave him deathly stare and excused herself to rest room.

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Arnav kept replaying the day's events, sometimes chuckling and blushing at her antics. But at one point his mind got stuck to new findings about Khushi. His mind kept screaming that there is lot more he needs to know about Khushi, which is true he doesnt know anything apart 3months he spent with her in college. But before that he needed to do something important for her. He called Aman to make an appointment with their investment banker, CA, and lawyer as soon as possible.

They spent rest of their dinner quietly, talking about the college and friends. Khushi was so engrossed in detailing one of her friend's eloped marriage that she didnt realize her one foot brushing his knee.

Khushi gasped and made O when he grabbed her foot and placed it on his lap.

Were you saying something baby? Arnav teased her as he removed her stiletto touching her foot.

Woh..woh..wh..

Like he ran away, bride came with other lover..etc..etc..etc...He tickled drawing lines with tip of his nails.

Arnav, what are you doing? Leave my foot. She giggled and twisted with the sensation.

You very well know you are not getting away this time. He tickled the soft flesh between his fingers.

Arnavvv? If I come that side, I am going to beat you up.

Okay. Get up and come. I am all yours. He cuffed her ankle firmly not allowing her to get up...

She giggled and twisted in her chair. Arnav please...

Sorry bolo.

Nahi boloongi. And this is the last time I am letting you touch.

Oh yeah? Fine help your self. He made it worse by giving featherly touches.

OK OK but one condition.

NO. Ball is in my court. He did not relent, thoroughly enjoying the way she jumped in her seat.

You are going to pay for this Mr. Raizada. Sorry. She huffed.

OKAY! He tortured her more.

What? I just said sorry.

Pyaar se bolo and with a smile.

Shhhorrryyy. Please pati parmeshwar, mujhe maaf kardo. She pouted with puppy face.

Now repeat after me. The sole proprietary of every inch of of me is my husband Arnav Singh Raizada.

The sole proprietary of every inch of of me is my husband Arnav Singh Raizada.

I will never deny my husband.

I will never deny my husband. She said looking all shy and flustered.

Hmm Good. Yaad rakhna! He stopped tickling her but tugged her foot when she tried to pull away. She tried to pull away but he tugged it again giving her a stern look before kneading the sole of her foot with his thumb.

Arn???

Sit back & Relax. You walked alot today.

She felt emotional. The attention she is getting, the care she is receiving and the love she is feeling all felt like dream and unreal. It was true that her body was aching terribly due to her menstrual cycle. She didnt utter a word of her pain nor showed him. She wondered how he understands so much about her without a word being said.

She sat back looking at him intently while he stared at her fondly, massaging her feet. A perfect Rabbe Ve moment that could shake anybody witnessing their love through eyes.

You feel good?

She nodded Yes. How did you get my mehendi pic on your phone? She asked him out of nowhere and he certainly wasnt expecting another confrontation so soon.

He looked all shocked and busted.

I wasnt sneaking into....She was about to explain and make things clear.

Stop. Dont ever give explanation to anybody.

Then tell me, how did you get my picture.

Payal sent it to me. I had that since then but I must confess that I deleted the other one and I deeply regret for that.

You deleted my picture? Which one?

The one with haldi all over your face.

Kyun?

I guess I was angry then.

There was this awkward silence as they both knew why he must have been silent but they didnt break eye contact, one seeking answers, one relenting to questions.

Khushi I wanted to ask you about something.

She looked at him attentively.

I do not know anything about you apart from the time we spent together in college. I want to know more, your childhood, your school, your besties, last 8 years. Fill me in please.

Hmm kya boloon. I was born here, as you know. We both are on the same day. She said smiling.

Then I was raised in London. Then I came to NY to do my course, then I came back to India so here I am infront of you.

You studied in London? Why when your parents are in India?. He asked as his face turned suspicious thinking something not adding up.

Chodo na Arnav. We will talk about it later. This place is beautiful isn't it. She looked away avoiding his gaze, trying to change the topic.

He observed her flustered and disturbed state and he knew she is hiding something and he decided to get down to the facts.

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When Arnav started digging up her past, she got worried as she didnt wanna say anything that might further ruin his relation with her parents. She excused herself to check on the view. She stood by the railings looking down the high building. Lost in her radiance, he too joined her standing behind her. He pinned her to the railing with his hands on either end on the rails. She froze as she could feel him breathing warm on her nape.

Sir, would 3PM tomorrow work for you? Aman called him to confirm the appointments.

Just Perfect! he said taking deep breaths of her seductive perfume Pleasures.

Khushi tried to turn around to stop him as he is on the call.

But he arrested her palms to the cold metal. All she could do is close her eyes and wait for him to drive her to the sizzling world.

Sir, got a call from Singhania this morning. He said he cant make it tomorrow and the day after your schedule is pretty full. It will take another 3days before you meet him.

Sooner the better, please figure it out. He hung up the phone.

Please? Aman uttered in confusion. Since when did he started using these words.

He titled his head placing an open mouth kiss behind her ear, making her twitch more towards him. He nuzzled his nose tip behind her ear, tracing her baby hair along the hair line. They loved the tickling sensation each created in the other.

