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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Dsudipa

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#993399">Sry 4 late reply, fantastic update, interesting preview, pls continue soon, thx 4 PM</font>




Thank u dear for cmnts 😛
Ill cont soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago


updt tonite 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u to all my lovable readers for showering ur love and effection by reading commenting and liking my ff 🤗
this updt is dedicated to aanchal,jmehta,dsudipa,lekshmimukesh viny queen, lpsakshi and molly who commented in my blog for all the updts which i posted there 🤗
thank u all of u becoz those comment meant a lot to me 🤗

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part 3:


Priya in front of office:

aur uss gadhi se

koi aur nahi tha mera ram... tha

jab maine ram ko aapni aankhoo se dekha mujhey bohut khushi mili thi jitna khushi jho mujhey maa banana waqt mili thi main sirf ram ko dekthi rahi ek corner main raheke. Main baas ram ko akhele main milke ram ko humare raj kumaro ke bare main batana chahthi thi. Jitna khush mujhey ram ko dekhey miley utna hi khush ram hoga mujhey milke baas main ram ki khayalo main khoo gayi thi

mujhey nahi patha tha ki ram humare office ke andhaar chala gaya main tho unka khayalo main kho gaya thi.

Ram in priya office:

I got down my bmw and slowly paced towards the office door

Mr sighania and all his staff were waiting there to receive me

Mr. Sighania came to me gave me a boquet and

I shook my hand with him

But soon i felt like priya was around me

I started talking to myself

Priya ...

I don't know priya i can feel u here in this office

U there near me

My heart beat was rising tremendously

I looked around and scrutinised to see any glimpses of my love

My priya

But i came back from my memory lane when mr.sighania shook me

Ram...

"Yes" i said

"Shall we go inside ram" mr.sighania said

"Yes offcourse" was my answer

I started moving into the office

Priya :

Ram so finally u r here in front of me.

My heart beat is beating so tremendously. When i was walking inside the office to meet ram but my boss mr singhania was accompanying ram i was just standing back of ram and waiting for a chance to meet him and tell him about our love symbols.

But i just became dumbstruck when i remember the call that it was ram's marriage.

"Did he really move on in his life" i asked myself

My heart was saying

"no ram cannot move on without u".

"He loved u like hell who can he move on with u".

But my brain was saying me

"No ram moved on in his life according to his father wish".

I was baffling btw my brain and heart . Don't know what is right and what is wrong . I just stood there clasping a table as support becoz i am unable to decide should i meet ram or not But with a lot of courage i engulped a lot of air into my lungs and decided to tell ram about our kids after all a father has every right to know about his flesh and blood.

I slowly paced towards the cabin in which ram and mr.sighania my boss were discussing the project about new joint venture.I was waiting outside so that i can meet ram and tell him everything.

I stood perplexed when ram took his gadget and came to loby where i was waiting for him. But when he came i hided myself in the corner of the loby hearing his voice

Ram i uttered

But ram was talking to some one in his phone

"Darling" he uttered

Listening the word darling from his mouth i felt a stab in my heart i felt like my heart was torn into thousand pieces. Tears started falling from my eyes i just stood like a lifeless thing. I want to shout out aloud and cry

But as i was in office i composed myself . i did not even hear his further conversation what ram spoke . I just informed the manager and left the office becoz i badly needed space after hearing darling from ram mouth.

Ram in priya office:

Ram:"Darling"

Neha:

U came to Mumbai but u did not tell me even that vikram also did not tell me

Stupid pathi.

Ram:Sorry yaar neha i came to Mumbai just 3 days back but when i came to Mumbai u were not there u went for out of station thats why i did not inform u about my arrival i wanted to surprise u by my visit

Neha: No ram u and vikram are like that . 2 stupid friends who always annoy me to core

Ram:Achaa sorry baba . Ek baar maaf kardo naa yaar

Neha:Nahi ram ...

Ram:Achaa neha iam in btw my meeting ill come to ur home and manofy u

Neha:Javoo go to hell

Ram:Achaa thank u

Neha:Bye

Ram:bye

Saying this i hung up the call

I went and attended the rest of meeting about our joint venture and left the office for the cush to meet 2 cute kids

Priya :

I left office to crush to collect my kids. I cried a lot in my car while driving i could hardly see anything becoz my eyes were completely filled with tears. But some how i managed to reach the crush

I took my kids from there and left to my home.

Ram:

I left to crush for meeting the 2 cute kids by finishing my meeting in hurry becoz i wanted to desperately meet those kids.i slowly entered the crush.