Her grip on the railings tightened as he gave a soft bite on her neck tugging her mangalsutra.

They must be watching us. She spoke in low tone as she was taken to blissful world.

Do you really think I will let them see all this? He whispered moving closer to her, craning his neck to the front, to kiss her throbbing pulse.

If anyone sees them from behind, they will have no idea of their hot encounter. He enveloped around her so fittingly, none would doubt what they are doing.

Her toes curled as his hair brushed on her face. She so badly wanted to feel his hair, his skin but he held her hands tight on the railings without allowing her to move. She leaned her head back to his shoulders letting him to do anything he demands.

Let go off my hands please. She whispered unable to do anything with him.

Give me one reason why I should. He swept his wet lips along her jaw line, moving all the way back to her ears.

Arnav you are punishing me. She tried to face him asking for a kiss but he is not relenting.

The moment calls for it. Try something better. He gave a slurping kiss on her shoulder.

Arnav I love you. He tilted his head and looked at her. His heart did skip a beat as promised and with the way she said it with all her desire in those sparkling eyes. He let out sly smile and gave her a deep love bite on her neck.

She became stiff, twitched her neck sealing his face in the crook. Her hands started sweating losing the grip on the rails. Her toes curled promising never to return to flat. Her voice hissed and faded in pleasure. Her tummy danced in all forms while her eyes pleasantly closed waiting for more.

You can do better baby. He licked his lips and placed soft wet pecks soothing the bite.

Please let me touch you. She pleaded sounding in haze. He left her the moment he heard what he wanted to hear.

She immediately turned around and pulled him by his sweater as she leaned against the rails.

Dont you think you are acting smart these days? She asked batting her lashes.

He clicked his tongue, making Tsk sound. I am BORN smart. I dont need to act.

You are so...She was about to say something but was interrupted by a call on his phone.

He ignored without checking who it is. Aman on the other end didnt hear the ring tone so he tried again.

She wrapped her arms around his neck and giggled at his frustrated face.

Aman it better be good. Otherwise consider yourself sitting at home for life long. He barked at Aman.

Khushi fully using the golden opportunity, trailed her finger nail along his jawline teasingly.

Sorry for the disturbance Sir. I forgot to inform that Raichand Group asking more time to consider the proposal.

What the? You are calling to say that? At this hour? Aman gulped nervously.

He thought his boss was in good mood mins ago. Sorry Sir. I will talk tomorrow.

Khushi leaned in and kissed the corner of his lips. Arnav looked at her and thought he is seeing his own reflection, the same passion and desire that he feels for her.

Wait Aman. Send a letter. Take my notes. He said looking into her eyes almost pleading her for something.

Now Sir?

Why do you have any problem. Mr. Raichand, My sincere request to you to consider my proposal and recheck the facts that prove how much I care for you, scratch that Aman, your business.

She shifted her gaze from his lips to her eyes while he tried to read her face as he spoke each word. I understand I have not given you enough time to accept my proposal but I dont think I can wait any longer. Please accept my proposal (caps) ASAP.

He hung up the phone abruptly and spoke the remaining tucking her hair behind her ear.

I am not desperate. But I am afraid I will become one if you dont accept it soon enough. I just want us to experience the real world between us, what you deserve and what we could...

She swiftly closed his mouth with her palm and stopped him. She cradled her hand behind his nape and blushed in that pale pink seducing him mercilessly.

He knew in that moment, as she stared up at him confidently, she is ready. She is ready for him to take their relationship to whole new level.

Can you wait for 2 days? She asked huskily reading his eyes for any disappointment.

Difficult, per manage karloonga. He is exhilarated to hear her and leaned down to her lips tasting the waters.

Dont you wanna know why? She mumbled through the kiss, fondly looking at him.

I am sure you must have have a reason. She brushed her fingers in his hair and pressed his lips to deepen the kiss.

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Edited by deepthiya - 11 years ago

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Deepthi

@ToxicLove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#735

THE dAWN OF THE dAWN

Chapter 34 - Part 3

Thank You Nishu for the lovely banner...awesome awesome😳

When Khushi excused herself to use the bathroom, Arnav ordered ice cream dessert which he was sure she is going to die just ogling at it.

Khushi on her way back to the table, from far saw beautiful dark dessert and came running towards it excited like kid in candy store. Her favorite ice cream Banana Nut Caramel Crunch is served in the Chocolate, shaped in the form of wine glass.

Did you order for me?

Yes Ma'm made to order.

What is it? She said excitedly looking at the master piece.

Your favorite!

No way, did you order that here?

With special instructions, Banana mashed up into sweet cream, lots of pecans, tons of caramel and chocolate syrup. Did I miss anything?

She nodded NO, without even looking at him.

Awww you are the best!. She said catching the chocolate syrup in her forefinger, that was dripping along the sides and she licked it moaning YUMMM.

He nodded in disbelief the way she was making sounds. He was glad people werent around otherwise they sure must have thought something else.

Khushi got up from her seat, tiptoed running to him and pecked his lips. Thank You! She giggled and ran back to devour the dark in front.

She was in different world, royally ignoring him, while he looked at her, amazed at the rate she is eating.

CAUTION: Extreme SLOW, torturing the poor ice cream until her tongue hit the right chord at every single feed.

And he didnt mind watching her relish. She looked more delicious this way than any other.

Just then he received a call from Payal.

Khushi looked up hearing the ringtone but soon she resumed her task caring less who that is.

Payal, calm down. Tell me what happened? Arnav asked worriedly

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OK we will be there. Is everything OK?

...

We should be there in hour. Give it to Akash.

Hey man. Jaldi aana, Need to talk with you.

Sab teek hain?

Everything is fine. You know women. Dont you worry. We will see you in a bit. Akash hung up leaving Arnav all worried about Payal.

Khushi.

She raised her eyes looking at him, slurping the cream from the spoon.

We need to go now. Payal called. I dont know whats the matter, but she sounded a bit upset. Akash sounded fine but Payal I am worried.

Achaan, Okay...She got up from the seat instantly, looking sadly at the ice cream. She still got MORE to eat. Al this while she was only licking the dripping as she never want that get over.

She licked her lips greedily, and he didnt fail to notice that. He slapped her forehead chuckling, Bilkul Pagal hain tu. He chuckled and called chef who was standing far from them.

Could you get us a box and LOTS of tissue papers.

She clapped as soon as the chef left and gave him a peck on his cheek with her chocolate covered lips.

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The drive back home is deadly silent as she was busy licking, slurping, and moaning icecream while he tried to keep steady face and concentrate on the road. He felt extreme jealous of the ice cream with the way she is giving it all her attention.

He swore that it will be the last time he would buy ice cream. Arnav parked the car and looked at her who is still savoring the delicacy. She is totally covered in chocolate and sweet cream. Syrup all over her cheeks, forehead, her shoulders and everywhere else where her skin covered. He got off the car in disbelief that his Land Rover is in big chocolate mess.

He opened her side door, You are a big mess. Worse than a kid.

She pouted as she couldnt get off the car, one she is holding the tray, and two, the seat is low to get up.

He held her arms and helped her get off. Just look at you. You are impossible Khushi.

All because of you. I wonder who taught you driving. You cant even drive properly on smooth roads. Leave me alone. I dont wanna speak to you. She walked to dining room and settled herself continuing her top goal to finish the ice cream.

You got 10mins to wash yourself and get ready. Payal and Akash will be here soon. He yelled before walking to his room.

She didnt bother. She continued her business. When it came down to almost 2-3 spoons, she realized she didnt offer Arnav. She immediately ran to their room, holding the tray with her sticky hands. She kicked the door open with her feet and rushed to him who was standing in the middle of the room, just out of the shower.

Arnav I am so sorry. I ate up everything. How could I be so mean. I didnt even offer you once. She started crying. She wiped her cheeks, smearing choc on them.

He stood wrapping his arms at his chest, smiling hard at her.

You are laughing?You are not upset?

He nodded No. Actually he was at loss of words. She looked too scrumptious.

Thank God. I thought you will be mad and ..Forget that. I have little bit. She tried to feed him. Eat.

I am full. I dont want. He turned away looking for his tee.

See you are angry. Aise kaise. Eat. She raised the spoon to his lips.

Khushi I dont want. You need to get ready, warna I will end up doing something. GO.

She pushed him onto the bed nudging with her b*tt. Yes B*TT. Mrs. Raizada didnt even realized that and started her ususal banter.

He fell back resting himself on his elbows, while she leaned on her knees between his legs on the bed, dangerously close to yet another..ahamm.

Khushi, I...

BOOM...

She closed her mouth with her palms, scared and sorry for herself.

He hissed in contact with the coldness as the tray with melted-icecream fell hard on his bare chest and neck.

Oh my god. what am I doing? she looked totally lost and confused. She looked all around to grab something to wipe him. She found his towel and leaned on his half seated position to clean.

The closeness ruffled his desire, desire to feel her. She smelled sweet and chocolate as she went closer. He wondered how she will taste. He flipped her beneath him and arrested her hands to the either side.

Thats not fair Mrs. Raizada. You ate up all the ice cream. Where is my share?

She looked at him wide eyed and flustered the moment her eyes landed on his bare chest, right after she mumbled something.

Hmm, so where is my share? Is it here? He licked her fingers while she looked away.

He then brushed her fingers on his chest, smearing them with the cream and put it between her lips making her taste. Is this the one?

He whispered relaxing her and she blushed right away and that too with no limits. This is all new to her. Her lips started trembling as she rested her hand on his chest. It was one perfect taut chest that any girl would die for her. She swept her hand on his chest from left to right and she could feel a day stubble behind the foamy cream. She raised her eyes and looked questioning at him, rubbing her fingers feeling the stubble.

As if he understood her question, he answered in low tone, I shave, every other day. If you dont...She nodded NO playfully and whispered I love it making him go all red and blush proudly.

He leaned in to seal her lips while her hand moved underneath his arm to his back, pressing him closer. Chocolate at it best he thought, as he tasted her cold waters. The medley of her cold pool with his hot smoke created havoc in both of them.

He moved his left hand down to her belly and slipped his thumb beneath her blouse. She tucked her muscles and she gasped in his mouth. Looking for that perfect moment, he deepened the kiss twisting and flipping her tongue inside.