Ram:good morning mr xyz

Caretaker:good morning mr. Kapoor

Ram:ya i wanted to meet those 2 kids ryan and prem

Caretaker:oh sorry mr kapoor just know here mom came and took them

Ram:oh shut

I just left the crush with utter disappointment i was very much dishearteaned listening this news

I got a call

Ram:hello

Krishna maa:ram beta main maa bolri hoo

Ram:ji maa sasri ya kaal

Krishna:sasriya kaal ram maine isliye phone kiya ki hum main aur tumhare papa ne aaj ke evening ko Mumbai aare

Ram:teek hai maa main pick karlungi

Krishna:teek hain main rakhti hoo phone

Ram:ji maa

Saying this i hung up the call i left to vikram house to meet neha

Priya:

I came to home ryan and prem were sleeping when i carried them to home.

I only picked up ryan and left prem in car opened the home door by taking out keys from my hand bag and i made ryan sleep on the couch and then brought prem to home from car becoz i could not carry both of them at the same time.

I just covered both of them in duvet and

I started crying

I cried and cried

I cried my heart out

I could not believe my ears i could not believe that ram moved on

I cried there was nothing left for me except my kids ram absconded me and my kids it was unable to believe but it was the truth i had to accept the reality

Ram:

I left to Mumbai and i and vikram very hardly manofied neha and after having some snacks i left to airport to pick my mom and dad

Priya:

Seeing my cry ryan got up and

He also started crying seeing me cry

Roothe nahi

Roothe nah ii spoke to ryan wiping my tears

I took ryan in my lap hearing ryan cry even prem got up

Prem started crying

I think it happens when mother cry kids automatically cry seeing their mother in pain.

I was unable to control my tears prem crawled and came to me and already ryan was in my lap and i took prem also in my lap prem wiped my tears with his tiny fingers

I felt relieved seeing my kids pacifying me.

They are my support now i found solace in my kids

I pacified myself telling i should live for them

I kissed prem fingers with affection i hugged my 2 kids and cried but i somehow composed and pacified myself. Becoz if i continue crying even my kids also cry along with me so i did not wanted that.

Then i feeded my 2 kids and i cooked some food and we all doze off.

Saturday:

Priya left to supermarket and ram also left to supermarket.

Priya:

It was Saturday and i had an off in office and radhama and family left for out of station so i had to carry my 2 kids for supermarket to buy some grosseries items. Ryan and prem were wearing black shirt and blue jeans it was very tiny jeans they both wore same dress with same design. On the black shirts it was written we are bad boys..I wore a white colour salwar suit(priya wore in the beach while raya were counting stars).

It was a white colour salwar with silver stones embedded in it and i wore a white colour duppata and a small white stone i put as my bindi and i wore open hair which was on my left side shoulder i applied light pink lip gloss and a light neat kohl to my eyes .

I was shopping ryan and prem will never stay in my arms they are comfortable playing on the floor . They both wore white light shoes they were walking seeing the light on their shoes and enjoying it. Prem was enjoying light shoes and walking and ryan was busy removing the grosseries from the racks.but before i could control ryan i got a call from the office i Just moved to corner to pick up the call.

Ram :

I and mom came to supermarket for shopping. The moment i entered the market i was elated becoz i saw those 2 cute little kids pre mi think was playing with shoes and ryan was throwing all the grosseries from the racks. I showed my mom those 2 kids and told

Ram:maa ye wahi doo bachee hain jiske bare main mainey aapko bathaya tha

Krishna:hm ram ye toh bilkul tumhare Xerox copies lagree hain maine sunna ki ek tarah ki log 7 hothey hain shayad ye unn saath main se hain

Ram : patha nahi maa paar agar priya mere saath main hothi thoo mujhey bhi bilkhul issey hi bachee hothe the

Krishna:shayad beta paar zarror tumhe tumhari priya mil jayegi ram

Ram smiled

I felt like i am listening a familiar voice

I started moving to that voice there was a girl who was standing her back facign me

She wore a white salwar suit and her duppata is flying becoz the air flow suddenly increased.

She turned to my side

Priya...


so what happened next did raya meet and did ram come to know about his kids
many questions and many ys
to know these keep waiting for my next updt

waiting for ur likes and cmnts 😛😛😛


Edited by .sangs123. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ha finally u did update...had been waiting for this particular one since ages...the upddate was very good...now please make our raya meet fast...continue soon and yes loved the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thx for the pm.
Oho one point is clear now - priya think ram has moved on in his life bcoz of his father.
But y is she hiding she should have known ram's wish also. Whether he wants to marry and move on with some other lady.
Office part was nicely written. Kids their dressing crawling smiling seeing the lights perfect.
Mystery still continues I think someone covers priya n ram could not see each other. But they might meet bcoz of kids.
Looking forward.
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Posted: 12 years ago
pls make raya to meet soon
and u have ended the part on interestin note
contnue soon and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update.. thanks for the update n pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
aaahhh im goin crazyy u ended ih at such a intresting pointt plz cont sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
I hope dey vil meet in d market... continue soon.. nice update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part...!!

priya ye tumne kya soch liya...!!! drlng sunkar...!!!
hm...bt hope ths turns out fr good...!!

hope raya meet...!!
can see thm seperatd fr long...!!


contn soon..thnx fr the pm.. 😊

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