He slowly moved his fingers inside the blouse feeling her delicate skin and she dug her nails into his back, urging to know what is happening to her. She knew what happens at this moment. Biology top ranker but she never knew the feeling would be inexplicable and indescribable.

He circled his thumb around her belly button making her shiver. He lifted the flap of her blouse and looked at her beautiful dip in awe. She curled her tows tangling her feet with the mere sight of him ogling at her. She dug her finger nails in his hair as he placed an open mouth kiss on her belly blowing warm air. He crawled back to her not before giving her belly button one last thorough look.

There are so many features in you that I seemed to develop fetishes these days. He whispered, drawing circles on her belly.

I saw it for the first time, when you were dancing in the rain.

And? She wanted to know what he thought at that time.

And my mind shot up thinking everything that I wasn't supposed to do at that time.

Like?

Like what I just did.

Her skin turned red. She never imagined him to be this best at this. She grew up watching DDLJ and HAHK and always wondered if she will ever find a man closer to those characters. Here he is better than characters, caressing her, talking through and easing her without demanding calling it as stupid rights.

Putting slight pressure on her belly he leaned on to kiss her shoulder. She pulled him closer as he brushed his lips teasing her. He licked the chocolate and bit her soft flesh making her moan and hiss in pain.As he was about to retreat, she pressed him hinting for more. And there was no stopping him from then on and he marked his name all over her neck, only to be revealed the next morning.

She flipped him over and kissed his chest, sweeping cream all the way upto the base of his throat.

I never knew you would taste so sweet. She giggled kissing his lobes.

Baby, Ice Cream? He asked looking at her lips.

She smiled and nodded NO.

Oh comeon, Please?

Phir Sorry bolo.

Why?

For troubling me in restaurant.

But you loved it don't you?

That's doesn't matter. Say sorry and repeat after me.

You are so demanding do you know that?

She shrugged and teased him licking the cream on his chest.

Wait don't finish it... Sorry.

Now repeat after me. My wife will decide When and Where.

What no way? That's my zone.

Sochlo Mr. You are giving up on ice cream.

Damn you, no wonder you were so good with clients.

Fine, My Wife will decide When and Where.

Buahahaahha.

He cradled her neck tugging her gently and pulled her closer, For one time only! He fluttered his brows letting a sly smile.

Thats cheating! She pouted.

Ok I will make it up for it and buy you more ice creams. But for now Please?

She blushed deepening the red color on her cheeks. She lowered her head and scooped ice cream between her lips. She pressed his lips and gave him the taste of ice cream as he parted his lips.

He glided his hand smoothly over her butt pulling her closer.She reached for the base of his neck and kissed his collar bone, nipping all the way upto his throat. He groaned in pleasure as his lower abs and muscles stiffened.

She slipped her leg between his legs accidentally brushing his shaft with her knee. She looked back to see what it is and her mouth opened in big O. She was embarrassed and looked shyly and also threw a shocking expression at him.

He blushed raising his brows like a small kid getting caught. Cant help it. That's what you do to me all the time.

She pursed her lips trying hard to control her blushing smile and rested her chin on his chest.

Why the hell did I agree to wait another 2 days?

So that you can gain some strength and become like Brad Pitt. I don't think you will be able handle me Mr. Raizada. She giggled teasing him.

He slapped her lips right away. Don't you know it's unfair to judge without putting it work? He pulled her by her chin and bit her lips punishing her for taking someone else's name on the bed.

Arnav? She slapped his chest as he went little overboard this time.

Sorry, He pulled her up cushioning her butt. She obliged totally forgetting that she is on her cycle. His fingers felt the traces of wetness between her back pockets and he smiled giving her ALREADY? look.

Soon that look faded to confused expression and he peeked over her shoulders to look at his fingers. Khushi, blood? He asked worriedly.

She immediately jumped off of him, moved away insecurely, held her arms against her chest, breaking into tears due to embarrassment.

Khushi? He sat up unable to understand. She stayed aloof with her eyes fixed on the floor as tears rolled down.

Finally it dawned to him what it may seem like. He walked over to her and tried to touch her, but she took step back not allowing him to touch her. She felt insecure and protective of her own self. He did not leave her, otherwise that would have been worst mistake of his life. He held her shoulders tightly not allowing her to move.

Are you having your monthly what ever they call?She nodded nervously as tears of embarrassment hit the floors.

He hugged her tightly, giving her a moment to regroup. Its OKAY. Its just me. You don't need to feel embarrassed with me. He broke the hug and made her see his face.

I must confess, for some sadistic reasons, I am glad I witnessed it today as I never seen it before. She chuckled slapping his chest.

You better fill me in with your cycle report. Afterall we are going live together for the rest of our life and I need to know when not to mess with you.

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This chappy is dedicated to all my baby sisters, who are dying for some icecream romance between them.

Edited by deepthiya - 11 years ago

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Chetna

@chetna19

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#736

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*****

Dii thank u so much for long update...

In first part...

temple means for arnav...memories of his mother...this is such a emotional side of him...when he lost his family nd after that he does not believe in GOD...but after khushi come in his life taking full change to change him from ruthless arnav to simple arnie...then everything going to change...arnav changes her love change him...now he demanded to go hajii ali with khushi... His life like a blank paper...only khushi is here for him who belongs to him...his love...

in this part I never seen like this I never read like this...its u who making things ..nd this is superb...he cares for her like he sain..main hoon na... ek inssan dusre insaan ko itna pyaar kaise kkrr sakta hian ki who usko apna bhagwan maan le...khushi ke liye kitna difficult hoga na...

arnav singh raizada zoh bhii kerta hain ...bilkul dil se kerta hain...chahe who pyaar kerna ho nafrat kerna ho ya kissi k aage sir jhukhana hon...or iss main main arnav k sath hun...i think both r perfect for each other...diii sab fairytale main hota hain...jhan itna itna itna pyaar hota hain...

They both know kii samne wala ka soch rha hain...

I was still thinking kya ye wahii arnav hain joh khushi kii suntan bhii nhi tha...now he is ready for joh bhii khushi khe kerne ko tayaar...

I promise I will come to any temple you want, I will attend any prayer you want me to, but remember he can never take your spot...

Dii aapke dialogue bhot power full hote hain...that contains lots of meaning emotions... but d way u describe each nd every sense..it ws like wow...

After that Dargah sense ...she kissed him...she ws continually crying ...wow dii...I loved her question why do you love me so much Arnav???... his love is very pure...he just want her on his side nothing else...

I will give you all night to drool over me. Lets just get to the unfinished business for now. ...**blush** ** blush**

They are naughty diii...after this emotional sense they still talking about their lovemaking life...

Inn dono main se arnav sase jayada beshram hain...hayee I love him...

In second part...

Now water kiss...dii u too much...

Shopping in roadsides shops ws always like that...but why arnav thinks her life without her I mean I know he wants to secure her life but why so sudden...she wears anklets by arnav hands...nd humara bechara arnav struggling with his thoughts to lose here to touch her or not...

Nd here khushi madam plying teasing game with him...

E.V.E.R.Y.T.H.I.N.G Mrs. RAIZADA...WOW Mr. ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA

How she knows about his favorite baar...they behaving like tenegers...nd arnav dialogue...Always young at her heart, my love!...perfect...

Awesome edit dii...awesome pic...arshi is alone in hole baar...fabuls preparations by khushi ... S*x on the beach please...OMG..arnav is so naughty...how can he...??

They teased each other a lot...after they ended this kiss ...lol...always..he heh e...

The sole proprietary of every inch of of me is my husband Arnav Singh Raizada.

I will never deny my husband...i think every husband wants this promise...he he he...

They also talked about mehndii pic...awesome conversation...

She ignored his question about her previous life...because doesn't want to ruin his relation with her family...after that she tell him she loves him...he is torching her...she wants to kiss him nd touch him...**BLUSH**

Nd here he indirectly told her what he wants from her...I can't wait...dii brilliant idea...they both r awesome they teased other...Bass opportunity ka wait kerte hain...bass doo din orr..or humare arnav tab tak manage krr lenge...nd he doesn't want wt ws reason behind two days wait...because he trust her...awesome...

Hmmm...now its tym for chocolate ice creams...yumm...

What happen to payal...hope nothing is serious...

Her craziness for this ice cream continue to baar nd then car nd to home...how crazy she is...iss ice cream k chakaar main humare bechare arnav ko bhi bhul gyiii...ohh my poor arnav...she didn't even offer him...

She pushed him on bed by herBUTT...ha ha haha ha...hellourious...

Deeps dii d way u explaining a men figure...h ehe he...now tym for called becharii khushi ...because this tym full on mode to tease her or love her...hayee...

I loved this ice cream romance...i never expected this never...love u dii...this is too much...

U r writing superb...wonderful dii...

This part is HOT HOT HOT...spatially last half part ...

They both r talking blushing teasing testing each other ...

Nd then embarrassment movement for her...aww my khushi ..but I love way he tell her.. Its OKAY. Its just me. You don't need to feel embarrassed with me...Arnav is all perfect for her...he understand her care for her...best husband ever...

Best best best chapters ever...dii I never saw this type of romance never read it...but here u r plotting all d sense like this ws wonderful dii...brilliant...perfect...

ARSHI ...plus ROMANCE...by DEEPTHIYA...PERFFECT COMBINATION...WOW DII...superb love u...❤️

Nishu awesome banner dear...😛

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#737

chetna first ne second

Damn i m second 😭😭

Koi baat nai

Here is my unres

Part 1

Okayy u knw na dii i loved d ending of last part wen he said her abt d dignity dat he wnt harm her in any way

and here u strtrd it wid dat point i so loved it

and cherry on d cake was khushi kissing him back

Ooo he was doubting her dat tym only wen she was looking pale

hell how i missed it

dat she was chumming

she asked for shopping was dis her plan or did she tried to chnge d topic only

And he took her to d masjid

d place were he only visited wid his parents

And she like a innocent child agreed i was so happy dat tym

Yess nw we cn sy dey knw each other to very much extent still 2-3 % left to knw each other cmpltly

The part were khushi was re comsidering her thought for arnav to make him bring back d old arnie

In a way i m glad dat she is accepting the new arnav bt my selfish heart want both d arnav d old and d new one who was funny and nw at dis serious also

Mee to never went to a mosque

Bt would love to go

Back to track loll

The way arnav behaved and supported khushi

Her promise and his protectiveness i was soo so lost in it trust me di i wnt get any better den dis bt i doubt u cn get better den dis hell i knw u will

u r awesome in writing

Poor khushi just seeing his husband going crazy

And patting herself for making him dis loll she is a antique piece

First i didnt get dese lines i mean wat was going on

bt ltr wile reading i was like mannn dis is love dedication respect watever words decribe dem r perfect

Lolll khushi doesnt wanna leave him in mosque also

and he having his reason agreed to her instantly

She was praying for him and he just kept staring her praying to her for dem and d next move was simply awesome

Bt y did khushi gt scared i knw dis is wat she was expecting or ever thought of bt still i dnt gt a valid reason for her getting scared

I was so happy wid my arnav cnfession

I once thought how much a man could love a person to how much extent arnav is really one and only

D kiss wich dey shared was nt for pleasure hayyeee it was a prms of taking each other pain and i so loved it 😳😳

Hayeee dere love making life well well kab ayegi wohh

Part 2

Beach walk and dat also hand in hand hayee how romantic 😳

Khushi is so naive and moreon oaming first tym on mumbai like dis making her crazy i was laughing like crazy wen i read her reactions to foot shops

arnav cn only laugh at his crazy wife crzy antics

Wat a scene was dat khushi doesnt leave a single chnce to tease him ryt

and damn he soo delicately made her wear dose ankelts asif she is a precious gem which shoud be handled wid care any mistake will harm her

and aftr dat she teased him by pulling her legs back making him groan he so desperately wanna touch dose ankle

Damn...!! E.V.E..R.Y.T.H.I.N.G i soo wana dese to happen

Did she really took a guess or found out wid someone else

Hayeee i love dis line think I have to keep reminding your age these days. lolll she is really antique as i said and d reply arnav did was really how romantic for a moment

Khushi reaction to arnav ordering drink lolll

and moreover dis sexy guy never leaves a chance to tease her ufff i just wanna c how dey both resistt and tease each other on dere first night nw

Hawww did he really do dat 😆😆😆 damn u raizada lolll teasing khushi wile dinner also bichari khushi😳😳

Nice way to make agree to things u want frm ur partner {nishu tere liya tha yehh specially remember dii ka dedication for u until first nyt}

He cares for her so damn much apni conditoins v flfil krwa li and den did cared her feets also bcz she was stressed wid d days activities 😳😳

D convo of mehendi pic is out loll and d silence of dlting d haldi pic made khushi and arnav make realize smthng abt each other 😊

Diii will she ever cnfrnt arnav wid her abt her childhood bcz d way she tired to ignore his question just for nt hurting him and also a reason maybe he also blames her later wen he knws d truth dat his parents died bcz she was told to stay away frm her and she unintentionally unknwingly came in his life

I knw arnav wouldnt mistrust her bt d fact make her thnk like dat

Aman doesnt gt a perfect tym to call arnav lolll arnav was in a good mood dats y he gt spared loll oderwise he would be sitting in his home playing wid his toddler

Poor aman cnt ever understnd his boss .. Arnav saying please to aman he cnt digest d fact loll

Again dis raizada strd his teasing business wid his wife and sigh she cnt even touch him bcz her grt hubby have blocked her

He is bcmn to demanding dese days

Poor aman baj gya na bandh bar bar apne boss ka precous moments iterupt karega toh yehin hoga

Bt ltr again he gt shocked bcz his boss was enjoying his wife antics of desire and passion

I understand I have not given you enough time to accept my proposal but I dont think I can wait any longer. Please accept my proposal (caps) ASAP.

I am not desperate. But I am afraid I will become one if you dont accept it soon enough. I just want us to experience the real world between us, what you deserve and what we could...

D two lines wich reflects dat he is carving for her as much as she is carving for him i loved dis lines how passionately he said dem making her undertnd his needs and moreon d meaning wich he wana cnvy to her dis was d perfect way

she was ready to tell d reason bt he trust his wife so never bothered to listened her reason and kissed her wid full love

Part 3

EEkksss d ice crem was soo yummm yummm mere muhhh mein pani agya aftr seeing d pic

Y did payal akash called dem

Ufff khushi kitni yummm dikh rhi hogi us waqt arnav koo wish he could taste dere only

I soo wished if u hve wrote i would end up eating u instead of somethng to u

Diii mrs raizada should take lesson

Lolll did she really thrown d icecream on him

Dere comes d devil raizada

Hahahah

Ufff d way he said i shave eveyday and den her reply she loves it

Dat was it i cnt cntrl to see dem dancing in rhythm nw loll ☺️

d rain cnfession was cute 😳😳

Ara yehh kya court kaise chnge hogya

arnav kitne mehnet se apni conditions full fill krwaya tha and nw khushi took it away

For one tym loll seriously arnav knws how to trick mrs raizada doesnt he ..??😳😳

Milk kiss den water kiss and nw ice cream kiss di i m seriously saying ab bus fruit kiss and food kiss bacha hai do dat also😎

Damn mr raizada getting jealous just bcz mrs, raizada praised brad pitt buahahahaa and hell he was jealous wen he knws dat dis lady belongs to him totally

Awww khushi was chumming and arnav got worried seeing her blood wich made khushi embarressed and sad at d moment

I must confess, for some sadistic reasons, I am glad I witnessed it today as I never seen it before.

You better fill me in with your cycle report. Afterall we are going live together for the rest of our life and I need to know when not to mess with you.

I loved dis besharam arnav

I dnt knw wat crap i hve made in my cmnt bt dii it took me three hours to write😒

I loved d updae❤️

And wil be waiing for more like dis

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asthagarwal

@asthagarwal

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#738

Part 1-

He noticed tht shez lukng pale...

Haji Ali???? OMG!!!! I always wanna go dere bt 4 nw i'll enjoy dis virtual treat 4m u... 🤗

He knew tht she wntd 2 go 2 d temple after dere confession??? Thts so cuteee... 😃

I luvd d way Khushi battled herself wid her thoughts... Sum where evn I agree tht shez ryt...

I luvd d way u hv described Haji Ali's exterior... 😃 Khushi's fear 4m water was well justified...

My heart melted wid dese lines- I will never let anything or anyone harm you. Main hoo na? Cn he get more adorable den dis??? 😕 🤗

He ws ready 2 go back wen he saw tht isn't comfortable... N Khushi dnt wntd 2 ruin d moment she agreed 2 b calm... Dey r sooo damn cuteee...

Arnav actually DID tht 2 protect her n tht 2 in Public... Well wen u r in LUV dese thngs dsnt matter... Ur ARNAV is mkng me fall 4 him MORE... ☺️

Dey aren't ready 2 go separately??? Seriously, Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon? 😃

Khushi style of praying ws so cuteee wid her expressions changing constantly... On d other hand, d Man beside her ws staring at his Universe... Enchanting... 👏

He actually surrendered himself 2 her??? 😲 N Khushi, pagal ladki panicked... Well thts ws an expected reaction bt d way he let out HIS emotions, feelings, belief, trust, faith ws lyk a miracle 4 a person who isn't expressive. LUVD IT... 👏

D KISS was damn intense, I hv nvr cum across anythng lyk dis b4... U nailed it wid d perfect emotions... I wonder, cn sum1 love a person 2 dis extent??? Earlier I use 2 thnk it a Bakwaas bt ur writing is screaming at me 2 accept d fact tht it actually exists... 👏 👏 👏

Mujhe bhi Arnav jaisa MAD LOVER chahiye... Cn he b more Perfect???

I just fell in love with you all over again. Evn I DID... 😳 Ahaan, sum1 is eager 2 strt dere Luv Lyf... 😆 Waise Evn I am eager 2 c dere Luv Lyf... 😉

Part 2-

Khushi's innocent gestures r so cutee... Wat d??? Y is he thnkng dats way??? I mean its obvious bt still, i hate him thnkng dat ways... <POUT>

Khushi is so naughty n intelligent tht she found out a way 2 get her crazy wish fulfilled by him... Smart Gal... 😉

Finally, Arnav is trapped... His weakness 4 her feet is OUT... 😆 He KISSED her in Public??? 😲 Well dey r nt b blamed coz DEY R IN LUV... 😃 E.V.E.R.Y.T.H.I.N.G. rule interests me... Wanna c more of its Application... 😳

ALONE on a rooftop lounge??? Dis cnt get BETTER... 😆

I soo luv dere Teenage antics n d way dey always choose 2 "SIT" in secluded area... 😉 AGE, SERIOUSLY??? 😲 (Di, u better tel ur Khushi abt tht saying tht v discussed) 😆

Ahaan, d drinks name finally disclosed... I cn imagine Khushi's reaction... 🤣

Arnav hvng FUN teasing his NOT SO INNOCENT wife... 😆 D way he made her speak d name n den twisted it was like ☺️

He grabbed her foot n ws doing all tht??? OMG!!! Hw did she survived??? 😲 😲 😲

I am all yours- Hayeee... Kaash... Uff!!!

The sole proprietary of every inch of of me is my husband Arnav Singh Raizada. I will never deny my husband. Maar dalo mujhe aise dialogues se... 😳 😳 😳

He noticed tht??? N he massaged her feet coz of tht??? HAYEEE... MAAR DALA... ☺️

Khushi dsnt wanna talk abt her past bt hez wil leave her n she knws tht... Pinning n holding was done beautifully...

PLEASE n 2 Aman??? Bechara shock se mar jayega... 😆

Dey wnt leave a chance na??? Well dey deserve it... 😉 D way she arrested her n took liberties wid her made my mind wander in several directions... N here cums d LOVE BITE... OMG!!!! Dere 1 luv bite... 😃

Please let me touch you- I agree wid Khushi in dis... Plzzz... Born Smart- Thts is dere- NO ARGUMENTS... 😆

Ye Aman 1 din fire hoga, pakka... Sumhw I felt tht d NOTES he ws gvng DIRECTLY 2 Aman ws INDIRECTLY 4 Khushi 😕

Jiski BIWI itni HOT ho uska despo banna is LEGAL... 😆 (Waise his wrds sent a shiver dwn my spine) 😳

Manage kar loonga... Awww... Hez so damn cuteee n he dnt evn asked her d reason... 😃

Part 3-

DIS ICE CREAM IS SO DAMN TEMPTING... (Luv u 4 including CHOCOLATE) 🤗

D way she ws havng it SLOWLY, i wonder hw Arnav managed his self- control??? 😕 😉 😆

I wonder wats wrng wid Payash 😕 She wsnt ready 2 leave her ice cream.. Aww... N he got it 4 her... Cn dey get more cuter??? 😃

Arnav is jealous of ICE CREAM??? Wat d??? Well he has 2 b... 😉 Khushi gt ice cream all over her??? Worst den kids, Seriously... 😆

I ws wondering tht she dnt evn offered him ice cream once, bt its nvr 2 late... 😉 I'm sure Arnav will hv IT in his own way n yes Khushi pushed him wid d mst unusal thng 1 cn thnk of... 😆

D ice cream fell on his CHEST, Correction, BARE CHEST... I'm so luvng it... Kaash mai wo ice cream hoti... 😳 Dey talked abt his CHEST HAIR??? I'm surely gonna faint... 😛

D currents met, HOT n COLD 1... Hand discovering his fantasy, belly button... Mai to gayi aaj...

My wife will decide when n where... UFF!!!! Mujhse bhi keh do kabhi... 😉

HE BLUSHED???? OMG!!!!!! 😲 😛 😉 EPIC...

BRAD PITT??? Does she doubt his EFFICIENCY??? Punishment ws well deserved... 😉

HIGHLIGHT OF D CHAPPY- DARGAH SCENE N DESE LINES-

You better fill me in with your cycle report. Afterall we are going live together for the rest of our life and I need to know when not to mess with you.

I guess i dnt need 2 tel u tht hw much I luv u n ur writing... It sends me 2 diff world all 2gether... Blessed 2 b a part of IF, BTS, TDTD n ur virtual lyk... 🤗

Edited by asthagarwal - 11 years ago

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Sorry sorry sorry...more than a million times...it never happened to me before...itne dinon baad I'm commenting...but my days are just passing crazily Di...even before realizing...upar se, without WiFi, I was in horrible condition...

First of all, congrats for the blog...I was re-reading BTS few days back(thanks to Pooji) and I couldnt even find few mature content wala PM...but atleast Chetna could provide them...Iss bar phir aisa nahi hoga...

and special thanks for bringing Haji Ali here...u dont know, how much I heard of this Dargah...If ever I go to Mumbai, I will visit that place for sure...and today while picturing ArShi there, I know I can never think of Haji Ali again without thinking of them...

Now start with the update...I mean start with my blabbers...

WOW...he noticed she looked pale...I realized in that moment...then it got confirmed...and she asked about waiting for two days, WOW...only two more days...Then the moment between them after he realized...really so adorable...and his demand to fill him with her cycle report...Awwee...Raizada...I love you man...

I really understand Khushi's confusion of to which direction she needs to take him...how much change should be brought...and her resolve of standing by his side however he leads his life...just WOW...

their entering into the Dargah, his protecting her from the tides...so cute...and then their praying...no her praying, and his watching her...loved it...but then came the shock...the way Arnav expressed her place in his life...OMG...I am really out of words...itnaa pyaar...koi kaise kar sakte hai...just too beautiful Di...

and the kiss they shared in the back seat of the car...her confession of falling in love all over again...WOW...

and their visiting the street shops...another thing I heard a lot about...and the anklets...his putting them on her feet...Awwee...

Di where did u get that pic...I have exact this one...lekin mujhe toh koi pehnate nahi...khud pehnna padta...life is so unfair...

now comes the bar...haayyee...most secluded table...good for them...the desperate lovers they are...privacy is much needed thing here...

So yeh tha drink ka naam...I have no idea of these things, but even I had, I could never guess this one, I am sure...

I just loved the way he made her apologize..."The sole proprietary of every inch of of me is my husband Arnav Singh Raizada. I will never deny my husband"...WOW...to good...and "My Wife will decide When and Where"...God...koi kissi se kam nahi...just superb...

Awwee...Mr. Raizada massaging his wife's feet...so cute...and they talk about her mehendi pic...loved it...and Khushi may try to avoid talking about her life, but ofcourse Arnav will not let this go...

and their encounter...we know that Mr. Raizada is born smart...the way he dictate Aman to take note for Mr. Raichand, ooops, we all know for whom it was...bechara Aman...if only he knew...

finally...FINALLY...THE ICE CREAM...Banana Nut Caramel Crunch is served in the Chocolate...mujhe khana hai...abhi ki abhi...

ofcourse, they have to take this home naa...warna jo hum e chahiye woh kaise ho sakta hai...Gosh Di...I will not say anything more, warna those devils will kill me by teasing...but sirf itna kahoongi, I just love this damn it...

hoye hoye...humre Arnie is blushing...my cuchie pie...sho shweeettt...

loved the whole update a lot, lot, LOT...just too awesome...

PS : What happened to Payal...hope nothing serious...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 11 years ago